InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ Thunder Clouds ❯ Shippo and the Thunder Brothers ( Chapter 1 )
[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
By: kougasgirl05 
The Inu gang meet Shippo
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Comedy / Drama / Romance | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 12.10.2003 | Updated On: 01.03.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.2K | Visits: 804 | Status: Work In Progress
The Inu gang meet Shippo
Anime/Manga: InuYasha Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Comedy / Drama / Romance | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 12.10.2003 | Updated On: 01.03.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.2K | Visits: 804 | Status: Work In Progress
Okay this is my first fic and I'm not really sure what the heck I'm doin so if you dont like it tell me what I can do to make it better and if ya do like it that's great tell me, just email me or reveiw PLEASE.
This is basicaly gonna be a Hiten/Kagome fic I think. I've got some other friends who are written Hiten/Kagome fics to but I felt like writting one cause I got bored and I wanted to see if I could write at all or if it would suck. Im gonna try, plus I'm a big Hiten fan,he's soooo hot (BUT NOT AS MUCH AS KOUGA ^_^) .Right now I have no idea where this story is going or what the plot really is. I'm kinda making this up as I go cause I couldnt really think of any good ideas at the moment but i'll get some soon ^_^ promise. Uh I guess it takes place when Kagome gets kidnapped by the thunder brothers and Inuyasha is being a big dumbass. I just hope I don't bash him to bad I'm kinda mad at him right now cause I've been watching the show on cartoon network. Okay I guess I really do need to shut up and just write>oh and I'm sorry for any misspelling or misuse of grammar fyi i can't spell for shit but i'll try @_@
PLEASE REVEIW ^_^
disclamer: I do not own Inuyasha or its charactors
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Hiten watched as the sky grew darker, he was eager for his younger brother Manten to return from hunting.They had sucessfully retrieved another shard of the Shikon no Tama and he could feel his power incresing daily. His father would have been proud of them both. Together Hiten and Manten ruled the skies and they were unstoppable.Once his brother came back they would go scouting for more jewel shards. Hiten wanted to increse their power as much as possible.Hiten sat up and gazed at the death valley that lay below his home high in the clouds atop the enormous mountain.He scanned the skies for his brother but there was but nothing but but an endless horizon flat.Hiten became impacient and went inside to rest, he would wait until his brother returned but in the mean time he would rest.
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Kagome" INUYASHA... can we rest we've been walkimg non-stop since this morning. I dont even sense any shards. You have got to be hungry....ugh I brought ramen."
Inuyasha's ears perked up at the mere mention of ramen and he stopped by a stream.
Kagome`That seemed to get his attetion good thing too cause I'm exhausted "phew" 'I wished he would just relax more instead of driving me nonstop` "hmp" `stupid jerk all he thinks about is himself, its just jewel shards and ramen thats ALL that matters to him.`
Inuyasha"You weak humans tire to easily but I suspose I have to let you rest and I am kinda hungry"
kagome"Ugh you're such a jerk."Kagome threw back her head in mental frustrtion and fatiuge.
Inuyasha"Feh."Inuyasha scarfed down his ramen and seated himself in the nearest tree.
Kagome sighed as she prepared her own ramen , she had just sat done to eat then all of the sudden there was a noise behind her.
(okay im gonna shorten this up a bit cause im friggin tired plus most of you guys already know what happens)
Shippo"GIVE ME ALL THE SHARDS YOU POSSES OR SUFFER THE CONCIEQUINCES"
The young kitsune floated in the air as he tried to appaer menacing but was sadly failing.^-^
(oh yea im also gonna change the part where the thunder brothers kill shippo parents)
Inuyasha"Feh stupid kid....HEY get back here with my jewel shards you little twurp...AHHHH I'LL GET YOU"
Inuyasha chased Shippo then grabbed him and shook the shards from Shippo.Inuyasha bonked Shippo on the head then dropped him.-_-*ouch*
Shippo"Owww that stings Kagome."
Kagome"Sorry I just don't want that bump to get infected, INUYASHA you jerk you shouldnt have been so rough on the poor kid.... argh SIT!!!"
Inuyasha" Ahhhhh what the hell was that for was that for?"
Kagome ignored inuyasha and continued tending to Shippo"So what happened to you Shippo ?"
"It was the Thunder Brothers, they stole a Shikon shard that my father gave me before he died , my mother died a long time ago though.Thats why I needed the shard to lure them in and steal my shard back."said Shippo gloomily.
Kagome" Oh Shippo I'm so sorry i'll take care of you from now on hows that sound huh?"
Shippos eyes lit up he really liked Kagome and she would make a great mother"Rrreaally Ragome you would do that for me?"
Kagome"Of course Shippo it's the least I can do since your parents are gone, I promise I will take good care of you."
Shippo was so happy" Oh Kagome thank you SOO much you're the nicest person I've ever met"
Kagome eyes gleamed and twinkled with joy .She couldn't help but be overjoyed at seeing the young kitsune so happy." Thank you Shippo and your welcome."^_^
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@ I REDID IT>>>is it anybetter Im sooooooo SORRY about it I didnt even proofread it before i put up this chapter but the next one will be better!@ ^_^
Okay I know I'm changing things up a bit but hey this my story and I'm in control hehe I rule all.
So any way did ya like it. I didn't plan on stoping right here but my dad wants the computer and i'm tired > okay I want you honest opions and you can give me any kind of plots/ideas for the story.
I hope you liked it ^_^ PLEASE REVEIW or you can email me I wanna know what you think I just hope it doesnt suck and I dont get stuck in the story cause I have no idea what to put up next .
What I want to write seems so old and unoriginal so i'll try to come up with something new
and i'll update as soon as I can its just that all of my EVIL teachers have to give me a freakin project/presentation/ essay thing in every subject. -_-
bye for now
Kougasgirl05
P.S. HEY DON"T FORGET TO REVEIW
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This is basicaly gonna be a Hiten/Kagome fic I think. I've got some other friends who are written Hiten/Kagome fics to but I felt like writting one cause I got bored and I wanted to see if I could write at all or if it would suck. Im gonna try, plus I'm a big Hiten fan,he's soooo hot (BUT NOT AS MUCH AS KOUGA ^_^) .Right now I have no idea where this story is going or what the plot really is. I'm kinda making this up as I go cause I couldnt really think of any good ideas at the moment but i'll get some soon ^_^ promise. Uh I guess it takes place when Kagome gets kidnapped by the thunder brothers and Inuyasha is being a big dumbass. I just hope I don't bash him to bad I'm kinda mad at him right now cause I've been watching the show on cartoon network. Okay I guess I really do need to shut up and just write>oh and I'm sorry for any misspelling or misuse of grammar fyi i can't spell for shit but i'll try @_@
PLEASE REVEIW ^_^
disclamer: I do not own Inuyasha or its charactors
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Hiten watched as the sky grew darker, he was eager for his younger brother Manten to return from hunting.They had sucessfully retrieved another shard of the Shikon no Tama and he could feel his power incresing daily. His father would have been proud of them both. Together Hiten and Manten ruled the skies and they were unstoppable.Once his brother came back they would go scouting for more jewel shards. Hiten wanted to increse their power as much as possible.Hiten sat up and gazed at the death valley that lay below his home high in the clouds atop the enormous mountain.He scanned the skies for his brother but there was but nothing but but an endless horizon flat.Hiten became impacient and went inside to rest, he would wait until his brother returned but in the mean time he would rest.
!@#!$!@$%@$%^#%^&&*%^&*%#%@%@%^#$%#$%^#$%^#$^&
Kagome" INUYASHA... can we rest we've been walkimg non-stop since this morning. I dont even sense any shards. You have got to be hungry....ugh I brought ramen."
Inuyasha's ears perked up at the mere mention of ramen and he stopped by a stream.
Kagome`That seemed to get his attetion good thing too cause I'm exhausted "phew" 'I wished he would just relax more instead of driving me nonstop` "hmp" `stupid jerk all he thinks about is himself, its just jewel shards and ramen thats ALL that matters to him.`
Inuyasha"You weak humans tire to easily but I suspose I have to let you rest and I am kinda hungry"
kagome"Ugh you're such a jerk."Kagome threw back her head in mental frustrtion and fatiuge.
Inuyasha"Feh."Inuyasha scarfed down his ramen and seated himself in the nearest tree.
Kagome sighed as she prepared her own ramen , she had just sat done to eat then all of the sudden there was a noise behind her.
(okay im gonna shorten this up a bit cause im friggin tired plus most of you guys already know what happens)
Shippo"GIVE ME ALL THE SHARDS YOU POSSES OR SUFFER THE CONCIEQUINCES"
The young kitsune floated in the air as he tried to appaer menacing but was sadly failing.^-^
(oh yea im also gonna change the part where the thunder brothers kill shippo parents)
Inuyasha"Feh stupid kid....HEY get back here with my jewel shards you little twurp...AHHHH I'LL GET YOU"
Inuyasha chased Shippo then grabbed him and shook the shards from Shippo.Inuyasha bonked Shippo on the head then dropped him.-_-*ouch*
Shippo"Owww that stings Kagome."
Kagome"Sorry I just don't want that bump to get infected, INUYASHA you jerk you shouldnt have been so rough on the poor kid.... argh SIT!!!"
Inuyasha" Ahhhhh what the hell was that for was that for?"
Kagome ignored inuyasha and continued tending to Shippo"So what happened to you Shippo ?"
"It was the Thunder Brothers, they stole a Shikon shard that my father gave me before he died , my mother died a long time ago though.Thats why I needed the shard to lure them in and steal my shard back."said Shippo gloomily.
Kagome" Oh Shippo I'm so sorry i'll take care of you from now on hows that sound huh?"
Shippos eyes lit up he really liked Kagome and she would make a great mother"Rrreaally Ragome you would do that for me?"
Kagome"Of course Shippo it's the least I can do since your parents are gone, I promise I will take good care of you."
Shippo was so happy" Oh Kagome thank you SOO much you're the nicest person I've ever met"
Kagome eyes gleamed and twinkled with joy .She couldn't help but be overjoyed at seeing the young kitsune so happy." Thank you Shippo and your welcome."^_^
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@ I REDID IT>>>is it anybetter Im sooooooo SORRY about it I didnt even proofread it before i put up this chapter but the next one will be better!@ ^_^
Okay I know I'm changing things up a bit but hey this my story and I'm in control hehe I rule all.
So any way did ya like it. I didn't plan on stoping right here but my dad wants the computer and i'm tired > okay I want you honest opions and you can give me any kind of plots/ideas for the story.
I hope you liked it ^_^ PLEASE REVEIW or you can email me I wanna know what you think I just hope it doesnt suck and I dont get stuck in the story cause I have no idea what to put up next .
What I want to write seems so old and unoriginal so i'll try to come up with something new
and i'll update as soon as I can its just that all of my EVIL teachers have to give me a freakin project/presentation/ essay thing in every subject. -_-
bye for now
Kougasgirl05
P.S. HEY DON"T FORGET TO REVEIW
JUST CLICK
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