InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Love Sickness ❯ All That Commotion ( Chapter 1 )

Author's Notes:

Hi, a friend of mine has given up writing fan fictions to work on her career full time. But she gave me full rights to this fan fiction that she has left hanging in Fanfiction.net for years. If you guys like it, please tell me so.. so that I can muster the guts to mess with it and continue it.

 

Disclaimer: I own InuYasha. I dreamt him and he's all mine! <sirens wailing> “Surrender now. We have your house surrounded.” Sorry, sorry. I didn't mean it! “Say it!” Wahhhh, he isn't mine! InuYasha and his gang isn't mine! <sirens seem to fade in the distance> Whew!

 

 

Love Sickness

CHAPTER 1

 

Kagome looked upon the clearing where the well separating the Feudal Era from her time stood. She looked around the bushes and trees and took a deep breath. With all her might, she closes her eyes and pumps her legs as strong as she could. She ran in long strides as fast as her feet could carry her.

 

Then she hit something that felt like the well itself.

 

Kagome fell flat on her butt.

 

"Where do you think you're going?” yelled an all too familiar dog boy.

 

"I'm going home if you haven't noticed!" Kagome yelled back as she stood up and brushed the dust off her skirt.

 

"You know what?” he said with arms crossed. “You're always like! Going home when things get more intense here!!!"

 

"Intense? Inu Yasha, we haven't got one shard this week!!!" she pointed out. “Besides, I was just going home to restock on food and clothes!"

 

"Restock? What for, eh?" he demanded.

 

"We haven't got much food left!" she cried. "And if you don't remember, you finished up most of the ramen I brought!"

 

Inu didn't know what to say back for that was the truth. Instead he crossed his arms once more and looked the other way. Not wanting Kagome to see him blushing a bit.

 

She chuckled at this. She can't help but laugh.

 

"Okay, I promise to return later this day" she said." I won't take a day!"

 

"Well, okay!!!" he said. "But if you take a day, I won't let you go in two months!!!"

 

"Okay, see ya later Inu" she cried.

 

Before she leaped, she placed a kiss on Inu's cheeks.

 

She didn't know why but she felt kind of embarrassed. Before Inu could react, she leaped down the well. Inu slightly touched his cheeks. He admits it. He kind of liked it. Why? He thought. He thought of it all afternoon. He gave up on the thought and decided to just sleep up a tree, trying to get it out of his head.

 

When he woke up, the sun was down but it still emits a little light. He was about to dismount the tree when he saw a sleeping Kagome below him. The little amount of light seems to focus on her. Her hair flows like a stream on summer days.

 

She's really beautiful, he thought. No! He cried from inside. That's supposed to mean...um...peaceful! Yeah, peaceful!!!

 

No, she's pretty! Said a voice on Inu's head. He knew it was his own self.

 

Oh, quit it! He shouted mentally to himself.

 

He carried Kagome to the hut for her to sleep more comfortably. He went outside as soon as he has her placed on the bed so that he couldn't gape at her anymore!

 

Next morning...

 

Inu-Yasha and the rest were out of bed and Kagome was busily preparing dinner. Shippou watch Kagome cook ramen and he keeps annoying her about candies. Miroku had gathered some woods from the forest in which Sango has helped him.

 

"Kagome," Shippou said. "Can I have candies for today?"

 

"Oh, you know you can't!!!" she replied immediately.

 

"Why?" Shippou asked as he tugged at Kagome's skirt.

 

"Coz it's not good for you!" she uttered. "Candies aren't bad and all but they aren't as good as well!"

 

"Okay!" Shippou finally give up. "But can I have them later?"

 

"Well, maybe" Kagome joked. "But don't get your hopes up!"

 

Shippou jumped up and down and went to Kaede to tell her that he'll be having candies.

 

Meanwhile, Miroku has benn piling the woods on the corner of the tent where Kagome was cooking.

 

One piece of wood fell near Kagome's place. As Miroku dive for it, he can't help but gape at Kagome's slender legs. He was about to put his hands on them when Kagome turned to place the ramen on the table. Because of Miroku's hand on the way, Kagome tripped a little spilling a little amount of stock that instantly fall on Miroku's arms.

 

"Ooooooouuccccccchhhhhhh!!!" He shouted, yelping in pain.

 

Kagome didn't notice him there so she didn't know she had spilled soup on his arms.

 

"Hey, Miroku, what ya doin' here?" she wondered.

 

Miroku hid the pain caused by the extremely hot soup. It would be a total shame for Kagome to know.

 

"Um, this log fell!" He said holding up the piece of wood. "I was stocking 'em there!"

 

Kagome didn't have a reason not to believe him so she just nodded and smiled.

 

"Be careful though," She said. "I might accidentally spill some of the soup."

 

"Ah, yeah!" Miroku said. She already did spill some and he already experienced the pain. "You might spill some!"

 

Kagome continued walking towards the table where Sango help her carry the bowl of sizzling hot ramen. After Sango help Kagome, she walk towards the monk.

 

"I saw that!" She said teasingly. "Ouch!"

 

"Bitch!" Miroku mumbled silently but Sango was still in earshot and heard it from the monk.

 

"I heard that!!!" She said kicking Miroku from the back causing him to fall and literally eat dirt. Before going Sango even laugh and said, "Ouch!"

 

After helping themselves with ramen, the group prepared to get going. Inu- Yasha offered to carry Kagome's backpack and she hugs him for it. Inu-Yasha can't help but blush.

 

Sango saw them and she started laughing and when she saw Miroku, she slaps him for absolutely nothing. When she realized it, she laughed even harder and Kagome and Inu-Yasha joined in.

 

The gang was taking a rest when the bored Miroku decided to give out a joke. It's for their sake? Isn't it? He thought.

 

“Hey guys!” He called out. “Wanna joke?”

 

“Sure, as long as you didn't make it up yourself!” Sango said.

 

”Why is that my lady Sango?” Miroku asked after the mean statement.

 

“Coz it would surely earn you some yawns!” Sango was yawning herself. “And if you do so, Miroku, make sure you don't earn slaps!” Kagome added.

 

“Here goes!” He took one deep breath and stand for all to see him. “What does a ghost say to a girl ghost?”

 

“You're spooky?” Shippou tried.

 

“Watch out for that post?” Kagome said laughing at her self.

 

“No!” Miroku said turning his head. “Simple, you're boo-tiful!!!”

 

The girls started laughing together with Shippou.

 

“Feh!” The irritated dog boy cried.

 

“That one's good, huh?” Sango said while patting the monk at the back.

 

“Yeah!” Kagome said between chuckles. “You got us with that one!”

 

“You should know that by know!” Miroku said with his head up high. He crossed his arms and walk back and fort. “I can really say you're impressed.”

 

Because he held his head up high, he didn't clearly see where he's going. And the rock that was a little tilted instantly tripped him, causing him to fall directly on the ground.

 

“Hey, was that part of the show?” Both girls said in unison.

 

Kagome stopped suddenly. She sensed something.

 

“Wait!” She called sliding her hand on Inu-Yasha asking him to be on his guard.

 

“What?” Inu yelled pushing Kagome's hand off.

 

“There's a shard near!” She said very surely. “It's on the tip of the tail!”

 

Inu-Yasha was about to pull his weapon out when a snake youkai appeared and dove for Kagome. Without second thoughts, Inu-Yasha pushed Kagome and took the bite.

 

Seeing Inu-Yasha being bitten, Sango used her boomerang and slashed the youkai in half. Kagome came running to Inu-Yasha helping him take the fang off his right arm. She was still screaming in fear.

 

“I'll use Kirara to bring him to Kaede immediately.” Sango said. “Miroku, stay here with Shippou. Kagome, I know you want to come!”

 

Kagome hopped on and Kirara started running. Inu-Yasha's eyes were closed. She knew he was in pain. The youkai was big. Thanks to God that Sango had it dead with one swing. Kagome took Inu's hand. It's all her fault, if something bad happens to Inu-Yasha, she couldn't forgive her self.

 

A/N2:

This is by Kai-press <Don't-Mess-With-C> and she playfully wrote it when we were teens. obviously she loved short chapters, but I don't. So I turned her 5 chapter work into a 2 chapter work. LOL. To see it in its original state, visit http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1855164/4/Love_Sickness< /i>. But it would otherwise be updated here. ^^