InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Letting Go ❯ One Last Look ( Chapter 1 )
[ P - Pre-Teen ]
By: Inubaby4eva 
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 12.19.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 437 | Visits: 426 | Status: Completed
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 12.19.2004 | Pages: 1 | Words: 437 | Visits: 426 | Status: Completed
Hi,my name is Rachael Hatcher and today is my 13 birthday,and this is where my story begins........
I was in my room minding my own business...stuffing my bra when my mom walked in holding a video camra.
"MOM!!Get out now!!!!"I yelled but all she did was stand there and ask what I had done to my shirt.She walked over
and began taking the toilet paper out of my bra and wiping off all my make up.She told me that I was beautiful the way
God had made me.Little did she know that as soon as she left I put it all back,I had to look my best.I had invited the most
popular girls in school to my 13th birthday party.They had come to me the day before and said that they almost couldnt
come because they had a big report to write,I told them I would do it for them and they agreed.I was so excited!!
They called themselves the sixers.They consisted of all the stuck up,snobs of the school....oh how I envied them!!!I
would have done anything to be one of them.I dreamed to look like the people in 'Poise' magazine.The latest issue was
called 30,thriving and beautiful and I bought it immidiantly accompanied by my very best friend Inuyasha.He told me
I was very pretty but that wasnt good enough for me,I wanted to be beautiful.
That night I heard the doorbell ring and I ushered my dad up the stairs.
When I opened the door,I froze.There standing at my door was Kouga.The hottest guy in school,locked arms with
Kagome...the ring leader of the sixers."Well..are you going to stand there with your mouth open or are you going to
invite us in?"Kagome asked rudely.I showed them in and told them the party would be down stairs.The party was going
great.We were all dancing(of course I was dancing by myself but that was okay because I had a great butt shot of Kouga-
Kun from where I stood.)Inuyasha who was standing opposite of me came over and grabbed my hand and pulled me up
the stairs."Okay Inuyasha!!!What gives?Pulling me away from my party!!!??"I asked hottly.He said"Would you come
with me just for a sec,I have part 1 of your birthday surprise......."
I was in my room minding my own business...stuffing my bra when my mom walked in holding a video camra.
"MOM!!Get out now!!!!"I yelled but all she did was stand there and ask what I had done to my shirt.She walked over
and began taking the toilet paper out of my bra and wiping off all my make up.She told me that I was beautiful the way
God had made me.Little did she know that as soon as she left I put it all back,I had to look my best.I had invited the most
popular girls in school to my 13th birthday party.They had come to me the day before and said that they almost couldnt
come because they had a big report to write,I told them I would do it for them and they agreed.I was so excited!!
They called themselves the sixers.They consisted of all the stuck up,snobs of the school....oh how I envied them!!!I
would have done anything to be one of them.I dreamed to look like the people in 'Poise' magazine.The latest issue was
called 30,thriving and beautiful and I bought it immidiantly accompanied by my very best friend Inuyasha.He told me
I was very pretty but that wasnt good enough for me,I wanted to be beautiful.
That night I heard the doorbell ring and I ushered my dad up the stairs.
When I opened the door,I froze.There standing at my door was Kouga.The hottest guy in school,locked arms with
Kagome...the ring leader of the sixers."Well..are you going to stand there with your mouth open or are you going to
invite us in?"Kagome asked rudely.I showed them in and told them the party would be down stairs.The party was going
great.We were all dancing(of course I was dancing by myself but that was okay because I had a great butt shot of Kouga-
Kun from where I stood.)Inuyasha who was standing opposite of me came over and grabbed my hand and pulled me up
the stairs."Okay Inuyasha!!!What gives?Pulling me away from my party!!!??"I asked hottly.He said"Would you come
with me just for a sec,I have part 1 of your birthday surprise......."