Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ After The Four-Tails! ❯ Chapter Four ( Chapter 4 )

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After The Four Tails: Chapter Four
 
Author's Notes: Yet another chapter starting! As I write these opening notes, it's July 4th (Almost the 5th, it's so late at night.) and I'm feeling nice after lighting off a barrage of highflying fireworks. The really cool thing is that we only had a few errors (Explosions) on the launch pad. And only one of them could have actually taken off one of my fingers, although it may not have helped that we were lighting them off with a propane torch…
 
Anyways, what I realized about this fanfic, was that I'm now in the fourth chapter and so far, I haven't written ANY smutty, sexy, sen-shu-all, scenes at all… Believe me when I say that this development disturbs me to no end! But writing in those blissfully inappropriate scenes between Naruto and Hinata takes time. (Unless you're a really shitty writer and decide to leave the plot development to the imagination.) So bear with me, I might be able to break through romantic tension by the end of this chapter, but smut will have to wait until at least the next chapter, unless I decide to have a Naru/Shizu flashback o.0…
 
remialcsiD: (Read it backwards) I don't own Naruto, or any character in this story. And I only take credit for the creation of “Claus Niwa”. Also, I don't make any money off of this fanfic, it's purely a non-profit venture for my fellow Otaku who want sex to go along with their favorite anime.
 
 
Still brooding on the joke that Tsunade had made at his expense earlier in the day, Jiraya was storming through the streets of Konohagakure with no regard for his usual lecherous ways, passing pretty young girls by with out so much as a howdy-doo. Or secret skirt flipping for that matter.
 
It frustrated him to no end, as he'd sworn to himself quite early in life that he would eventually bed with the former “Zero Sex Appeal” girl on his team under Sarutobi-Sensei. He felt that the ordeal was on a par with the story of Tantalus, being eternally hungry and thirsty in a pool of water with succulent, ripe fruit up above. Every time he reached for the fruit, it floated free from his grasp, every attempt to drink the water, the surface shrank away from his parched lips.
 
`The whole thing is giving me a damn ulcer.' He thought to himself, strolling down the main drag. While he may have turned into a complete perv, Jiraya couldn't help but admit to himself that his distress at the situation stemmed from EMOTION, and not simply an erection. After all, Tsunade had always been a strong, beautiful woman, even when the beautiful hadn't been as prominent as it was now with her bodily reparations. Always self confidant, never one to deal with the likes of himself. Something about that cocky, unreachable demeanor, had driven him wild over the years, he'd even made a few drunken confessions of his amore, only to be met with more than a day's worth of berating and refusal. But he tried nonetheless.
 
As he walked, he thought, as he thought, he dreamed, and as he dreamed, he was happy. Happy enough until he meandered into a bar and saw the substance of his dreams sitting at the bar, full of melancholy and sipping on a bottle. Even when tipsy, she had self control, it may have been the medical training letting her cope with the alcohol intake, being used to sake, or just her personality, but she always seemed to be in control, always tipsy, never drunk, no matter how many drinks.
 
Taking the seat to the right of Tsunade, he ordered a good stiff belt, and tried at small talk.
 
“So, how's our venerable Hokage today?” He said with a barely detectable hint of sarcasm showing in his tone.
 
“Well enough,” Replied the Fifth. She brushed some sandy gold hair out of her face so she could see Jiraya better. “How `bout yourself?”
 
“Good enough as can be expected, especially after my trauma this morning.”
 
Tsunade chuckled, “Aww, c'mon. You know I was only kidding.”
 
“Yeah? Well kidding isn't always appreciated.”
 
“Oh please, this coming from the lord, god, king of all booty-calls?”
 
“You'd think that, wouldn't you?” Retorted the frog hermit as he ordered himself a bottle of sake.
 
Tsunade laughed, “Oh please, it's not as if you're a virgin.”
 
“No,” Said Jiraya, “But maybe in my old age, I'd appreciate a bit of…”
 
“A bit of what?” Snorted Tsunade, “A bit of tail from an old friend? It's not as if you can't get any now without chasing me around like a twenty-something skirt.” She added, taking a sip of sake.
 
Jiraya stuck his nose in the air, “It's not a matter of can't.” He said self-defensively, “But, booty calls run a bit ragged after so long.”
 
Cocking her head sideways, Tsunade spoke “I don't believe what I'm hearing, are you saying you're looking for someone to settle down with? I don't think I know of a single woman who's merited the title of `Jiraya's Girlfriend, lover of the Frog-Boy.'”
 
Laughing, Jiraya said, “It's been a while since you've called me Frog-Boy.”
 
“No kidding, I ran the joke raw a month after you started carrying around the frog contract.”
 
“Personally, I think you were a bit jealous,”
 
“And just between you and me, that jealousy was the only reason I started carrying the slug contract.”
 
A sudden sense of connection between himself and Tsunade flooded Jiraya. “Really?”
 
“Really.”
 
“And here I thought it was all about self satisfaction.”
 
Tsunade didn't know if it was Jiraya's passive cynicism, or her drinks, but she found that statement excruciatingly funny. “Hah! It was. You know Jiraya-kun, I honestly think that the only reason I'm as strong as I am, is because I've driven myself to being this self-sufficient. But the reason I did that, is because I was always afraid of you looking down on me.”
 
`Hell, it's about time she's admitted SOMETHING.' Jiraya thought to himself. “Look Tsunade-Chan. We have to talk.”
 
 
Naruto and Hinata had opted to take a walk instead of parting ways, and since then had been wandering a few side streets and exploring back alleyways, basking in a mutual silence, broken only by a few words. They ended up in a loading alley in between two buildings on Main Street, with a perfect view of the oncoming sunset, and had settled into a reclining position on top of a pile of cardboard boxes. Neither one seemed to want to break the silence. They both stared intently at the crisp clouds off in the distance as hues of orange, pink and gold played across them.
 
“Did you ever do this with Shizune?” Asked Hinata.
 
 
“Actually, no.” Naruto replied “We never did much cloud watching when we were together.”
 
“What did you do?”
 
Naruto stared into space for a moment, “I'm not sure you want to know.”
 
“Umm, well, I know that you two had sex. So all I have left to know is details.”
 
“That's what I meant. I'm not sure you want details.”
 
“Actually...”
 
Naruto stared, “You want to know the details?”
 
Blushing furiously, Hinata tried to dig herself out of the perverted hole she had just dug herself into. “We-Well, I don't mean that I want to hear DETAIL-details… I mean, I just w-want to know… Er, how it was and stuff.” Seeing the way Naruto was eyeing her, she added, “Because, you know, I'm n-not exactly versed on the subject.”
 
Taken in and otherwise fooled by the lie, Naruto nodded and asked; “Well, we did it a few times.”
 
“O-Okay.”
 
“And… It was good and all-“
 
“What about it was good?” Interrupted Hinata.
 
Taken aback, Naruto started to wonder what lied beyond that shy stare. Did she really want to know about ALL of it?”
 
“Well, everything was good.”
 
“Well, uh, what in particular?”
 
Naruto blushed and looked away, “If I tell you what in particular was good, when everything was good, that'll just be gory details.” He looked back over, the look on Hinata's face had gone from embarrassed to a dreamy trance. The wheels were obviously turning. “Is that okay with you?”
 
“Yeah, that's okay with me.” She replied eagerly, though trying to hide her enthusiasm.
 
 
And so Naruto told, telling tails about how he and Shizune had made love time and time again. While he felt uneasy on the subject, he couldn't shake a feeling of self-assurance. After all, he knew he was a man, but telling someone, even someone like Hinata who hemmed, hawed, gasped, and blushed at everything which seemed to deviate from the “Stork Brings the Baby” school of sex ed felt good.
 
However, despite appearances, Hinata was soaking it all up like a sponge. Her father never brought up the subject openly. He seemed to want her chaste until ready to produce his heir, and even that faded when her sister Hanabi was born.
 
`And of course, Neji tattled to father when I asked HIM about it.' She thought to herself. Neji always ran away from the subject of intercourse. `Maybe that's what a “Fag” is.'
 
“And, then she started coming to my apartment.” Naruto started after a deep breath.
 
“You guys didn't date after that?” Queried Hinata
 
“Well, no. For the most part, she worked at Baa-Chan's office until like, nine at night. And I had missions out the wazoo. She was in administration, so luckily she knew when I was in town. But after dark, there's not a good many places to go. Dates had kinda become more of an obstacle that we had to get past, to…”
 
“Oh, I-I see.”
 
“One time, she showed up when it was raining. She looked ragged when she got to my place, completely drenched. She'd had a long day at work and I had been sitting around, watching the clock, hoping that she would show up.”
 
“What happened when she did?”
 
“We, well, you know.”
 
Hinata blushed again, “I'm a big girl, you can tell me you know.”
 
“We took a shower. Together.”
 
“And?”
 
Now it was Naruto's time to blush. “Look, I just don't think you want to know. I mean, you're not that kind of girl, are you?”
 
“No!” Hinata blurted, “I'm not a pervert!” She started to stare at the wall next to her, hiding the look of shame on her face. “I just, well, don't know anything about it. Yeah! And I want to know how it's done. A-and stuff.”
 
“Seriously?” Asked a very puzzled blonde Shinobi.
 
“Yeah.” Hinata searched for words. “It's not like I want you to teach me the way Shizune taught you, but could you tell me?”
 
“You sure?”
 
“Yeah.”
 
“Well then. First, well, we took our clothes off. I just had boxers on, so it wasn't that hard for me.” Naruto looked over at Hinata, who already looked like she was drifting towards la-la land. “Hey!”
 
“W-What?”
 
“First thing's first, you have to promise me something.”
 
“What is it?”
 
“I don't want you going, `EWW!' or `That's gross!' when I tell you. We had sex and it gets graphic. I just don't want to be hassled for enjoying it.”
 
“Okay, fine.” Hinata replied quickly. `I just want to hear it.'
 
“Well, the first thing we did was kiss. A lot.”
 
 
(Do not adjust your monitor, I control the horizontal and the vertical, you have just entered… The Flashback Zone! *Wavy scene transition*)
 
`Thank god I brushed my teeth.' Thought Naruto, tasting the smell of stale coffee on Shizune's saliva. He pulled out of the kiss in time to open the door to the bathroom and guide his lusting partner inside. She made quick work of her own clothes, tossing them aside in a wet pile in the corner of the room. Into the shower they both went, kicking the knobs and spraying steaming water over themselves.
 
Naruto was first to act, his hands leaping to his lover's breasts and kneading them while he tried his damnedest to suck her face off. Meanwhile, Shizune's digits snaked their way down to Naruto's half hard member, squeezing it like GI Joe's kung-fu grip, she worked her hands up and down the haft of his cock to get him to full height.
 
Needing no further encouragement, Naruto's hands found their way down to Shizune's ass, one with a firm grip on her cheek, the other worming its way down to bury two fingers in her love-hole.
 
“Augh!” Cried the black haired Kunoichi, it had been over a week since she had felt Naruto's touch in her pussy, and she wanted more. Shizune put one foot on the rim of the tub, and guided Naruto's dick in towards her opening in a frantic attempt to stab herself in the cunt with his meat.
 
`I think she might want something.' Thought Naruto as he slid up and hit his mark, making Shizune squeal in lust-crazed delight. He began thrusting up into her hole at a hurried pace, matching her urges and earning more shrieks of fulfillment.
 
“Oh GOD, it's been too long since I've had you in me.” Shizune purred, pushing back into Naruto with abandon.
 
“I know,” Said Naruto. “I've been waiting for this all day.”
 
Still gripping Shizune's ass, Naruto moved his hands up to her hips, guiding her abdomen and steadying their pace from a frantic fuck into a more steady, amorous pace. He winced in pleasure every time he felt himself bottoming out in her. Not so much out of the physical sensations, those kicked ass, yeah, but it was more the knowledge that he filled his lover so completely that made him happy. And it wasn't long before he felt that ominous feeling at the base of his penis that told him he was ready to come.
 
“H-Hey Sheezy?” He said breathlessly, using the pet name she insisted on during sex.
 
“You don't need to tell me-UNH!” Replied Shizune, moving her right hand, now lit up blue with a “Contraceptive Jutsu” down and placing it over her pelvis. “You swell up so BIG when you're going to cum, naughty boy.” She added in a mock-innocent tone.
 
“Are you there?” Asked Naruto, ready to hold off should Shizune need more time.
 
“I think I was born ready, now don't hold back, quit talking and cum in me already!
 
`Man, I love this part.' Thought a very horny Shinobi as he put Shizune up against the wall, picked her up by her legs, and started fucking her so jackhammer-hard, he almost worried about giving her internal damage.
 
“Oh yeah!” Cried Shizune, loving every second of this fast, furious end game. She thought her pussy would melt at this onslaught of Naruto's sword. She could feel as every nerve was stimulated in all the deepest corners of her insides. She knew no place was safe from this inward invasion, and she relished the thought.
 
“Oh fuck me, fuck me good! AAAAHHHHH!!!” She cried as Naruto came, matching her orgasm to the second and spilling buckets of semen into her. She thought it would start spraying out of her there was so much. And her cries only got louder as Naruto continued his work, his cock refusing to go soft. He spoke only in moans and grunts now, his brain seemingly devoid of oxygen for, other uses.
 
It was nearly two minutes before he was conscious enough of the world outside of Shizune's love hole for her to plead with him to stop.
 
 
(This has been another episode of the flashback zone. *Indian Accent* “Thank you, come again!”)
 
“And that's when we discovered that we'd ran out of hot water…” Naruto said as he finished the story. Painfully recounting the frantic escape from the freezing shower.
 
`Why do I feel so good?' Wondered Hinata, looking down at her lap. Then she got her answer, her hand had “Magically” made it's way down to her lap, gently caressing her crotch through the fabric of her pants and underwear. “Oh no!” She whispered.
 
Naruto, until then, oblivious to the fact that Hinata had been off in photoshop la-la-land looked over to see her hand in between her legs, making the motion of the ocean. “Do you need some time alone?” He asked, raising his eyebrow.
 
“Wha? NO!” Hinata shouted, bringing her legs together and sitting up. “I-I just thought that. Well, since you were. It's just…” She thought for a moment, exhaled, and took a deep breath
 
“That was, a really good story…”
 
Naruto cocked his head sideways and stared for a moment.
 
`Oh no, now Naruto-Kun thinks I'm a pervert.' She thought, cursing herself.
 
However, contrary to the shunning she expected, Hinata saw Naruto smile nervously and chuckle.
 
“Heh. Well, as strange as it may sound, I'm kinda glad you liked it enough to, well you know… Maybe I'm not as much of a perv as I thought if other people, well, get off to it.”
 
 
 
`Oh god, he has no idea…'
 
 
(Author's Notes:)
 
Jan! Another chapter complete. Not exactly as hastily done as I'd imagined, but done all the same.
 
I tell you what, being in Virginia during the hottest months of the year, not exactly the whale's balls… But anyways, I'm hoping that I'll be able to get some new Ranma books in not too long, I put in an order for some at the beginning of the summer, and haven't gotten the call yet…
 
That's about how exciting my life has been lately. Wake up, play games, write, go to bed.
 
And I've also been wondering, if any of the lovely people who read my work have any more in-depth comments to make (Don't remember if there's a word limit on comments, hafta' check.) Or if you'd like to link me to anything you've written, just e-mail me at bigyellowjacket@gmail.com