Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne Fan Fiction ❯ The Pain in Rain ❯ Power of the Night ( Chapter 1 )

[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]

Ok, this is my first real drama fanfic(and the first one on this site) so it's probably gonna be flawed all over. And I'm not very good at english either, so that just makes it worse ^^.
So here goes nothing. The story begins, afther a big battle with most of the demons, who are on the edge of destroying the world. In the battle they have blocked the sun, tore up most of the ground and killed all of Maron's closest friends.

1. Power of the night


Kamikaze Kaitou Jeanne was kneeling on the church tower's floor, holding Chiaki's head in her lap. Jeanne D’ Ark looked at the sight with tears in her eyes. Kaitou Jeanne was crying as she was soaked from the hard rain falling on her.
“I understand your pain, but please don’t do this to me! Stay strong! We are almost trough! If we kill their leader, they'll have no organization and we can barrish them.” said Jeanne D’Ark.
Kaitou Jeanne didn’t seem to listen to her:” They are cruel and heartless!”
“That’s why we have to stop them! You can’t give up on me Maron!” Jeanne D’Ark pleaded.
Kaitou Jeanne didn’t listen to her and Jeanne D’ Ark started to fade away.
“Maron...! Maron...! Please...!”Jeanne D’ Ark cried on.
Kaitou Jeanne looked at her:” No more!” she replied and transformed back to
Maron.
Jeanne looked shocked:” You can’t do this! You are the only one who can save all this.Think of your mother and father! Think of your friends! Think of Miyako, Fin and Access! For gods sake think of Chiaki! Did they die for nothing?!!!”
“There is too much pain, that I can’t erase. I won’t do any more! I'm burned out!” Maron turned away from Jeanne as she disappeared.
All that she could say was a fading away scream for Marons name.
Maron got home. She still had the habit to check for mail. Though she knew, that there couldn't be anything in it.
She went up to the seventh floor and to her apartment. She fell down to her bed and was still crying:” Cruel and heartless beasts!”
~~~~~~~~~~~next morning~~~~~~~~~~~~
Maron woke up because of birds singing; a good sing. She was still in one piece; that’s a good sing. And the sun was out; another good sing.
She got up from her bed and ate breakfast. She wished this could be a usual school day and that last night was just a bad dream.
She was already out the door when she got a bang on the head from Miyako:” So the sleepyhead woke up once in a life time too early!”
Maron blinked:” Miyako?”
“Who did you wait for? Britney Spears?” she asked whit sarcasm in her voice.
“What’s all the noise about?” asked Chiaki as coming out of his apartment, yawning.
Maron got a lot happier:” Chiaki!” she jelled and kissed the guy from all her heart.
Miyako was looking really annoyed:” Maron, do you have to do it here? If you'd rather be doing that then going to school, then I advise you to get a room!”
Chiaki looked surprised:” Nice to see you too. I never thought you'd be kissing ME, not the other way around.”
“I had the worst nightmare of my life time. I saw you, Miyako, Fin, Access and Yamato die in front of my eyes because you wore protecting me from the demons,” clamed Maron.
Miyako looked worried:” Maybe you should let a doctor look at your head. You had a pretty nasty fall. It is even a miracle that you’re still alive! But did you go to see a doctor? No! You claim you’re fine!”
Maron looked confused:” I fell from where?”
Miyako looked really concerned:” Now she doesn’t remember falling down from her balcony! We should really get her to see you father, Chiaki!”
Maron was still confused:” But I fell from the balcony a month ago!”
Now Chiaki was concerned:” You fell from the balcony two days ago, don’t you remember? I know you're a tough girl and Jeanne is protecting you, but maybe it's best to let my father take a look at you?”
Maron thought there’s something fishy going on:” What day is it?”
Miyako looked at the newspaper:” It’s the seventh of March.”
Maron[That’s it! It was seventh of April the last time I remember!]
Miyako screamed:” Even if you do wake up early you still get us late for school!”
Maron breathed out her words as they were running to school: "About seeing that doctor thing; I thought you wouldn't let your dad anywhere near me!"
Packelamao was on the class door to great them:” You are late again!”
There was something familiar about this day to Maron, so before the teacher could say anything else Maron said:” Packelamao, Chiaki can’t dig, because he has a bad wound on his shoulder.”
The teacher looked at her with wide eyes:” How did you know that I’m gonna put him to dig?”
Maron looked around; everyone was staring at her.
She blushed:” I saw the dead flowers in the garden?”
The teacher looked at her weirdly:” Chiaki is this true, what Maron says?”
Chiaki was still staring at Maron, but nodded.
The teacher sighed:” Well I guess we have to think of a new punishment for Chiaki. But you and Miyako still have to dig!”
Maron and Miyako bowed:” Yes, miss!”
The teacher sighed again:” Now get to your places!”
(The class goes on normally. Except Maron knowing every answer to every
question)
The bell rang and Maron, Miyako and Chiaki went outside.
Chiaki was watching Maron for the whole class time and Miyako was sending
little letters to Maron asking how she did it.
Miyako looked around, if anyone is spying on them:” So...are you gonna tell
us how you did it?”
Maron was looking at a tree:” Have you ever got a feeling that you have
done all this before?”
As she said those words she went to the tree and give it a few harsh bangs; Yamato fell down.
Chiaki was still looking at Maron:” This is so weird! There must be an explanation to this, a normal one! Not that you have lived this all trough already.”
Maron sighed:” I know that this night Miyako is gonna jell at her father and you are gonna be at my place for the night.”
Miyako was surprised, but didn’t let it show:” I always jell at my father and after you said it I’m pretty sure Chiaki is gonna stay at your place for the night just from politeness.”
Maron tried again:” He has flowers for me in his room and a box of chocolate that I hate!”
Chiaki was thinking:” I thought you said you liked it the last time I gave it to you!”
Yamato was trying to sneak away before someone notices him there.
Maron was with her back to him:” And I know that Yamato is sneaking away right now!”
Miyako catched him and looked at Maron again:” There must be some kind of a trick you’re using!”
At those words Maron felt the world fade away from her.
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Maron heard whispering around her, when she opened her eyes she saw Chiaki, Fin and Access.
Chiaki looked relieved:” About time! Are you ok?”
She looked around. She was in a comfortable room, what looked really old and homey at the same time.
Fin came in front of Chiaki and touched Marons forehead:” She is still burning hot.”
Maron looked confused:” What day is it today?”
Access was the quickest to answer:” Seventh of May. What then?”
Maron was still looking around:” Nothing. How long have I been sleeping?”[It’s the same dated, but a moth after this]
Chiaki answered:” For a moth, sence the accident.”
Maron looked at Chiaki:” If I tell you something, would you believe me?”

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So, that's it for today. Please review, and I'd like to get the bad comments as well as the good ones. Tell me, what you like and what you don't. I'll try to improve and come up with a better one. Well, time to work on the second chapter. See you later,
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