Fullmetal Alchemist Fan Fiction ❯ Concentration ❯ One-Shot ( Chapter 1 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: Silver Rain 
This is the first, and only chapter....yup....
Anime/Manga: Fullmetal Alchemist Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst / Shounen / / Hentai / Romance | Type: Yaoi | Uploaded On: 03.01.2006 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.4K | Visits: 1.1K | Status: Completed
This is the first, and only chapter....yup....
Anime/Manga: Fullmetal Alchemist Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst / Shounen / / Hentai / Romance | Type: Yaoi | Uploaded On: 03.01.2006 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.4K | Visits: 1.1K | Status: Completed
TEE! My first Elricest story! If ya dun like it! DUN READ IT! TEE! I'm quite proud of this
ficcie here! ::squealies::
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Concentration
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Alphonse Elric
A boy of no more than 15 or 16 years old. Yet, he still has the body's mind of a ten to a thirteen
year old. A boy, a young man who has been thrust into a situation where he cannot cope with the
new senses, and directions he could or can take.
He woke up, looked about the room, and it exploded around him.
His nose could smell once more, and it was an detonation of wonderful, and awful scents that
used to pervade his nose everyday. It was like honey, and wine to the boy who could smell
nothing while being only a soul.
His tongue could taste once more, and it was an eruption of tastes of his own mouth, and teeth
and tongue, and air. No matter it was dusty, and burned his new and sensitive lungs, but it was
air that was filling his lungs.
His fingers could feel once more, and it was an shattering and Earth moving moment. His
fingers, so soft and baby thin skin could feel the roughness of the dirt floor beneath him, and
when his older brother picked him up, he could feel him.
Al let out a soft, and growling moan that started from the pits of his stomach to the tips of his
fingers, up through his neck and into his brain. It was the feeling of his older brother's hair, skin,
arms, legs, automail, and everything in-between. He didn't understand what was happening to
his body, but he knew it was something that shouldn't happen to brothers. He knew that he
couldn't let Nii-san know, but it...it felt so good.
And he'd gotten his body back less than two minutes ago, and his body was tightening with a
form of stress he'd never heard discussed in polite conversation. It made sense though, a boy of
15 or 16 with no sexual encounters before then, and then thrust into the world of puberty, and
feeling. He wanted, but he could not have. He could never have.
Alphonse Elric wanted his brother in the most difficult way imaginable. Soul, mind, and body.
"Al? Alphonse? Are you alright? Al!?" Ed's worried voice cut through his thoughts, and he
looked up.
"Brother?" He asked, confused, and sweating.
The need that drove through him in pleasureful spikes left him breathless. The need brought him
down in droves like a dog being overrun by deer. He could feel as his older brother poked, and
prodded for imperfections. He could feel his want, and NEED to thrust upward with his hips.
Hips he'd not had for more than two minutes now.
"Al? Are you alright? What's going on Al?! Tell me what's happening!!!" Ed cried out, petting
his hands down Al's body, looking for bruises, misplaced bones, snapped tendons, and muscles
that were out of place.
"Brother...? I'm..so...I'm so hot brother!" Al cried out in dismay, thrusting his head back, and
panting up at his older brother with a wide eyed stare. It was starting to glaze over in the lust he
felt for the other man holding him. His own brother.
"Hot? Hot...?" Ed quickly divested Al of his clothing, and stripped him down to even his socks.
He didn't stare at the perfection of Al's newly formed body, but rather at Al's face. Was his
brother going to be alright? Would he survive this process?
"Brother...Please, I want..." Al tried to say, but was cut back from another moan as Ed's body
contacted Al's naked one.
The nakedness of the younger boy was pressed into the rough material that was Ed's clothing. Al
could feel himself start to tense. He could feel a warm, and wet throbbing between his legs.
What was this feeling? What was happening to him!?
"...Al?" Ed asked, noticing the bodily reaction his brother was having.
Al looked over in a glaze way towards his brother, and held out his arms for a larger embrace.
Unquestioningly, Ed went. Al hugged his golden haired sibling to him, and felt his instinctual
need to move.
To thrust his hips against the wonderful friction that was Ed's clothing. To feel the sweet
pressure that was bad, but so good at the same time. He could feel his body's urging for him to
reach out, and touch Ed. Make him feel good just as his own body was coming to life. Coming to
life after so long in a shell of a man.
"Brother, I want....I don't know....Brother, it hurts!" Al panted out, and rubbed himself
innocently across Ed's leg.
Ed's face flamed up in a mass of red, and purple hues. He could feel his brother's lengthening
erection against his pant leg, and disturbingly enough...his own body was responding. He'd
forgotten how long it had been since he had held Al against his own form as they both shared
heat, and whispered words. Al was so small and innocent, but his body was not so. Hormones,
and chemicals made Al all but a succubus.
"Al, you don't know what your doing, you're....Oh god Al," Ed tried to explain, but then fell
helpless as his naked, and beautiful brother wriggled up onto his chest, and lay there on top of
his brother panting.
"Brother! Make the hurt stop!" Al cried out helplessly, and now rubbed himself shamelessly
against Ed's thighs.
As Al dipped again, and again grinding into Ed's leg, he slipped, and ground heavily against
Ed's most private area of the body.
"NNG! Al! Please stop! You don't know what your doin-" Ed tried to cry out as Al grabbed at
the clothe on Ed's body.
"Take it off brother! Why does all this clothing have to be in the way Nii-san? Please, take it
off!" Al begged, and started to helplessly whimper as he purred like a cat in heat against his
brother.
Ed looked down into the mass of golden hair that was so much like his own, and yet not. Looked
down upon the boy that couldn't recognize his own sexuality among a suit of armor, and now
that he was alive, and healthy, the problems of the world dropped upon him.
Pleasure was making Al loose his mind. His mind among sensation and feeling for the first time
in so very long. Ed couldn't understand why he wouldn't throw his brother away from him, yell,
scream, hit, make the boy stop it. It wasn't normal for brothers to love like this! He knew it was
wrong! It was taboo! Just like....wait, taboo just like visiting the gate, and beyond.
So was he already cursed?
Why would it be so wrong for one more sin to be added to the list he already had. A list that
warped his dreams every night with voices, and screams of the deceased that he'd caused.
Maybe, maybe once voice would be that of his brother. One of his brother that would come, and
maybe save him from those horrible nightmares that constantly attacked him.
"Al? Al, do you know what you're asking? Al?" Ed tried to reason one last time with his mass of
quivering flesh that was known as Alphonse Elric.
"Nii-san, I don't know what I want! I want something so badly...you have to help me! I need it!"
Al tried to communicate his need for the pleasure of another's body against his own.
"Al, brothers aren't...they don't....Al, you don't know what this is!" Ed moaned pitifully beneath
his brother.
The young leaned up, and laid a chaste kiss against the quivering lips of his older brother. He
licked like a kitten at the crease between top lip, and lower. As Ed gasped in the sensation of his
brother ‘tasting' him. Using his tongue to...to, god's!
"Al.." he breathed out, and kissed back.
Turning the innocent tasting of lips, and teeth into a passionate flurry of skin, and heat, and
moans. He made the younger writhe as he pulled the clothe from his own body in rips, and tears.
He made sure he was bare before he could look back to his brother without shying away
immediately. He looked down to his brother, who had opened his mouth, and was panting again.
He was so colourful, and full of life. A life that Ed had given back to his brother. A life he had
given back!
"Al...AL!" Ed cried out in ecstasy as he hugged the younger sibling closer to him, and felt his
own body react to the closeness of his younger brother. The closeness of a naked body beneath
his own.
Ready, willing, pliant to his touch....Ed was about to explode as those thoughts entered his mind.
He felt for his brother's erection, and he kissed Al's quivering, and dangerously sinful lips.
"Are you sure you want to do this little brother?" Ed asked once more, and whispered tenderly.
"Yes Nii-san. I trust you!" Al all but howled, and scrambled for his brother.
Ed sighed...almost happily. He took on of his flesh fingers, and brought it gently to Al's aching
manhood, and gently swirled the liquid that was already beading there in anticipation. He
grinned at the physical response he could elicit from his own brother. He brought his finger
lower, and teased the lightly furred sacs, and moaned when the other giggled, but was soon
turned to a moan of pleasure.
He circled the puckered opening of his baby brother, and felt a twinge of regret. Al wasn't just
moaning, he was moving with sound and want. He was purring, and wriggling, and just making it
so hard for Ed to control himself.
As Ed balanced his weight atop his brother with the metal prosthetic, he gently slid the slicked
finger into Al's passage. Alphonse yelled out in delight, and clenched tightly around Ed. The
older boy winced as his erection gave an almost painful twinge in want to be in the place his
finger occupied.
"Patience..." Edward told himself, and slid another finger into his brother. Slowly, and gently to
make it just a little better on the boy.
"Brother! Please!" Al cried out.
"Please Al? Please what?!" Ed asked, thinking he'd hurt the younger one.
"I want ..I want more of you inside me!" Al whined.
He couldn't understand what it meant, but he had to have more of Ed. More of the man he
couldn't feel, smell, touch, or anything for so long. He had to have more.
Al needed to have more, and he felt his body respond to the one thought that was being poured
through him like blood. Like living water, he thrust himself heavily down, and impaled himself
onto Ed's two fingers.
"NII-SAN!" Al screeched out, and tried to thrust himself again, but Ed pulled his fingers out.
"Al..." Ed whispered out reverently, he gently guided his own leaking erection to the opening in
his brother.
He guided the tip of his erection to his brother's orifice, and he kissed Al's cheek.
"I love you." He said gently, and pressed into the body of his brother.
The younger screamed in ecstasy, and clenched all around Ed, who couldn't hold himself. He
felt his body move on its own accord, and began to thrust dangerously fast, and deep into Al. He
could feel the tight heat pressing in on him on all sides, and knew it was the brother he'd not felt
in so long.
Al could feel the brother that he'd not felt, smelt, touched, hugged, or anything fill him. Fill him
to the brim, back out, and then thrust into him again. Pounding the message of ‘living' into him.
The message that he was home to stay, and his brother would always be there for him. With him.
Forever, and always.
Al howled, and wrapped his thin legs around Ed's waist in an effort to bring the older one closer,
and deeper inside of him. Ed began to thrust in a jackknifed pace into his brother who felt the
tickling, spidery sensation of completion start. His brother tensed, and thrust one last time deeply
into him as he spilt his seed deep inside his brother.
Al whimpered as he climaxed in joy over his chest, and kissed his brother deeply. Tasting the
boy that he'd not in so long.
"I love you too...Nii-san." Al whispered back, and wrapped his arms around Ed in an embrace
that would never be broken again.
Ever.
ficcie here! ::squealies::
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Concentration
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Alphonse Elric
A boy of no more than 15 or 16 years old. Yet, he still has the body's mind of a ten to a thirteen
year old. A boy, a young man who has been thrust into a situation where he cannot cope with the
new senses, and directions he could or can take.
He woke up, looked about the room, and it exploded around him.
His nose could smell once more, and it was an detonation of wonderful, and awful scents that
used to pervade his nose everyday. It was like honey, and wine to the boy who could smell
nothing while being only a soul.
His tongue could taste once more, and it was an eruption of tastes of his own mouth, and teeth
and tongue, and air. No matter it was dusty, and burned his new and sensitive lungs, but it was
air that was filling his lungs.
His fingers could feel once more, and it was an shattering and Earth moving moment. His
fingers, so soft and baby thin skin could feel the roughness of the dirt floor beneath him, and
when his older brother picked him up, he could feel him.
Al let out a soft, and growling moan that started from the pits of his stomach to the tips of his
fingers, up through his neck and into his brain. It was the feeling of his older brother's hair, skin,
arms, legs, automail, and everything in-between. He didn't understand what was happening to
his body, but he knew it was something that shouldn't happen to brothers. He knew that he
couldn't let Nii-san know, but it...it felt so good.
And he'd gotten his body back less than two minutes ago, and his body was tightening with a
form of stress he'd never heard discussed in polite conversation. It made sense though, a boy of
15 or 16 with no sexual encounters before then, and then thrust into the world of puberty, and
feeling. He wanted, but he could not have. He could never have.
Alphonse Elric wanted his brother in the most difficult way imaginable. Soul, mind, and body.
"Al? Alphonse? Are you alright? Al!?" Ed's worried voice cut through his thoughts, and he
looked up.
"Brother?" He asked, confused, and sweating.
The need that drove through him in pleasureful spikes left him breathless. The need brought him
down in droves like a dog being overrun by deer. He could feel as his older brother poked, and
prodded for imperfections. He could feel his want, and NEED to thrust upward with his hips.
Hips he'd not had for more than two minutes now.
"Al? Are you alright? What's going on Al?! Tell me what's happening!!!" Ed cried out, petting
his hands down Al's body, looking for bruises, misplaced bones, snapped tendons, and muscles
that were out of place.
"Brother...? I'm..so...I'm so hot brother!" Al cried out in dismay, thrusting his head back, and
panting up at his older brother with a wide eyed stare. It was starting to glaze over in the lust he
felt for the other man holding him. His own brother.
"Hot? Hot...?" Ed quickly divested Al of his clothing, and stripped him down to even his socks.
He didn't stare at the perfection of Al's newly formed body, but rather at Al's face. Was his
brother going to be alright? Would he survive this process?
"Brother...Please, I want..." Al tried to say, but was cut back from another moan as Ed's body
contacted Al's naked one.
The nakedness of the younger boy was pressed into the rough material that was Ed's clothing. Al
could feel himself start to tense. He could feel a warm, and wet throbbing between his legs.
What was this feeling? What was happening to him!?
"...Al?" Ed asked, noticing the bodily reaction his brother was having.
Al looked over in a glaze way towards his brother, and held out his arms for a larger embrace.
Unquestioningly, Ed went. Al hugged his golden haired sibling to him, and felt his instinctual
need to move.
To thrust his hips against the wonderful friction that was Ed's clothing. To feel the sweet
pressure that was bad, but so good at the same time. He could feel his body's urging for him to
reach out, and touch Ed. Make him feel good just as his own body was coming to life. Coming to
life after so long in a shell of a man.
"Brother, I want....I don't know....Brother, it hurts!" Al panted out, and rubbed himself
innocently across Ed's leg.
Ed's face flamed up in a mass of red, and purple hues. He could feel his brother's lengthening
erection against his pant leg, and disturbingly enough...his own body was responding. He'd
forgotten how long it had been since he had held Al against his own form as they both shared
heat, and whispered words. Al was so small and innocent, but his body was not so. Hormones,
and chemicals made Al all but a succubus.
"Al, you don't know what your doing, you're....Oh god Al," Ed tried to explain, but then fell
helpless as his naked, and beautiful brother wriggled up onto his chest, and lay there on top of
his brother panting.
"Brother! Make the hurt stop!" Al cried out helplessly, and now rubbed himself shamelessly
against Ed's thighs.
As Al dipped again, and again grinding into Ed's leg, he slipped, and ground heavily against
Ed's most private area of the body.
"NNG! Al! Please stop! You don't know what your doin-" Ed tried to cry out as Al grabbed at
the clothe on Ed's body.
"Take it off brother! Why does all this clothing have to be in the way Nii-san? Please, take it
off!" Al begged, and started to helplessly whimper as he purred like a cat in heat against his
brother.
Ed looked down into the mass of golden hair that was so much like his own, and yet not. Looked
down upon the boy that couldn't recognize his own sexuality among a suit of armor, and now
that he was alive, and healthy, the problems of the world dropped upon him.
Pleasure was making Al loose his mind. His mind among sensation and feeling for the first time
in so very long. Ed couldn't understand why he wouldn't throw his brother away from him, yell,
scream, hit, make the boy stop it. It wasn't normal for brothers to love like this! He knew it was
wrong! It was taboo! Just like....wait, taboo just like visiting the gate, and beyond.
So was he already cursed?
Why would it be so wrong for one more sin to be added to the list he already had. A list that
warped his dreams every night with voices, and screams of the deceased that he'd caused.
Maybe, maybe once voice would be that of his brother. One of his brother that would come, and
maybe save him from those horrible nightmares that constantly attacked him.
"Al? Al, do you know what you're asking? Al?" Ed tried to reason one last time with his mass of
quivering flesh that was known as Alphonse Elric.
"Nii-san, I don't know what I want! I want something so badly...you have to help me! I need it!"
Al tried to communicate his need for the pleasure of another's body against his own.
"Al, brothers aren't...they don't....Al, you don't know what this is!" Ed moaned pitifully beneath
his brother.
The young leaned up, and laid a chaste kiss against the quivering lips of his older brother. He
licked like a kitten at the crease between top lip, and lower. As Ed gasped in the sensation of his
brother ‘tasting' him. Using his tongue to...to, god's!
"Al.." he breathed out, and kissed back.
Turning the innocent tasting of lips, and teeth into a passionate flurry of skin, and heat, and
moans. He made the younger writhe as he pulled the clothe from his own body in rips, and tears.
He made sure he was bare before he could look back to his brother without shying away
immediately. He looked down to his brother, who had opened his mouth, and was panting again.
He was so colourful, and full of life. A life that Ed had given back to his brother. A life he had
given back!
"Al...AL!" Ed cried out in ecstasy as he hugged the younger sibling closer to him, and felt his
own body react to the closeness of his younger brother. The closeness of a naked body beneath
his own.
Ready, willing, pliant to his touch....Ed was about to explode as those thoughts entered his mind.
He felt for his brother's erection, and he kissed Al's quivering, and dangerously sinful lips.
"Are you sure you want to do this little brother?" Ed asked once more, and whispered tenderly.
"Yes Nii-san. I trust you!" Al all but howled, and scrambled for his brother.
Ed sighed...almost happily. He took on of his flesh fingers, and brought it gently to Al's aching
manhood, and gently swirled the liquid that was already beading there in anticipation. He
grinned at the physical response he could elicit from his own brother. He brought his finger
lower, and teased the lightly furred sacs, and moaned when the other giggled, but was soon
turned to a moan of pleasure.
He circled the puckered opening of his baby brother, and felt a twinge of regret. Al wasn't just
moaning, he was moving with sound and want. He was purring, and wriggling, and just making it
so hard for Ed to control himself.
As Ed balanced his weight atop his brother with the metal prosthetic, he gently slid the slicked
finger into Al's passage. Alphonse yelled out in delight, and clenched tightly around Ed. The
older boy winced as his erection gave an almost painful twinge in want to be in the place his
finger occupied.
"Patience..." Edward told himself, and slid another finger into his brother. Slowly, and gently to
make it just a little better on the boy.
"Brother! Please!" Al cried out.
"Please Al? Please what?!" Ed asked, thinking he'd hurt the younger one.
"I want ..I want more of you inside me!" Al whined.
He couldn't understand what it meant, but he had to have more of Ed. More of the man he
couldn't feel, smell, touch, or anything for so long. He had to have more.
Al needed to have more, and he felt his body respond to the one thought that was being poured
through him like blood. Like living water, he thrust himself heavily down, and impaled himself
onto Ed's two fingers.
"NII-SAN!" Al screeched out, and tried to thrust himself again, but Ed pulled his fingers out.
"Al..." Ed whispered out reverently, he gently guided his own leaking erection to the opening in
his brother.
He guided the tip of his erection to his brother's orifice, and he kissed Al's cheek.
"I love you." He said gently, and pressed into the body of his brother.
The younger screamed in ecstasy, and clenched all around Ed, who couldn't hold himself. He
felt his body move on its own accord, and began to thrust dangerously fast, and deep into Al. He
could feel the tight heat pressing in on him on all sides, and knew it was the brother he'd not felt
in so long.
Al could feel the brother that he'd not felt, smelt, touched, hugged, or anything fill him. Fill him
to the brim, back out, and then thrust into him again. Pounding the message of ‘living' into him.
The message that he was home to stay, and his brother would always be there for him. With him.
Forever, and always.
Al howled, and wrapped his thin legs around Ed's waist in an effort to bring the older one closer,
and deeper inside of him. Ed began to thrust in a jackknifed pace into his brother who felt the
tickling, spidery sensation of completion start. His brother tensed, and thrust one last time deeply
into him as he spilt his seed deep inside his brother.
Al whimpered as he climaxed in joy over his chest, and kissed his brother deeply. Tasting the
boy that he'd not in so long.
"I love you too...Nii-san." Al whispered back, and wrapped his arms around Ed in an embrace
that would never be broken again.
Ever.