InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ When a Heart Melts ❯ The Real Threat ( Chapter 11 )
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Fireash: Hi everyone. My story is now at mediaminer.org and fanfiction.net. You know what? I
love my story at fanfiction.net. It got five reviews in one day. That is so cool!!!! This update is
for all of my new fans at fanfiction.net. :D
Fanfiction.net responses---
keni p. : Sorry about the cliffhangers. You will get used to them though. If I don't leave a
cliffhanger people think it is the end. Go figure. Glad you like my story so far. Thanks for the
review.
RShield16: Thanks. This story has been in my head for a while. I tried to put it on fanfiction
earlier but it didn't like my format. I finally fixed that. Umm...let's just say that he left Jaken in
the west. He was in a hurry and wasn't paying attention. I'll add Ah-Un for you. Thanks for the
review.
sugafaeriegurl: Thanks for the review. Glad the lemon was ok. Hope you enjoy the rest of the
story.
Silverninja: Thanks for the praise. I do plan to finish this don't worry. There will be a few more
twists that noone is expecting. After this one is done I will try to write more. I love them
together too. :D
Manslayer-of-Hades: Thanks for the warning. I'll keep that in mind. Glad you like the story so
far. Sorry about the cliffies. They help keep the suspense up. If everyone knew what was going
to happen next why read the story. I understand though, I hate reading cliffies but I love to write
them. Please don't flame me. Hehe. Thanks for adding me to your favorites. It is an honor. :D
Nikkler: Do you really think Sesshomaru would kill over that easily? He's too cute to die. Hehe.
Glad you like my story so far.
Mediaminer.org responses----
Lil'Inu: Thanks for being consistent with your reviews. I really appreciate them. I did put angst
in the description. They aren't fighting though but there will be some sad parts. Alas this
chapter is one of them so you are warned. I don't like Kikyo when she is made of clay. She was
ok in her human life (sorta).
Thanks for the reviews and see...I updated really fast. They motivate me to finish typing this.
Disclaimer: la la la la...sigh still don't own them. Not today, not yesterday, and not tomorrow.
Too expensive :)
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Chapter 11
The Real Threat
Rin walked back into the castle to rest. She had to trust that the warriors would take care
of everything. ‘I am worrying over nothing. Sesshomaru can handle himself. But why won't
this uneasy feeling leave?' She glanced towards the window and sighed.
It was a few days later when Sesshomaru reached the area thought to be the threat. His
army was having trouble fighting them off. The southern rulers where dragon youkai. They
were cunning and had a tough hide. His father had died sealing away the previous taiyoukai of
the south. It didn't appear that the new taiyoukai was in this battle. ‘Oh well. That just makes it
easier for me to get rid of them.' Within seconds he stood in his transformed state. A few of the
southern youkai hesitated. They knew that the Demon Lord of the West was not to be
underestimated. Slowly easing out of their fear, they did something that Sesshomaru wasn't
prepared for. They all stopped fighting with their opponent and turned. He paused, waiting for
them to make the next move. In a flash they sprang upon the western taiyoukai. His generals
charged in to remove the dragons from their ruler.
Hours later the battle was over. For some unknown reason the dragon youkai stopped
fighting and ran away. ‘Why would they leave? The battle had barely begun?' Sesshomaru
thought confused. Neither side was losing. He got a sick feeling in the pit of his stomach when
he heard a vicious chuckle. The taiyoukai looked down at a dyinging dragon. "Ha hahaha... you
left your mate unprotected. You have been deceived. Hahahaha...it will be your downfall." The
dragon was about to laugh again, but the laughter died on his lips as Sesshomaru withdrew his
sword and cut off his head.
The dragon was correct though. It was faint but he could sense a large amount of youkai
near his castle. He transformed once again. He had been injured but he didn't care. ‘How could
I have been such a fool? Please, if anyone is listening, let me make it back on time.
Meanwhile back at the castle, Rin was being hidden by the servants. The castle grounds
were overrun by enemy youkai. They were from the North seeking revenge. They had made a
deal with the dragons to cause the fall of the west. While the taiyoukai was away fighting the
dragons, they were going to capture his mate and rid him of his heir. They would take care of
Sesshomaru afterwards. One by one Sesshomaru's warriors fell. They had made a valiant
attempt though. Each fought till they gave their dying breath. The tiger youkai flooded into the
castle killing any servant that got in the way. They found Rin and decided to have a little fun
with her first. Sesshomaru would regret killing their ruler and humiliating their race. "Come
here little puppy. Don't you wanna play? Hehehehe!" one of them snarled. He pulled her
roughly out of the hidden closet and dragged her outside. ‘I am not going without a fight.' Her
eyes turned read and she transformed into her dog form. Motherly instincts to protect her pup
and just woman hormones in general fueled her anger. It made her quicker and stronger than she
would normally be. Before they got a chance to transform as well she began to crush them with
her jaws. Her poison killing those that survived the initial bite. Unfortunately there was too
many to kill them all before they transformed. Rin managed to kill a few in their demon forms as
well before she was knocked unconscious thus reverting her back to her humanoid form. "She'll
regret doing that. She will die slowly...hehehehehe! Sesshomaru you have probably figured out
our plan by now but you'll never make it in time." The tiger youkai picked Rin up and placed
her on his shoulder and headed north.
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End of chapter 11
Ack!!! I know that was a huge cliffy. Sorry!!! No one is dead yet. Well except for the extras
but they are just there for the blood shed. Still nowhere near the end. Maybe the middle of the
story. I have a lot of twists to add. Please read and review. I think I should expect a few flames.
Fireash
love my story at fanfiction.net. It got five reviews in one day. That is so cool!!!! This update is
for all of my new fans at fanfiction.net. :D
Fanfiction.net responses---
keni p. : Sorry about the cliffhangers. You will get used to them though. If I don't leave a
cliffhanger people think it is the end. Go figure. Glad you like my story so far. Thanks for the
review.
RShield16: Thanks. This story has been in my head for a while. I tried to put it on fanfiction
earlier but it didn't like my format. I finally fixed that. Umm...let's just say that he left Jaken in
the west. He was in a hurry and wasn't paying attention. I'll add Ah-Un for you. Thanks for the
review.
sugafaeriegurl: Thanks for the review. Glad the lemon was ok. Hope you enjoy the rest of the
story.
Silverninja: Thanks for the praise. I do plan to finish this don't worry. There will be a few more
twists that noone is expecting. After this one is done I will try to write more. I love them
together too. :D
Manslayer-of-Hades: Thanks for the warning. I'll keep that in mind. Glad you like the story so
far. Sorry about the cliffies. They help keep the suspense up. If everyone knew what was going
to happen next why read the story. I understand though, I hate reading cliffies but I love to write
them. Please don't flame me. Hehe. Thanks for adding me to your favorites. It is an honor. :D
Nikkler: Do you really think Sesshomaru would kill over that easily? He's too cute to die. Hehe.
Glad you like my story so far.
Mediaminer.org responses----
Lil'Inu: Thanks for being consistent with your reviews. I really appreciate them. I did put angst
in the description. They aren't fighting though but there will be some sad parts. Alas this
chapter is one of them so you are warned. I don't like Kikyo when she is made of clay. She was
ok in her human life (sorta).
Thanks for the reviews and see...I updated really fast. They motivate me to finish typing this.
Disclaimer: la la la la...sigh still don't own them. Not today, not yesterday, and not tomorrow.
Too expensive :)
____________________________________________
Chapter 11
The Real Threat
Rin walked back into the castle to rest. She had to trust that the warriors would take care
of everything. ‘I am worrying over nothing. Sesshomaru can handle himself. But why won't
this uneasy feeling leave?' She glanced towards the window and sighed.
It was a few days later when Sesshomaru reached the area thought to be the threat. His
army was having trouble fighting them off. The southern rulers where dragon youkai. They
were cunning and had a tough hide. His father had died sealing away the previous taiyoukai of
the south. It didn't appear that the new taiyoukai was in this battle. ‘Oh well. That just makes it
easier for me to get rid of them.' Within seconds he stood in his transformed state. A few of the
southern youkai hesitated. They knew that the Demon Lord of the West was not to be
underestimated. Slowly easing out of their fear, they did something that Sesshomaru wasn't
prepared for. They all stopped fighting with their opponent and turned. He paused, waiting for
them to make the next move. In a flash they sprang upon the western taiyoukai. His generals
charged in to remove the dragons from their ruler.
Hours later the battle was over. For some unknown reason the dragon youkai stopped
fighting and ran away. ‘Why would they leave? The battle had barely begun?' Sesshomaru
thought confused. Neither side was losing. He got a sick feeling in the pit of his stomach when
he heard a vicious chuckle. The taiyoukai looked down at a dyinging dragon. "Ha hahaha... you
left your mate unprotected. You have been deceived. Hahahaha...it will be your downfall." The
dragon was about to laugh again, but the laughter died on his lips as Sesshomaru withdrew his
sword and cut off his head.
The dragon was correct though. It was faint but he could sense a large amount of youkai
near his castle. He transformed once again. He had been injured but he didn't care. ‘How could
I have been such a fool? Please, if anyone is listening, let me make it back on time.
Meanwhile back at the castle, Rin was being hidden by the servants. The castle grounds
were overrun by enemy youkai. They were from the North seeking revenge. They had made a
deal with the dragons to cause the fall of the west. While the taiyoukai was away fighting the
dragons, they were going to capture his mate and rid him of his heir. They would take care of
Sesshomaru afterwards. One by one Sesshomaru's warriors fell. They had made a valiant
attempt though. Each fought till they gave their dying breath. The tiger youkai flooded into the
castle killing any servant that got in the way. They found Rin and decided to have a little fun
with her first. Sesshomaru would regret killing their ruler and humiliating their race. "Come
here little puppy. Don't you wanna play? Hehehehe!" one of them snarled. He pulled her
roughly out of the hidden closet and dragged her outside. ‘I am not going without a fight.' Her
eyes turned read and she transformed into her dog form. Motherly instincts to protect her pup
and just woman hormones in general fueled her anger. It made her quicker and stronger than she
would normally be. Before they got a chance to transform as well she began to crush them with
her jaws. Her poison killing those that survived the initial bite. Unfortunately there was too
many to kill them all before they transformed. Rin managed to kill a few in their demon forms as
well before she was knocked unconscious thus reverting her back to her humanoid form. "She'll
regret doing that. She will die slowly...hehehehehe! Sesshomaru you have probably figured out
our plan by now but you'll never make it in time." The tiger youkai picked Rin up and placed
her on his shoulder and headed north.
_________________________________________________
End of chapter 11
Ack!!! I know that was a huge cliffy. Sorry!!! No one is dead yet. Well except for the extras
but they are just there for the blood shed. Still nowhere near the end. Maybe the middle of the
story. I have a lot of twists to add. Please read and review. I think I should expect a few flames.
Fireash