InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ The Long Awaited Destiny ❯ Author Notes ( Chapter 5 )

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**Author Notes**
 
Been getting mixed opinions on this story, so I am leaving it up to you all to decide; should I redo it and go a lil more into detail or leave it as it is and just go into more detail later? Like I said this was my first fanfic that I did write and I really didn't expect to go further than the 3rd chapter but I had request to continue it so when I finish my other fanfic I plan to finish it but I need to know if I should totally revise the whole thing????
 
R&R and let me know
 
All opinions are welcomed!!!