Fruits Basket Fan Fiction ❯ friends? or even more? ❯ puppies ( Chapter 17 )
Hey!!!! I updated before going on my trip!!! (You're supposed to be jumping and running everywhere not able to contain your happiness………
… I'M WAITING!!!!)
But you'll have to come back to read the story!!!
Serenity winner: I think that it is the first review that I got that I really didn't like… hey give me a chance you only read the first chapter… and in that chapter it's written that It was my first fanfic, or first chappie ever… but I agree with you, that the first chappies are full of mistakes… (I would correct them if I was sure that when you change the countenance of a chappie that the reviews for that chappie don't disappear…) and for what you were saying about the plot… this is were I don't agree with you… you say that you only read the FIRST chappie… that means that you don't know anything more about the story… and in my 2 first chappies there isn't ANY plot, because I wasn't sure where I wanted to go with the story… and by the way…it can happen that 2 guys who are enemies fall in love… (It happened to one of my friend's brother…) tnx for your review anyway, cuz it's your own right to like or to dislike the story… but I really hope that one day you'll read the whole story and them post another review telling me if you still think the same thing. (Don't worry I'm not mad or anything)
Empress Satori: you are a genius!!! You gave me the idea to make a little modification to my original plan… ^_^ thnx!!! I completely agree with you about the idea of a baby, but at the same time in the end it wouldn't b that funny… cuz after the shock, the guy will think about how his kid might be, and without even knowing it the person will start to care very much about it, but it's a great idea for the shock… by the way thnx for the prayers, it means a lot to me to see that people who read my stories care at least a little bit. Oh...*lamp in the head lights... * since you have great ideas…. Do you have any suggestions of what I could do to Akito??? I want to see him more I n the story… but I don't have any ideas U_U
DarkangelWings: don't worry about Yuki, I knew that you were joking, you were right it's a pretty original story 'high stakes' I found it on media miner and another website In 2 diff version one that is for more grown-ups and one PG. You'll know in this chappie what made him faint… hehehe I had a lot of fun torturing him! Tnx for reviewing
Polka-dot: thnx for the review, I agree with you, Shigure is definitely a pervert but I think that it's his charm…(okay I know I'm weird)
Disclaimer: I do not own fruits basket
Puppies!!!
"YOU!!…???" he tried to say when he awoke.
"Yes…My sweet puppy…do you like my dress?" she said. She was wearing one of Ayame's creations, a very thin red dress with thin layers of rubbans decorating her chest, it had a very big V opening.
It was hard for him to keep his eyes of her.
I guess that at that moment we all were in shook… I never though that one person could change that much…but I guess that we had asked for it …
"You are going to have puppies…."she continued…
Shigure fainted again…
And I think that at that moment Shigure wasn't the only surprised one… although we had told her to do some pretending… we were never expecting this!!
When he woke up the first thing he said was
" how? Was I that drunk? PUPPIES?!?" he said… it was the fist time that we had ever seen him that scared… but it was too hilarious,
"you'll have to be nice to them…"she said
then looked at him for like a whole minute then added
"if not, I'll electrocute you…my love…." She said then kneeled in front of Shigure, cupped his face in one hand, replaced some of his hair, kissed him on the cheek.
After that, she looked at both of us, with a serious expression, but we could see the grin in her eyes, she was enjoying making the Inu sweat drop.
"I'll be going now, but will come back a little later" she told us. And left.
"oy! Stupid Inu! You told her about the curse?!? And what's the thing with puppies?!?! Don't you know protection exist??? How could you? she's Tohru's friend!" I yelled at him, it made me feel so good after every stupid comment he had ever said.
"You're disgusting" added Yuki.
I must admit that we were harsh on the poor Shigure!! But then we had to see that he didn't phone anybody, except Hatori who we had prepared, for any case of nervous Shigure.
We sneaked in the kitchen from when we had a direct view on the phone and the exit, for a case of a Shigure wanting to go outside, we couldn't allow that because then he'll know that we are playing him.
A short time later, she reappeared, and brought in a lot of bags.
"Shigure dear, come here I need to show you some stuff…come out don't be such a shy guy… you weren't like that last time…" she said. Of course she was talking about when she had visited us with her friend to meet the Sohmas, and Shigure wouldn't stop teasing her and talking about high school girls, but Shigure didn't get that, he was thinking about perverted things he might had done with her and why he couldn't remember anything.
"…yes? You wanted to show me something?" she said apprehending what was coming…
she looked at him, and opened one of her giant bags and took out a dog bed, a plate for food and water for dogs, a collar, a brush, 2 big bags of dog food and some dog toys, and ones. Then stopped to look expectantly at Shigure, who was whiter than liquid paper( a/n: I know it's a pretty weird comparison, I couldn't say whiter than bones because she brought bones for dogs, and usually they are made of hell-knows what and are yellowish or brownish)
"eeh… why did you bring all these her?" asked the very nervous about the answer Shigure.
"for the puppies! Or do you think that I brought all of it for you, oh..well.. you can use it if you want…" she said. Smirking… she was insulting him… but he was too busy thinking how he could have let her know about the curse, to see that.
I was very, very, very hard, not to burst out laughing, she was only supposed to play an in love with Shigure girl, and now she was adding her own little supplements.
"oohhh…" was the only thing that the poor Inu could say.
"how many little ones will there be?" Yuki asked her.
" oh… around ten, I know it will be a big little family, but if my sweet doggy will eventually want more, it will be possible." She answered.
I never understood how could she play this that seriously.
"…oh…" the dog was repeating himself…
revenge was sweet… but at that moment we didn't even know where everything was going…
She told the Inu to put everything in a nice place, and that she'll come back in a second.
When she came back, we could hear a lot of barking…. She had in her hands a big basket with 7 cute little puppies…
Shigure fainted for the third time in less than a day. I think that if he fainted again I was going to call and tell this to Hatori…
But this time he regained consciousness quite fast.
The first thing he said when he woke up was :
"that soon? I mean I don't know if I'm ready for this…" he somehow mumbled. It was a weird show seeing him loosing his words.
"what's there to be ready for, YOU are the one telling me and Uo the first time we went here, that you were a dog fan, and was always taking care of abandoned dogs like Poochy"( a/n : you remember in one episode Shigure transforms, Tohru says that he is an adopted dog or something like that, and I think that the y called the dog Poochy, if it's not his name then pretend that it is! ^.^)
"but …but..but… this is all so soon…" Shigure muttered
"what's too soon? You are only going to baby-sit these puppies for a week…"she asked.
"oh…ONLY baby-sit? They are NOT mine? For a second I thought it was something else " Shigure said, sweat-dropping.
"What else did you think moron? That you were the father of some puppies?" I asked him. it was really interesting.
"I'VE GOT PUPPIES!!! PUPPIES!!!!PUPPIES!!! AND THEY'RE NOT MINE!!! I LOVE HIGHT SCHOOL GIRLS!!! AND ESPESSIALLY IF THEY BRING PUPIES AFTERWARDS…" he sang
but to my pleasure he hadn't been conscious long enough to finish his song, Yuki had silenced him with a well placed arm blow.
Hana-chan, our mysterious caller was staring at us, with a dreary expression. (a/n: yes it the ' SHE' is Hanna-Chan)
"…he has sure a lot of changing emotions… two seconds ago he was between huge happiness and apprehension… and now he is happy…I don't understand…"she said, and left after that.
When Shigure finally awoke, we couldn't stop laughing.
"I can't believe you thought that you were the father! Oy! But of course… it shouldn't be surprising since we all know what kind of pervert you are…" I said.
"Baka inu" said Yuki.
"but it's a good thing we have puppies for a week! I can't wait to show them to Tohru! I bet that my beautiful flower will fall in love with them, and think that I am their father, and then she will feel bad for them because they don't have a mommy, but then I'll propose to her! And she'll become my wife forever, and ever and ever, we would spend years talking about dogs, and I will be eating forever her delicious cooking…and … and… and there's some other things we could do!!! I'll be the happiest man alive!!!" he said.
For some reason he sounded like he was meaning it, there was another kind of spark in his eyes.
He went on and on like that for hours… and I still don't know when he saw that he was talking all alone, because Yuki and me had left the room long ago, but I could still hear him talking from the roof…and hear the puppies bark, and hear the birds chirp… OH WHY EVERYONE liked to be so loud?!?
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sorry if there is some mistakes in the story…. I really try to correct myself in each chappie… and I would like to update the first chappie to correct the mistakes but I don't know what happens to them when we change them… ( if you know plz tell me in the review!!!)
I'm glad to see that I'm all done!!!
I wrote a longer chappie than usual for excusing myself for not going to update for a month…( going to RUSSIA!!!) but when I'll come back the first thing I'll do is to check my reviews and write another chappie!!!
Bye bye (I'm gonna miss fan fiction for 30 days… …è_é grrr… evil relatives who don't think that computer are good….)
Review!!! Tell me what you think about the plan of revenge on Shigure,
And by the way Tohru is going to come back, and I don't know with whom of to pair her up your choice is 'Hatori, Shigure or Akito' tell me which of these 3, and try to give me ideas how to pair them up together!!!
Now is your time to review!!!