Fullmetal Alchemist Fan Fiction ❯ Electricity and Metal Dont Mix ❯ one ( Chapter 1 )

[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]

Konnichiwa! Hara_Haku here! This is the first chapter of my FMA Fanfic. Now before you read this and get confused, Im just gonna let you know that I've added and original character (as usual). She's a 15 year old State Alchemist named Denise Riza Mustang (don't freak out… -.-). She has mid-back length black hair, gray eyes, and a fiery yet calm attitude.
 
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Edward was sitting in Mustang's office waiting for his so-called “important announcement”.
“Have you found out anything about the Philosophers Stone?” Mustang asked.
“I don't know, you tell me.”
“And what makes you think I know?” a small smirk played across his face.
“Oh gimme a break, you always know.” Edward said, his anger getting the best of him.
“Now, now Fullmetal, there's no need to get mad.”
“Who's getting mad?!”
“You are. Anyway, onto my announcement. I wanted to-“
he was interrupted by five bullets shooting through the door and making a small semi-circle around his head on the wall behind him.
The door slowly opened to reveal a girl with long black hair, smoky gray eyes, and a gun in her right hand.
 
 
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Denise had just shot through the door five times, basically signaling her arrival. Opening the door, she saw a boy with golden blonde hair and amber eyes, looking at her like she was psychotic. Roy on the other hand was clam and was even smiling despite almost having his head blown off.
“What's up?” she asked, putting her gun back in its holster.
 
“What's up? Are you insane?! You could've killed him!” the boy yelled, pointing at Mustang. “Not that I would've minded.” He muttered. She laughed at this.
“What's so funny?” he asked, glaring. Before she could say anything, someone ran in.
“Brother! Brother! I heard gunshots, is everything alright?!” the supposed boy shouted frantically. Denise just stood there, not at all fazed by the 8-foot tall suit of armor behind her.
 
 
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[Hara: Well, hope you liked it! Im expecting at least 2 reviews until I post again… *sigh* such low expectations… -.- ]