InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Murder Movie ❯ The Creation of a Masterpiece ( Prologue )

Hey! This is my first fic! OK, just tell me if it's interesting enough to continue!

 

 

One warm summer afternoon I was walking past Sam's Delicatessen when out of nowhere I hear a scream. It doesn't sound like a female, a bit lower. I run that direction to discover a man weeping over something.

“Is anything the matter” I ask the man that appears to be about 21.

“My girlfriend…”

“What about your girlfriend?” I ask him trying to get a peak at the object he's blocking.

“She was murdered!” He wept as he moved away from the now decipherable corpse.

“Oh Gosh” I replied as the only thing that I could say. This sounds like a job for…Yuuki Takashi! World-renowned teen detective! “I'll help find the killer” I offered

“What help would you be, wench” he spat

“Well excuse me, I guess you don't want help from Yuuki Takashi!” I say.

“YOU are the great Yuuki Takashi?!”

“The one and only!” I say arrogantly

“Yea right” he says as he smirks “prove it”

“OK, you just ate at McDonalds, a Filet-o-Fish.”

“How did you know?”

“Well first of all you have tartar sauce and a bit of bread on your chin. And second, I'm a miko/hanyou and can smell it on you”

“OK, OK, I get the point, will you help me?”

“Of course, with a small fee of $100 an hour.” I say.

“$100!”

“Yep! I know who you are, you practically grow money on trees Akira Higaki! If you want to find Yuko's killer you better pay up!”

“How'd you know who me and my girlfriend are ?” (an: Actually, you and your girlfriend are a were cuz she's dead…-_-`)

“Remember, Michael, I am a world class detective”

 

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“Whew, I think that's enough for one night” I say as I turn off my light…

 

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“Ahhhh” I yawn as I get out of bed. “Time to get the story to the editor!” I walked down stairs and got myself an orange for breakfast. I go down to the garage and start up the car. I like my car, I have a black spyder convertible! Then I drive down to Kokoro's house to get my stuff edited.

“Ohayo!” I greet her “Have a good sleep?” I ask, she looks kinda dazed

“I was until a certain SOMEBODY woke me up with her LOUD banging!!!” she shouted at me.

“Sorry! I'm a morning person, I can't help waking up early! I even play my sax at 6:00 am!” I say .

“OK, well can you at least call before barging into my house?” she looks kinda grumpy…

“Sure” I say as I pull out my cell and dialing her number, remember, I'm still outside!

The phone in her house rings and since she's still dazed she goes and answers it without noticing it's me! So she picks it up.

 

( #phone call#)

#Hello?#

#Hi! You told me to call before I barged in, and I didn't come in the house yet, so I'm calling!#
#You're just tryin' to annoy me aren't you?#
#No, more like trying to bother you out of your sleep coma!#

^Hangs up^

#Hello? Hello? HELLO????#

 

“I'm right here” she says coming outside again

“Oh, I knew that” I say as I hang up the phone “So ready to invite me inside to edit my story?”

“I really don't have to considering that I am the one editing it and it's not totally necessary for you to be in there with me.” She responds, that smart ass.

“Gee, some best friend you are!”

“OK, come in, just don't mess anything up like last time.”
“OK, I'll behave! You're just gonna love the story!”

When we got inside she started to read my WONDERFUL story. Her reactions were so funny!!! First she laughed then she frowned then she cried! I think she likes it.

“Tomoko, this is a magnificent piece of work! No editing whatsoever! It's going to the press ASAP!” She exclaimed