Maximum Ride Fan Fiction / Maximum Ride Fan Fiction ❯ Want You ❯ Payback ( Chapter 2 )

Want You

By: Natilie Sawada

Yay, more intense Fax! Thank you all for the gushing reviews that got me to working on part two right away. (Especially maximumluver: OO wow). And just for gypsyprincess94 I'm working to get this up quick as I can.

So here you go guys XD

Warning: More swearing in this one than the last. Yup, Fang seems to like the f-word XD

Part 2: Pay Back

Fang stared at me as my breathing slowed, releasing my hands and they dropped limply to my side.

What did you say at a time like that? My best friend had just fingered me…and I'd liked it. Yah, you can see how I'd come up short at a time like that. So Fang just stared at me, silent as always.

I could tell it was far from over.

In an act I couldn't even explain to myself later, I placed both hands on his shoulders and wheeled him around, slamming Fang into the wall.

“Max—?” He started to ask, but I placed my lips against his, silencing him. I was in control now—or so it would have looked. But I wasn't even in control of my own body now. I forced my tongue past his lips, forcing it into his mouth. Fang groaned, and I felt the vibrations skitter throughout my body.

I broke away; Fang's heavy breathing sent flutters in the base of my stomach.

“My turn,” I said simply, and knelt to his belt buckle. I risked a glance up at him, and his eyes seemed to be smoldering, the black light just staring at me. Once I got past his belt, I lifted up his shirt, pressing my lips against his toned stomach.

My tongue teased across the hard surface, swirling around the indent of his belly button.

“Mmm,” Fang groaned. I peeked up again through my bangs to see Fang's eyes half lidded—unfocused as they watched me. My lips traced lower, undoing the button of his jeans. A delicious moan escaped Fang's lips as I pulled his jeans down so they pooled at his feet in a puddle of dark denim, leaving him in his boxers and shirt before me.

“Take your shirt off,” I panted. He stared down at me, incredulous.

“But you didn't have to—”

“Take it off!” I commanded, and in one lithe movement, the sculpted muscles of his chest were exposed to the slightly chilly bedroom air. I sucked in a breath at the perfection of his muscles before leaning in to taste them. I ran my tongue up along his abs, while my hand shyly pressed against him.

“Max!” Fang exclaimed, his hips bucking beneath my hand. I raised my hand to play with the waistband of his boxers while my tongue made enticing little circles on his hip.

Finally, I pushed his boxers down his legs to join his jeans.

Before I could let rational thought catch up with me, I wrapped my hand around him.

“Ohh!”

I liked this.

Drawing on the memories of all the Nora Roberts books I'd ever read, I started to pump my hand up and down him. “Uhh, Max!”

Oh, I liked this a lot.

I removed my hand, and a strange strangled sound emitted from the back of his throat. I felt the corner of my lips pull up into a smirk. No wonder he had enjoyed doing this to me.

“Tell me what you want, Fang,” I said, mirroring his earlier words.

“Oh, God, Max, please!” He groaned, his voice husky and desperate, eyes closed, head leaning back against the wall.

“Please, what, Fang?” I asked, sliding my middle finger up the length of him.

“Uhh!”

“C'mon, Fang. Tell me exactly what you want me to do. Tell me, and I'll do it. Anything.” Was it just me, or did his breathing speed up. I wanted to keep him talking…God, his talking…

“Fuck, Max…I want…I want—”

“Tell me,” I whispered, leaning my mouth so close to him, my breath brushing against him made him moan.

“I want to come in your mouth, Max.” Holy crap, he actually said it. Well, I did promise….

“Is this what you wanted?” I asked seductively, taking the head between my lips and swirling my tongue around it.

“Max!” He nearly shouted, his hand reaching down and knotting in my hair. The way his fingers pulled on my hair almost made me moan. His hips bucked, wordlessly pleading for me to take more. His breathing was shallow, and coming in amazing short pants.

I pulled off him, eliciting a whimper from his lips, but then touched my tongue to the base of him and dragged it upwards.

“Oooohh,” Fang moaned. “Max, please, I can't take it anymore!” He begged. I pulled away from him.

Oh, I liked the begging.

“Beg,” I ordered.

“Please, Max!” He pleaded. His entire frame was shaking with need. “Oh, God, I need you so bad! Max…”

“Tell me exactly what you want me to do to you,” I told him.

“I want you to take me in your mouth and suck me until I cum!” He nearly shouted. The throbbing between my legs that had only ebbed before now became much more prominent.

And I took the tip between my lips and sank down onto him, taking as much of him as I could into my mouth.

“Oh, fuck, ­­Max!” Fang moaned, his hips bucking, the hand entangled in my hair, trying to force me down onto him further. I began to bob up and down on him, scraping the sensitive nerves with my tongue and teeth.

“Oh, oh, God, yes, Max!”

I kept bobbing as I began to suck. Hard.

“Yes…fuck, yes! Max…ohhh, fuck!” Normally I hated it when Fang swore, but now, every time he uttered that word, the throbbing increased significantly. I tried to suck harder on him.

“Uuuuhhhhh!” He groaned because I guessed he was beyond words. Then I tried something. I hummed, making the back of my throat vibrate.

“Oooohhh…M-mmm-max!” Fang forced out. I sucked again, humming while I did and felt his muscles tense, trembling so hard I thought he would explode.

“Max, I'm gonna cum…” I sucked one last time, hollowing out my cheeks, and—

“OHHHHHHHMMMMMMAX!” Fang groaned so loudly I could feel the vibrations. His entire body shuttered with his release. He came into my mouth and I swallowed.

I pulled off of him, sitting back on my haunches while I waited for him to come back to the earth.

After a long minute, his dark eyes opened and focused on me.

End of Part 2

There might possibly be a part three? Where they actually get on with it XD lol. Idk, review and tell me whether or not I should continue. Tootles!