Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Comforting Sakura ❯ Ch.1- Waking Up ( Chapter 1 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto just the story.
This is my first story so please review and give me some constructive criticism. Tell me what you like about it and if you want me to continue with this please!
(A/N:) I completely redid the story due to the fact that the first one was just blah. It needed a little more to it. Don't forget to review!
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Tha t nightmare had seemed real. Had it been real?
Muffled voices were heard around her as she slowly opened her heavy eyes. A searing pain shot through her head as she looked up at the bright white lights. Groggily she rubbed her forehead with a pale slender hand as she pondered her current position. The smell of disinfectant permeated the air around her, and she realized she was in the hospital, a place she knew all too well.
Over the past few years Sakura had spent most of her time in the hospital training to be a medic with the fifth Hokage. She had become almost as skilled as the Hokage herself. Sakura now took on most of the hospital work, which meant the procrastinating fifth could now get some of her paper work done.
Upon awakening, she found bandages wrapped around her abdomen tightly, effectively binding her injuries together so as not to cause any more damage. Sakura's head hurt and she felt a little nauseous with hunger.
“Sakura?” Ino’s voice called out timidly to her friend.
Thought right now was a little difficult, and it took Sakura a while to comprehend who her speaker was. "Ino?"
Ino sat down gently beside the injured kunoichi and set her hand upon Sakura's. "We were all so worried about you." Ino announced quietly. Sakura squeezed Ino's hand weakly in an attempt to reassure her friend.
"Sakura do you know where you are?"
"My guess would be that I am in the Konoha Hospital."
Why was she in the Hospital? Pieces of that nightmare came back to her as she realized with pain that it was the real deal. There could be no denying what had happened to her. She understood why she was there and why she felt so numb. Suddenly she began to cry. She couldn't help it. Strong feminine arms reached around her shoulders, cradling her head against a warm chest.
She looked up to see the watery crystal blue eyes and attractive young face of her dear friend Ino. Ino's face was puffy and red from crying. There were little white streaks left behind where her tears had fallen and her nose was a bright red. Dark circles were clearly seen under her tired and exhausted eyes, as she had slept very little since she had received word that Sakura was in the hospital.
It comforted Sakura to know that Ino had been by her while she slept. Sakura was very lucky to have Ino as her friend. The two had become best friends since the chunnin exams.
Somewhere amid her hard sobs she could here Tsunade’s voice trying to tell her as best she could what had happened.
Sakura didn’t care she knew what had happened. She could still see those eyes, cold and uncaring, those eyes that would haunt her dreams until the day that she died. She could still hear the maniacal laughter as he looked into her terrified green eyes. He was cold and uncaring, but he had always been that way. She knew this, but something had changed. He had always ignored her but never had he hurt her berfore. At least not physically. She couldn't understand what had come over him. Why had he done this to her?
She looked over towards the window and found Naruto and Kakashi sensei looking at her with mixed expressions of anger and worry.
Naruto still resembled the carefree clueless boy of twelve: messy golden hair, cerulean blue eyes, and his forever goofy smile. But now at the age of 21 he was much taller, and his facial features were more defined. He had lost the roundness in his face and in its place he wore the face of a very handsome young man. Naruto had high cheek bones, a square and well defined jaw, and his eyes were warm and bright. Naruto's build was like that of Kiba, in that every muscle on his person was well defined and toned, he was a pretty big guy. Naruto continued to look more and more like the fourth every day. She had always admired how handsome he had turned out but at this moment her eyes were drawn to the three whisker-like marks on either side of his face. They were there because of the fox demon that had been sealed inside of him at birth. The Kyuubi gave Naruto incredible strength, but Naruto never let the Kyuubi completely control him. Naruto never let the evil completely consume him.
Naruto seemed to never stop smiling, but tonight he was somber and sad as he looked into the emerald eyes of his broken roseate haired friend.
Sakura looked to the face of the other man in the room. She blushed a little seeing him there. Kakashi still looked the same he always did: messy silver hair held up by his headband which also served to cover up his sharingan, he also wore a dark piece of cloth to cover up his nose and mouth. Sakura had often wondered why he hid his face from the world. It had plagued her since she was twelve. Kakashi stood against the wall in his usually lazy posture, his head hanging low and looking at the floor. If one were to look at him in this moment, he would have seemed care free and unconcerned. This, however, was not the case at all. Concerns for his young female student were alive in his head. Kakashi and Sakura had grown closer over the years even though technically he was no longer her sensei. He couldn’t think of a single comforting thing to say to make his former student feel better, so he just stared helplessly at the floor. Sakura was amazed to see him here. She hadn’t seen Kakashi since her 19th birthday. That was two years ago. He had been on a long mission since then. When had he gotten back?
Everyone present, including the Hokage herself, all wondered the same thing. Why had Sakura been raped by Uchiha Sasuke?
Sakura buried her face into the pillow as she cried.
How could she have been so foolish? What made her think that she could change him?
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MUAHAHAHA cliffy eh?? anyways please review and I hope you enjoyed the first chapter of a very long story.
This is my first story so please review and give me some constructive criticism. Tell me what you like about it and if you want me to continue with this please!
(A/N:) I completely redid the story due to the fact that the first one was just blah. It needed a little more to it. Don't forget to review!
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ch.1: Waking Up
A muffled scream filled the warm night air. He smirked as she screamed with pain. A white hot pain entered her stomach. She could feel her blood pool beneath her. She could hear laughing...cold eyes were looking down at her. They were as black as the still darkness around her. Could no one hear her? Would no one come to her rescue? Before she entered into complete darness she heard him, "I thought this was what you wanted." She looked up at the twisted, contorted face above her one last time before finally passing out.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Tha t nightmare had seemed real. Had it been real?
Muffled voices were heard around her as she slowly opened her heavy eyes. A searing pain shot through her head as she looked up at the bright white lights. Groggily she rubbed her forehead with a pale slender hand as she pondered her current position. The smell of disinfectant permeated the air around her, and she realized she was in the hospital, a place she knew all too well.
Over the past few years Sakura had spent most of her time in the hospital training to be a medic with the fifth Hokage. She had become almost as skilled as the Hokage herself. Sakura now took on most of the hospital work, which meant the procrastinating fifth could now get some of her paper work done.
Upon awakening, she found bandages wrapped around her abdomen tightly, effectively binding her injuries together so as not to cause any more damage. Sakura's head hurt and she felt a little nauseous with hunger.
“Sakura?” Ino’s voice called out timidly to her friend.
Thought right now was a little difficult, and it took Sakura a while to comprehend who her speaker was. "Ino?"
Ino sat down gently beside the injured kunoichi and set her hand upon Sakura's. "We were all so worried about you." Ino announced quietly. Sakura squeezed Ino's hand weakly in an attempt to reassure her friend.
"Sakura do you know where you are?"
"My guess would be that I am in the Konoha Hospital."
Why was she in the Hospital? Pieces of that nightmare came back to her as she realized with pain that it was the real deal. There could be no denying what had happened to her. She understood why she was there and why she felt so numb. Suddenly she began to cry. She couldn't help it. Strong feminine arms reached around her shoulders, cradling her head against a warm chest.
She looked up to see the watery crystal blue eyes and attractive young face of her dear friend Ino. Ino's face was puffy and red from crying. There were little white streaks left behind where her tears had fallen and her nose was a bright red. Dark circles were clearly seen under her tired and exhausted eyes, as she had slept very little since she had received word that Sakura was in the hospital.
It comforted Sakura to know that Ino had been by her while she slept. Sakura was very lucky to have Ino as her friend. The two had become best friends since the chunnin exams.
Somewhere amid her hard sobs she could here Tsunade’s voice trying to tell her as best she could what had happened.
Sakura didn’t care she knew what had happened. She could still see those eyes, cold and uncaring, those eyes that would haunt her dreams until the day that she died. She could still hear the maniacal laughter as he looked into her terrified green eyes. He was cold and uncaring, but he had always been that way. She knew this, but something had changed. He had always ignored her but never had he hurt her berfore. At least not physically. She couldn't understand what had come over him. Why had he done this to her?
She looked over towards the window and found Naruto and Kakashi sensei looking at her with mixed expressions of anger and worry.
Naruto still resembled the carefree clueless boy of twelve: messy golden hair, cerulean blue eyes, and his forever goofy smile. But now at the age of 21 he was much taller, and his facial features were more defined. He had lost the roundness in his face and in its place he wore the face of a very handsome young man. Naruto had high cheek bones, a square and well defined jaw, and his eyes were warm and bright. Naruto's build was like that of Kiba, in that every muscle on his person was well defined and toned, he was a pretty big guy. Naruto continued to look more and more like the fourth every day. She had always admired how handsome he had turned out but at this moment her eyes were drawn to the three whisker-like marks on either side of his face. They were there because of the fox demon that had been sealed inside of him at birth. The Kyuubi gave Naruto incredible strength, but Naruto never let the Kyuubi completely control him. Naruto never let the evil completely consume him.
Naruto seemed to never stop smiling, but tonight he was somber and sad as he looked into the emerald eyes of his broken roseate haired friend.
Sakura looked to the face of the other man in the room. She blushed a little seeing him there. Kakashi still looked the same he always did: messy silver hair held up by his headband which also served to cover up his sharingan, he also wore a dark piece of cloth to cover up his nose and mouth. Sakura had often wondered why he hid his face from the world. It had plagued her since she was twelve. Kakashi stood against the wall in his usually lazy posture, his head hanging low and looking at the floor. If one were to look at him in this moment, he would have seemed care free and unconcerned. This, however, was not the case at all. Concerns for his young female student were alive in his head. Kakashi and Sakura had grown closer over the years even though technically he was no longer her sensei. He couldn’t think of a single comforting thing to say to make his former student feel better, so he just stared helplessly at the floor. Sakura was amazed to see him here. She hadn’t seen Kakashi since her 19th birthday. That was two years ago. He had been on a long mission since then. When had he gotten back?
Everyone present, including the Hokage herself, all wondered the same thing. Why had Sakura been raped by Uchiha Sasuke?
Sakura buried her face into the pillow as she cried.
How could she have been so foolish? What made her think that she could change him?
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MUAHAHAHA cliffy eh?? anyways please review and I hope you enjoyed the first chapter of a very long story.