InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Eien Ni ❯ Eien Ni ( Chapter 1 )

[ P - Pre-Teen ]
can't believe I forgot this....*blushes*...my apologies....

Disclaimer: Inuyasha, nor any of the characters, plots, etc. belong to me, they are the creative genius of Rumiko Takahashi




This is my first shot at a poetry/drabble......please review, let me know what you think.


Eien Ni


Emptiness


In a life full of joyous wonder,


A darkened pit exists in my soul.



Loneliness


In a world full of loving people,


A part of my heart has been taken away.



Darkness


In a place full of magical light,


My world was torn asunder.



All hope is gone.



In it's place rests fear and uncertainty.


Ripped from my side,


Taken from me forever.



I will walk this path alone,


And, for the first time, I will pray.


Pray that we shall be one again,


Eternally.



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(FYI: Eien ni means eternally in Japanese!)




So there you have it! please review....you know you want to!!! Good, bad, whatever...I'm a big girl, I can take it! lol......

Thank you, chandell....I told you your writing inspired me to write! I wrote this after reading your "Final Battle" chapter! (well, once I stopped crying that is!) Much love for my fave muse!!!

If anyone cares to check out the inspiration for this poem, look on fanfiction(dot)net...search for "Final Fragment: Beginning of the End by clnv!! It's worth every minute!! and bring the hankies!!!