Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ A Tail of Two Bijus ❯ Intermission 3 ( Chapter 26 )

A/N: Yo! Sorry I'm late, there was a fire downtown and I had to stop and put it out with some water jutsus...

 

Readers: LIAR!

 

It's true!... Well, yeah anyways... Seems like I have a lot of comments to deal with, not that I don't like doing it, but it generally means less story for this chapter. Heh, not that there will be a story this chapter, as I'm going to put up the polls for you guys to vote in. Well, here are my answers to your reviews/comments:

 

SotY: Well, I'm planning to try and get this chapter up to 200k. I'm not sure of the exact number of words, but it WILL end at the end of the trip to the west. After that, I'll begin the next part of the series.

 

NekoFanGuy: Hah! Akira in heat again, oh god, that would turn nasty! Give me the word and I'll create a bonus chapter, but not until you're ready. I look forward to the next chapter, keep it up! Have a good weekend, and grats on completing the SAT 9!

 

Dragon Noir: Heh, I think they'll both annoy each other to death, making it a double KO. Hmm, so you want to know what seals are on Sora and Hotaru, and if Gaara's seal will do it too? Well, I haven't truthfully thought about how yet, but eventually, yes they will absorb their demons. OMG! Best. Idea. EVAR! I'm so intrigued by your idea that I'm going to take it on! Some others have suggested that I let them chose the armour's abilities too, so I'm going to put it up as a vote. It took me several chapters to get the first two years out of the way, and since the last two years are going to be in the west, I'm probably going to have the westerners give them the armour parts as a going away gift, meaning not for at least another 2 chapters, more likely 3 or 4, meaning that everyone will get an ample amount of time to vote. Although I really would like Naruto's gauntlet to be sort of like Loz's from FF7: Avant Children, without the little extending spike things on the end because I think it would suit him well.

 

Intelligo: Well, I think it was partly my fault that I didn't word the poll question properly, but I meant only one piece of armour per person, like say a gauntlet or a set of greaves or something, so no need to worry about whole suits, as that wouldn't fit with my story.

 

Mage Ronin: Well, Yes and no. Yes he had the potential to be stronger than anyone alive, however, the powers of Kyubi are being added to his own very, very slowly. Naruto and Yukiko's bodies initially tried to absorb all of their tenants' powers at once when the seals broke, however, due to Hotaru using her healing jutsus on them, their bodies stopped trying to absorb their powers. Humans were never meant to take all that power in one go. If they kept going, they would have ended up something like Mizuki in the filler ark, although he would have gotten off lightly compared to them.

 

White Alchemist Taya: Um, sorry for the misunderstanding, no it will not be full body armour. Each character will get one armour part, say a gauntlet or a set of greaves or a pair of boots, or something of the sort (lol, I was just thinking, a pair of Shadow the Hedgehog's boots. Now THAT would be spiffy!).

 

xXxANIMEfreekxXx1234: Well, I seem to remember saying that Gaara would use the sand in public to disguise himself. Jiraiya had a complete change of clothes and died his hair black, as well as using the Hidden Nin forehead protector to cover most of his face, especially his eyes. Also, Gaara only carried his gourd with him when out on missions or in between countries. Gaara wasn't the only sand user to exist, so they could only guess he grew up in Suna, no more. Also, none of them used their signature moves in public, like Naruto hasn't used Rasengan or Hiraishin no Jutsu, Gaara hasn't used Sabaku Kyu or Sabaku Soso. Jiraiya and Yukiko haven't used Ninpou, Hari Jizou and so on. They've pretty much been using elemental attacks and what not. Hope that answered it.

 

Ki Master: Man, you can read minds, can't you? That was exactly what I was going to do. The vote's just below, so go for it!

 

Ok, final scores for the vote:

 

(A): Yes Armour Parts: 10

 

(B): No Armour Parts: 2 (not including White Alchemist Taya's vote, as he/she wasn't sure if I meant full armour or not, which was explained above.)

 

Ok, so for the next vote, I'm going to let you guys choose each person's armour type and some of the abilities, depending on the type. Here are you options:

 

Naruto:

 

(A): Gauntlet: The gauntlet will be like Loz's in appearance, without the little extending spike thingies. It basically will absorb the chakra put into it and can form a multitude of things from spikes to a blade, a shield, and others. I guess the closest thing already in the series I could compare it too would be Kisame's Samehada, but it's still quite different to it.

 

(B): Greaves: These will be able to absorb chakra and then when the wearer wants to, unleash it from the surface of the greaves, giving it a way more powerful impact.

 

(C): Boots: The boots will be like Shadow the Hedgehog's in appearance, and also like them ability wise. The wearer can expel a constant amount of chakra into the boots from their feet, which is thrust out of the boosters in the boots, meaning that if they keep their feet flat on the ground and expel a lot of chakra, they can hover, with very limited movement, and I mean VERY limited. When they run, the boots will propel them forward at speeds similar to Naruto when he fought Sasuke in his normal kyubified form in the Sasuke retrieval arc.

 

(D): Your Own Original Idea Here: Basically, this is like a sub vote within a sub vote. You guys suggest one of your own ideas, and the most popular one at the end will be the final choice for option D. I will take the first three ideas, and those will be the final options.

 

Yukiko:

 

(A): Gauntlet: Same as Naruto.

 

(B): Greeves: Read above.

 

(C): Boots: Read the above two statements.

 

(D): Your Own Original Idea Here: Do I really have to say it?

 

Gaara:

 

(A): Gauntlet:

 

(B): Greaves:

 

(C): Boots:

 

(D): Your Own Original Idea Here:

 

Sora:

 

(A): Gauntlet:

 

(B): Greaves:

 

(C): Boots:

 

(D): Your Own Original Idea Here:

 

Hotaru:

 

(A): Gauntlet:

 

(B): Greaves:

 

(C): Boots:

 

(D): Your Own Original Idea Here:

 

As for Jiraiya, I really don't think it'd suit him, so NO ARMOUR 4 JOO JIRAIYA!!!

 

Jiraiya: No fair…

 

Shut it! You may not be my original creation, but in this story, you do as I say!

 

Jiraiya: `Sulks'…

 

Any who…

 

Also, I got 200 positive reviews! YATTA!

 

Well, what the hell, I'll chuck in Naruto's bio just for kicks:

 

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Name: Uzumaki Naruto.

 

Age: 14

 

Birthday: October 10th

 

Bloodtype: B

 

Height: 5' 10”

 

Weight: 112 LBS

 

Affiliation: Leaf

 

Rank: Officially Chunin, now has power almost equal to a Sannin.

 

Trademark Techniques: Hiraishin no Jutsu, Rasengan, Kage Bunshin no Jutsu.

 

Known Techniques: Oodama Rasengan, Kuchiyose no Jutsu, Katon: Housenka no Jutsu, Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu, Katon: Ryuuka no Jutsu, Katon: Karyuu Endan, Katon: Karyuudan, Katon: Fox Fire, Doton: Doruki Gaeshi, Doton: Doryuu Taiga, Doton: Doryuuheki, Doton: Doryuudan, Muzi Bunshin, Suiton Daibakufu no Jutsu, Suiton Suiryuudan no Jutsu, Suiton: Suijinheki, Ingan, Shikifuujin, Double Four Element Seal, Five Element Seal, Kanashibari no jutsu, Youmane Ninpou: Jintai Niku, Nine Demonic Gates (He can currently open 7 of them).

 

Preferred Fighting Style: Ninjutsu & Taijutsu.

 

Acquaintances: Umuino Iruka, Sandaime Hokage, Hatake Kakashi, Jiraiya, Yakushi Yukiko, Uchiha Sasuke, Haruno Sakura, Sarutobi Konahamaru, Sabaku no Gaara, Saito Sora, Yamamoto Hotaru, Hyuga Neji. (I'm not sure if I should include others here, so I'll leave it at this.)

 

 

Well, sorry to get your hopes up for their first wild trip to the west, but I felt it was necessary to do tis first. Don't worry, I'm already 11 or so pages into the next chapter. Until next chapter, my avid readers!

 

Ja ne,

 

Specula.