InuYasha Fan Fiction / Yu Yu Hakusho Fan Fiction ❯ Devil's Pride ❯ Devils Pride ( Chapter 1 )
[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
Well I got this idea and so I wanted to see how ppl would respond to it so here it is Devil's Pride!
Darkness had finally consumed the city of Tokyo, after all the bustle of the city. If you were you human you would have never noticed the demon run by, followed by a wickedly dark aura. By the time the demon stopped for a "break" he was on the outskirts of town which was a forest.
"I *pant* think *pant* I lost *pant* her" said the tired demon.
"I think not lowly demon" coldly spoke a female voice.
The demon slowly turned to face his death. There before him stood a black clothed woman, yet he only knew that by her voice. Her hood shadowed her face but didn't hide her cold, blood filled eyes.
"You know better than to run from me" coldly said the female.
"I-I-I'mm s-s-sorry L-Lad-d-dy...." stuttered the weak demon.
The demon was inturrupted by cold laughter.
"Calling me lady will not stop your painful death demon. I was only going to drain you a bit...but that run made me very hungry. So know instead I'm going to tear your organs out of your body and devoure them!" maliciously said the female.
Before the demon could respond, the woman threw the demon onto the ground, straddled his waist, and held onto his wrist.
"Hm...you seem to enjoying this" she whispered.
The woman licked the demons neck and dug her fangs into his neck where she hungrily sucked the blood. It seems the demon was still living but....not till she thrust her hand into his chest where she took his heart out and devoured it. She then repeated the action, but with different organs.
"Mmm...tasty" said the female while she laughed evilly.
"Yusuke, Koenma has requested that you look into a death scene just out of Tokyo" said a pink haired girl, known as Botan.
"Yeah, Yeah, just open the stupid portal, sheesh" angrily yelled the badass, Yusuke.
Yusuke then entered a portal in which took him to the scene of the crime.
"Shit, what happened here!" yelled Yusuke.
"It seems like the demon was drained and his intestines were taken" answered the red head, Kurama.
"Hn" shortly said the black clothed male, Hiei.
The place was filled with the smell of blood. Everything, from trees, to flowers, and the grass was covered in the demons blood. Suddenly Yusuke's communicater went off. It seems like their boss was going to inform them more on the case. They stepped into the blue portal created by Botan, and into Spirit World.
"Hello, it seems that little info is known. It seems like the legend is true..." started Koenma, but was interrupted by Yusuke.
"What legend?"
"Well there is a legend which talks about a child being born with extreme power. The girl..." Koenma was interrupted once more.
"A girl!!?" screamed Yusuke.
"Yes! Now stop inturrupting! The girl was taken away from her parents to be be taken to heaven so she will be brought up with a pure heart. But things went wrong, the child ended up burning a big portion of Heaven. So it was taken to Hell, where the gate was locked. Well it was said that the Devil had taken her in and would train her to be te greatest evil in the whole universe! She was to come back up onto the Earth's surface with companions from Hell, whom are not stated. Once here she would cause tremendous pain to the whole world, taint any pure soul, bring those who are already tainted with evil to high power! We must stop her or the whole world will be in horrible pain!!"
So was it good, should I go with it and continue....or what.. Well REVIEW if you liked it, or to comment, whatever....PLEASE REVIEW!!!!
Darkness had finally consumed the city of Tokyo, after all the bustle of the city. If you were you human you would have never noticed the demon run by, followed by a wickedly dark aura. By the time the demon stopped for a "break" he was on the outskirts of town which was a forest.
"I *pant* think *pant* I lost *pant* her" said the tired demon.
"I think not lowly demon" coldly spoke a female voice.
The demon slowly turned to face his death. There before him stood a black clothed woman, yet he only knew that by her voice. Her hood shadowed her face but didn't hide her cold, blood filled eyes.
"You know better than to run from me" coldly said the female.
"I-I-I'mm s-s-sorry L-Lad-d-dy...." stuttered the weak demon.
The demon was inturrupted by cold laughter.
"Calling me lady will not stop your painful death demon. I was only going to drain you a bit...but that run made me very hungry. So know instead I'm going to tear your organs out of your body and devoure them!" maliciously said the female.
Before the demon could respond, the woman threw the demon onto the ground, straddled his waist, and held onto his wrist.
"Hm...you seem to enjoying this" she whispered.
The woman licked the demons neck and dug her fangs into his neck where she hungrily sucked the blood. It seems the demon was still living but....not till she thrust her hand into his chest where she took his heart out and devoured it. She then repeated the action, but with different organs.
"Mmm...tasty" said the female while she laughed evilly.
"Yusuke, Koenma has requested that you look into a death scene just out of Tokyo" said a pink haired girl, known as Botan.
"Yeah, Yeah, just open the stupid portal, sheesh" angrily yelled the badass, Yusuke.
Yusuke then entered a portal in which took him to the scene of the crime.
"Shit, what happened here!" yelled Yusuke.
"It seems like the demon was drained and his intestines were taken" answered the red head, Kurama.
"Hn" shortly said the black clothed male, Hiei.
The place was filled with the smell of blood. Everything, from trees, to flowers, and the grass was covered in the demons blood. Suddenly Yusuke's communicater went off. It seems like their boss was going to inform them more on the case. They stepped into the blue portal created by Botan, and into Spirit World.
"Hello, it seems that little info is known. It seems like the legend is true..." started Koenma, but was interrupted by Yusuke.
"What legend?"
"Well there is a legend which talks about a child being born with extreme power. The girl..." Koenma was interrupted once more.
"A girl!!?" screamed Yusuke.
"Yes! Now stop inturrupting! The girl was taken away from her parents to be be taken to heaven so she will be brought up with a pure heart. But things went wrong, the child ended up burning a big portion of Heaven. So it was taken to Hell, where the gate was locked. Well it was said that the Devil had taken her in and would train her to be te greatest evil in the whole universe! She was to come back up onto the Earth's surface with companions from Hell, whom are not stated. Once here she would cause tremendous pain to the whole world, taint any pure soul, bring those who are already tainted with evil to high power! We must stop her or the whole world will be in horrible pain!!"
So was it good, should I go with it and continue....or what.. Well REVIEW if you liked it, or to comment, whatever....PLEASE REVIEW!!!!