InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Dragon Bandit ❯ first impresions ( Chapter 1 )

[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]

I DON'T OWN INUYASHA JUST MYSELF GOT IT
 
(THIS MEANS THINKING)
THIS MEANS YELLING!
 
 
It was very late at night and Zheto just disintegrated a weak demon that was unnaturally strong whit the use of a jewel shard Zheto is 5'11 well build with Chocolate skin but had smooth blood red snakelike dragon scales on his arms, hands which were clawed, his chest and abs, shoulder blades and down his spine that made a diamond design that you fit both hands in it horizontally and vertically and emerging from the middle was a six foot tail leaving only the four corners visible, on both shoulders was a arm length scar that reached a little pass the chest and shoulder blades both 2 inch's wide, ears 5 inch's long he had cut black hair with long siburns he wore was just like Sango's layer outfit but here hers was pink his was dark red with a matching scarf to cover mouth and still long enough for the ends to reach his knees in his right hand was a 10 inch long blade that looks like Kohaku's weapon without the and was waped for more grip when he stopped wondering how the demon got so strong when a glint got his attention looking down there it was a piece of the Shikon Jewel he picked it up feeling the power radiating inside a one sided smile found its way on his face though you could not see (A jewel shard this maybe my lucky day now I need to get something to eat)he stuffed the shard in his left armguard and left for the closes village
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The action happens in chapter 1 to let you know this is my first time writing fanfics so tell me what to improve so help me out so me and my stories can be as good as some of these other people and there stories that I really got into and hate to wait for another chapter