InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Shallow ❯ Chapter 1

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By: One_Dark_Warrior
I need some feedback Please!!!!

Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Psychological | Type: Poetry | Uploaded On: 04.28.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 310 | Visits: 516 | Status: Completed

This world is too damn shallow.
People are just too damn callous.
I am rejected, filling my heart with malice.
Shallow are you, who cannot see through to the heart.
Shallow like you who tear me apart.
It has to be all about your appearance.
Blindly judging people without any coherence.
It's hurts so much to be rejected,
People looking at you like you're defected.
DO YOU KNOW THE PAIN IT CAUSES ME?!!?
TO BE LOOKED DOWN UPON FOR WHAT THEY SEE?!!?
I end this with a simple question, before I part.
Would you ever choose someone for their heart?