InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Club Copa ❯ Alternate Ending ( Chapter 18 )

This is my alternate ending. I was going to add it the other day, but I decided to wait and see the reactions to the first one. Let me say, I am very ashamed and disappointed in some of my reviewers. Especially two of them, and you know who you are, that were too cowardly to log I and speak their minds. Instead they made anonymous reviews.

 

That really discouraged me and I almost decided not to write the alternate ending. Thank you to all the loyal and good reviewers!!! Unfortunately all I can give you is my *huggles* and state your names!

 

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Thank you again everyone!!! It really means a lot to know people actually read my stories. Without you I would have halted after chapter 1!!!

 

The beginning of the chapter is the same, but it's ending is different!!!

 

“Inuyasha…” the miko couldn't believe it. It was as if he was back from the grave! “Inuyasha this is all my fault! I loved you and I-” Something warm pressed against her lips. She felt his arms wrapping around her, pulling her into a strong embrace. After a stunned moment she kissed back.

 

He ran a hand through her long, beautiful raven-hair. Kagome leaned into him; her eyes squeezed shut as she deepened the kiss. She could feel his soft growl vibrating through her. `Inuyasha…I love you so much…' He broke, slowly falling back, his eyes closed.

 

“Kagome…I love you…” Her coffee hues still shut she through herself on top of him, embracing him. Letting it all sink in. `He isn't dead. He is here and he loves me…he loves me…'

 

Kouga moved, the bright crimson blood was everywhere. He tried to send a punch at Sesshoumaru, but it was weak and the Taiyoukai dodged it easily. “Dog breath…” he panted, “I'll kill you…” That clawed hand shot out again, knocking him to the ground. Acid burned into the wolf's flesh, making him bare his teeth is pain.

 

Kouga struggled to his feet, standing still for a moment he moved in for another attempted attack. That stoic youkai pulled his fist back, about to put an end to the problem when another hand clenched around it. Sesshoumaru turned to see his brother. Inuyasha shook his head, standing in front of the Taiyoukai. “I…need to do…this…” Inuyasha breathed.

 

The wolf youkai growled, “should have let your brother finish me off Inu-mutt. Then you wouldn't have to die!” he lunged at Inuyasha who narrowly dodged. The hanyou was weak, his movements sluggish.

 

Kagome stood near the edge of the building watching with her hands clenched at her sides. “Inuyasha!” she yelled as he was knocked to the ground by Kouga's kick. Inuyasha was right back up, sending a kick of his own at the wolf. Sesshoumaru stood to the side, watching this and wondering why he had allowed his half-brother to step in. Perhaps he was going soft?

 

“Damn you to hell bastard!” Inuyasha growled digging those claws into Kouga's chest. The wolf coughed, spitting blood over himself. “DIE!” he screamed slamming his fists into the wolf's face. Kagome squeezed her eyes shut, letting out a horrified shriek. The blood…it was everywhere she looked. Splattered at her feet, covering Inuyasha's hands.

 

Sesshoumaru watched, a grim look covering the almost always-emotionless face. He turned those cold golden hues to Kagome, “I think Inuyasha can handle this…” he said coolly and left. He pace quick, no doubt that gun shot was heard and human officials were on their way.

 

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Sango pulled up in front of Miroku's vast home. She scrambled from the car, running the long drive and heaving herself against the door. “Miroku! Miroku!” No one answered. She cursed, turning the door handle and was surprised to find it unlocked. The trembling girl walked in, her eyes darted around in the darkness as she felt for a switch on the wall. Finding one, she flicked it upwards and light flooded the room.

 

“Miroku?” Sango called again, slowly making her way towards the bedroom. The lecherous man was strewn over his bed, fast asleep. “MIROKU!” she screamed inches from his face. Miroku's eyes snapped open in alarm until he saw who it was, then a pleasurable smile graced him.

 

“Sango my sweet, my prayers have been answered. Come, I won't bite.” He said scooting over to make room for her. Sango clenched her teeth together, fighting every nerve in her body that screamed to make him feel pain.

 

“Miroku this is no time for jokes! Kouga tried to shoot Kagome, and then escaped out the window. I think Kagome plans on following. The police won't listen.” Miroku held a finger to her lips.

 

“Slow down! I can't understand you.” She grabbed his arm and began jerking him to the car.

 

“I'll explain on the way! I think Kagome is going to the hospital...” she said half dragging the stumbling man.

 

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Inuyasha looked down at his hands, then to the crumbled dead mass that was Kouga, and then those trembling golden hues slid to Kagome. She was standing stiffly, staring with horror-filled eyes. He looked back down to the bloodstained hands. The hanyou felt himself quiver slightly.

 

Sure, he had thought about it. Killing someone…but never had he actually done it. Even if Kouga had tried to kill him, tried to kill Kagome, and tried to take her, her still felt like he was covered in filth. Like something disgusting covered him that he knew never would go away. Inuyasha looked to Kagome, she had murmured his name.

 

“Kagome…I…”

 

“Inuyasha…” she began softly, “Its alright. You only did it to protect yourself and me. You…you did nothing…wrong.” Kagome tried to make her voice, strong, but she knew it trembled. The hanyou didn't move. He was frozen to the spot, staring at the blood. Finally he looked back at the raven-haired miko. Bright red blood dotted her outfit, splashed on her shoes.

 

“Sorry…” he said just loud enough for her human ears. Tears welled up in Kagome's eyes, sliding down her cheeks. She wiped them away, letting a trembling smile form.

 

“For what? Saving me? Inuyasha…if he had killed you I'd have…I…I don't know what I would have done!” She ran to him, wrapping her hand tightly around Inuyasha's waist as she buried her head in his chest and began to sob. “I love you…so much…”

 

After hesitating for a moment he warped his arms around her. “Thanks Kagome…you stuck with me…through all this. I love you.” Normally it was so hard for him to say those words, but now that he had said them it didn't seem enough. After all that, I love you didn't seem like anything near enough to show how he cared for her. Lifting her head up he planted a soft kiss on her lips. After a moment of surprise she slid her hands around his neck, returning it.

 

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The cop's gaze scanned over everyone in the room. Two young women, a hanyou, a young man, and from what he could tell a youkai lacking any and all emotion. “So…I guess the story checks out. You'll be called back for further questioning of course.” He turned to Inuyasha. “Unless we find evidence against you, you are a free man who acted out of self-defense.”

 

Inuyasha nodded solemnly. He felt Kagome lean against him and placed a clawed hand around her. After a few more questions they were dismissed. Kagome heaved a sigh when they emerged from the building. The sun was so bright, so warm. “Well,” she said, “let's all head over to the club for a while.” Everyone agreed and separated to their cars.

 

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“Kagome?” The miko snapped out of la-la-land and turned her attention to Inuyasha. It had been a month since that frightful night. That horrible night. Now she sat across from her new fiancé in a restaurant booth trying to enjoy a date. “Thinking about it huh?” he asked as if reading her thoughts. She nodded.

 

“I think less about it everyday, but it will never completely leave.”

 

The two sat in silence for a moment before Inuyasha scooted next to her, letting an arm loop around her middle and pulling her against him. She smiled, enjoying a soft kiss he planted on her. Kagome felt suddenly guilty. She felt so bad, when Inuyasha was the one who truly had the right. He had been weighed down with the burden of taking a life.

 

“Kagome…” Inuyasha said searching her eyes. “We have to put the past behind us and move on. What happened…it was bad, but thinking about it won't change it.” The miko noticed he was only half talking to her. Part of him was reassuring himself. With a sigh she kissed him softly.

 

“Yes…we have to move on,” her smile widened, “because from what I can tell our future looks bright and I don't want to miss it!” He laughed softly, those ears twitching.

 

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Like the alternate ending better? If I write a sequel it is up to you people to tell me which ending to go off of!

 

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