Fushigi Yuugi Fan Fiction ❯ The Right Way ❯ Disclaimer Page ( Chapter -1 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
The Right Way
By Golden-fire-goddess (aka. Reya[_smiles])
Rating: M (for swearing, torture, and possible - which is very likely - adult situations)
Disclaimer: I do not own any part what-so-ever of Fushigi Yuugi. Everything from that fandom/universe solely belongs to Watase Yuu-sensei and the publishing/animation companies with which we are able to enjoy them.
Summary: What would happen if there was another reason for both Miaka and Yui to be sent into the world of the Shijintenchisho? What if Miaka's last two wishes were not the ones recorded in the manga/anime? What if she was there for something more…
Author's Notes:
18/04/2008: Yay! Fourth Chapter! Okay, I've been bad so I did little to no beta-ing for this chapter. Though some parts, mainly the last scene I thank Yahnkehy for beta-ing me. Those suggestions of hers made it that much better.
I urge people who have questions to ask them. I want to make sure that all of them are answered in the re-editing of the chapters or in future ones.
Also, please remember that this fic is an AU, and as a result I allowed my creativity fly. So this is what we have so far. There is a couple of surprises for Tasuki. All I will say is that there will be more surprises, like the first of Tasuki's, to come about in future chapters.
I apologize if this chapter seems forced. It was a rather hard chapter to write.
02/04/2008: Okay, third chapter. I'm hoping that this chapter will be a good one - Tokaki, Subaru, and Shifan (Xifang) will appear in this chapter. I mention Tatara as well, but please do not be too upset with the way I have characterized them. The Byakko section of FY hasn't even been started yet so I have no idea as to how they really are personality-wise. Yes, I need to go back and recheck what I saw in the manga and anime. But for now, I'm going to be taking liberties with them, their memories, and their personalities - we'll go with creative licence. That and this is AU, so I'm pretty sure I'm OOC with all of the characters in some way, shape, or form.
As for Xifang's name, well I decided to use the way her name is pronounced in the Japanese version of FY, which is Shifan.
I'm not using those blasted marks to change a scene or go into a flashback. I really don't feel like playing with them right now, so all transitions are marked by a space instead. Speaking of formats and such, I went back and re-reworked Chiriko's birthday chapter and edited it. I'll probably be doing that with all of the chapters until I get to Tamahome's birthday.
I'm borrowing Roku_Kyu's naming of Hatusi and Urumiya as the seishi who attempted to protect Yui from Nakago. I watched the episode, but I don't remember the names used - to me they reminded me of Tomite and Hikitsu… but that's just me. By the way… they are younger than in Roku_Kyu's “Hidden Paths on a Cloud Cast Night”, which I highly suggest reading. Yes, there is torture in this chapter, but I figure that the fear, if you're reading the Genbu Kaiden that was there when Okuda Takiko first came, would still be there in one form or another even if the majority did not hold to it.
19/03/2008: Yay! Second chapter! I have a bit of a cliffhanger in this chapter at the end, so please bear with me. I also hope that I wasn't being too obvious as to where they were.
I know I have the characters in OOC for quite a bit of this and it's only going to get worse. This is my take on their characters. Then again this is sort-of an AU-ish fic, so yeah... definite OOC.
As for my using ki and chi, it comes down to being the exact same thing - energy. Though for this fic I'm going to be making `Ki' as spiritual energy and `Chi' as attacking energy. A little confusing, but... for me I always think of the two in distinct differences.
I am going to ask that anyone reading this fic that they please give me some sort of criticism. I would like to know if I'm making sense when I'm doing the story. Also, if it seems like there were some unanswered questions that should have been answered in the chapter, please ask them! That way I can go back and see if they are to be answered up to date or if they are to be answered in later chapters.
06/03/2008: This is where all of my author's notes are going to be held. I hate having to break the story up when (and I hope I can do this) I can just put the information here. I'm hoping to be able to post a chapter on each of the Suzaku no Shichi Seishi's Birthdays (I'm also including Miaka in this). This first chapter is for Nuriko whose birthday is today (though I have no idea how old he would be… U_U;).