InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ The World of Rock ❯ On The Ride To HELL! ( Chapter 8 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
By: angelwarrior1 
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Comedy / Romance / Angst | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 07.09.2004 | Pages: 4 | Words: 2.1K | Visits: 459 | Status: Completed
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Comedy / Romance / Angst | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 07.09.2004 | Pages: 4 | Words: 2.1K | Visits: 459 | Status: Completed
As in the words of my Economics teacher,"Whoa!Whoa!Whoa!Whoa!Whoa!",I didn't think that chapter would generate
such vivid responses!This girl is impressed!Well,I said that if you guys reviewed,I would give you another
chapter.So,true to my word,here it is!But first I need to communicate with my loyal readers.Here we go!
hatedsoul:Luv the name!It's spelled,original,'kay?Wow!That was one of the longest reviews I've gotten so far!I'm glad
that someone is as interested in my story as you are!(sniff!)I feel so loved right now!Well,I'm glad you want to
be my body guard,but I don't allow violence over a story.(if someone insults my momma though,then it's on
bi-atch!)Besides,it's really not neccesary,I'm 5'10" and can kick someone's ass on my own.(ha ha ha!)But I know
who to call just in case now,don't I!AND SINCE YOUR REVIEW JUST MADE MY DAY,I DEDICATE THIS CHAPTER TO YOU!
SO STAND AND TAKE A BOW,LET'S HERE IT FOR OUR WINNER OF THIS CHAPTER'S DEDICATION!(HANDS CLAPPING IN THE CROWD)
Enjoy.
momijigirl:Well,thank you girl!
DRAKE220:Well thank you for your suggestions.I think those are good ideas,so I'll have to use them in later chapters.
I actually kind of got over my writer's block now.But,I'll still use your idea later and give a shout out when the chapter
comes out,'kay?Thanks,I'll take that as a compliment(^_^'"good thing nobody saw that review,for those that apply to the little insult.")
DogDemonKinoke:Ok,I got it.More(Ha ha!)Enjoy.
Chi:Thank you!Yes,perves UNITE!(LIKE ON Spongebob,Mermaid Man and Barnicle Boy.)And the perves will rule the WORLD!Muwahahahahaha!Sorry,got side tracked with my
plans for world domination.Well,thanks for mentioning my question about anyone knowing Yu Yu stories,you're the only on who's even mentioned it so far.I love your
name by the way!Much luv(in a platonic way of course.Ha ha!)Enjoy!
My Secret:Thank you very much.Here's your update.
Disclaimer:Rumiko:"Stop it!Get out of my brain!"
Author:"Whoops!Need it on full power!Now,you will give me Inuyasha..."
Rumiko:"I will give you Inuyasha..."
(remote starts to fry out because her artistic imagination is too powerful.KABOOM!!Author's face is covered in
black smoke.)
Author:(cough!cough!)"Oh well,back to the drawing board,damn it!"(As you can see,I don't own Inuyasha,but I'm
working on it.Smiles evilly and pulls out a power saw.MUWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!)
Before I start,it's come to my attention that I've been spelling Inuyasha's name wrong in the 1st couple of chapter's.
I'm sorry if that made any readers mad.I know I get mad when someone repeatedly spells a character's name wrong.So again,I
apologize for spelling Inuyasha's name any other words in previous chapters wrong.You probably don't think it's a big deal,
but I do,i'm kinda a perfectionist.
Inuyasha:"What the fuck were you thinking spelling my name wrong?!Don't you know the alphabet BITCH?!"
Author:"SHUT THE FUCK UP OVER THERE,I APOLOGIZED DIDN'T I!NOW GET BACK TO WORK ON MY LAUNDRY,REMEMBER,WHITE'S IN ONE PILE,
DARKS IN THE OTHER!YOU HEARD ME GET BACK TO WORK BEFORE I GO OVER THERE AND BITCH SLAP YOU!Ahem!Enjoy the story folks."
Inuyasha:"Wait!Don't go!Tell the police I'm in the-
Author:"SHUT YOUR ASS UP,FOO!"(punches him on the head.)
Chapter 7:
With their first performance together complete,they felt like they should unwind somehow,the problem was they didn't
know how.(especially Sesshoumaru)
"Man,this blows!I'm bored as fuck!"(guess who?)Inuyasha grumpily said(you guessed right again.Blows one of those pary favors
that make noises with a face like this-_-)
"Now,now.That's no reason to be cussin' up a fucking storm."Kouga said in reply.
"You're cussing too,damn it!"Ayame yelled at Kouga.
"You're close too,Ayame!You were just swearing!"Rin now joins in this pointless,but funny dispute.
"Would you shut up!I'm trying to concentrate on brushing my hair."Sesshoumaru says,which turns everyone's attention on him with
sweat drops on their heads.
"What are you?Gay?Fruity?Huh?Take your pick!"Inuyasha yells at his brother.
"Just because I don't think with my DICK,24-7,doesn't mean I'm gay."Sesshoumaru says calmly to Inuaysha.
"Why-YOU!"Inuyasha tries to punch Sesshoumaru in the head,but he calmly dodges out of the way.
"STOPPP!!!"Kagome finally screams,getting fed up with the stupid dispute.
Everyone stops and looks at Kagome.Inuyasha stopped while in the middle of an assault on Sesshoumaru,with a blank look on his face.
Sesshoumaru looks over with that same blank look on his face that he always has.Miroku stops the pre-emptive sneak attack he was
attempting to perform on Sango,so now his hand is 2 inches from her rear end.Kouga,Ayame,and Rin stop their meaningless dispute that
no one seems to care about in the corner,and looks at Kagome with blank looks on their faces as well.All eyes were on Kagome now.
"Look.Let's think of somewhere we can all go to together,before we kill each other."Kagome said calmly.
"I'm thinking about killing right now."Sango says when she notices Miroku's hand 2 inches away from her ass.
Miroku quickly pulls his hand away with a look of fear on his face.
"Hey!I know where we can go!I heard about a place in this area called,"Wonderland."(that doesn't exist for real does it?It sounds
familiar.Maybe it just exsists in my crazy imagination.=_=')Rin exclaimed excitedly.
"Okay."Eveyone says.
So everyone decides on staying a couple of days and packs their clothes and entertainment sources.(For Miroku you would put an,"AHEM!",
in front of entertainment.)And soon they were on their way to Wonderland.It was 3 hours away from their hotel so they'd have to stay in a
hotel near Wonderland.The ride was fun for some,for others it was like a torture filled ride to hell.Sesshoumaru sat in his seat checking
through his hair for the 5th time that day,to make sure he'd finally gotten rid of all the pieces of waffles that Inuyasha had dumped in
his hair 2 1/2 days ago.(Felt like it happened a long time ago,doesn't it?)Rin sat across from Sesshoumaru and was really concentrating
on getting Yoshi around the corner without skidding on the ice.(In case you haven't guessed by now,she's playing Mario Kart.)Inuyasha was
listening to music from Kagome's band to get a feel about their style,while Kagome was doing the same.Somehow,Sango found herself sitting
next to Miroku in the back.Apparently,Sango was the 1st one on the bus and Miroku rushed in front of everyone else to be the 2nd.Sango
sat down in the back seat,next to the window,when suddenly,Miroku sat down next to her.
"what are you doing?"Sango asked incredulously.
"There's no room in the other seats,everyone put their bags in them."Miroku said with a big stupid grin on his face.(-.-''What's the perve schemin' now?')
All Sango said was,
"HMPH!"
She forgot to tell him not to touch her,so,Miroku would trie to touch her thigh or boob every 1/2 hour and she would slap his hand away and yell,
"PERVE!",everytime he did it.
In front,Rin finally got bored of playing her gameboy ad. and turned it off.She stretched and looked over at Sesshoumaru and almost fell out of
her seat laughing,but she didn't laugh,because she didn't want to make him mad.He was sitting in the corner trying to brush his super long hair,
but was having a hard time since he was sitting down and his was so long.Rin couldn't help but smile and asked,
"Do you want me to brush it?"
Sesshoumaru thought she was making fun of him,so he said,
"No,I don't want,nor do I need any help."
Rin knew that that was just his pride talking so she went over to the seat next to him and took the brush out of his hand and started brushing his long
silver locks.'Feels like silk',she thought.It smelled really good too,like wild flowers.
"You have really beautiful hair."She said without thinking.
This made one corner of Sesshoumaru's lip go up,resulting in a half smile.
"Thank you."He said without thinking as well.
'Why'd I say that?'Both of them wondered at the same time.
Rin spent the rest of the trip(an hour)brushing his hair in silence,while Sesshoumaru just sat there silently looking out the window.Kagome and Inuyasha
finally got done listening to each other's CD's and said to each other,
"They're good."
The rest of the trip went by quickly,with some sleeping and other's involved in hair brushing.They finally got there,but it was too late to go to Wonderland
so they went to find a close hotel,so they could go to Wonderland 1st thing when they got up without having to go that far to get to Wonderland.When they
found one,they all took their things out of the bus that they needed,checked in,and went to their room,after bidding each other good night.
Well that's it!I want to save them actually going to Wonderland for the next chapter.Did ya'll like the Sess/Rin fluff I threw in there?And the S/M part?
When I noticed that I had so many errors in my 1st couple of chapters,I was like,"Oh No!I need to fix that as soon as possible."So,I went through each chapter
and fixed any error I came across.I will repost the story,but not until I've completed it 1st.(So I won't piss any readers off that put my story in their favorites
file,don't you hate it when a story gets deleted and it's one of your favorites?)So,yeah,you guys don't have to worry about that right now.Well,Adios till next time!
You no review,you no come back!
such vivid responses!This girl is impressed!Well,I said that if you guys reviewed,I would give you another
chapter.So,true to my word,here it is!But first I need to communicate with my loyal readers.Here we go!
hatedsoul:Luv the name!It's spelled,original,'kay?Wow!That was one of the longest reviews I've gotten so far!I'm glad
that someone is as interested in my story as you are!(sniff!)I feel so loved right now!Well,I'm glad you want to
be my body guard,but I don't allow violence over a story.(if someone insults my momma though,then it's on
bi-atch!)Besides,it's really not neccesary,I'm 5'10" and can kick someone's ass on my own.(ha ha ha!)But I know
who to call just in case now,don't I!AND SINCE YOUR REVIEW JUST MADE MY DAY,I DEDICATE THIS CHAPTER TO YOU!
SO STAND AND TAKE A BOW,LET'S HERE IT FOR OUR WINNER OF THIS CHAPTER'S DEDICATION!(HANDS CLAPPING IN THE CROWD)
Enjoy.
momijigirl:Well,thank you girl!
DRAKE220:Well thank you for your suggestions.I think those are good ideas,so I'll have to use them in later chapters.
I actually kind of got over my writer's block now.But,I'll still use your idea later and give a shout out when the chapter
comes out,'kay?Thanks,I'll take that as a compliment(^_^'"good thing nobody saw that review,for those that apply to the little insult.")
DogDemonKinoke:Ok,I got it.More(Ha ha!)Enjoy.
Chi:Thank you!Yes,perves UNITE!(LIKE ON Spongebob,Mermaid Man and Barnicle Boy.)And the perves will rule the WORLD!Muwahahahahaha!Sorry,got side tracked with my
plans for world domination.Well,thanks for mentioning my question about anyone knowing Yu Yu stories,you're the only on who's even mentioned it so far.I love your
name by the way!Much luv(in a platonic way of course.Ha ha!)Enjoy!
My Secret:Thank you very much.Here's your update.
Disclaimer:Rumiko:"Stop it!Get out of my brain!"
Author:"Whoops!Need it on full power!Now,you will give me Inuyasha..."
Rumiko:"I will give you Inuyasha..."
(remote starts to fry out because her artistic imagination is too powerful.KABOOM!!Author's face is covered in
black smoke.)
Author:(cough!cough!)"Oh well,back to the drawing board,damn it!"(As you can see,I don't own Inuyasha,but I'm
working on it.Smiles evilly and pulls out a power saw.MUWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!)
Before I start,it's come to my attention that I've been spelling Inuyasha's name wrong in the 1st couple of chapter's.
I'm sorry if that made any readers mad.I know I get mad when someone repeatedly spells a character's name wrong.So again,I
apologize for spelling Inuyasha's name any other words in previous chapters wrong.You probably don't think it's a big deal,
but I do,i'm kinda a perfectionist.
Inuyasha:"What the fuck were you thinking spelling my name wrong?!Don't you know the alphabet BITCH?!"
Author:"SHUT THE FUCK UP OVER THERE,I APOLOGIZED DIDN'T I!NOW GET BACK TO WORK ON MY LAUNDRY,REMEMBER,WHITE'S IN ONE PILE,
DARKS IN THE OTHER!YOU HEARD ME GET BACK TO WORK BEFORE I GO OVER THERE AND BITCH SLAP YOU!Ahem!Enjoy the story folks."
Inuyasha:"Wait!Don't go!Tell the police I'm in the-
Author:"SHUT YOUR ASS UP,FOO!"(punches him on the head.)
Chapter 7:
With their first performance together complete,they felt like they should unwind somehow,the problem was they didn't
know how.(especially Sesshoumaru)
"Man,this blows!I'm bored as fuck!"(guess who?)Inuyasha grumpily said(you guessed right again.Blows one of those pary favors
that make noises with a face like this-_-)
"Now,now.That's no reason to be cussin' up a fucking storm."Kouga said in reply.
"You're cussing too,damn it!"Ayame yelled at Kouga.
"You're close too,Ayame!You were just swearing!"Rin now joins in this pointless,but funny dispute.
"Would you shut up!I'm trying to concentrate on brushing my hair."Sesshoumaru says,which turns everyone's attention on him with
sweat drops on their heads.
"What are you?Gay?Fruity?Huh?Take your pick!"Inuyasha yells at his brother.
"Just because I don't think with my DICK,24-7,doesn't mean I'm gay."Sesshoumaru says calmly to Inuaysha.
"Why-YOU!"Inuyasha tries to punch Sesshoumaru in the head,but he calmly dodges out of the way.
"STOPPP!!!"Kagome finally screams,getting fed up with the stupid dispute.
Everyone stops and looks at Kagome.Inuyasha stopped while in the middle of an assault on Sesshoumaru,with a blank look on his face.
Sesshoumaru looks over with that same blank look on his face that he always has.Miroku stops the pre-emptive sneak attack he was
attempting to perform on Sango,so now his hand is 2 inches from her rear end.Kouga,Ayame,and Rin stop their meaningless dispute that
no one seems to care about in the corner,and looks at Kagome with blank looks on their faces as well.All eyes were on Kagome now.
"Look.Let's think of somewhere we can all go to together,before we kill each other."Kagome said calmly.
"I'm thinking about killing right now."Sango says when she notices Miroku's hand 2 inches away from her ass.
Miroku quickly pulls his hand away with a look of fear on his face.
"Hey!I know where we can go!I heard about a place in this area called,"Wonderland."(that doesn't exist for real does it?It sounds
familiar.Maybe it just exsists in my crazy imagination.=_=')Rin exclaimed excitedly.
"Okay."Eveyone says.
So everyone decides on staying a couple of days and packs their clothes and entertainment sources.(For Miroku you would put an,"AHEM!",
in front of entertainment.)And soon they were on their way to Wonderland.It was 3 hours away from their hotel so they'd have to stay in a
hotel near Wonderland.The ride was fun for some,for others it was like a torture filled ride to hell.Sesshoumaru sat in his seat checking
through his hair for the 5th time that day,to make sure he'd finally gotten rid of all the pieces of waffles that Inuyasha had dumped in
his hair 2 1/2 days ago.(Felt like it happened a long time ago,doesn't it?)Rin sat across from Sesshoumaru and was really concentrating
on getting Yoshi around the corner without skidding on the ice.(In case you haven't guessed by now,she's playing Mario Kart.)Inuyasha was
listening to music from Kagome's band to get a feel about their style,while Kagome was doing the same.Somehow,Sango found herself sitting
next to Miroku in the back.Apparently,Sango was the 1st one on the bus and Miroku rushed in front of everyone else to be the 2nd.Sango
sat down in the back seat,next to the window,when suddenly,Miroku sat down next to her.
"what are you doing?"Sango asked incredulously.
"There's no room in the other seats,everyone put their bags in them."Miroku said with a big stupid grin on his face.(-.-''What's the perve schemin' now?')
All Sango said was,
"HMPH!"
She forgot to tell him not to touch her,so,Miroku would trie to touch her thigh or boob every 1/2 hour and she would slap his hand away and yell,
"PERVE!",everytime he did it.
In front,Rin finally got bored of playing her gameboy ad. and turned it off.She stretched and looked over at Sesshoumaru and almost fell out of
her seat laughing,but she didn't laugh,because she didn't want to make him mad.He was sitting in the corner trying to brush his super long hair,
but was having a hard time since he was sitting down and his was so long.Rin couldn't help but smile and asked,
"Do you want me to brush it?"
Sesshoumaru thought she was making fun of him,so he said,
"No,I don't want,nor do I need any help."
Rin knew that that was just his pride talking so she went over to the seat next to him and took the brush out of his hand and started brushing his long
silver locks.'Feels like silk',she thought.It smelled really good too,like wild flowers.
"You have really beautiful hair."She said without thinking.
This made one corner of Sesshoumaru's lip go up,resulting in a half smile.
"Thank you."He said without thinking as well.
'Why'd I say that?'Both of them wondered at the same time.
Rin spent the rest of the trip(an hour)brushing his hair in silence,while Sesshoumaru just sat there silently looking out the window.Kagome and Inuyasha
finally got done listening to each other's CD's and said to each other,
"They're good."
The rest of the trip went by quickly,with some sleeping and other's involved in hair brushing.They finally got there,but it was too late to go to Wonderland
so they went to find a close hotel,so they could go to Wonderland 1st thing when they got up without having to go that far to get to Wonderland.When they
found one,they all took their things out of the bus that they needed,checked in,and went to their room,after bidding each other good night.
Well that's it!I want to save them actually going to Wonderland for the next chapter.Did ya'll like the Sess/Rin fluff I threw in there?And the S/M part?
When I noticed that I had so many errors in my 1st couple of chapters,I was like,"Oh No!I need to fix that as soon as possible."So,I went through each chapter
and fixed any error I came across.I will repost the story,but not until I've completed it 1st.(So I won't piss any readers off that put my story in their favorites
file,don't you hate it when a story gets deleted and it's one of your favorites?)So,yeah,you guys don't have to worry about that right now.Well,Adios till next time!
You no review,you no come back!