InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ This is Life ❯ thank you! ( Prologue )

 

"This is Life" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]

 Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2006 22:59 CST
Comment/Review:
the fic is totally awsome

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 Title: YAYYY!!!
Reviewed By: Lauren!  On: September 13, 2005 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):

Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10

Comment/Review:
Tay!!! Yay! Finally, an update! 1st thing though...I would be a Pheonix, not an owl...yeah... I love the new chapter, but WHAT DOES SHE MEAN!!!! when she says Time?!?!?!?! (grrr...evil cryptic taytor...) NEWay...It is time for this Lauren to get to sleep. I don't function on caffine like you! Ja! Lauren

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 Title: next chapter please
Reviewed By: sunflashmace7 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 05, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):

Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10

Comment/Review:
good

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 Reviewed By: new fan  On: May 24, 2005 22:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Seriously...all I have to say is...you FRIGGING ROCK!!!! You named like a ton of my favorite bands!!! (H.I.M. wasn't named but the heartagram gave it away!) That's awesome! I can see this story really going somewhere. Keep up the good work!

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 Reviewed By: Shadow Singer  On: May 23, 2005 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):

Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10

Comment/Review:
0___0 Finally!!! Loved the new chapter!! Grr...what took so long?!(slight flame...) NEWay, the chapter makes up for the wait. Yayyyy! ( You're not going to make me wait this long for the next chapter r u? Otherwise I'll kidnap Yasha and the gang! Bwahh ha ha! (Sesshy-fluff, come back! Let me paint your nails!!!!!!)

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 Title: YAYYYYYY!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Shadow_Singer [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2005 19:58 CST
Rating(s):

Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10

Comment/Review:
Finally! I have despaired that you would ever update! I have an acount now, so I can flame you for you grammer(*flame*)I felt all warm and fuzzy when I saw myself in the script-story-thing. Merci, and all that. And now for the review. Your grammer, of course, is self explanitory, but I liked the plot ideas, and while the charcters are quite out of themselves,(All Kagome wanted to do was follow Kikyou and punch Kikyou's face in) Ahem! It's always interesting to see different takes on the storyline of "Inu Yasha in High School." Inu Yasha seems a bit too calm, Rin a bit too tipsy, but Sango and Miroku are PERFECT!(PINK!)reminds me of Jess:) Please develope the relationship between Kag and her mom. I'm kinda confused. And the ending to chapter 6 was very, Interesting? Just kidding, I rather liked it. Just a reminder...UPDATE FAST OR LAUREN WILL...hmm, I'll think on it!(by the way, I liked the insane minions!)

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