Mahou Sensei Negima! Fan Fiction ❯ Makie's Revenge ❯ Chapter 5

Makie’s Revenge
Chapter 5 Later, at the lab, Satomi and Chao finished up the chip.  It took shorter than they had imagined.  However, they were visited by another girl, Asuna. “Hey, brainiacs!  I want to know what’s going on.”  She shouted, “What do you think you are doing?” “Asuna, what brings you here?”  Chao asked her. “I want to know if you had a part of this disaster recently,” Asuna replied. “We were just finishing up a chip that can obey orders with a simple command,” Satomi stated. “A-HA!  I knew it!  YOU ARE IN THIS DISASTER!!!”  Asuna shrieked. She grabbed Satomi by the lab coat and shook her up. “Asuna, what are you talking about???”  She shouted. Asuna let go and started to hyperventilate.  She then explained about the situation, in which Makie was controlling her friends and the abduction of Ayaka. “So, you’re saying that this chip would control humans, too?”  Chao asked. “Uh, yeah!  I think that stupid chip caused them to become lifeless zombies!  And I can tell, because Konoka played every Zombie Killer game ever made!” Chao glared at Satomi, “So… it doesn’t work on humans, huh?” “Well, uh, I never knew it would control anybody; it was originally intended for Chachamaru & Evangeline!  We were to deliver it, but the original one was pilfered!” “Wait!  So you’re saying that the chip you first made was the original?”  Asuna asked. “It was… but we don’t know why,” Satomi replied, “And FYI, the scientific term for original is “Prototype”, Asuna.” Asuna thought, “Could it be that Konoka had the original chip?” “Asuna, we could help you disable the chip from your friends, but it may need some time.” Satomi then explained the chip’s purpose: “The chip, we dubbed it the “O.B. Chip” (Working Title), can control anybody, no matter what situation they are in.  Once lodged into a mechanical human, or otherwise, the subject is controlled by the person who first presents the chip to her.  Once the chip is in place, on a body part, it will never come off, unless the chip disables the process.  Once it does, the effects become null, but only by the person who recently controls her.” “So, Konoka and Setsuna were controlled… by Makie, and now…”  Asuna said. “Now she’s gonna control…”  Satomi added. “She’s controlling everybody!”  Chao shrieked. Asuna shook her head and asked, “Wait a minute!  I thought you said she would control someone with just that chip.  She is controlling two girls!” She then gasped with a mere, yet horrifying, thought. “Then, Ayaka is in trouble!!!” Satomi & Chao gasped. “Where is she now?”  Satomi demanded. Asuna said, “I saw her being dragged off by the Controlled Setsuna back to our dorms.” “So, she must be… at Ayaka’s dorm!”  Satomi said. Chao asked, “If what this chip does is true, we should be able to disable it somehow!” “We can’t!  Makie must’ve used her brain, or what little she had, to create replicas!  Working replicas!”  Satomi said. Asuna then cried, “Then we need to disable them manually!  I bet your doodads can help fix this.” Chao then said, “We do!  It’s not good, but try to use it wisely.” She presented a giant chrome blaster to Asuna. “Uh, dare I ask what the hell this is?”  She asked bluntly. “This blaster gun erases the program for the O.B. Chip,” Satomi declared, “If used properly, it will emit a rapid shot to the chip, disabling it permanently.” “Thanks!”  Asuna said, “I’ll try to find Ayaka, before she’s a mindless robot like Konoka & Setsuna.” “Though, incidentally, why would she do such a thing?”  Satomi asked. “The Mahora Academy students work in mysterious ways,” Asuna retorted, “But…” Later, at Makie’s room, Ayaka was tied to a chair, with her hands, arms, legs, and feet tied behind her back on the chair.  She struggled to break free, but the rope was too tight.  A spotlight shone onto her. “Makie!  What has gotten into you?”  She shouted, “Surely you jest that you used my “Professor Negi vinyl rope” to tie me up!  Although, I am amazed by your use of my items; but still…” Makie approached her and sneered at her. “Master, you are such a great girl,” Konoka said robotically, “You are like no other at being better than Ayaka!” Makie was not amused. “Master, you are such a great girl,” Setsuna said robotically, “You are like no other.  You are a success at being Makie.” “See, Konoka!”  Makie said to her, “It’s better if she was complimenting me!” “Acknowledged, master!”  Konoka bowed. “I should’ve known you’d put up with this,” she growled, “Makie Sasaki, you untie me this instant!!!” “No.” “What?  How dare you say that to your class rep, after all I have done for you???”  She cried. “Have you ever thought why I wanted to be noticeable?”  Makie asked, “Well, do you?” “Well, I would… but…” Ayaka said, as she pondered, “Don’t you think you should do things yourself?  Have you ever thought of doing things right for once?” Makie growled and slapped her in the face.  Ayaka felt the pain that she glared at Makie. “You… you have become what I feared:  Another Asuna!” “Shut up!  Do you know how much hell I’d put up with you???” “I never intended to be such a brat, but you are such a psychopath!  I’m telling the Dean about this!” “Tsk, tsk, tsk, Miss Ayaka Yukihiro, Class Representative; I am afraid I can’t let you do that, since Konoka is my witness.  If you tell on me, Konoka will vouch for me.” “Wh-what?” “Yes, master!”  Konoka added, “I am the Dean’s trustworthy granddaughter.  I am excelled in every way, but Makie has more skill than me, because she is flexible and swift.” “That’s right,” Makie smiled, “And well, I have bigger plans for you, Ayaka.  I want to give you a little present for all those years I have been with you.” “I meant what I said, Makie…”  Ayaka growled. She took a deep breath and smiled at her.  She then shouted at the top of her lungs: “YOU… NOW AND FOREVER… ARE A FAILURE TOWARDS MAKIE!!!” She panted, as Makie as shocked. “You, will always be a failure, you fool,” Ayaka added, “And tying me up, proves everything about you.” Makie was frightened by the remarks, but then turned her scared look to a very evil grin. “I knew you would say that,” She said calmly, “And that is why I want to hear those words again… for the last time!” She pulled out an O.B. chip she made and showed it to Ayaka.  She gasped and asked, “So, this pee-wee gadget is the reason my fellow classmates are vegetables?” “No… THIS IS!!!” Makie slapped her again.  The force of the slap caused Ayaka’s face to bleed a bit. She continued, “And, my dear class rep, when I place this chip on you, you will no longer be a burden to me.  No more rude remarks about me!  No more being a failure towards Makie!  Best of all, I own you!!! HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA!!!  WAH, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, HA!!!” Ayaka growled, “Damn you!!!  I will never be your slave!  NEVER!!!” “The time when you order me around is over!”  Makie shouted and grinned evilly, “You will be my slave!” She tried to place the chip on her head, but couldn’t.  She had other thoughts. “What are you doing?  Whatever it is you are doing, you’ll never get your way!” “I’m trying, but I don’t know where the perfect place to place the chip.  Now, if I were you, and I want to put something on you… then where would you place this chip in your near-perfect, Negi-obsessed, tender loving body?” “How about down your throat, Makie?”  A voice shouted. Asuna crashed through the window and aimed the blaster at Makie. “Asuna!  You came!”  Ayaka cried. “Damn!  I thought I would deal with you later!”  Makie snapped. “Game over, Sasaki!”  Asuna cried. But as she was about to fire, Makie used her ribbon and snatched the blaster out of her hand.  The blaster fell to the ground and rolled under the bed. “Useless piece of scientific junk,” Makie sneered, “Is that the best you could do?” “Asuna!  Do something, other than playing with toys!!!”  Ayaka shouted. “SILENCE!!!”  Makie slapped her. “Damn it!  Makie, what right would you have to obtain Ayaka?  No, why would you control my friends in the Chupacabra club?” “Oh, Asuna, Asuna, Asuna… I believe you missed the point entirely.  I want Ayaka, because she caused me misery and woe.” “So it seems that you wanted Ayaka all along, just because she did something that hurt you severely.” “What I’d like to know is what do you have against me, Makie?” Makie glared at Ayaka and raised her hand. “EEP! I’ll be quiet…” she gulped. She put her hand down and smiled at Asuna. “Poor, pitiful bells,” she said, “Ayaka called me a failure towards Makie, every time I louse up an important job.  You see, every time I mess up, she always said to me that I am a failure towards Makie.” Konoka added, “Master Makie is a success towards Makie!” Setsuna added, “Ayaka is nothing!” Asuna then shouted, “Well, you didn’t have to detain my friends into slavery!” “Too late… and soon, you and Ayaka will be mine!”  She proclaimed. Asuna thought, “Satomi gave me a useful weapon, but I didn’t get a chance to use it!  Damn!  I should’ve fired at the right moment!  Stupid Asuna!” “Konoka!  Setsuna!  Take her to Ayaka’s room and detain her!  Make sure you use those “Professor Negi” ropes and sheets to hold her.” “Don’t you dare touch or mistreat my precious Professor Negi merchandise!!!”  Ayaka shouted, “If one thread is ripped out, you’ll live to regret it!!!” Makie then commanded, “Setsuna!  You detain Asuna!  Konoka!  Shut Ayaka’s mouth!” Konoka used a piece of duct tape and covered Ayaka’s mouth.  Asuna saw what transpired and was livid. “Ayaka!  Fight it!  You’re not the boss of Makie!  You’re a great class rep!”  She shouted, as she was dragged away, “Let me go, Setsuna!!!  Let me go!  You won’t get away with this, Sasaki!!!  NO, STOP IT!  AYAKA!!!” Makie giggled and turned to Ayaka. “You see, I can no longer be a failure towards Makie,” she said, “But, you… are indeed the real failure!” She then pointed at Ayaka and shouted, “YOU!  You’re a failure towards Ayaka!” Ayaka was shocked, she could scream, if her mouth wasn’t covered in tape.  She started to yell, but her sounds were muffled.  Makie could only laugh maniacally; her eyes started to bug out. “Master, you are a success towards Makie!”  Konoka said in a calm manner. “Indeed I am, Konoka,” Makie said, “In fact, tomorrow, I intend to make Ayaka say it.” “NO!”  Ayaka screamed, with her mouth still shut. “You have a good night now, Ayaka… for tomorrow, you’ll be mine.” She turned to Konoka and said, “Keep an eye on her.  If one sudden movement, restrain her at all costs.” “Yes, master,” Konoka declared. Makie went to her bed and fell asleep.  Konoka dragged Ayaka to the front door and sat by her. Meanwhile, Setsuna tied up Asuna in a chair and stood by her side. “Setsuna… you didn’t have to do this,” she whimpered, “Why would you agree to this?” “I only did this for Miss Konoka,” Setsuna said robotically, “My master wanted me to stay with Konoka, even if it means being her slave.  Master Makie is a great girl, but I love Miss Konoka more than Makie; though Makie is greater than Miss Konoka, Ayaka, or you, combined.” Asuna then growled, “I should’ve known Satomi & Chao’s invention would cause trouble.” She then muttered to Setsuna, “You tell your master that she’s gonna pay.  She’ll be sorry that you had the audacity to make students into slaves.  Do you hear me?” Her voice rose higher and said, “I cannot let some cheap Negi merchandise protect me from saving my best friend; even if it is crappy!  Let me tell you something, Setsuna, my Chupa-Ts are WAY better than those prissy little Negi-Dise!  I love my Chupa-Ts and so do you!!!  AND I AM HAPPY TO BE ME, NOT SOME WELL MADE ROBOT SLAVE!!!  DO YOU HEAR ME???  I WANT RETRIBUTION!!!  I WANT AYAKA BACK!!!” Setsuna turned to Asuna and asked, “Are you done?” She then hold up a chip, the O.B. Chip, and tried to present it to Asuna.  All Asuna could do was whimper and shiver in fear. “No… Setsuna,” she pleaded, “You cannot do this… No…” “I must.  I am only doing this for my master, Makie,” Setsuna replied. Asuna cringed a bit and thought aloud, “I had to open my big mouth!” Setsuna tried to place the chip on her forehead.  Asuna was frightened. “NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!” WRITER’S NOTE: And then… I woke up.
That was it; the story I wrote that was a vision in my dreams.  But in the next chapter, I will write what will happen to Asuna and Ayaka.  Stay pinned, Negima fans!