InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Death Of Love ❯ A Bit In A Fickle ( Chapter 12 )

“Heh, she's still unconscious, what did you do to her Kagura?” Naraku half chuckled half asked.

 

“Shut up, I did what you wanted, now as promised I get to leave the barrier for the rest of the week.” Kagura demanded. They were back at the castle and Kagome was still unconscious. Naraku, being the evil little man he was, (heh I always wanted to say that!) wanted her to be conscious and aware of what he was going to do to her. What was the point if he couldn't hear her moan or anything? (ewww) After four hours Naraku was starting to get a bit frustrated. Half an hour later, he saw Kagome was starting to stir.

 

“Hmm? What-what happened? Naraku? What? How-how dare you! Let go of me!” (yea she's tied up now and you know how much she likes that. And remember, she has her memory back!) Kagome exclaimed. The last thing she could remember was seeing Kanna with her mirror…

 

`That's right! Kanna was sucking the soul out of someone… but it wasn't me, so who was it? ::gasp:: That's right! It was Kouga… and Inuyasha! Oh no, it's all my fault! Why did I have to be so helpless? I could have broken her mirror with my Sacred arrow… why didn't I shoot?' Kagome mentally scolded herself. Meanwhile Naraku was watching in amusement at seeing emotions flicker across her eyes, before she gasped in realization. She was tied. To a bed. And Naraku was right behind her with lust in his eyes.

 

`Inuyasha… hurry!'

 

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“Inuyasha we have been searching for nearly five hours and there still isn't any sign of Kagome! There is no way that we'll be able to find her now, and even if there was, do you really think it's wise to barge into Naraku's lair on the night of the New Moon?” Miroku asked. That's right, tonight was the night of the New Moon. He (inuyasha) was already starting to lose his sense of smell, and in about another hour or so, he wouldn't be able to smell at all. Kouga could still smell, but Kagome's scent was getting distant. It had been too long and her scent was starting to fade. Besides, Miroku was right, barging into Naraku's castle when he was a human would not be wise. Inuyasha cursed his rotten luck. It just had to be the night of the New Moon that night. Inuyasha cursed again, when a thought came to him. Did Naraku know about the night of the new moon? Is that why he attacked that day? Knowing that he wouldn't be able to go after him? Inuyasha shuddered at the thought. That just meant they would have to try and defeat him even sooner, before the next New Moon.

 

“We should try and get as close as we can. Feh, mutt-face, it's all your fault. I don't know why I'm not going there on my own and saving Kagome. I don't need you.” Kouga scoffed. He was beyond pissed that just because Inuyasha-er dog-breath- was human for the night, he couldn't go after Kagome.

 

“Keh, it aint my fault I'm human. It's because of the damn heritage. I'm not exactly little miss happy about this either! So shut up!” (lol, can you imagine Inuyasha as little miss happy? ::shudders::)

 

“Hey, wait a minute, that's actually a good idea!” Kouga, you go on ahead and try to find Kagome. I'm suspecting Naraku put up a barrier. Kirara and Shippo, you go with him so if he finds them, you can come back and let us know where to go.” Miroku explained.

 

“No way am I letting some mangy wolf go after Naraku and Kagome on his own!” Inuyasha said.

 

“He won't be on his own, Kirara and Shippo will be there too. Let go of your pride, we need to think of Kagome now.” Sango said. Inuyasha's eyes softened for a moment.

 

“Keh! Fine, but only this one time!” Inuyasha said.

 

“Well then. Lets go” Kouga said. Kirara (already in bigger form) flew off with him with Shippo on her back. Inuyasha looked up at the sky.

 

`Kagome… please hold on a bit longer!'

 

Well! There's another chapter! Sorry it took so long to update, but things have gotten pretty hectic around here. Thanks to my awesome beta reader Jessie Angel, although she did not edit this chapter (my friend sarah did) she is still my beta reader, and an awesome one nonetheless. I'm very disappointed in you! ::wags finger:: more then 70 views, and only one review? Wow! Is the story not good or something? I'll stop writing it if that's what you want. If no one likes it then I wont write it. Please send me a review, it gets chapters in longer. Also, I think its time I recognize some of my reviewers that were loyal and are reading this whole fic.

 

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Poor kagome… :( lol on word this is page three and there is only the words poor kagome and a sad face… plus these words too I guess… oh… woops…