InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ The New Girl At Shikon High ❯ Kagome's Stregnth and Weakness ( Chapter 11 )
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Title: The New Girl At Shikon High
Author: ME
Disclaimer: I own a copy of the first two english Inuyasha movies and I own a copy of every japanese episode with english subtitles.. I also own my computer which I write these stories on.. Other than that.. I OWN NOTHINGG!!
Review Responses:
35 reviewss! U guys are all sooo greattt thanks soooooooooooooo much! :)
lyn- Don't worry I will definetly write more! hehe I don't plan on stopping anytime soon. thank you a bunch for the review!
leggy freak003- hehe yea im sorry bout the naraku thing it was really mean/gross of him.. don't forget Kikyos beating as well.. I don't like either of those two ppl lol They will get whats coming to them in good time.. don't you worry hehe oo and im glad u liked the foreshadowing! :) thanks for the review!
red-tigergirl2- glad u like this highschool fic hehe ! im sorry if i had put some parts from other stories.. i've read soooo many that I sometimes forget what ideas I come up with on my own or what have already been used. Probally also from the fact that those two stories u mentioned are some of my favorites hehe.. Im glad u still like my fic tho.. thanks a bunch for the review! :)
StarriKirara- hehe don't worry as I've said to my reviewers before.. Naraku and Kikyo WILL get whats coming to them! hehe not sure exactly when but they will. I couldn't just let them get away with that now could I? NO WAY!! lol anyways thank you for the review :)
QJP PLP- yes BAD BAD Naraku! hehe Inuyasha will have a way to deal with him.. just you wait and see :) I already got a pretty interesting idea in my head! :) I hope u like how it turns out! thanks for the review!
lillyy-girl- hmm your idea is very good.. if thats alright with u I just might have to use it hehe thank u for the great idea and thank u for the review! ^_^!
xXaLwAyZ-LosTXx- hehe I kno ur review was for my first chappy.. but i figured id throw u in here as well just to give u ur props hehe thank u very much for the review! Im glad u think the story is awesome! :)
rb8- hehe thanks! Im glad u think its a great story.. ooo I hate them both as well! :) I have a plan in store for the two of them! :) yes i hate it when Inu crys too but it is really cute and it makes him show his softer side more.. anyways thank u soo much for the review!
angelmaiden- glad u like the story.. sorry bout the naraku part. I had to do it for the more dramatic effects ahead. you will see hehe thank u a bunch for the review!
GranolaBar- hehe sorry sorry bout what Naraku did.. I kno everyone hates it.. but that part will come in handy for some other parts that are coming soon. you will see when they come around why it was needed.. thank u for the review!
Kelly- glad u love my story! :) thank u soooo much ! Plzz keep up the reviewing :) hehe makes me feel special hehe oo yeah and thanks a bunch for the review oo and don't worry i wont stop writing hehe
Kawaii Chibi Puppy- hehe glad u reviewed again hehe :) yea it was kinda unexpected but the story needed the drama it has and the drama it will bring in the future hehe! :) hehe i will be sure to update it as soon as possible! :) you will see what happens when Inuyasha and everyone find out about Kagome.. I have some interesting ideas for what will happen.. I hope everyone will like em.. hehe oo and thanks a bunch for the review and Im soooo glad u loved the chappy! hehe
fan- hehe glad u love my writing hehe! :) also glad u like the agnst and stuff.. don't worry I tend to make it a happy ending.. Im not real fond of unhappy ones.. they are either too sad and make me cry or too downright crazy and make me mad hehe.. this will be happy! thanks for the review!
Egyptian Kiss- don't worry Kagome will not be dieing.. this chapter will show u that much hehe. sorry i had to have Naraku and Kikyo do that.. they will get whats coming to them in the end don't u worry.. Inuyasha will also give his fair share of punishment to the two when he finds out.. thank u for the review :)
MyOtaku- yes it was very sad.. I will make it happy soon enough hehe.. don't worry Kagome will get her revenge.. even if it just happens to be Inuyasha who gets it for her hehe.. thank u for the review!
Nekomata-17- hehe yes it was sad .. Im glad that u almost cried.. Not to be mean or anything that just means that my story can touch ppl and that makes me happy :) Yes that last sentence was a lil bit of foreshadowing hehe ^_^ thank u a bunch for the review!!!
Kagome M.K- dont worry i will definetly update soon! :) thank you tons for reviewing :) !
someone- hehe sorry for the cliffy.. but yea ur absolutely right.. cliffys make ppl want to read more and find out what happens lol least thats what happens with me hehe.. thank u a bunch for the review.. I hope this update gives u sumthin good to read in school! hehe :)
Inu-Baby18- hehe sorry bout doing that to them .. I completely agree they dont deserve that.. I just wanted to add some drama.. and I did.. besides that will make what happens in the rest of the story more interesting and will lead to what happens int he rest of the story! thanks for the review!
Rubius- hehe yea i had to leave that evil cliffy that way everyone will want to read and find out whats gonna happen next hehe.. I hope this update didn't take to long for u .. thanks for the review!
Kags14- hehe sorry about that cliffy.. lol u arent the only one who didn't like it.. Glad u liked the chappy though.. I hope I updated fast enuff for u .. thank u very much for the review!
Kiala- hehe glad u love it.. sorry bout the kagome virginity part.. it will help the rest of the story.. and don't worry Inuyasha will give Naraku what he deserves soon enough! thanks for the review!
laquasha- sorry that the chapter made u sad.. it did that to alot of ppl hehe me included.. I just really needed that chapter as a filler and it will make what happens in the future.. Happen lol .. anyways thanks for the review!
Darkness spreads- hehe glad u finally made it to this chappy hehe I hope I updated soon enough for u .. and I hope u like this chapter thank u for all ur reviews hehe each one was really appreciated! :)
shadox- hehe thats good to know uve been reading the story.. also very very glad u decided to review now! glad u like the story! Thank you very much for the review!!
Kristi Shorter- hehe glad u think its nice.. and Im very very glad that I got u on the edge of ur chair hehe :) i hope u like this next chappy! Thank u for the review!
Inu's-Only- hehe yep Naraku is definetly a bastard! n yes as far as I know EVERYONE hates him lol.. I will definetly try to make my chapters longer.. N I hope I updated soon enough for ya hehe Thanks for the review!
DragonBlade666- yea it was a bit cruel.. but it had to be done.. Yes Naraku was the one Kikyo was cheating with .. and the one Kikyo actually likes.. She was just using Inuyasha.. Shes just a jealous bitch and didn't want Kagome to have Inuyasha either .. lol yes lol Manyy ppl are waiting to see waht Inuyasha does when he finds out.. hehe guess u will just have to read to find out. Thanks for the review!
AnimeishDwarf- hehe glad u feel that way about Naraku hehe cuz he will get whats coming to him soon enough.. don't worry about the Inuyasha being with Kagome part.. I wouldn't have it any other way! thanks a bunch for the review!
Sexy-Kagome-Loveyah- hehe yep that definetly describes Inuyasha! hehe thank u very much for the compliment.. Im really glad U love my story! thanks a bunch for the review..I hope u like my update :) hehe
Demon_Inuyasha1- hehe sorry sorry sorry i did that.. I really needed to soo the rest of my story can take place.. you will see. hehe i hope u will still enjoy my story! thanks for the review!
.Inuyashas.Sweet.Kagome.- hehe sorry.. dont worry I won't do that again.. Naraku will get his pay back soon as well.. Thanks for the review!
kiri001- yea it does suck for Kagome.. Don't worry though Inuyasha will get Kagome her revenge for her soon enough! :) thanks a bunch for the review!
xxpunxx101- hehe sooo glad you like the story ^_^ thanks a bunch for the review.. I hope I updated soon enough for you :)
InuyashaMaster- im sorry u feel that way.. that chapter was meant to cause drama.. there is no way in hell id ever end up with those to as a couple or Kagome dieing or anything like that.. It is just something that Naraku would do same with Kikyo.. both are my least favorite characters in the anime and I am sure many people agree with me there. This chapter is just to make things in the story later on more interesting.. im sorry if u didn't like it. thx for ur opinion
Sorry if ur review is not responded to above.. I must have not recieved it until after I updated. I am very sorry.. but I still appreciate ALL reviews! thank u a bunch all u reviewers! :) they mean soo much to me!
Chapter 11: Kagome's Strength and Weakness
Kagome awoke to banging from her bedroom door and her little brother Soutas voice screaming at her to get up for school. Kagome looked over at the clock and groaned. She was definetly going to be late. I still have these god damn bruises and scratches to cover up .. God I need a shower.. I feel like such filth. Kagome thought.
Kagome got up and went into her bathroom to take a shower and clean all her wounds before they got infected. The water pounding on her skin felt excrutiating but she knew she had to deal with it. God I have to hide these bruises of people will think my family beats me or something. Kagome thought bitterly.
As soon as she got out of the shower she dug through her drawers trying to find clothing that would cover up her bruises and gashes but wouldn't irratate her skin. In the end she pulled out a pair of black hiphugger jeans and a hot pink, skin tight, longsleeved, v-neck. On her shirt in black letters was "I wan't my vision to have a little less YOU in it." Kagome was not in a mood to be messed with. She was going to show Naraku just who he's messing with , he was Not getting away with what he did to her.
Kagome added a few finishing touches to her outfit. A pair of hoop earings, a chain choker necklace, and her nike sneakers. She quickly pulled her hair up in a loose bun with a few strands hanging down, before she rushed out the door on her way to school.
When Inuyasha arrived at school, he was still downright depressed about what had happened between him and Kagome. He couldn't believe how much of a bitch Kikyo had been. I don't know why the fuck I ever liked that skank, Inuyasha thought to himself. I just wish Kagome would listen to me .. although I can't blame here for thinking what she thought. What Kikyo did.. , it didn't look good .. Even to me. Inuyasha kept thinking these thoughts when he came across something that made his his pulse quicken and all his feeling to fall into his groin area. There standing in front of her locker was the most gorgeous girl he had ever seen.
Kagome
Naraku was standing in the hall by his locker barely listening to Kikyo as she rattled off about her new outfit she bought herself aftet they got done with Kagome. All of the sudden Naraku's attention was completely directed toward something else that was standing off to the side looking rather.. tasty! At least thats what he thought of her.
There was Kagome leaning up against her locker talking with a few her girlfriends completely oblivious to his lustful stares. He would have to change that. Let's just see how shes holding out now and once she gets a look at me! Haha she will be a complete mess on the floor drowning herself in her tears.. Can't wait! Naraku Thought to himself as he approached her.
When Kagome saw Naraku approaching her with his bitch in tow she inwardly smirked. Ha they think they can break me that simply they have got another thing coming. I am not that weak I will show them.. I will show everyone! Kagome's three friends Eri, Yuka, and Ayumi saw the approach of Naraku and immediately said their goodbyes as they sped off to class. Kagome watched their retreating backs for a minute until she turned around only to come face to face with her offenders.
Inuyasha watched Naraku and Kikyo approach Kagome and immediately went on the defensive although he remained where he was standing.. He wanted to see what she would do and what they wanted to say to her. From his distance he could easily pick up their conversations with his ears.
"Why Naraku, Kikyo.. what ever could you two want?" Kagome asked feigning surprize.
" ....... " Naraku was shocked..
Kagome was acting as if yesterday had never happened. Maybe she had hit her head to hard when she passed out. He would have to remind her. That way he could watch in satisfaction at the stream of tears that would come and the enticing aroma of her fear. He was extremely eager for these things to happen.
"Ooo already you have forgotten us .. when it was just last night when you were writhing beneath me in pain as I plunged into your unwilling body over and over again. That is rather dissapointing my dear I would have thought you could recall such a glorious night. " Naraku said with an arrogant smirk. He was all ready for the tears.. Any minute now they would come. He just knew it.
"Yeah Bitch .. don't you recall you getting your ass kicked last night, you were crying then .. such a weakling. I see you have done a decent job covering the evidence of last nights activities ," Kikyo smirked.
Kagome stood strong and proud in front of the two letting a small smile grace her features before replying.
"Oh now I remember.. you two must mean when you Naraku were upset for someone actually denying you so you threatened me and threw me in your car.. just to take me to some abandoned shack in the woods where you tied me up and shoved that extremely pathetic excuse of a dick into me over and over again while bruising my body.. Which wasn't all that hard since miss bitch over had already had a go at beating me up while i was tied.. Dumb bitch couldn't fight me for real if she had a fully loaded gun.. fuck that she could have a whole army base of weapons and still wouldn't be able to get near me .. so to try to make her feel good about herself she .. just like any other weak person would have done.. Tied me up first before beating me. Yea Sounds realll threatening Kik-E- HO! A little insecure are we..? So we just have to go around fucking anything that moves?" Kagome Taunted
Everyone stood completely still and completely quiet. Kagome was congradulating her self inwardly. Inuyasha was in shock of what he had just heard and witnessed. Naraku was amazed , shocked, and dissapointed that she was able to say all that to him and not have even one trace of fear lingering on her scent, and Kikyo was trying to understand what Kagome had said to her not realizing what she said until finally after a longg pause Kikyo shouts out.
"HEYY You Insulted me you whore" Kikyo said as she lunged at Kagome hoping to catch her off guard. She however, had no such luck. Kagome grabbed Kikyo by the hair and slapped her hard across the face before throwing her back on her ass.
Kikyo just sat there in shock for awhile. In the mean time Kagome turned around and started to walk off when Naraku grabbed her shoulder. Before he could get the chance to do anything else.. Kagome spund around and kicked him right in the nuts. Satisfied when she watched him drop down on the ground next to Kikyo. Before stalking off outside Kagome shouted one last thing.
"Oh come off it Naraku.. it couldn't have hurt that fucking bad considering theres nothing there!"
Inuyasha who had remained still up until that point was immediately following off after Kagome wanting to get the whole story out of her and he knew more than anyone that no matter how tough she may have acted she needed someone there for her now. and hed be damned if he let that someone be anyone other than himself. He swore to himself that he would get Naraku back for what he did.. but Kagome was more important to him right now.
Inuyasha caught up with her just as she was getting in her vehichle. He could already smell the extra salt in the air. She was crying. Inuyasha rushed over to her and stood behind her waiting for her to acknowledge his presence. Finally she did.. and the look he saw on her face made him want to cry himself.
"How could you even want to look at me right now.. after hearing all that and with the way I treated you? How can you not hate me?" Kagome cried out turning to face him.
"Kagome, " Inuyasha said hesitantly. " I could never hate you. You mean the world to me! .. I .. I Love you Kagome!"
Kagome gasped outloud when she heard his openhearted confession. He loves me? ME.. after all thats happened? Kagome thought to herself. It was then she realized.. She loved him too.. more than anything.. and right now she wanted.. no Needed to have him.. She needed all of his body , heart, and soul. She needed to get rid of the way she felt now .. needed to replace it with the one she loves.
"Inuyasha I love you too!.. Inuyasha. please can you do something for me .. please" Kagome begged.
"Anything.. anything at all Kagome!" Inuyasha chided.
"Inuyasha.. I Need you.. I need you to take me.. make love to me.. I need to get rid of his god awful stench.. I need to be able to feel again. please Inuyasha.. take me" Kagome said with a tint of red on her cheeks as she stared into the eyes of her love.
End Chappy!
^_^ How was it?? I hope it was good.. ahh It took me forever to write.. sorrrrrryyy ! next chappy is obviously the lemon hehe.. soo be prepared.. I will try not to take too long this time.. Ive been extremely busy with my family and stuff lately.. I hope ya all understand.. Plzz let me know what u thought of this chappy.. Thanks a bunch.. PLZ REVIEWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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