InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ The Middle Child; Chidori ❯ The Begining ( Chapter 1 )

[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
The Middle Child
~Prologue~
The Begining
Segoku Jedai
Japan.







My name is Chidori, and was not long for the world. Life. As it were was taken from me, stolen from my hands. Painful are the memories I hold; of my mother, my father, my brother and . . . My half brother.

Walking along the dirt path the ground shook and grumbled as if it were hungry, I looked to my mother. I felt worry in her youkai but an expressionless mask upon her face.Without looking to me she told me to go.
“Keep along the path at a quickened pace and reach our destination. Do not stop.”
Her hair flew about her body and she transformed as I ran, her beautiful chiming voice rang in my head, and I was tried not to look back. I heard the humans’ yells and then sounds of agony and pain. I had no doubt that she would kill them all one by one. Then I heard her glorious voice pierce the sky at the highest octave.

I arrived at the home of my fathers’ and was welcomed the elder [My Grandfather]
They comforted me as though I didn’t understand. I knew that my mother was gone, and I would never see her smile again. I did not shed a tear in front of anyone, but my heart wept each and every minute.
When Father and Brother arrived they both seemed just like myself, an emotionless drone. Although Sesshomaru always had been.

The day before we left Grandfather and Grandmother passed away. I was told that when one mate died, the other soon follows and yet Father was here with me.
“Papa. Why have you not followed mother as Grandmother followed Grandfather?”
He sighed. “I wish not to. . . Yet.” His statement left me in despair, with the foreshadowing of his death.
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A/N


I apologize that it is so much shorter than the original but I feel that it has a much better quality of writing. And perhaps you will feel more in the story. I know I am much happier with it considering I wrote the original two years ago thank goodness there is some sort of improvement.
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Special thanks to:

Myself
And perhaps sprits

For I randomly went back and re-read the story and got motivated to start writing again.

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