InuYasha Fan Fiction / Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ concrete angel ❯ rememeber ( Chapter 1 )
[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
By: phoenix_darkness 
She had been betrayed by her own kind. Tortured and abused at home. Her only salvation, her sanctuary was the past...well used to be the past. She kept a secret from the rest since the day she fell down the well. Letting her walls down she saw what the world, her world could be. But now the man she loved has been with another behind her back. She is sick an tired of it all an now...she's hell bent on revenge. To kill the people who dare came close or killed what was hers an to kill the man who she once loved. Come along an follow me in the eyes of kagome. Kagome aka concrete angel.
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction / Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst / Mystery / Adventure / Action | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 01.20.2006 | Updated On: 01.20.2006 | Pages: 1 | Words: 2.1K | Visits: 1.1K | Status: Work In Progress
She had been betrayed by her own kind. Tortured and abused at home. Her only salvation, her sanctuary was the past...well used to be the past. She kept a secret from the rest since the day she fell down the well. Letting her walls down she saw what the world, her world could be. But now the man she loved has been with another behind her back. She is sick an tired of it all an now...she's hell bent on revenge. To kill the people who dare came close or killed what was hers an to kill the man who she once loved. Come along an follow me in the eyes of kagome. Kagome aka concrete angel.
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction / Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst / Mystery / Adventure / Action | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 01.20.2006 | Updated On: 01.20.2006 | Pages: 1 | Words: 2.1K | Visits: 1.1K | Status: Work In Progress
Concrete Angel!
(Authors note): hello people remember when I said I was going to do another fic well here is one. This is very different. I’ve only seen this kind of a story done once or twice. Well I can't tell you all the good stuff. When I mean you've only seen this story for this pairing once or twice I mean some of the elements. You see them in different stories, but never all together. Another thing I’ve been working on different types of demons so there a few new ones never seen that will debute in this story. Anyway I hope you like it. Oh an a warning it gets Angst at some parts. Hope you like.
(Summery)
She had been betrayed by her own kind. Tortured and abused at home. Her only salvation, her sanctuary was the past...well used to be the past. She kept a secret from the rest since the day she fell down the well. Letting her walls down she saw what the world, her world could be. But now the man she loved has been with another behind her back. She is sick an tired of it all an now...she's hell bent on revenge. To kill the people who dare came close or killed what was hers an to kill the man who she once loved. Come along an follow me in the eyes of kagome. Kagome aka concrete angel.
(Chapter one/ remember): i don't own inuyasha
The sky was the color of charcoal gray as kagome sat on top of the hill over looking the graveyard. Behind her the tombstone that made her turns cold. If it hadn't been for her he would still be alive. She has no true place in this time anymore since he is dead. The only person that kept her Zane was gone an it was all her fault. She was betrayed and the price was the life of someone she held dear to her. She wanted to die to be with him. To protect him even in death since she failed in the real world.
When she came home she was ridiculed. Her mother beat the ever living shit out of her. Her new step father watched with sick an twisted pleasure. Her grandfather had long since died. The day he had died was the day her family fell apart. Her mother became a whore on the streets of Japan. That’s where she met her new ' father '. The man was at least 20 years old with long greasy hair. He was slim an dark. Always had a cigarette in his mouth and a blunt in his hand. The man who was her new father was young enough to be her older brother since she was only 17.
Kagome had to start wearing long sleeves and pants to cover her bruises and the marks she marred when she came in contact with her ' father '. The pig even tried to rape her once. She got him good when she stabbed him with a poisonous butcher knife she kept hidden under her pillow. When her mother found out when she came home she forced kagome to strip her clothing and lie on the living room floor. Her step father came from behind her an lashed her with a thick 2 tailed whip. Her cuts still haven't healed even though it’s been 4 months.
Unknown to anyone she knew she wasn't part of the family. She knew that she was an abandoned baby. How did she know? She looked at the pictures of her family an compared herself. Where her ' mother ' had short sticky looking brown hair. Kagome had long thick and wavy ebony tresses. While her mother had dull shit brown eyes. Kagome had ocean blue eyes that changed with her emotion. While her mother was aging in her pictures at 16 and gaining weight. Kagome had a womanly figure and didn't look a day over 15. There are so many differences she could go on all day. An don't let her get started on her father. The man was American and white. She had a DNA test done on her a few years ago to confirm she was half Japanese, African American, Egyptian, and Native American with another race that was unknown.
She knew, she knew the secret her so called mother kept.
She knew her so called mother was jealous of her in everyway. She knew that her husband looked at her with disgust in his eyes, but one look at kagome and they were lust filled. She knew how much her mother wanted to be young and beautiful again.
Kagome had a secret life that no one knew about. When she was 10 she joined a gang. They trained her. Took her in and helped her with her 'special' little gifts. She thought she could trust them. They were just like her. Why? Why did they have to do this? She would get revenge. They killed him.
Kagome read the tombstone over again. 'Souta 'Higurashi, 1990-2005, in loving memory, dreams don't die
'15 damn years old, you didn't deserve this brother; you didn't ' kagome thought as she stood up from the ground.
She picked her back pack up an slung it over her shoulder. Tonight she would get part of her revenge done. It started at home. Walking down to the sidewalk she took one last glance at the cemetery. She set of to her home for the last time. When she came threw the well she didn't go home and she made sure no one knew she was back. She had built a little cabin in the woods the had an concealing spell on it a few years ago. That’s were she slept for 2 months. That’s right she hadn't been to the past in 2 months. She had her reasons to. Her aura she knew would be read time she came from the well. The overwhelming sadness couldn't be missed nor could it be stopped. Who could really blame her? Kagome was so caught up in her thoughts that she didn't notice she was now standing in front of the shrine.
At one time she could remember when this was a real home. She could remember when she and her brother were younger, playing in the backyard. Sipping tea and lemonade with there cookies in the summer. Raking leaves an then jumping in them in the fall. The snow falling an with it came snow ball fights in the winter. She remembered birthday parties and family gatherings. All the things a child should get when they are growing up.
Those days were over an now she had a job to do.
Walking around the house to the back yard she went to her cabin to get a few things.
When she got there she packed her new black backpack. A few things had changed, for one her appearance. She had long ago given up on school and threw the uniform away with it. Now she wore an outfit she wore when she was in the gang. A white button down shirt with a black leather corset tied around her waist the white button down shirt was different because the back was longer than the front, way longer. The back of the shirt went all the way to the ground to form a gown like appearance from the back. Then a simple short black skirt that stopped mid thigh on her. A pair of black boots that went up to her knees.
Kagome had cut her hair some so it was now a little bit longer than shoulder length. She really didn't have bangs anymore since they grew out to the full length of her hair. she always wore it in a tight neat bun that sat on the back of her head with two black chop sticks with diamond dragons on it going threw the bun. You could never; an I mean never find her with out a pair of black shades on. (Holy crap I’m making her sound like she's in the matrix...hmmm interesting). Diamond choker around her neck while silver loop earrings adored her ears. Putting cd's in the bag with her survival kits and first aid kit she stopped an looked around. Some things were missing...where in the hell did she put her guns?
(Later on)
At the stroke of mid-night kagome came back to the house. She put her pack in the well house before coming here. Now inside the house she walked up the stairs to her mother room. The door was opened showing her 'mother' and 'father' was sleep. Walking into the room she made not a sound. In her hand were 2 needles full of muscle relaxer. The position they were sleeping in kagome stabbed both of them in the neck injecting the relaxer. Both of their eyes shot open, but neither could move. They tried to scream but found that there mouth would not move. A sick laugh came from the corner of the room.
"Hello mommy dearest, father" kagome said sarcastically
"How are you doing, don't even try to yell, your paralyzed" kagome said, she could see the fear gripping their eyes.
" it is time for the end, I told you not to hurt me, an what do you do?" kagome said as she walked towards them, in the moon light 2 guns were revealed strapped to her waist along with various other knifes and daggers. There eyes were wide.
"Oh you like there S&W's Rifle-Range Revolver, I think there lovely" kagome said in a sugar sweet voice.
"I’ve waited long enough, pay back is a bitch and I’m the bitch that’s doing the paying" kagome said, lifting the two pillows from under their heads she placed them over their faces. Pulling both guns out the strap she placed the barrels over their heads. Tilting her head to look down the gun she snickered
"Hmm lets have some fun, lets play Russian roulette" kagome said counting in her head to five she pulled the trigger...
'Click’
She did this over an over again till
"Boom"
"Oops looks like father dearest won't be joining us for dinner" kagome said as she pulled the gun from the left back into its strap. The other gun still over her mothers head.
"Any last words" kagome asked sweetly
"No guess not, see ya bitch" kagome said as she pulled the trigger, a short scream then nothing.
Kagome walked out the room closing the door behind her then whipping it of before she walked to her room. In her room she went to get her jacket and some money she had hid in there. After that she went to the window then climbed out climbing down the tree. Running to the well house she didn't look back. Didn’t even need to worry about the sounds for two reasons. One :) they lived so close to the woods people didn't stay close. Two :) a few months ago since there was a complaint about screaming from there closet neighbors that her ' mother ' had put in silent instillation. She knew she had a good month before anyone who cared would find them.
Jumping into the sea of blue that was the time portal she was about to come back and make a big bang in the past.
(End chapter)
what do you think so far. i hope you like it. i'll have a chapter done for this tonight or tomarrow then i'll work on pt2 of somewhere i belong and hiding amousnt the shadows of time. hope ya like read and review.
(Authors note): hello people remember when I said I was going to do another fic well here is one. This is very different. I’ve only seen this kind of a story done once or twice. Well I can't tell you all the good stuff. When I mean you've only seen this story for this pairing once or twice I mean some of the elements. You see them in different stories, but never all together. Another thing I’ve been working on different types of demons so there a few new ones never seen that will debute in this story. Anyway I hope you like it. Oh an a warning it gets Angst at some parts. Hope you like.
(Summery)
She had been betrayed by her own kind. Tortured and abused at home. Her only salvation, her sanctuary was the past...well used to be the past. She kept a secret from the rest since the day she fell down the well. Letting her walls down she saw what the world, her world could be. But now the man she loved has been with another behind her back. She is sick an tired of it all an now...she's hell bent on revenge. To kill the people who dare came close or killed what was hers an to kill the man who she once loved. Come along an follow me in the eyes of kagome. Kagome aka concrete angel.
(Chapter one/ remember): i don't own inuyasha
The sky was the color of charcoal gray as kagome sat on top of the hill over looking the graveyard. Behind her the tombstone that made her turns cold. If it hadn't been for her he would still be alive. She has no true place in this time anymore since he is dead. The only person that kept her Zane was gone an it was all her fault. She was betrayed and the price was the life of someone she held dear to her. She wanted to die to be with him. To protect him even in death since she failed in the real world.
When she came home she was ridiculed. Her mother beat the ever living shit out of her. Her new step father watched with sick an twisted pleasure. Her grandfather had long since died. The day he had died was the day her family fell apart. Her mother became a whore on the streets of Japan. That’s where she met her new ' father '. The man was at least 20 years old with long greasy hair. He was slim an dark. Always had a cigarette in his mouth and a blunt in his hand. The man who was her new father was young enough to be her older brother since she was only 17.
Kagome had to start wearing long sleeves and pants to cover her bruises and the marks she marred when she came in contact with her ' father '. The pig even tried to rape her once. She got him good when she stabbed him with a poisonous butcher knife she kept hidden under her pillow. When her mother found out when she came home she forced kagome to strip her clothing and lie on the living room floor. Her step father came from behind her an lashed her with a thick 2 tailed whip. Her cuts still haven't healed even though it’s been 4 months.
Unknown to anyone she knew she wasn't part of the family. She knew that she was an abandoned baby. How did she know? She looked at the pictures of her family an compared herself. Where her ' mother ' had short sticky looking brown hair. Kagome had long thick and wavy ebony tresses. While her mother had dull shit brown eyes. Kagome had ocean blue eyes that changed with her emotion. While her mother was aging in her pictures at 16 and gaining weight. Kagome had a womanly figure and didn't look a day over 15. There are so many differences she could go on all day. An don't let her get started on her father. The man was American and white. She had a DNA test done on her a few years ago to confirm she was half Japanese, African American, Egyptian, and Native American with another race that was unknown.
She knew, she knew the secret her so called mother kept.
She knew her so called mother was jealous of her in everyway. She knew that her husband looked at her with disgust in his eyes, but one look at kagome and they were lust filled. She knew how much her mother wanted to be young and beautiful again.
Kagome had a secret life that no one knew about. When she was 10 she joined a gang. They trained her. Took her in and helped her with her 'special' little gifts. She thought she could trust them. They were just like her. Why? Why did they have to do this? She would get revenge. They killed him.
Kagome read the tombstone over again. 'Souta 'Higurashi, 1990-2005, in loving memory, dreams don't die
'15 damn years old, you didn't deserve this brother; you didn't ' kagome thought as she stood up from the ground.
She picked her back pack up an slung it over her shoulder. Tonight she would get part of her revenge done. It started at home. Walking down to the sidewalk she took one last glance at the cemetery. She set of to her home for the last time. When she came threw the well she didn't go home and she made sure no one knew she was back. She had built a little cabin in the woods the had an concealing spell on it a few years ago. That’s were she slept for 2 months. That’s right she hadn't been to the past in 2 months. She had her reasons to. Her aura she knew would be read time she came from the well. The overwhelming sadness couldn't be missed nor could it be stopped. Who could really blame her? Kagome was so caught up in her thoughts that she didn't notice she was now standing in front of the shrine.
At one time she could remember when this was a real home. She could remember when she and her brother were younger, playing in the backyard. Sipping tea and lemonade with there cookies in the summer. Raking leaves an then jumping in them in the fall. The snow falling an with it came snow ball fights in the winter. She remembered birthday parties and family gatherings. All the things a child should get when they are growing up.
Those days were over an now she had a job to do.
Walking around the house to the back yard she went to her cabin to get a few things.
When she got there she packed her new black backpack. A few things had changed, for one her appearance. She had long ago given up on school and threw the uniform away with it. Now she wore an outfit she wore when she was in the gang. A white button down shirt with a black leather corset tied around her waist the white button down shirt was different because the back was longer than the front, way longer. The back of the shirt went all the way to the ground to form a gown like appearance from the back. Then a simple short black skirt that stopped mid thigh on her. A pair of black boots that went up to her knees.
Kagome had cut her hair some so it was now a little bit longer than shoulder length. She really didn't have bangs anymore since they grew out to the full length of her hair. she always wore it in a tight neat bun that sat on the back of her head with two black chop sticks with diamond dragons on it going threw the bun. You could never; an I mean never find her with out a pair of black shades on. (Holy crap I’m making her sound like she's in the matrix...hmmm interesting). Diamond choker around her neck while silver loop earrings adored her ears. Putting cd's in the bag with her survival kits and first aid kit she stopped an looked around. Some things were missing...where in the hell did she put her guns?
(Later on)
At the stroke of mid-night kagome came back to the house. She put her pack in the well house before coming here. Now inside the house she walked up the stairs to her mother room. The door was opened showing her 'mother' and 'father' was sleep. Walking into the room she made not a sound. In her hand were 2 needles full of muscle relaxer. The position they were sleeping in kagome stabbed both of them in the neck injecting the relaxer. Both of their eyes shot open, but neither could move. They tried to scream but found that there mouth would not move. A sick laugh came from the corner of the room.
"Hello mommy dearest, father" kagome said sarcastically
"How are you doing, don't even try to yell, your paralyzed" kagome said, she could see the fear gripping their eyes.
" it is time for the end, I told you not to hurt me, an what do you do?" kagome said as she walked towards them, in the moon light 2 guns were revealed strapped to her waist along with various other knifes and daggers. There eyes were wide.
"Oh you like there S&W's Rifle-Range Revolver, I think there lovely" kagome said in a sugar sweet voice.
"I’ve waited long enough, pay back is a bitch and I’m the bitch that’s doing the paying" kagome said, lifting the two pillows from under their heads she placed them over their faces. Pulling both guns out the strap she placed the barrels over their heads. Tilting her head to look down the gun she snickered
"Hmm lets have some fun, lets play Russian roulette" kagome said counting in her head to five she pulled the trigger...
'Click’
She did this over an over again till
"Boom"
"Oops looks like father dearest won't be joining us for dinner" kagome said as she pulled the gun from the left back into its strap. The other gun still over her mothers head.
"Any last words" kagome asked sweetly
"No guess not, see ya bitch" kagome said as she pulled the trigger, a short scream then nothing.
Kagome walked out the room closing the door behind her then whipping it of before she walked to her room. In her room she went to get her jacket and some money she had hid in there. After that she went to the window then climbed out climbing down the tree. Running to the well house she didn't look back. Didn’t even need to worry about the sounds for two reasons. One :) they lived so close to the woods people didn't stay close. Two :) a few months ago since there was a complaint about screaming from there closet neighbors that her ' mother ' had put in silent instillation. She knew she had a good month before anyone who cared would find them.
Jumping into the sea of blue that was the time portal she was about to come back and make a big bang in the past.
(End chapter)
what do you think so far. i hope you like it. i'll have a chapter done for this tonight or tomarrow then i'll work on pt2 of somewhere i belong and hiding amousnt the shadows of time. hope ya like read and review.