Fruits Basket Fan Fiction ❯ The pain of Suffering ❯ 5 reviwes ( Chapter 3 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: bloody_tortured_princess 
Anime/Manga: Fruits Basket Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Martial Arts / Mecha / Romance / Angst | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 03.24.2009 | Pages: 1 | Words: 87 | Visits: 108 | Status: Completed
Anime/Manga: Fruits Basket Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Martial Arts / Mecha / Romance / Angst | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 03.24.2009 | Pages: 1 | Words: 87 | Visits: 108 | Status: Completed
Ok guys, I don't like doing this but, I need at least 5 reviews before I start writing again, and not those pitiful `yays' or `boos' as a writer, I do want this to come out good, pleas tell me if I'm being OOC, or what. I want to fix it, I would really love if you tell me how to improve this, so pleas tell me. Oh, and tell me what you think should happen next.