InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Problems ❯ Chapter One ( Chapter 1 )

[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]

Problems
Disclaimer: Nope I don't own Inuyasha.
 
Author's Note: I have a beta reader, she's one of my friends. I thank her very much for all the hard work she put into this story and I hope she will continue helping me. Anyway this chapter has been revised and has also been added to. Anyway read on and if you've already read Chapter One, read again, you'll defiantly see the difference. Enjoy the new Chapter One.
 
Chapter One
 
Kagome slowly closed her eyes as she began to soak in the hot spring. Inuyasha had told her not to go anywhere without one of their friends with her, but Shippo and Kirara were asleep. Miroku and Sango were too busy kissing to even notice she was gone, and she definitely didn't want to interrupt that. As for Inuyasha, he was out hunting for food. She wouldn't allow him to stand by while she bathed, anyway.

"Mmm." Kagome sighed as she thought back to Miroku and Sango. Instead, she pictured herself and Inuyasha together. Lying on their sides with her leg thrown over his hip and his hand on her's. Their hands on one another's necks, one of Kagome's palms against Inuyasha's chest. Kagome licked her lips, as she felt herself become aroused.

As Kagome relaxed, she failed to realize the scent of her arousal had reached the very sensitive nose of a nearby youkai (demon). He smirked as he came to the edge of the clearing that contained the hot spring. His crimson eyes scanned over Kagome's body, which was mostly submerged in the water. The surface of the water barely covered the tops of her breasts, but what surprised him about this beauty was that she had very kind facial features and flawless skin, which made him want to break her. He licked his lips and sniffed the air, detecting the presence of her friends close by. 'Not here, too close to
others,' he thought to himself. With that he began to plot, and then carry
out his scheme on the young, unprotected human woman whose scent reminded
him of a bitch in heat.

          Inuyasha walked into the campsite with two deer slung over his shoulder. He stopped as he began to feel panic, although he did not show it. Still, something felt wrong. He inhaled deeply as he realized, 'Shit... Kagome went off on her own.' He walked over to Miroku and Sango; he raised an eyebrow at the joined pair, nudging Miroku with his foot. The half-demon waited until they parted. Sango blushed and pulled the covers, lent to the couple by Kagome herself, over her head.

Miroku glared at Inuyasha, growling, "This had better be good." He glanced under the covers to make sure Sango was okay. "You alright?" When she nodded, he got out from under the covers and stood up, glaring at Inuyasha and waiting for him to speak.
Inuyasha continued to wait for Miroku to stand; as soon as he stood it was Inuyasha's turn to glare. "Where the hell is Kagome?" he snarled at the young monk.

Sango popped out from under the covers and sat up, her hair a complete mess. She looked to Kagome's sleeping bag, where she had last seen the girl 'sleeping.' She glanced back to Inuyasha. "We thought she went to sleep, after arguing with you about taking a bath."

Inuyasha growled, "I knew she wouldn't give up that easily... it'd had to have been a fucking miracle!" Sango stood up angrily, "Why can't she take a bath on her own?! She isn't a child, you know!"

Inuyasha growled, getting agitated with his two companions. "Look, there are hanyou and youkai out there and she's in he- uh, totally defenseless! One lust-crazy demon catches her scent and---" Before he could finish his sentence he heard a bloodcurdling scream. He took off toward the sound of the scream without a second thought. Sango and Miroku followed right behind him, struggling to keep up with his trail.

Kagome laid back against a large boulder in the water, her thoughts turning into a teenage fantasy. She sighed as her hand rubbed the inside of her thighs, imagining it was Inuyasha's touch. She was starting to enjoy her little fantasy, until she heard a twig snap. She jumped up, forgetting that she was naked. She looked around, before a cool breeze hit her naked body. Muttering, Kagome grabbed a towel and wrapped it around her body. "Stupid Inuyasha, has me freaking out every time I hear a noise now. It was probably just some little rabbit or something..."

Suddenly, a dark voice startled her by saying, "Or something." He waited for her to spin around, before he moved to effectively knock her out. Unfortunately, the bitch let out an unbelievably loud scream before passing out. He picked her small, light body up, and flew into the air heading west.

(Now I've decided to add a bit more to the chapter. Enjoy.)

         &nbs p; Pain. That's the only word that could describe what Kagome was going through at the moment. However, it would feel like nothing major in comparison to what she would soon experience.

          Kagome slowly opened her soft brown eyes to look around at her surroundings. Her thoughts were spinning around in her head in a tangled mess. 'What happened? Where am I? And. where are MY CLOTHES?!' Her eyes grew wide, first in indignance, then fear, as she realized that she lay there in the grass, completely naked.

          The youkai (or demon) watched from the shadows as the emotions flashed across Kagome's face. First pain, then confusion and finally fear etched wonderfully onto her beautiful features, making her scent all the more wonderful. Yes, he would do well to make this bitch fear him.

          He licked his lips; he wanted so badly to taste her blood. The thought of slicing her skin, that beautiful porcelain skin, open with his claws made his loins twitch slightly with excitement. It was showtime... time make her scream.

          Kagome looked beautiful sitting there. In order to maintain her dignity, her long legs were crossed over herself, and her arms were crossed over her large breasts. Her head was down, her bangs covering her eyes as she contemplated what to do. She sensed the man who had done this to her. She could feel his eyes bore into her, and it made her skin crawl. She knew what would probably happen if she didn't run now. She just wished that she had her clothes, and that she had listened to Inuyasha in the first place.

          Kagome jumped when she heard a twig snap. Her head snapped up as she looked into the darkness of the forest. All she could see was a pair of red eyes. The eyes alone were alarming, in the eyes she read danger, and pain. She knew she had to leave, or she would surely be a corpse when Inuyasha finally reached her location.

          Without another thought, Kagome jumped up and took off in the opposite direction of those eyes, the eyes filled with malice and hatred, eyes that said 'I'm the one you're mother always warned you about.' She had no idea where she was heading, and in the back of her mind she knew she could never get away, but she would try her hardest. She would not let him take her body without a fight.

          Kagome looked back, and didn't see the eyes. She quickly turned her gaze back to the front, before running into something hard and falling to the ground. Her eyes slowly drifted up to see what she had run into, although she already knew. Kagome flinched at the sight of him. She now could see her kidnapper. He towered at about six and a half feet tall, and he had black shoulder-length hair. His red eyes sent a shiver down her spine; she couldn't get over the feral gleam in them.