InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ secrets can hurt ❯ triple trouble ( Chapter 4 )
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By: diablodude 
plz read this story and tell me what you think.
inuyasha and his new friends find naraku's castle but which one is it?
plz leave a idea in a review for kagomes new look as a hanyou
..............................i cant beleive i revealed part of my story dum me dum me dum me!
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Adventure / Action | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 05.05.2004 | Pages: 2 | Words: 1.0K | Visits: 285 | Status: Completed
plz read this story and tell me what you think.
inuyasha and his new friends find naraku's castle but which one is it?
plz leave a idea in a review for kagomes new look as a hanyou
..............................i cant beleive i revealed part of my story dum me dum me dum me!
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Adventure / Action | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 05.05.2004 | Pages: 2 | Words: 1.0K | Visits: 285 | Status: Completed
Secrets can hurt
disclaimer : i do not own inuyasha, but i do own my own characters
diablodude : woah, in 2 days i have made 4 chapters.......wow.......im a fast updater........on with the story!!
chapter 4 : triple trouble
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Inuyasha and his new friends were walking through some woods where a villager said they saw a weird man dressed in a baboon suit go through the forest.
"look!! whats that up a head?!!" asked sango.
"it looks like a castle of some sort" replied shippo
just then they saw a man in a baboon suit walk into the castle.
"thats naraku!" yelled inuyasha
"i'm goin' to kill him!!" as inuyasha said his he ran towards naraku's castle but before he could reach it , the castle became dozens and dozens of castles which then started to spin around until they stopped.
"hehehe nice try half breed but it's now time for you to pick a castle, choose wrong and you'll meet my three best generals, you met one of them already. hehehe take your best pick."
"inuyasha, i sense something in the third castle on the right in the fourth row"
"i'm on it" replied inuyasha
*crash*
as the dust settles a person is standing in the middle of the door way.
"hello again inuyasha" it was diablodude and there was another person behind him
"my mate has told me all about you, inuyasha" said a female voice
"and who the hell are you woman?" asked inuyasha
just then the mysterious woman walked into what light there was and rvealed her self.
the woman was about the same height as diablodude, she had black pointed dog like ears with white tips, a black tail, a golden star on her fore head
blue eyes, her armour was that of the shadow rat(made that up like i did nukimsu) she was filled out in certain places,she had goldy blond hair and she used the shadow sword(i made it up too, its like a katana but it goes right through steel and will cut through any flesh, and can take any shape,but nukimsu prefers the katanna look)
"i am nukimsu of the eastern land and me and my mate, diablodude shall kill you!" yelled nukimsu.
just then nukimsu took a stance and strted to glow a purplish black and a second nukimsu was standing right before her.
"how did she?..........." asked inuyasha confusedly (is that a real word?)
"now die!!" yelled diablodude and the two nukimsu's in union.
and so the battle had begun.
inuyasha decided he would take on diablodude, and everyoe else would take on the two nukimsu's.
"you'll pay for what you did to my father!!" yelled inuyasha as he charged towards diablodude with tetsauiga drawn in its transformed state.
*zoom*
*zing*
"aughhhh!!" yelled inuyasha in pain as he was badly injured from one nukimsu's attack (nukimsu can also travel through shadows thats why she and diablodude are fighting inuyasha and his friends in a castle)
"hehehe, ready for more inuyasha?" taunted nukimsu
"or should i kill your girlfriend" taunted another nukimsu
"dont you dare hurt kagome!!"
"dont worry, she wont feel any pain at all when we kill her" said diablodude
"dont you............aughhhhhh.......hurt........augh.....kagome.......aaaggghhhh h!!!.i love her!" shouted inuyasha as he lunged for diablodude even though he lost a lot of blood from the swit nukimsu's attack.
"dont be foolish inuyasha" said one nukimsu.
"yes reall, why would you want a human as a mate?" asked diablodude
"because........i love.....her" said inuyasha as he was trying to stand up.
"then we shall kill all of you" yelled diablodude and the nukimsu's in union
"inuyashaaaaa!!!!NOOOOO!!" yelled kagome
*zing*
*zing*
*slash*
*slash*
*clang*
*clang*
*slash*
"ahhhhhhhhh!!!" yelled inuyasha in pain
"inuyashaaaa!!!"yelled kagome as she ran towards inuyasha so she can try and save him.
"not so fast girlie" nukimsu said as she attacked kagome
"augh!!" yelled kagome in pain.
"ka-kag-kagomeee!!" yelled inuyasha
kagome was badly hurt, nukimsu had slashed at kagome's throat and kagome was lying on the floor, not moving.
"kagome!!!!!" yelled inuyasha again.
no answer
"farewell inuyasha, have i nice time with your "mate" " taunted nukimsu who transformed back into one nukimsu
just then diablodude and nukimsu were gone in a blink of a eye and left inuyasha and kagome for dead.
as inuyasha slowly got up he was slowly walking towards his new mates body"
kag-kagome." inuyasha said in a soft voice
"i will not let you die." said inuyasha.
then inuyasha got an idea, he would take some of his blood and pour it into kagome's wound hoping it would heal it, but there was a side effect he didnt know about, the side effect of turning a human into a hanyou.
as inuyasha poured his blood into kagomes wound the wound healed and there was a bright light that engulfed kagome and when the light faded kagome was all healed, and she looked different as well.
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diablodude: well what do you think of the 4th chapter? what do you think of the entire story so far?!! plz leave a review and let me know what you think. I BEG YOU!!!!
p.s. i also need idea's for kagome's hanyou look............REVIEW I BEG YOU!!!
disclaimer : i do not own inuyasha, but i do own my own characters
diablodude : woah, in 2 days i have made 4 chapters.......wow.......im a fast updater........on with the story!!
chapter 4 : triple trouble
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Inuyasha and his new friends were walking through some woods where a villager said they saw a weird man dressed in a baboon suit go through the forest.
"look!! whats that up a head?!!" asked sango.
"it looks like a castle of some sort" replied shippo
just then they saw a man in a baboon suit walk into the castle.
"thats naraku!" yelled inuyasha
"i'm goin' to kill him!!" as inuyasha said his he ran towards naraku's castle but before he could reach it , the castle became dozens and dozens of castles which then started to spin around until they stopped.
"hehehe nice try half breed but it's now time for you to pick a castle, choose wrong and you'll meet my three best generals, you met one of them already. hehehe take your best pick."
"inuyasha, i sense something in the third castle on the right in the fourth row"
"i'm on it" replied inuyasha
*crash*
as the dust settles a person is standing in the middle of the door way.
"hello again inuyasha" it was diablodude and there was another person behind him
"my mate has told me all about you, inuyasha" said a female voice
"and who the hell are you woman?" asked inuyasha
just then the mysterious woman walked into what light there was and rvealed her self.
the woman was about the same height as diablodude, she had black pointed dog like ears with white tips, a black tail, a golden star on her fore head
blue eyes, her armour was that of the shadow rat(made that up like i did nukimsu) she was filled out in certain places,she had goldy blond hair and she used the shadow sword(i made it up too, its like a katana but it goes right through steel and will cut through any flesh, and can take any shape,but nukimsu prefers the katanna look)
"i am nukimsu of the eastern land and me and my mate, diablodude shall kill you!" yelled nukimsu.
just then nukimsu took a stance and strted to glow a purplish black and a second nukimsu was standing right before her.
"how did she?..........." asked inuyasha confusedly (is that a real word?)
"now die!!" yelled diablodude and the two nukimsu's in union.
and so the battle had begun.
inuyasha decided he would take on diablodude, and everyoe else would take on the two nukimsu's.
"you'll pay for what you did to my father!!" yelled inuyasha as he charged towards diablodude with tetsauiga drawn in its transformed state.
*zoom*
*zing*
"aughhhh!!" yelled inuyasha in pain as he was badly injured from one nukimsu's attack (nukimsu can also travel through shadows thats why she and diablodude are fighting inuyasha and his friends in a castle)
"hehehe, ready for more inuyasha?" taunted nukimsu
"or should i kill your girlfriend" taunted another nukimsu
"dont you dare hurt kagome!!"
"dont worry, she wont feel any pain at all when we kill her" said diablodude
"dont you............aughhhhhh.......hurt........augh.....kagome.......aaaggghhhh h!!!.i love her!" shouted inuyasha as he lunged for diablodude even though he lost a lot of blood from the swit nukimsu's attack.
"dont be foolish inuyasha" said one nukimsu.
"yes reall, why would you want a human as a mate?" asked diablodude
"because........i love.....her" said inuyasha as he was trying to stand up.
"then we shall kill all of you" yelled diablodude and the nukimsu's in union
"inuyashaaaaa!!!!NOOOOO!!" yelled kagome
*zing*
*zing*
*slash*
*slash*
*clang*
*clang*
*slash*
"ahhhhhhhhh!!!" yelled inuyasha in pain
"inuyashaaaa!!!"yelled kagome as she ran towards inuyasha so she can try and save him.
"not so fast girlie" nukimsu said as she attacked kagome
"augh!!" yelled kagome in pain.
"ka-kag-kagomeee!!" yelled inuyasha
kagome was badly hurt, nukimsu had slashed at kagome's throat and kagome was lying on the floor, not moving.
"kagome!!!!!" yelled inuyasha again.
no answer
"farewell inuyasha, have i nice time with your "mate" " taunted nukimsu who transformed back into one nukimsu
just then diablodude and nukimsu were gone in a blink of a eye and left inuyasha and kagome for dead.
as inuyasha slowly got up he was slowly walking towards his new mates body"
kag-kagome." inuyasha said in a soft voice
"i will not let you die." said inuyasha.
then inuyasha got an idea, he would take some of his blood and pour it into kagome's wound hoping it would heal it, but there was a side effect he didnt know about, the side effect of turning a human into a hanyou.
as inuyasha poured his blood into kagomes wound the wound healed and there was a bright light that engulfed kagome and when the light faded kagome was all healed, and she looked different as well.
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diablodude: well what do you think of the 4th chapter? what do you think of the entire story so far?!! plz leave a review and let me know what you think. I BEG YOU!!!!
p.s. i also need idea's for kagome's hanyou look............REVIEW I BEG YOU!!!