InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ The Needed Journey ❯ Chapter 14
Hey, Peoples! I'm back!
Razor Blade Magarita- I thank you so much for looking at my story and reviewing. A piece of friendly advice: Never give up on a story after reading only two chaps. If I had done that with Harry Potter I would never had read a masterpiece. Just so you know Midoriko is still here in the fic. She'll leave by the next chapter. I figured that she needs some peace so this may be shorter and… Ithilelda- thanks so much! I'll finish this fic! I was just feeling a little discouraged. You really helped me. *Hugs* Here is a poster of Sessy, a poster of Youko, and Cookies!
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Midoriko had given the entire group five minutes to process when she finally broke them from their thoughts. "I believe that I will take my leave of this party. You have business to deal with. Oh, I have a few more hours of life, because I earned it while I was alive." With that she just retired to the library. She figured s certain half-demon would have a few questions for her, so she just looked at the books and relaxed.
The four (Kag, Ses, Inu, Kiya) socialized with the mass of demons. Luckily for them nobody there was focused enough to really want to do business. If you just learned that four, three known, people are expected to eventually save the world again, would you want to talk about professional dealings? I didn't think so. So everybody just retired to their rooms, while the four went to the library.
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Okay I know it is really, really, really, short, but I'm having a bit of writer's block. I just wanted to make sure everybody knew I was not giving up on it. I also just wanted to bring the story to the point to say adios to Midoriko. I'm going to finish editing the earlier chaps. I started, but I really didn't complete. So uh… *slowly stepping back* No new chapters till it's done, but there will be a few more chaps after this. *Running from people* Adios!
Okay…. Here is a time line that might just explain the when part of the story. One tells what happened to Inuyasha while the other belongs to Kiya. (Starts at the same point) (please forgive me if months might be off)
The fight that Kiya was talking about took place 69 years ago. Sesshomaru's Dad met, impregnated Inu's, and took Inu to his first gathering 11 years after the fight occurred. 3 years later the brothers' father died and Inu wandered. Then Inu spent 2 yrs bugging, falling in love with Kikyou, and in the end getting pinned to the tree. He was pinned to the tree for 50 yrs, and spent 3 on a quest.
For 2 years she lived with her mom till she died. She wandered for 8 yrs. She was held prisoner for 8 yrs. She was on the run from the master or one of his henchmen for 51 yrs till she ran into Inuyasha.
So does that help? Okay I just want to say one thing: If you want to tell me my detail is a problem don't. I have had several people tell me that. I like to cut to the chase, and I just want to get to the core of the story, thus I write like that. I'll try to go into more detail, but I make no promises.
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