Hamtaro Fan Fiction ❯ Forbidden Love ❯ Chapter Four: The white hamster and his love for another ( Chapter 4 )

Chapter Four: The white hamster and his love for another

 

(Hey everybody! How's life. I didn't have a computer over the half term so I could post or read any stories or reviews and it's Sunday today (Day I am writing, not you reading), so I am hoping you are reviewing. If not, I will just plain stop. I can't take it anymore. I need to hear your comments, not because I like criticism, but because it makes me feel like I am not wasting my time. So review or I will quit, not trying to bribe you or anything, but I really feel like I am wasting my time. So don't bother reading this and thinking, `Well, I needn't bother because someone else will. So all is fine.' Because you would be surprised how many people think that. Anyway, Hitomi told her entire past and now that's all it is. But a mysterious hamster has just come in basically unconscious and for some reason activated Hitomi's “Flash Detector.” Who is this hamster and why is he roughed up? Well, READ and find out.)

 

The white hamster was bleeding in multiple places and was completely unconscious. Hitomi seemed to know what to do and she covered up most of the bleeding areas will random towels from her bag. Mirikania started crying and Hitomi had to choose whom to care for. However, before making a final decision to look after her child, Bijou walked over to Mirikania and tended to her. Hitomi finished her work pretty quickly and let the stranger recover. The others went around the table and Hitomi walked over and took Mirikania to feed her. The talking continued.

“So… who is he?” Boss asked. Everyone fell over, except for Cappy.

“How are we supposed to know?” Dexter asked.

“Yeah, it's not like we know every single person we meet.” Hermana added.

“Sorry, it's just the usual question to asked.” Boss replied.

“I think I know him.” Howdy said, about to come up with another crappy joke.

“Don't think too hard or you'll strain whatever is in the thick skull of yours.” Hitomi replied. Everyone else, except Howdy, started laughing. “What?” Hitomi asked. “It wasn't a joke. Seriously I don't think howdy has a brain at all. Just a mouldy misplaced muscle.”

“It's a muscle then?” Howdy asked, cockily trying a comeback.

“I'd call it a brainless brute muscle, however only one half of the name compliments you.” Hitomi replied to the rubbish comeback.

“Brute?” Howdy asked.

“Doubtfully.” Hitomi said.

“Brainless!!!” Howdy yelled.

“You shouldn't talk, it makes you sound stupid.” Hitomi insulted.

“Why are you always so mean to me?” Howdy moaned.

“Must be your appearance.” Hitomi replied. Howdy just sulked. The white hamster began to come too.

“Mmm… where… am I?” he asked himself. Not knowing his location. “Where is Shampoo?” he then followed up.

“Hi there.” Said a pink coloured hamster with purple bows tying her hair much like Bijous.

“Shampoo?” The boy asked.

“No, I am Hitomi. Who's Shampoo?” The boy's vision cleared and the pink hamster turned into Hitomi.

“…Shampoo…” the boy muttered. “Where is she?”

“We have no idea who you are talking about, so we couldn't tell you.” The boy then struggled to sit up.

“What's your name?” Hitomi asked.

“Ranma.” The boy replied. Everyone stared at him.

“Ranma? From the anime series?” Hamtaro asked.

“Yeah… my owners were watching an anime series called Ranma one half. They named me Ranma after liking the character. One of them thought that if they splashed me with cold water, I would turn female. All they did is nearly drown me.” Ranma replied.

“And Shampoo is another character?”

“Yeah, my cousin. Her owner named her that after watching the character in the series. I find it sad, but her name suits her.”

“Cool… I guess.” Dexter said.

“Who're all of you?”

“I would love to introduce them to you, but you need to get cleaned up. Your covered in you own blood. I'll help you.” Hitomi said as she led him off to a place to get cleaned up. Boss snickered.

“I bet she'll lay him.” He said.

“I doubt it.” Panda replied. “He looked like a ham in love. There is no way he'll let her lay him.” Everyone sighed.

“Penelope… feels sorry for him.” Penelope said.

“Yeah.” Everyone present said.

 

Meanwhile inside the room where Ranma was being washed, Hitomi was speaking with him.

“So, I've figured your story.” She said.

“Huh?” Ranma questioned.

“You and Shampoo are cousins in love. However, you're families don't accept it and beat you up and keep you away from Shampoo. Don't they know that with hamsters, only a parent child relationship is the only thing considered disturbing and a brother sister relation ship. I never thought cousin hamster romance was wrong.” Hitomi claimed.

“…You're wrong…” Ranma lied, not wanting to share his true feelings for Shampoo.

“It's written all over your face…” Hitomi said. “And all around your head.” She finished as she stood to leave.

“Are you a psychic?”

“You could say that. I do have those abilities.” Hitomi bragged.

“Prove it!”

“You are thinking, `what a liar. She doesn't have psychic powers, I bet if I thought up the most unusual thing and most unexpected thing she won't guess it.” Hitomi said. Ranma thought to himself exactly what she was saying, just before she said it. And she kept on going. “So if I think about Potatoes and ask her to tell me what I am thinking, she'll never estimate that I thought that.” Hitomi finished. Ranma changed his thoughts and put a grin on. “Trying to disturb me are you? Trust me, you'll have a hard time doing that. Hey! Stop harassing me in your thoughts. What you'd like to see me play with myself? No! You want me to `lick myself?' You are a funny one.” Hitomi giggled.

“How do you do it so flawlessly?” Ranma asked.

“Practice, it takes a while. By the way, I know what Shampoo looks like. So I am going to go a get her.” Hitomi then left. Ranma then began to finished up his clean.

 

Hitomi walked over to her stuff and pulled out several different things from her bag. She picked up a weird looking cross belt thing. She put it on and it extended over her shoulders and around her waist. She picked up both of her bon berries and placed one through two slip holes in the back of the belt thing going from the top left to the bottom right. The ball of the bonborie was resting on her shoulder. (The bonborie balls are rather big. They are bigger than any hamster's head. Human sized ones a twice as big and heavy as a bowling ball.) She lifted her paws up to the middle of the poll of the bonberry to a metal slip thing. She twisted it slightly to reveal a hole. She picked up the other one and pushed that down the other holes and through the other bonborie hole. (So now it looks like a cross with to gigantic balls on the top.) Hitomi got her favourite coin and slipped it into one of the pockets provided by the belt. She then headed for the door, but turned to the others before leaving.

“Take care of my little she he for me would you. I'll be back in a while, just going to war. Bye.” She said as she left.

 

She ran towards god knows where. She used her power to locate Shampoo. She past a heard of cats who gave her a bit of trouble. However, they were kittens going into adult hood, so Hitomi just knocked them out with one bonborie.

 

She soon arrived at her destination. She saw a pink hamster crying her heart out next to a tree. She walked over and sat next to her. The pink hamster looked at her.

“Who're…” She sniffled a bit. “Who're you?” She asked.

“Would you be called Shampoo by any chance?” Hitomi questioned, not even looking at her, instead looking at the sky. The pink hamster quickly reacted.

“Yes, but who're you?”

“I am Hitomi. I know someone called Ranma, do you know him?” Hitomi asked, making sure this was the right girl.

“Ran… ma? My cousin?” Shampoo asked.

“Indeed… at least, that's what he said. Do you love him?”

“Yes, I love him very much, only…”

“You're parents won't allow it.” Shampoo was a bit surprised. “And they beat him up to keep him away and left him for dead outside someone's club.” Hitomi finished.

“How… how did you know?” Shampoo asked.

“One, I read your thought patterns and two, I was in the club he was left for dead at.”

“Is he… dead?”

“Absolutely not.”

“Take me too him.”

“Hold it!” Yelled a deep voice. “You ain't goin' no where near that scum!” Hitomi smiled.

“Ahh… he comes the father who set an arranged marriage for his precious little girl. What a bastard.” The black hamster took this to shock.

“Father… is this true?” Shampoo asked.

“…Who do you think you are making rough estimates like that?!” The black bastard asked Hitomi.

“I didn't make an estimate, I just read your mind.” Hitomi said, standing and facing the ugly ham. “His name is France. What a fucked up name. `Hi, I am a country.'” Hiromi laughed. “Some people might be called that. This guy, France, he is a blonde hamster, his short, both height and temper, he is also standing behind this very tree. What? Were you going to introduce him?” Hitomi asked, nastily. The black ham rushed her, however she pulled out the bonborie through the other, grabbed the handle and slammed it into his gut. He fell to his knees.

“You are scum, not Ranma. Shampoo doesn't need someone like France. What? Was it `All the best for my darling little girl?'” Hitomi mocked. “Come on out you blonde fuck!” Hitomi called. Out came a “charming blonde hamster” with the worst face design around and the longest nose, with square glasses. “Damn, your appearance makes me feel like having sex with Howdy is a fucking blessing.” Hitomi mocked him.

“Who do you think you are?” France asked.

“A lovely young girl who likes to throw her opinion around.” Hitomi replied honestly. “Now, lets see, your past is… wait… I know you!” Hitomi went mean all of a sudden. “Do you happen to know a man named Flash?”

“Yes, he was a good friend. He had a daughter who he liked to fuck a lot, although he wouldn't let me have a go…” France was taken by surprise as Hitomi rushed him with both bonberies and the most mean looking expression he'd even seen. She pummelled him into the ground and turned him into a blood heap. She jumped on top of him, keeping him down.

“Guess what pal. I am that little girl whose life was a FUCKING misery! And I killed Flash! Now, I'll kill you!” Hitomi lifted her weapon. Another pink hamster walked around.

“Get off of him!” She yelled.

“Ah, Shampoo's “wonderful mother.” Ever seen someone die before?”

“I swear if you don't get off of him…”

“You'll what? Do you think you have what it takes to deal with me before I bring this spindle down on this FUCKHEADS fucked up skull?” Hitomi asked.

“You need to learn manners.”

“You need to FUCKING GET A FUCKING LIFE!” Hitomi yelled. She then brought it down, but France vanished and a black and white hamster placed him down near the other pink hamster, vanished and appeared in front of Hitomi. Hitomi swung her bonborie, but this guy cancelled it out and shoved his hand, fingers straight out, through her chest. It seemed like several minutes past with his hand in her chest for Hitomi, however it was a few short seconds and he press his hand against her stomach and shot a blast sending her and her weapons flying in the direction she came. She flew for miles before hitting the ground and rolling around a bit; remaining limb at the place she stopped.

 

(Oh my god! What am I doing? Well, that was unexpected now wasn't it? I hoped you liked it. What to do next?)