InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Fighting Naraku and...loving each other? ❯ The Beginning ( Chapter 1 )

[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]

Author's Notes: I do not own Inuyasha. This is my first fan fic as well. Please comment on it to tell me if I should continue with it or not. My inspiration for writing fan fics was from a few various fan fics, though one I really liked and sort of piggy backed the idea for this fan fic off of is “Kagome and Inuyasha, will they stay together?” By Brokensoul (and then a few numbers that I don't remember). Lemons are scattered in various chapters.
 
3rd Person View
Inuyasha was being his stubborn self as always
“We cant stop now! We're almost to Naraku!” he said
“But how are we supposed to fight him if we don't have any rest! Look how tired everyone is even Kirara in demon form can't go on for much longer” Kagome said
“I'll fight Naraku myself if I have to!” he retorted
“She's right you know not even you can take on Naraku without getting some rest” Mirouku said taking the stopping chance to grope Sango
KEEP YOUR HANDS OFF ME YOU DIRTY PERVERT!!!” Sango shouted hitting him on the head
Ignoring that Inuyasha still said “Like I care I'll still take him on myself!”
“Please Inuyasha…” Kagome said staring at him with her brown eyes Inuyasha thought for a moment before saying “Fine but not for long” Inuyasha said (Why does she always have to stare at me with those eyes?!) He thought
They began to sit down and unpack some of the food they had gotten from the last village.
Inuyasha had nothing and simply sat with his back to a tree with his legs stretched out not far away but out of sight. Kagome found him and sat down next to him and said
“So we are almost to Naraku… Inuyasha you know that we he is way more powerful than us, defeating him isn't going to be easy…”
“I know that but we have to try every means possible to defeat him.” He said
“Please be careful Inuyasha…” She said hugging him with her head on his chest. Inuyasha not expecting this put his arm around her and said “Don't worry…I'll be fine.”
He looked up into the mountains where Naraku was hiding.
 
UP IN THE MOUNTAINS
Naraku looked down from one of its points, “So they've found me…perhaps I should give them a little gift followed by my presence.”
 
BACK WHERE EVERYONE IS. INUYASHA'S POV.
I opened my eyes and looked at Kagome, she was still in my arms and asleep. We must have dosed off I looked over at the spot where we had stopped, Miroku and Sango seemed to have just finished packing up, Kagome was waking up as well. I blushed seeing her waking up in my arms but I turned away so Kagome wouldn't see. Kagome was also apparently blushing so I said to her “We had better get back to the others,” that was close, I thought I would say something stupid. She nodded and we went back to Miroku and Sango,
“Ah there you guys are, we were just about to look for you,” said Miroku, picking up a bag. Suddenly Shippo's ears perked up and Kirara turned into demon form. What's arong with them…?
 
A/N. So what do you guys think? I am open for comments and suggestions. Should I keep writing? Should I give up? If I don't get any reviews I suppose I'll just continue writing.