InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Naraku's shocking and final creation ❯ Intruder and Disturbing thoughts ( Chapter 6 )
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By: GoldenEyedGirl 
Someone has penitrated Naraku's Castle.. only to do what????
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 10.01.2004 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.6K | Visits: 182 | Status: Work In Progress
Someone has penitrated Naraku's Castle.. only to do what????
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): / Romance / Hentai | Type: Alternate Universe | Uploaded On: 10.01.2004 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.6K | Visits: 182 | Status: Work In Progress
Hey, its me again! Haha, Run for your lives!!! lmao... ok well enough goofin... lets see.. I would like to thank everyone who has reviewed me. Special thanks to IcyAsh, drk-bandit14, and Sesshy's koi for being with me through my stories. Thanks for the inpiration guys.Hope you all like this story. Okay, well I have a question for you all. Should Kouga be in this? If you think so, please give me some ideas if you would like to see him in this fic. If not then, no Kouga. And due to a few threats from friends I will not be quiting because I wouldn't want them to quit either. So on with the show.
Disclaimer: I don't own Inuyasha.... duh.
Chapter six: An intruder and some disturbing thoughts
' That stupid fucking bitch. Who does she think she is, acting all high and mighty. I wonder what Lord Sesshoumaru said to her to make her look like that. What happened? I swear it, I will find out. I will not lose to her.' Kagura thought while riding on her feather toward the dark palace.
Flashback
Everyone watched as Lord Sesshoumaru flew away towards his home. Eesu and Seiya raced toward their Lord, but was but because of Inuyasha wanting to get revenge because Eesu had slashed his chest open, lept towards the youkai that had wounded his pride with his sword in front of him.
Inuyasha was upon his prey, when his prey decided it would be best to defend itself. Eesu had taken a small ax that hung at his side and threw it at Inuyasha, hitting its target right in the middle of his chest.
Inuyasha howling in pain and rage, dropped the sword and went to the basics. He decided to use his claws instead. Eesu seeing this gave a murderous grin. Knowing he had the full advantage in this battle.
He had fatally wounded Inuyasha, and remembering what Lord Sesshoumaru always said about wanting to kill Inuyasha himself, decided to just play with the poor hanyou instead of killing him.
Eesu looked to his mate to confirm that that was all he would do. Seiya seeing the look on her mates face knew right away what he wanted. She nodded her head saying that she didn't mind to stay a bit longer, but he had better not take to long, fore she was tired and wanted a bath. Giving in to his rebellous side he started attacking the hanyou ruthlessly, but only doing so to releave some pent up energy.
All the while the others where watching, they didn't notice ice blue eyes staring at them from the darkness. Those same eerie eyes watched at Eesu beat the living shit out of Inuyasha. Finally Seiya was tired of just standing around, she merely whispered...
" Eesu, mate, that is enough. Lets go."
As soon as those words were whispered Eesu stoped his attacks and calmly walked over to his mate. Taking her hand they ran off, back to the Western Lands, where their Lord, was waiting for their comments on the one known as Makoto.
End Flashback
" I will get her for this. She will not take my Sesshy away from me. He will be mine. I smelt his arousal when he saw her. She will pay for this." Kagura finally touching down at Naraku's castle. She still didn't notice that there was a pressence that had followed her to this place.
Kagura walked slowly into the palace, still being followed by the shadow, searching out Naraku. She had a few things to discuss with her 'lord'. Coming up to Naraku's personal wing, she headed straight for his study, knowing he would be in there plotting a way to get the rest of those jewel shards from the reincarnated miko, Kagome.
Kagura walked into the dark room and looked for Naraku. Not finding him in the room turned to leave and bumped right into the person she was looking for. He of course had that usual sexy smirk of his.
" What do you want, Kagura?" he said bored of her pressence already.
" I want to make a deal with you Naraku. That Makoto bitch you are so proud of it planning something, and its not good. I saw her leave with Sesshoumaru and come back looking all weird. Something happened and I am going to find out."
" Ahh, yes, I know she left but the arrogent bastard put up a barrier. I have full faith in Makoto to be true to herself and loyal to me. We know she won't betray us. Just to prove it..... KANNA!!!" Naraku yelled.
Kanna appeared a short time thereafter and bowed to her lord. Her face devoid of any emotion, any expression. The demon-child dressed in white with her mirror in hand. She looked up to her lord and said....
" Yes, master Naraku. What is your wish?"
" Kanna, tell me. Do you know of what was said between Lord Sesshoumaru and Makoto?"
" No, master Naraku." the demon-child said in her monotone voice.
" Do you know of what Makoto is thinking or feeling at the moment?"
" Yes, master Naraku."
" Tell me!"
" Yes, master Naraku. She is confused, feeling as if the whole world was put on her shoulders and that she has a big choice to make shortly." Kanna replied, skipping out on alot of the details. ( ok ok, I know... but its my fic :P)
" Hn, maybe I should pay a little visit to Makoto." Naraku said and started moving to the door, but was stoped short by the voice of Kanna. It wasn't her voice that made him stop, it was the information it told him.
" Master, Naraku. There is an intruder in the castle. Heading this way."
" So be it. You both may leave. I will take care of this intruder and then talk to Makoto about her little visit with the demon lord."
They left and Naraku sat waiting patiently or not so patiently as the intruder sped toward his study. Just as he was about to confront the intruder and throw him out the doors burst open revealing a beautiful demoness. She was beautiful, she had dark blue hair, ice blue eyes, blue strips on each cheek and had a long sword on her hip. She stood at a reasonable height. If he had to guess about 5'7 or 5'8.
He let his senses roam. His eyes widened as he felt the pure energy of a miko.
' So the Inu-Youkai bitch is also a miko to boot.' he thought.
She bowed slightly and told the hanyou that she meant no harm and that she had just wanted to speak with him. Naraku being the curious demon he was, narrowed his blood red eyes at her and slowly swept his hand into the room. She walked into the room and sat on a dark pillow arranged in the room. Naraku followed her with his eyes and sat himself down beside her.
" Now, what is it you want?" Naraku demanded eyeing her goodies. ( hey now you know he would do it to. lmao)
" I want to make a deal with you, Naraku. One that I know you will be very pleased about." she said cheerfully.
" Do you have to be so ........... happy?" he said finally finding the right word.
" Yes. Now how about that deal?"
" What is it?"
" I wish to stay here, until I can get my revenge on the bastard who destroyed my home, my family and my life, and in return I will give you these." she said opening her hand and revealing two jewel fragments.
Naraku's eyes widened in suprise and then he got a delited smile on his face. Quickly agreeing to her proposal. Grabbing the jewel shards and fusing them to the ones he already had. He could feel the power off of them and turned to this mystery woman.
" What is the name that you go by?"
" Why, my name is Sakuya." she said happily.
With Makoto
' What should I do? Should I betray my master and lord or should I decline Lord Sesshoumaru's offer?'
" Oh, what should I do?" she asked aloud.
" Why, Makoto you already know what to do." a voice suprised her. She had been so deep in thought she didn't sense or hear Kanna's approach.
" Why is it you are helping me?"
" Because, everything will work out in the end." the child-demon said wisely.
" What is that supposed to mean?"
" You will find out shortly, Makoto."
Kanna turned on her heal and left, carrying her mirror she was so fond of. Makoto sat there in silence pondering what Kanna had just told her. Makoto then decided to meditate and clear her mind. She sat there and spread her senses. She was suprised to find a new aura in the castle. One of a demoness, a happy aura at that. And it was heading straight for her.
As the newest aura approached, Makoto stood and faced the direction in which it was coming from. She already knew it meant no harm to her. So she stood there waiting. She soon saw a beautiful demoness around her age and around her height as well.
" Hello. I am Sakuya, and you are?" Sakuya said nicely.
" I um... I am Makoto... why are you here?" Makoto said confussed.
" I am staying here until I can get revenge on the bastard who destroyed everything I hold dear." she said with venom driping from every word.
Makoto looked into this new demoness and found that she wouldn't be able to get revenge. Its not in her nature. So how long would she stay here? What would happen to her and why would Naraku agree to have her here in the first place. Makoto then noticed that Sakuya had miko energy. There must be one reason why Naraku said yes but why else? She of course asked Sakuya this and she told her about the shards and that she would be staying here indefenately. Makoto bowed her head to the new comer and made her appologes, and headed to her room for some much needed rest.
She stepped into her room and got her sleeping clothes and headed for the hot springs stationed inside the castle. Once she reached the hot springs she took her clothes off and stepped into the warm water with a sigh. As she submerged herself in the wonderful rose and berry scented water she thought back to her and Sesshoumaru's conversation and what had happened afterword.
Flashback
" Bitch, never turn your back on me." with that said he jerked her to him and......... pulled her close. His clawed hands coming up to grip her shoulders a bit painfully. He then leaned down and inhaled deeply at the conjunction of her neck. She dare not move fore she knew what would happen if she did. His basier instincts would kick in. So she stood there motionless.
One of his hands ( yes, I said hands.) slowly brushed away the part of her red streaked silver hair that was blocking his eyes from fully seeing her neck. With that out of the way he bent closer to her and inhaled deeply again, slowly he lowered his head all the way to her neck and kissed it. Taking notice of the involentary shiver it produced made him smile. It pleased him for some reason. Kissing her neck again, he couldn't help but do what he did next. He licked her. He licked her neck and started nipping at her neck.
She couldn't take it anymore and kicked him in the shin. He back away and looked at her with blood red eyes. She had to do something and something fast. So she did the only thing she could think of and calmed him by stepping close to him and planting her full pouty lips on his. Slowly he relaxed and returned the kiss. They both broke away and turned their head. Makoto lowered her head and started figiting.
" This means nothing. I have to say I appologize for putting you in such a posistion and I thank you for not running. That was very wise on your part."
With that she shook her head yes and bowed to him. He slightly inclined his head and with that they headed back to the group. Each feeling confused, dazed and slightly aroused at what had just happened......
End Flashback
' Why did he do that to begin with? I mean surely I can't be that interesting.' she thought as she got out and dryed herself off. Getting dressed and going back to her room. She layed down and thought again of the demon lord before falling into a dreamless sleep.
With the Inu group in Kaede's hut
" Inuyasha, ye knew ye shouldn't have done that. Ye should know tis unwise to challange someone of whom ye know nothing about." Kaede said wisely.
" Feh, stupid old woman I know that. He pissed me off....
" and wounded your pride." Miroku cut in.
Inyasha glared at the monk in question while getting bandaged up from the fight him and Eesu got into. Kagome and Kaede had done their best but they knew it would take awhile for Inuyasha to heal completely. Kagome had taken out her sleeping bad and had gotten into it, curled herself around her pup and promptly fell asleep. Sango lay somewhere near her and Kirara near Sango. Miroku settled down as well and got comfortable.
" Inuyasha, you better rest, you need it." he said before falling asleep.
" Tis a wise idea, Inuyasha." Kaede said heading to her bed as well.
" Feh, all of ya are gangin' up on me." he said trying to make himself comfortable against the wall.
All of their thoughts on what had happened earlier that day.
Okay, thats it for this one... lemme know... thanks.... Loves to Icy, Ace and Sesshy's koi.
Review or I won't be happy.... lol who cares lmao........ I DO... THATS WHO!!!!
Golden Eyed Girl
Ja Ne!
New Character:
Sakuya: Sesshy's koi
again.. more info will be in later chapters. I might do a page just for my characters. Goes into detail on what they look like, how they act and who plays who.
Disclaimer: I don't own Inuyasha.... duh.
Chapter six: An intruder and some disturbing thoughts
' That stupid fucking bitch. Who does she think she is, acting all high and mighty. I wonder what Lord Sesshoumaru said to her to make her look like that. What happened? I swear it, I will find out. I will not lose to her.' Kagura thought while riding on her feather toward the dark palace.
Flashback
Everyone watched as Lord Sesshoumaru flew away towards his home. Eesu and Seiya raced toward their Lord, but was but because of Inuyasha wanting to get revenge because Eesu had slashed his chest open, lept towards the youkai that had wounded his pride with his sword in front of him.
Inuyasha was upon his prey, when his prey decided it would be best to defend itself. Eesu had taken a small ax that hung at his side and threw it at Inuyasha, hitting its target right in the middle of his chest.
Inuyasha howling in pain and rage, dropped the sword and went to the basics. He decided to use his claws instead. Eesu seeing this gave a murderous grin. Knowing he had the full advantage in this battle.
He had fatally wounded Inuyasha, and remembering what Lord Sesshoumaru always said about wanting to kill Inuyasha himself, decided to just play with the poor hanyou instead of killing him.
Eesu looked to his mate to confirm that that was all he would do. Seiya seeing the look on her mates face knew right away what he wanted. She nodded her head saying that she didn't mind to stay a bit longer, but he had better not take to long, fore she was tired and wanted a bath. Giving in to his rebellous side he started attacking the hanyou ruthlessly, but only doing so to releave some pent up energy.
All the while the others where watching, they didn't notice ice blue eyes staring at them from the darkness. Those same eerie eyes watched at Eesu beat the living shit out of Inuyasha. Finally Seiya was tired of just standing around, she merely whispered...
" Eesu, mate, that is enough. Lets go."
As soon as those words were whispered Eesu stoped his attacks and calmly walked over to his mate. Taking her hand they ran off, back to the Western Lands, where their Lord, was waiting for their comments on the one known as Makoto.
End Flashback
" I will get her for this. She will not take my Sesshy away from me. He will be mine. I smelt his arousal when he saw her. She will pay for this." Kagura finally touching down at Naraku's castle. She still didn't notice that there was a pressence that had followed her to this place.
Kagura walked slowly into the palace, still being followed by the shadow, searching out Naraku. She had a few things to discuss with her 'lord'. Coming up to Naraku's personal wing, she headed straight for his study, knowing he would be in there plotting a way to get the rest of those jewel shards from the reincarnated miko, Kagome.
Kagura walked into the dark room and looked for Naraku. Not finding him in the room turned to leave and bumped right into the person she was looking for. He of course had that usual sexy smirk of his.
" What do you want, Kagura?" he said bored of her pressence already.
" I want to make a deal with you Naraku. That Makoto bitch you are so proud of it planning something, and its not good. I saw her leave with Sesshoumaru and come back looking all weird. Something happened and I am going to find out."
" Ahh, yes, I know she left but the arrogent bastard put up a barrier. I have full faith in Makoto to be true to herself and loyal to me. We know she won't betray us. Just to prove it..... KANNA!!!" Naraku yelled.
Kanna appeared a short time thereafter and bowed to her lord. Her face devoid of any emotion, any expression. The demon-child dressed in white with her mirror in hand. She looked up to her lord and said....
" Yes, master Naraku. What is your wish?"
" Kanna, tell me. Do you know of what was said between Lord Sesshoumaru and Makoto?"
" No, master Naraku." the demon-child said in her monotone voice.
" Do you know of what Makoto is thinking or feeling at the moment?"
" Yes, master Naraku."
" Tell me!"
" Yes, master Naraku. She is confused, feeling as if the whole world was put on her shoulders and that she has a big choice to make shortly." Kanna replied, skipping out on alot of the details. ( ok ok, I know... but its my fic :P)
" Hn, maybe I should pay a little visit to Makoto." Naraku said and started moving to the door, but was stoped short by the voice of Kanna. It wasn't her voice that made him stop, it was the information it told him.
" Master, Naraku. There is an intruder in the castle. Heading this way."
" So be it. You both may leave. I will take care of this intruder and then talk to Makoto about her little visit with the demon lord."
They left and Naraku sat waiting patiently or not so patiently as the intruder sped toward his study. Just as he was about to confront the intruder and throw him out the doors burst open revealing a beautiful demoness. She was beautiful, she had dark blue hair, ice blue eyes, blue strips on each cheek and had a long sword on her hip. She stood at a reasonable height. If he had to guess about 5'7 or 5'8.
He let his senses roam. His eyes widened as he felt the pure energy of a miko.
' So the Inu-Youkai bitch is also a miko to boot.' he thought.
She bowed slightly and told the hanyou that she meant no harm and that she had just wanted to speak with him. Naraku being the curious demon he was, narrowed his blood red eyes at her and slowly swept his hand into the room. She walked into the room and sat on a dark pillow arranged in the room. Naraku followed her with his eyes and sat himself down beside her.
" Now, what is it you want?" Naraku demanded eyeing her goodies. ( hey now you know he would do it to. lmao)
" I want to make a deal with you, Naraku. One that I know you will be very pleased about." she said cheerfully.
" Do you have to be so ........... happy?" he said finally finding the right word.
" Yes. Now how about that deal?"
" What is it?"
" I wish to stay here, until I can get my revenge on the bastard who destroyed my home, my family and my life, and in return I will give you these." she said opening her hand and revealing two jewel fragments.
Naraku's eyes widened in suprise and then he got a delited smile on his face. Quickly agreeing to her proposal. Grabbing the jewel shards and fusing them to the ones he already had. He could feel the power off of them and turned to this mystery woman.
" What is the name that you go by?"
" Why, my name is Sakuya." she said happily.
With Makoto
' What should I do? Should I betray my master and lord or should I decline Lord Sesshoumaru's offer?'
" Oh, what should I do?" she asked aloud.
" Why, Makoto you already know what to do." a voice suprised her. She had been so deep in thought she didn't sense or hear Kanna's approach.
" Why is it you are helping me?"
" Because, everything will work out in the end." the child-demon said wisely.
" What is that supposed to mean?"
" You will find out shortly, Makoto."
Kanna turned on her heal and left, carrying her mirror she was so fond of. Makoto sat there in silence pondering what Kanna had just told her. Makoto then decided to meditate and clear her mind. She sat there and spread her senses. She was suprised to find a new aura in the castle. One of a demoness, a happy aura at that. And it was heading straight for her.
As the newest aura approached, Makoto stood and faced the direction in which it was coming from. She already knew it meant no harm to her. So she stood there waiting. She soon saw a beautiful demoness around her age and around her height as well.
" Hello. I am Sakuya, and you are?" Sakuya said nicely.
" I um... I am Makoto... why are you here?" Makoto said confussed.
" I am staying here until I can get revenge on the bastard who destroyed everything I hold dear." she said with venom driping from every word.
Makoto looked into this new demoness and found that she wouldn't be able to get revenge. Its not in her nature. So how long would she stay here? What would happen to her and why would Naraku agree to have her here in the first place. Makoto then noticed that Sakuya had miko energy. There must be one reason why Naraku said yes but why else? She of course asked Sakuya this and she told her about the shards and that she would be staying here indefenately. Makoto bowed her head to the new comer and made her appologes, and headed to her room for some much needed rest.
She stepped into her room and got her sleeping clothes and headed for the hot springs stationed inside the castle. Once she reached the hot springs she took her clothes off and stepped into the warm water with a sigh. As she submerged herself in the wonderful rose and berry scented water she thought back to her and Sesshoumaru's conversation and what had happened afterword.
Flashback
" Bitch, never turn your back on me." with that said he jerked her to him and......... pulled her close. His clawed hands coming up to grip her shoulders a bit painfully. He then leaned down and inhaled deeply at the conjunction of her neck. She dare not move fore she knew what would happen if she did. His basier instincts would kick in. So she stood there motionless.
One of his hands ( yes, I said hands.) slowly brushed away the part of her red streaked silver hair that was blocking his eyes from fully seeing her neck. With that out of the way he bent closer to her and inhaled deeply again, slowly he lowered his head all the way to her neck and kissed it. Taking notice of the involentary shiver it produced made him smile. It pleased him for some reason. Kissing her neck again, he couldn't help but do what he did next. He licked her. He licked her neck and started nipping at her neck.
She couldn't take it anymore and kicked him in the shin. He back away and looked at her with blood red eyes. She had to do something and something fast. So she did the only thing she could think of and calmed him by stepping close to him and planting her full pouty lips on his. Slowly he relaxed and returned the kiss. They both broke away and turned their head. Makoto lowered her head and started figiting.
" This means nothing. I have to say I appologize for putting you in such a posistion and I thank you for not running. That was very wise on your part."
With that she shook her head yes and bowed to him. He slightly inclined his head and with that they headed back to the group. Each feeling confused, dazed and slightly aroused at what had just happened......
End Flashback
' Why did he do that to begin with? I mean surely I can't be that interesting.' she thought as she got out and dryed herself off. Getting dressed and going back to her room. She layed down and thought again of the demon lord before falling into a dreamless sleep.
With the Inu group in Kaede's hut
" Inuyasha, ye knew ye shouldn't have done that. Ye should know tis unwise to challange someone of whom ye know nothing about." Kaede said wisely.
" Feh, stupid old woman I know that. He pissed me off....
" and wounded your pride." Miroku cut in.
Inyasha glared at the monk in question while getting bandaged up from the fight him and Eesu got into. Kagome and Kaede had done their best but they knew it would take awhile for Inuyasha to heal completely. Kagome had taken out her sleeping bad and had gotten into it, curled herself around her pup and promptly fell asleep. Sango lay somewhere near her and Kirara near Sango. Miroku settled down as well and got comfortable.
" Inuyasha, you better rest, you need it." he said before falling asleep.
" Tis a wise idea, Inuyasha." Kaede said heading to her bed as well.
" Feh, all of ya are gangin' up on me." he said trying to make himself comfortable against the wall.
All of their thoughts on what had happened earlier that day.
Okay, thats it for this one... lemme know... thanks.... Loves to Icy, Ace and Sesshy's koi.
Review or I won't be happy.... lol who cares lmao........ I DO... THATS WHO!!!!
Golden Eyed Girl
Ja Ne!
New Character:
Sakuya: Sesshy's koi
again.. more info will be in later chapters. I might do a page just for my characters. Goes into detail on what they look like, how they act and who plays who.