InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ I'm sorry ❯ I'm sorry ( Chapter 1 )

Hey guys it's me again. I didn't write this story, my friend did. Her name is Dana and she wanted to show all of you the dangers of drinking and driving. She gave this story to me so I could fix it up for her and so that could change it around. The original characters in the story were really:

Kagome-Jenny

Inuyasha-Dan

Mom-Mom

Dad-Dad

Please no one Drink-and-Drive it's really dangerous. If I'm right, the reason she wrote this is cuz she lost someone recently…I think though I'm not all sure…I've got to ask her.

Disclaimer: I don't own the story or any of the characters. I'm not selling this to make money off of it either,

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Kagome was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life it was on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep overs, and parties; she was so happy. It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, and dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate, her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Kagome asked to stay with her friends' house that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event. But as she rushed around like she had no sense, she began to feel guilty about all the lies, but what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride?

Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, but the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Inuyasha was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Inuyasha took a puff. Kagome couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Inuyasha was ready to ride to the point, but only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last; And Inuyasha started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Kagome wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb?" With all of her might, she pushed Inuyasha away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay."

Inuyasha cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Inuyasha drove on in a fit of wild anger, Kagome knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, but he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!"

She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, and heard, "Call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble!"

She heard voices…a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Inuyasha was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive.

She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, as they gently told her that Inuyasha was dead. They said "Kagome, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too."

"But the people in the other car!?" Kagome cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun."

"Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, and wish I could return their families to them." Kagome said crying.

"Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, and that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Kagome's hand with tears in her eyes.

And a few moments later Kagome died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best to bid that girl her one last request?"

She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad."

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Heh-heh…the first time I read this I started to tear up. I hope ya'll liked it. If you want to you can E-Mail me telling her you enjoyed the story, or you thought it sucks, or whatever. But please be nice.

PizzaholicKrys & Dana

Love ya!