InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ All Hallow's Evening ❯ Obey Me ( Chapter 2 )
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All Hallow's Evening
Chapter 2: Obey Me
He was still holding her, and they were still jumping, she could almost swear they were not in the South Kingdom anymore, but that was impossible, right? It took at lest 2 days to reach the frontier! But they were going really fast...
She looked up at him again, he hadn't even broken a sweat. She groaned and twisted in his hold, this was really uncomfortable, he had her by the waist, practically hanging at one side of his body.
"Stop moving or I'll drop you!" She snorted and he looked meanly at her. She shut up immediately, he could look real threatening when he wanted... She couldn't forget this was a demon, after all.... a terribly human-looking demon. He had probably eaten a hundred kids by now!
"So..." she started "how many children have you eaten?" He started laughing right away and she crossed her arms the best she could given her position.
"Why do you ask?" he said, with a twisted smile, no doubt trying to show her his fangs.
She shrugged "Curious." He smiled down at her again.
"Millions." He lied. "tasty little things." Kagome looked at him suspiciously, for some reason she couldn't see him eating any children. Well, if you ignored the fact that he had kidnapped her and was going to do god knows what with her!
"How old are you?" the question surprised him as much as it did her. She couldn't help it! He looked so boyish grinning like that.
"Sorry, no socializing with the prey. Family rule." He said, looking ahead.
"I am a 'prey'?" she said frightened. "I thought I was going to be a concubine!... Not that I find that thought charming at the least." He laughed again, she had spirit, he could smell she was scared but she still wanted to hide it! So cute...
"It's up to my father to decide." He said, still looking ahead and not to her. "He usually keeps beautiful girls and eat the ugly ones." He joked. "You should probably enjoy your last hour of life..."
"Are you trying to tell me something?"!" He was laughing again. She hadn't even dreamed that a demon would laugh this much... and without even a tint of malice... this laugh was just plain mocking! And so infuriating! "Well, dying will be a lot better than staying with an old fart minor-lover demon!"
"Oh, no, my father doesn't 'keep' the girls, my mother won't let him." He smirked when he said this. "He usually gives them to the men to share." Kagome shivered at the thought. "But if the girl is a Miko..." he looked down at her again, with a mocking smile. "He gives her to me or my older brother." Kagome eyes went wide with shock but then she composed herself and put a serious face.
"How much older?" she asked, pretending to be interested. Inuyasha actually looked hurt.
"Oh, you wouldn't like him, he is a pedophile." Kagome made a face, well, so much for trying to find a better option...
She was silent for a while, watching the horizon, they were going east... and it was almost dawn. All Hallow's evening was almost over! This was just around the time the people got out of their houses and started finding bodies, her mother was probably one of the people looking for dead bodies right now! She had to get free and go back!
"You know what?" she said in her sexiest voice. "If you let me go I'd pay you anyway you want... I'll do ANYTHING." She looked at him from beneath her eyelashes, but he wasn't buying it. In fact, he looked horrified.
"Like hell! I don't want to sleep with you!" he shouted. She could almost swear he was blushing but with only the light of the moon to see it was hard to tell.
"Why are you kidnapping me then?!" she screamed back at him, blushing.
"To make my brother mad!" he told her, looking ahead again. "He'll be jealous and that amuses me."
'Oh, great' she thought rolling her eyes. 'A spoiled little brother.' She was getting really angry (and scared), they were almost there (wherever 'there' was) she could tell... and if she didn't convince him of letting her go right now, she would be someone's whore in no time.
"I'd rather be with your brother," she said, in a sad attempt to piss him off so he'll drop her or something. Well, it seemed a good plan at the time. "I'm sure he'll be a lot more of a man than you are... maybe that way I'll be able to seduce him, kill him and escape!" He looked with angry eyes at her.
'More of a man?' he thought. 'Seshomaru?! Yeah right...'
"Is that what you want?" he asked her in a smooth voice, suddenly pressing her harder against him "for me to be 'more of a man'?" She blushed again, suddenly realizing where his hands were. 'Ok, I found a loop hole in the plan, big surprise... I wasn't born to be a strategist, apparently.'
"Not really" she swallowed loudly. "I was just trying to make you mad so you'll drop me and I could escape!"
"That is really a bad plan considering we're traveling at a really high speed." He smirked. He had said it in his most 'matter of fact' voice, like she was stupid.
"Well, what do you want me to do? I have to try to escape!" she shouted at him, feeling more and more uncomfortable with her position. "And could you mind switching me to the other side or something? It's beginning to get painful." He rolled his eyes... he actually rolled his eyes at her. For some reason he didn't seem scary enough to be a demon... maybe he wasn't a very good one.
"You have never been kidnapped before, have you?" he asked her while quickly changing her position to hold her bridal-style, now he had her against her chest, one arm around her back and the other holding her knees. "You are not supposed to make demands AND you are not supposed to tell your kidnapper you are trying to escape."
"Well, it's not my fault you are not a very good kidnapper!" she said feeling even more uncomfortable with the new position, now she felt like hugging his neck, but that would be wrong, right? "And I AM supposed to try to escape, aren't I?"
"Most people simply resign or pass out." He told her, a smirk never leaving his face. "And they usually shut their mouths too."
"Well, I'm not resigning, I happen to value my life a lot." She crossed her arms again and found that it felt more comfortable this way, at least now she didn't feel like holding to his neck.
"I TOLD you already" he whined. "We are not going to kill you."
"You said your father decided who lived and who dies!" she shouted.
"True. But I know he'll let you live." His face was serious now, concentrated, she found the change very interesting, his face transformed almost completely.
"Why?" she asked. He kept quiet.
Suddenly they were in a forest again, she could see the sun starting to rise in front of her eyes and she felt the demon speed up. Kagome was sure that for most people they weren't more than a red spot moving very, very fast. The trees passed them by incredibly fast and she couldn't understand how they hadn't crashed against a tree yet.
She looked at the sun again, in a couple of minutes it would be morning. All Hallow's day… And Halloween would be over… that meant no demons, right? What happened to the demons when Halloween ended? Where did they live anyway? She hardly ever heard of them if it wasn't Halloween. She kept thinking about this for a while until she finally saw it.
It was a mountain… No, it was a cliff, only they were at the bottom of it. It was like a huge wall made of soil, and they were going to crash against it.
She looked fast at the demon in alarm, he had seen it, right? It was HUGE after all, and they were heading directly to it! She swore she saw her life flash before her eyes when she closed them tightly and grabbed the demon's red haori strongly. But the crash never came and when she finally opened her eyes she could see no giant wall. In fact, she couldn't see much at all because the sun was so bright it hurt her eyes, it was morning.
She squeezed her eyes shut and opened the again. She blinked, and blinked one more time. There was no way in hell…
"Surprised?" she heard him whisper in her ear, she immediately released her grip in his clothes. They were still jumping, never lowering speed, heading right to the HUGE (even more than the non-existent wall) castle in the horizon.
"What in the name of all that is holly is this?!" she asked, suddenly her voice returning.
"The Youkai World, of course." He told her, using a singsong voice to add more effect.
"A…Another world?" she said looking around, it wasn't much different really…
"Another dimension, actually."
"Dimension…?" he didn't answer, they had gotten to the castle, they were now standing at the door of the tallest building Kagome had ever EVER seen, she did all she could not to look open mouthed at the construction. The demon put her down at once and his expression changed from one of mocking amusement to the serious face again. Two guards were guarding the door, both had white hair and weird lines in their faces. Kagome took a step backward, they were demons too. But, to Kagome surprise, they bowed at her kidnapper presence.
"The King is waiting for you." One of them said. Inuyasha nodded and they opened the door. It opened to a sort of patio with beautiful plants and flowers, and at the end of the patio a tall wide building stood.
"Follow me," he said to Kagome and all she could do was nod and obey.
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Did you know that Kagome's name in the Spanish version of Inuyasha is Aome? I think they changed it because 'kagome' doesn't really sound right in Spanish lol, it sounds too much like 'kagame' (which means… something not polite at all lol). I just thought that was a funny fact to know =P
I know this is going too slow!!! Too much dialogue! But they had to know each other at least a bit and I needed you to understand what this was about… actually, Inuyasha didn't really explained anything right! He was lying more of the time to scare Kagome lol. Next chapter will be… Hate Me! Just what is going to happen? >)
Oh, to answer some question: This story doesn't take part in Inuyasha (the series) universe, for one part Youkai live in a separate dimension (you'll see) and Miko's are rare and nobody really likes them, lol. It's kinda around the feudal era, though. And yes, Inuyasha's mom IS alive.