InuYasha Fan Fiction / Pretear Fan Fiction ❯ The second Pretear ❯ The breathe taking girl ( Chapter 1 )

KFLYC: Hey it's a new story please r&r or I won't update.

 

 

CHAPTER 1: The breathe taking girl

 

 

 

 

It was night and Hayate was walking in the town clearing his mind of the mixed thoughts that occupied it. He then heard a loud scream. He ran to see what it was. When he got to his destination he saw a thug attacking a girl who appeared no more than seventeen in an alley. Hayate saw that the thug wasn't human and attacked it. He shot a blast of wind at the demon decapitated it.

 

The girl just stood there scared shivering cold as her ice blue eyes met Hayate's dark blue eyes. Before Hayate was a cream colored babe witrh long turquoise hair that defined her ice blue eyes. Her hair spilled down her back meeting her hips. The very sight of her robbed Hayate of his breathe.

 

Hayate then noticed that the girl was shivering and panting. He then see that all of the buttons on her white blouse were ripped off and it was swaying exposing her bra. Her blue jeans was also unbuttoned unzipped. The girl then fainted. Hayate then ran over to her just barely catching her before she hit the ground. He then felt how cold she was and put his coat on her and carried her away.

 

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~THE DREAM~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

When I turned around I seen smoke and fire and it is in my village. I then start to run to see if my mom, dad, and brother is alright. As I try to run as fast as I can in my small ten year old body to save them tears start to wale up in my eyes. When I reached the village I use my ice powers and dirt to calm the fire. As I ran into my house I see the burned bodies of my family I fall to me knees in tears. I then get up and start to run far away with tears spilling out of my eyes as I run into a demon.

 

 

I then ran into a half demon who wore a baboon costume he then said, “I Naraku finally ridded the horrible ice fox demons from this place except for one the all so lovely ten year old Turquoise”. I threw my fist at him out of anger to hit him for killing my family all the villagers were my family we were all ice fox demons and we all watched each others backs. The demon then dodged my blow and cut a big gash on my arm with roots. I scream in pain and fall to the ground as the demon put his hand on my head as I transported into another dimension.

 

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~THE DREAM END- TURQUOISE POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

As I began to shift I feel a warm hand on my head. As I began to open my eyes, stretching, and yawning to the morning sun I realize I am in a bed and there are seven blurs in front of me. As my eyes began to focus I see a guy sitting on the bed with his hand on my head and other guys around the bed.

 

 

“You don't seem to have a fever anymore”, the guy with blue hair and blue eyes who saved me said.

 

 

I then say, “You're the guy who saved me from that rapist”. I then look under the covers to see that my jeans are zipped and buttoned and that I am wearing a different shirt.

 

 

“Are there any girls here”, I say seeing if one of the guys changed me.

 

 

“No”, a guy with blond hair and light brown eyes said. My face started to turn red at the thought of a guy changing my shirt, buttoning, and zipping up my pants. I started to shake in anger as my fist start to twitch not knowing with of the four grown guys to punch.

 

 

“Are you alright miss”, a guy with white/silver hair and blue eyes said.

 

 

To play it off I said, “Oh it is nothing”.

 

 

He then says, “Good I'm glad”. I thought to myself he is glad when a guy changed my shirt I could have killed him.

 

 

I then try to get the seven names so I could cuss the four grown ones out so I say, “Excuse me I didn't get your names”.

 

 

The guy with the white/silver hair and blue eyes said, “My apologies my name is Sasame”.

 

 

The guy with the blue hair and the blue eyes then said, “My name is Hayate”.

 

 

The guy with blond hair and light brown eyes then said, “My name is Kei”.

 

 

A guy with the brown and red hair then said, “My name is Go it is a real pleasure to meet you”, I didn't know if he was greeting me or flirting.

 

 

A boy with white hair and blue eyes then said, “My name is Mannen”.

 

 

A boy with orange hair and ocean eyes then said, “My name is Hajime”.

 

 

A boy with blond hair and green eyes then said, “My name is Shin what is your name lady”.

 

 

“Please don't call me lady I am only seventeen oh and my name is Turquoise”, I responded with a heart warming smile. The boys were adorable and Hayate and Sasame are sexy. Now that I had their names it was time to cuss them out.

 

 

“Could you three boys please excuse me for five minutes”, I kindly asked the three boys.

 

 

“Hey lady I am not a kid”, Mannen said.

 

 

“Just get out”, Go said as he made sure the boys exited the room.

 

 

My timid expression then turned angry as I stood up in place on the bed and yelled, “Who the hell changed my shirt, buttoned, and zipped my jeans”. I looked around to see who looked guilty.

 

 

“You see Hayate, Sasame, and I refused so Kei did it calling us cowards”, Go said with an innocent look on his face. I then walked up to Kei and punched at him but he put his hand up and I hit his hand but when my fist touched his hand there was a lot of static and I fell. While I was expecting to hit the ground I landed into Hayate's arms.

 

 

“Can it be she is also a pretear”, Sasame said in shock. In my head I was thinking a pre what. I then remembered that I was still in Hayate's arms and got up.

 

 

“What he didn't drop her he usually drops people unless he likes them”, Go said with a jealous look on his face.

 

 

Sasame is now like two inches away from my face saying, “If you don't mind me asking how did you get that scar on your arm”. That stabs me in the heart the thing that reminds me of that awful day when my family was killed.

 

 

Hayate then said, “Where did you come from”. That really stabs me in the heart.

 

 

“I really don't want to talk about those two subjects”, I said as tears started to form in my eyes.

 

 

“I am sorry I didn't know”, Sasame said.

 

 

I then thought of a way to change the subject, “You guys you aren't human”.

 

 

“How did you know”, Go said loudly.

 

 

“I could tell you may have on normal clothes but you weren't born in the human world”, I said.

 

 

I continued saying, “That is good to know that I can at least trust someone. I only trust two humans the others are back stabbing sons of bitches that always call you names behind your back. They always hurt you and drop you like a rock and doesn't care about your feelings”, I said as tears fell out of my eyes. Just hen I felt arms wrap around me, embracing me. When I looked up I saw Sasame holding me.

 

 

After about twelve minutes I pulled away and started my story, “I am a ice fox demon. When I was ten I was playing in the mountains and when I turned around I seen smoke and fire and it is in my village. I then started to run to see if my mom, dad, and brother was alright. As I tried to run as fast as I can in my small ten year old body to save them tears start to wale up in my eyes. When I reached the village I use my ice powers and dirt to calm the fire. As I ran into my house I seen the burned bodies of my family I then fell to me knees in tears. I then got up and started to run far away with tears spilling out of my eyes.

 

I then ran into a half demon who wore a baboon costume he then said, “I Naraku finally ridded the horrible ice fox demons from this place except for one the all so lovely ten year old Turquoise”. I threw my fist at him out of anger to hit him for killing my family all the villagers were my family we were all ice fox demons and we all watched each others backs. The demon then dodged my blow and cut a big gash on my arm with roots. I screamed in pain and fell to the ground as the demon put his hand on my head as I transported into another dimension.

 

 

I then hid my ears and tail and ran into a nine year old girl and her dad. They then adopted me and showed me kindness. They names are Himeno and Kaoru. They are the only humans who knows about me being a fox demon. They are the only ones who love me the only humans who love me. I now live in a huge mansion with my dad's new wife. I am not really happy at all no way no how. And when I get home my step mom will ground me I was supposed to be home by eight and when I seen Hayate it was about eleven. I ran for three hours from that rapist then I fainted.”

 

 

Tears then started to roll down me face again as I remembered my families burned body, “I am not happy I could not save them at all not once”. I then barried my face into Sasame's shirt again.

 

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~NORMAL POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

A turquoise light then surrounded Turquoise blinding Hayate, Sasame, Kei, and Go when it died down before the four Leafe knights was Turquoise with fox ears and a fox tail. The ears and the tail was turquoise with ice blue tips the defined her hair and eyes.

 

 

Turquoise then said, “My disguise has gave in after seven years”.

 

 

“Tha that is your true form”, Go stuttered out of seeing such beauty.

 

 

“Are you talking about Himeno Awayuki”, Sasame said as I nodded in agreement.

 

 

“She is the other pretear”, Go said as in my head I said what the fuck is a pretear.

 

 

“Yes”, Turquoise said. Just then she sensed something turning towards the window.

 

 

“Demon larva”, Kei said as Mannen, Hajime, and shin busted in the room.