Kirby: Right Back At Ya! Fan Fiction ❯ Revenge of the Metaknight - The Full Story ❯ Chapter 1: The Launch ( Chapter 1 )

[ P - Pre-Teen ]

Kirby Super Star
The Revenge Of The Metaknight

New Characters:

Gim: The chief engineer onboard the Halberd, being mechanical himself he well understands the operation of the Halberds Main Reactor.
Jet: Navigations officer
Bio spark: Security officer, he is responsible for assigning people to places during an attack

------------------------------------------------------------------------ --------------------Chaper 2 - Kirbys Attack

Kirby, who was having a nice dream of a huge turkey dinner was awoken by a sudden knock at the door. He floated over and opened it, standing in the morning light was waddle doo.

Waddle Doo: Kirby come quick! The world is in danger!

Kirby still rubbing his eyes looks at Doo as if hes heard that one before

Kirby: *yawn* Whats going on now?

Waddle Doo: Its Metaknight, hes about to launch his gigantic battleship, if we hurry we can still stop him!!

Kirby: Is there time for breakfast?

Waddle Doo: Not really no.. come on!!

Waddle doo dragged kirby out the door towards a nearby warp star, hopping on he and kirby sped towards the island where metaknights fortress was located.

Onboard the completed Halberd's Bridge, Meta chain, Meta Axe, Metaknight, Captain Falcon and Waddle Dee are all in a large room with computers and guages, Falcon is stationed at a large wheel, Chain and Axe are at various stations and Metaknight is on a platform a bit above the main entrence to the bridge with a row of computers in front of him, the windows outside are covered by a large metal plate

Captain Falcon: All stations are reporting at the ready sir!

Gim: This is Chief Engineer Gim reporting, the reactor is online and ready to power the ship!

Jet: This is Navigations officer jet reporting, course laid in, target, King Dededes castle

Bio Spark: This is bio spark reporting, all defense teams standing by

Metaknight: Excellent, begin pre launch preperations

Captain falcon grabs a microphone to the side

Captian Falcon: Attention all hands, Prepare for launch, lock down all systems and man stations.

Metaknight: Set reactor to 300%

Gim: Reactor at 150% and rising sir

Metaknight: Power main engines, prepare upword thrusters

A loud rumbling occurs as the engines of the ship begin coming online

Metaknight: Now then.. open the blast windows and unfurl the sails

Outside the ship massive sails shaped like wings extend off of the sides of the ship, people are running on the deck, doing final checks etc. Also the metal shield in front of the bridge windows opens up, the view from the bridge being of the "Beak" Section of the halberd

Gim: Main reactor is at 300%, Engines are 47% charged

Metaknight: soon kirby.. soon.. i will have my revenge



As kirby and waddle doo raced towards the fortress, their expressions changed to shock as they saw the massive doors of metaknights fortress open to reveal the halberd, nearly afloat

Kirby: that things HUGE!!

Waddle Doo: oh no.. we're too late!!

Kirby: How can we get onboard that thing?

Waddle Doo: Well theres hatches all over the ship but.. kirby no, its covered in turrets, youll never get through!!

Kirby: Watch me



Back onboard the halberd, Alarms were going off and the lights in the control room had dimmed to a low red

Metaknight: Attention all hands, man your battlestations, red alert, kirby is approaching

Captain Falcon: Deck gunners take your stations, adjust balance to..... 000003

Gim: Antigravity plants 1,2 and 3 are operational, solar panels operating at 100% effecieny

Bio spark: Gunners in position!

Metaknight: All Hands FIRE!!!!



Kirby and waddle Doo race towards the ship when suddenly machine gun emplacements rise out of the deck as the crew begin firing at kirby.

Kirby: Hold on!



Back on the bridge the crew was perplexed as to what kirby was about to do

Meta Chain: What is he doing?

Captain Falcon: I dont really know..

Waddle Dee: HES GOING STRAIGHT FOR US!!

Kirby rides the warp star directly towards the halbird, zooming over the beak and whizzing by the command bridge. The force of their pass nearly broke the windows to the bridge. The force even knocked captain falcon, who was standing, to the floor.

Captain Falcon: HOLY COW!!

As they passed along the side of the ship, dodging bullets and lasers its size becoming all too apparent. Eventually they land along a balcony type platform near the rear of the ship, the landing takes out a few deck gunners.

Waddle Doo: Come on, the engines are this way

Waddle doo opens a hatch for kirby as they both race inside, a maze of corridors and some crew member snacks later they made it to the rear of the ship. They enter a pitch black room, with no lights of any sort.

Waddle Doo: this.. should be the engine deck..

Suddenly they hear a click, as the ground beneath them begins rising. The ceiling above them begins pulling away to reveal sunlight.

Kirby: I dont like this..

Waddle Doo: Neither do I..

They come up directly behind the engines as the elevator locks into place in the middle of the deck.

Kirby: That wasn't too bad

Captain Falcon: oh kirby...

Kirby and Waddle Doo turn towards the voice, but all they see is the orange tint of the morning sky reflecting off the shining metal armor of the halberd

Captain Falcon: Im on an intercom you idiot!

If they had turned around again maybe they would have noticed the shadowy figure approaching their position on the deck above the engines.

Captain Falcon: Metaknight has told me all about you.. so we've arranged a little surprise

Suddenly without warning the shadowy figure, with a massive leap bursts over the metal guard rail on the deck he was on, landing with a large metal clank on the deck. Kirby and Waddle Doo turn around to see a massive, and very deadly looking mechanical beast resembling a lobster. Its blue glass eyes zoom in on kirby with a bit of a mechanical hum. On its back was a missile launcher, and on its..err rear.. was a high powered rocket engine.

Captain Falcon: Introducing heavy lobster kirby, its time to meet your maker!!

At this the mechanical lobsters claws came into view, glinting in the morning sun. A sound of gears turning could be heard, and its claws opened, revealing dangerous looking laser cannons.

Kirby: What the heck is that thing?!?!

Waddle Doo: I uh.. kinda forgot to tell you.. sorry..

Kirby: Forgot to tell me what?!?

Waddle Doo: Heavy Lobster is what they reffered to as Mechanical Anti Kirby Infantry, they designed it to take you on!

With a charging noise the cannons emit a glow then fire 4 rapid fire blue rings.

Waddle Doo: Duck

Kirby: No kidding!!

Kirby and waddle doo scramble out of the way of the shots, they just make it as the energy shots fly off into the distance. It fires again, this time, kirby was hit, the force of the shot knocking kirby back to the safety rail at the edge of the ship. Then almost a hissing sound... the lobsters rocket engine was charging

Waddle Doo: Kirby!!

Kirby was still dazed when the lobster fired its engine up, with remarkable speed it propelled towards kirby. He just regained his senses in time to barely roll to the side to make it out of the way in time. Heavy lobster impacted the guard rail at high velocty, and with a metal clanging sound it broke like a twig. Waddle Doo fires his wave of energy at it, but there is no apparent damage to it.It then proceeds to turn around and fire some missiles from its back towards kirby, the resulting explosions making small holes in the deck. Kirby attempts to swallow some of them and spit them back at it, but the damage is minimal if even that.

Back in the control room the fight was being put through to several monitors. Waddle dee is parading around while captain falcon is working a remote control. Statistical details on both fighters were shown, Rate of attack, percent chance of hit, fatigue, and of course, betting odds (Keep in mind since its metaknights ship the odds of kirby winning were 99 to 1)

Captain Falcon: Gim get a repair team to that part of the hull!!

Waddle Dee: WOO HOO!!! Look at kirby go!! GO KIRBY!!

Captain falcon proceeds to hit Dee over the head

Captain Falcon: We're cheering for Heavy Lobster, Dee!

Waddle Dee: oh.. go heavy lobster!!

In the mean time metaknight is on a video chat with Gim

Metaknight: Are you ready?

Gim: Yes sir.. all systems ready

Metaknight: ok.. wait for my word..

Metaknight watches the fight, kirby and H.L. are duking it out in front of one of the main engine nozzles, specifically the number 4 engine

Metaknight: wait... wait.. NOW!!

Gim yells at a person to the right "MAIN ENGINES ENGAGE!!"



Waddle Doo: KIRBY LOOK OUT!!!

Waddle Doo cried out to kirby but it was too late, the main engines were just brought online. Within seconds Heavy Lobster, Kirby and Waddle Doo were thrown into the ocean. And back on the bridge the lights had resumed to normal, and a cheer arose from the different sections of the ship


Captain Falcon: That actually worked?? HAHAH!! WE DID IT!! We've done it folks, break out the champagne, we just repelled an attack from kirby!!

Metaknight: Indeed.. this is a proud day.. with him out of the way dream land is mine, lock in the course for Mt Dedede, we're going to pay the king a visit.

Waddle Dee: YahoOOOOOooooo!!

The flaps on the halberds wings lock into place as the whole ship makes a huge U-turn and sped off towards King Dededes castle. As for kirby, him and waddle doo plummet towards the ocean.. from the height of the Halberd it would be virtually impossible for anything to survive... virtually........

This is the second chapter in my fanfic series,like it? Hate it? Think i should stop talking like this? please R&R, and just for note, i do not own Metaknight, Kirby, Waddle dee, any of the characters for that matter or the halberd, if i did own the halberd you would see me flying around taking over the world with it :P
Chapter 3 will be up soon, i just need to make some changes to it

Thanks for reading, hope you enjoy
-Hal Emmerich