Fullmetal Alchemist Fan Fiction ❯ A Stolen Storm ❯ The Limo Ride ( Chapter 1 )

[ P - Pre-Teen ]

Succori Gray
Gabby Pink
Al Blue
Ed Green
Bad Guy Red
 
 
 
Chapter One~*~THE LIMO RIDE~*~
 
“Come on Succori; we're gonna miss our ride.” “Shut up and give me a minute!” Gabby tapped her foot impatiently and waited for her sister to come down the stairs. Ed was standing at the door waiting for the limo to show up while Al sat quietly in a corner. Before long, Ed called out, “The limo's here!” “Come one Cori! We don't care how you look; get your ass down here!” “Screaming at me does not make me go any faster!” She replies as she comes down the stairs in a beautiful silver sun dress. I t was a spaghetti strap and flowed down to her ankles where two sparkling silver heels poked out. “I'm ready.” “Where's your bag?” “Right here.” She held up a small purse. “No, we mean your suitcase with all of your things in it.” “I have everything I need; don't worry about it.” She flipped her hair and walked out to the awaiting limo.
 
She looks nice today.
Damn she's fine! Hey, you love Gabby remember? No one said I couldn't look.
Show off.
 
“Come on slow pokes; get in the car!” Succori called as the group made their way to the limo and got in. it was a long ride to their next mission of Having Fun.
The group sped off to their weekend on an island in a mansion. It was going to be great!
 
~*~SUCCORI~*~
 
On the way there, Succori decided to write in her diary…
 
Dear Diary,
 
We are on our way to Vacation Mansion on Vacation Island! Isn't that corny? Today I am wearing a silver sun dress. I caught Ed staring earlier. Gabby really likes him. I know he likes her. I should try to get them together. That was everyone will be happy. I'm glad I don't like anyone. Crushes and boyfriends make everything much more difficult then it has to be. Well, I'm going to take a nap on Al. write later.
 
Succori
 
So she went to sleep using Al (with his permission) as a pillow. (it wasn't the most comfortable pillow, but it worked)
 
~*~AL~*~
 
Al sat next to Succori and watched as she pulled out a blue diary with a picture of her, Gabby, Ed and himself on the front.
 
I wonder what she's writing. Probably something about her clothes. She does like to look nice. Looks like Ed and Gabby are still refusing to admit their true feelings. What am I going to do with them? It's things like “love” and “dating” that make me think being made of metal isn't too bad.
 
Succori put away her diary and turned to Al, “Do you mind if I go to sleep on you?” “Not at all, but it won't be too comfortable.” “Thanks Al.” She pulled her legs up and stretches them across the seat and then put her purse between her head and Al and went to sleep. Al dozed off soon after.
 
~*~GABBY~*~
 
Gabby lays back against the car door and puts her feet in the seat and listens to her CD player. She looks over at Ed, leaning against his door and gazing out the window.
 
He is so handsome. You should tell him.Tell him what? That he is so hot he melts everything around him or that I'm in love with him? Well I was referring to the “you love him” part, but I'm sure he would appreciate the other.So I should just risk everything by blurting out how I feel? Yes.Yeah right! You must be crazy! Leave me alone! Get out of my head! I don't want to talk to anyone this crazy! Fine, but you should tell him before someone else gets to it first. Besides, you're the one talking to yourself. Whatever, I thought you were leaving. Okay, okay. I'm going! But I'll be back. No you won't. That's what you think.Don't talk back to me! I'll kick your ass. What're you going to do? Start beating yourself upside the head?Leave now.
 
~*~ED~*~
 
Ed crawls into the vehicle and stares out the window, he turns and watches Succori writing, then lay down, he sees Gabrielle listening to her music and staring off into space.
 
She is so beautiful. Especially when she's off in her own world. I don't think anything compares to her when she's mad though. Her beauty really shows then. Why are you over here talking to yourself about how much you love her when you should be over there telling her how you feel?I can't; what if she doesn't like me? You deal with it.But if she doesn't like me and I ask her out then it will ruin our friendship. Besides, Gabby is the kind of person who shows her emotions, if she liked me she would have already told me. So you won't tell her? No, I won't. Fine, but you'd better tell her before someone else gets her. Shut up. Fine!That's not shutting up. Geez! What a crab!Leave! I'm going, I'm going.
 
Gabby looked over at Ed and sighed.
 
You need to tell him. I know, but what if he doesn't like me back? It could hurt our friendship.It's a chance you're going to have to take. You're right.So tell him. Now? Yes now. While everyone else is asleep.
 
She takes her headphones off and looks at Ed. He looks back, “What's wrong Gabby?”
 
What do I say? What do I say?
 
“Ed I--” “Welcome to the port!” “Looks like we're here. Wake up you two; it's time to get on the boat.” Succori looks up sleepily. “Alright, get your stuff. Al, wake up.” AL opens his eyes and hands Succori her purse. The group filed out of the car and got their luggage out of the trunk. Succori happened to be the only person ever to have traveled to Vacation Island before so she led them to the boat that would take them to their vacation. The captain, a young man of about twenty (very cute), met them on deck. “Welcome back Succori. It's about damn time you came back to see me.” “Ryan! Oh my god, I knew the old captain retired; I had no idea you took over!” She ran forward and hugged him. He kissed her cheek. “Yeah, he named me captain about a year ago.” “Are you taking good care of my things?” “Of course; I wouldn't dare cross you and your clothes. I'd have to be raving mad!” “Um, sorry to interrupt this little reunion but who the hell is he and how do you know each other?” “Oh, sorry; guys this is Ryan, he owns and operates everything to do with Vacation, Vacation Island, and Vacation Mansion.” “Hi, nice to meet you.” “How do you know each other? I know it wasn't because of one week of playing host/guest.” “You're right, we dated. He was my first boyfriend.” “You never told us you've had a boyfriend before!” stated Gabby indignantly. “Well we realized I would be gone after the week was up so we made the best of our time together.” “We've kept in touch since; she set all of this up.” “We know.” “So, we gonna go to Vacation Island or stand here?” “Right, It'll take a couple of hours to get to the island, meanwhile your thing go in a cabin downstairs; just pick one. We set sail at once.” “Thank again Ryan; it's so nice seeing you again.” “Well I knew you'd be back eventually, you left your clothes on the island after all.” “I had to have some excuse to come and see you. Will I be staying in the same room?” “Yeah, where will we be staying?” “Succori is in her old room, down the hall from me, everyone gets their own room; Gabby is across the hall from Succori, Edward and Alphonse have two rooms a floor up. Does that work for everybody?” “Yes that will be great.” “Right then, Succori if you will give them the tour of the boat I'll get this vacation started.”