Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Destined Siblings ❯ The Forest of Death ( Chapter 1 )
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By: Shin_Akamichi 
Orochimaru has challenged Squad 7 to a one sided match and all chaos has broke loose, but this is where it ALL begins...
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Martial Arts / Comedy / Action | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 04.06.2009 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.2K | Visits: 998 | Status: Work In Progress
Orochimaru has challenged Squad 7 to a one sided match and all chaos has broke loose, but this is where it ALL begins...
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Romance / Martial Arts / Comedy / Action | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 04.06.2009 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.2K | Visits: 998 | Status: Work In Progress
Second Exam-The Forest of Death
The forest had grown thick with the sounds of death as the exam duration snaked further and further. Many battles were taking place, As the numerous nin leapt from tree to tree, they saw a huge cloud of dust pillar up, accompanied by a massive amount of killer intent.
With Squad 7
Unfortunately, the huge cloud of dust was caused by Orochimaru slamming Naruto into the surface on top of one of the Forest of Deaths many tree branches. The shock drove him out of his feral form as he blacked out.
Fortunately, Sasuke recovered just as Naruto passed out. He glanced over and saw Orochimaru holding a helpless Naruto up with his tongue. He performed a few hand seals, and before Sasuke could do anything, slammed his hand into Naruto’s stomach, the impact disentergrating the material in front of Naruto's stomach. There was a large cloud of smoke followed by a loud pop.
‘What was that popping noise? My only intent was to seal his chakra… If this boy is who I think he is; and he is, this could get very bad… and why is his chest squishy all of a sudden? OH MY GOD!’ Orochimaru thought as the smoke cleared. “What did you do to Nar...HUH?!” Sasuke shouted as the smoke cleared enough to see Orochimaru's shape in the smoke. What anyone saw next was completely unexspected. With a loud scream saying "ECCHI!" a shockwave generating punch was heard and Orochimaru was seen plummeting out of the smoke cloud and a good 75 yard (3 feet=1 yard) distance, going thru a few trees as he did so!
When the smoke finally cleared,Sasuke and Sakura were at a stunned.Naruto was slumped on his back out cold,yet he looked different...unfortunately this wasnt what everyone was staring at currently as what was more alarming was the girl standing in front of Naruto covering her chest with a beat red face and anger in her exspression. Whats more, she looked awfully similar to a certain someone. “Well that was unexpected…” Orochimaru said as he pulled himself up and walked from a crater his impact into one of the gaint nearby trees had made. Orochimaru threw an exsplosive kunai at the area in front of the girl creating a blast that knocked the girl unconscious and sent her slamming into Naruto leaving both of them now thoroughly beaten.Once he was sure they were done being a annoyance he turned to face Sasuke.
“You’ll pay for that! Prepare yourself teme!” Sasuke shouted as he activated his Sharingan. Sasuke launched himself up into the air, drawing out a kunai and some shuriken. He threw the shuriken and while Orochimaru dodged, he pulled out a small demon wind shuriken and some ninja wire. He held one end of the wire in his teeth and looped it through the shuriken and tied the other end to the kunai. As Orochimaru turned to face him, Sasuke threw the shuriken, which Orochimaru easily avoided, spun around behind a tree and threw the kunai.
At the last second, Orochimaru realized Sasuke’s ploy and spun around to catch the Shuriken in his teeth. Sasuke smirked as he formed the seal of the tiger over the wire and inhaled. "Fire Style:Phoenix Flower Jutsu!". ‘This is for my teamates!’ With that thought he exhaled and sent flames racing down the wire. Sakura moved next to sasuke just in time to see Orochimaru’s face burst into flames. Sakura then proceded to idolize Sasuke as normal and started going on about how cool he was.
"Well,you are pretty talented for a genin I must say." Orochimaru stepped forward from the flames looking at them, his face missing a section of it and revealing another face beneath."However...your eyes are still no where as powerful as his are."Orochimaru stated attempting to lure Sasuke...and it worked. "YOU KNOW ITACHI! WHERE IS HE?!" Sasuke yelled blind with rage, Sakura attempting to hold him back. "Another time.Oh..almost forgot to give you my message." Sasuke shoved Sakura out of the way just as Orochimaru stretched out his neck to bite Sasuke, causing the Uchiha to scream out in pain and raw agony as a curse mark took form over the bite marks on his neck, the bite marks fading as the curse mark came into completion.
"Sasuke! Sasuke whats wrong?!" Sakura kept asking as he was on his elbows and knees holding his head screaming."W-w-what did you do to him?!" she yelled at the snake sannin. "I left him a parting gift.Sasuke's mind will fall into desperation eventaully and when that time comes he will seek me and the power I offer him." "Until then..." Orochimaru said as he backstepped, his body merging into the tree behind him until he completely disappeared, but not without sakura becoming furious and throwing a handful of shuriken at him, only for him to be gone moments before they embedded into the spot on the tree he had just slipped away at.
Sakura turned towards her comrads and the mystery girl and had a few thoughts come to her mind. "Great,well now what am I supposed to do? No I cant think like that.I have to get Naruto and Sasuke-kun somewhere safe." She picked Sasuke onto her shoulder and then jumped onto the higher branch of the nearby tree where Naruto had been, walking over to him and the girl. 'I wonder who she is...strange she looks familar...' Sakura thought to herself as she sat sasuke down. She then continued to walk up to the two and carefully rolled over the girl who was laying flat against and toward naruto,as if sheilding him. The moment she rolled the girl over she let out a loud gasp of shock and quickly jumped back,palming her hands over her mouth before saying in a stunned voice but unable to finish her sentence, at a loss for words"..S-she looks just like..."
CLIFFHANGER NO JUTSU!
I hope you all enjoyed, as this is my first chapter, and if you read alot of fanfiction here, you may have noticed I did use a line or two from another artist's fic, but thats only because i saw it to fit at the moment, dont worry, I will be branching off in my own direction (mostly) and if you already noticed, yes, I am keeping a few things the same in the story. On a side note, I am going to actually KEEP characters that normally died in the series, while replacing them with a few different deaths. Also, that means yes, im going to be changing the time in which the land of waves mission happens.I intend to put that sometime before the finals of the chunnin exams. The way that part ended with Zabuza and Haku just didnt sit right with me...PLEASE REVIEW! GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS TOO! ^w^
The forest had grown thick with the sounds of death as the exam duration snaked further and further. Many battles were taking place, As the numerous nin leapt from tree to tree, they saw a huge cloud of dust pillar up, accompanied by a massive amount of killer intent.
With Squad 7
Unfortunately, the huge cloud of dust was caused by Orochimaru slamming Naruto into the surface on top of one of the Forest of Deaths many tree branches. The shock drove him out of his feral form as he blacked out.
Fortunately, Sasuke recovered just as Naruto passed out. He glanced over and saw Orochimaru holding a helpless Naruto up with his tongue. He performed a few hand seals, and before Sasuke could do anything, slammed his hand into Naruto’s stomach, the impact disentergrating the material in front of Naruto's stomach. There was a large cloud of smoke followed by a loud pop.
‘What was that popping noise? My only intent was to seal his chakra… If this boy is who I think he is; and he is, this could get very bad… and why is his chest squishy all of a sudden? OH MY GOD!’ Orochimaru thought as the smoke cleared. “What did you do to Nar...HUH?!” Sasuke shouted as the smoke cleared enough to see Orochimaru's shape in the smoke. What anyone saw next was completely unexspected. With a loud scream saying "ECCHI!" a shockwave generating punch was heard and Orochimaru was seen plummeting out of the smoke cloud and a good 75 yard (3 feet=1 yard) distance, going thru a few trees as he did so!
When the smoke finally cleared,Sasuke and Sakura were at a stunned.Naruto was slumped on his back out cold,yet he looked different...unfortunately this wasnt what everyone was staring at currently as what was more alarming was the girl standing in front of Naruto covering her chest with a beat red face and anger in her exspression. Whats more, she looked awfully similar to a certain someone. “Well that was unexpected…” Orochimaru said as he pulled himself up and walked from a crater his impact into one of the gaint nearby trees had made. Orochimaru threw an exsplosive kunai at the area in front of the girl creating a blast that knocked the girl unconscious and sent her slamming into Naruto leaving both of them now thoroughly beaten.Once he was sure they were done being a annoyance he turned to face Sasuke.
“You’ll pay for that! Prepare yourself teme!” Sasuke shouted as he activated his Sharingan. Sasuke launched himself up into the air, drawing out a kunai and some shuriken. He threw the shuriken and while Orochimaru dodged, he pulled out a small demon wind shuriken and some ninja wire. He held one end of the wire in his teeth and looped it through the shuriken and tied the other end to the kunai. As Orochimaru turned to face him, Sasuke threw the shuriken, which Orochimaru easily avoided, spun around behind a tree and threw the kunai.
At the last second, Orochimaru realized Sasuke’s ploy and spun around to catch the Shuriken in his teeth. Sasuke smirked as he formed the seal of the tiger over the wire and inhaled. "Fire Style:Phoenix Flower Jutsu!". ‘This is for my teamates!’ With that thought he exhaled and sent flames racing down the wire. Sakura moved next to sasuke just in time to see Orochimaru’s face burst into flames. Sakura then proceded to idolize Sasuke as normal and started going on about how cool he was.
"Well,you are pretty talented for a genin I must say." Orochimaru stepped forward from the flames looking at them, his face missing a section of it and revealing another face beneath."However...your eyes are still no where as powerful as his are."Orochimaru stated attempting to lure Sasuke...and it worked. "YOU KNOW ITACHI! WHERE IS HE?!" Sasuke yelled blind with rage, Sakura attempting to hold him back. "Another time.Oh..almost forgot to give you my message." Sasuke shoved Sakura out of the way just as Orochimaru stretched out his neck to bite Sasuke, causing the Uchiha to scream out in pain and raw agony as a curse mark took form over the bite marks on his neck, the bite marks fading as the curse mark came into completion.
"Sasuke! Sasuke whats wrong?!" Sakura kept asking as he was on his elbows and knees holding his head screaming."W-w-what did you do to him?!" she yelled at the snake sannin. "I left him a parting gift.Sasuke's mind will fall into desperation eventaully and when that time comes he will seek me and the power I offer him." "Until then..." Orochimaru said as he backstepped, his body merging into the tree behind him until he completely disappeared, but not without sakura becoming furious and throwing a handful of shuriken at him, only for him to be gone moments before they embedded into the spot on the tree he had just slipped away at.
Sakura turned towards her comrads and the mystery girl and had a few thoughts come to her mind. "Great,well now what am I supposed to do? No I cant think like that.I have to get Naruto and Sasuke-kun somewhere safe." She picked Sasuke onto her shoulder and then jumped onto the higher branch of the nearby tree where Naruto had been, walking over to him and the girl. 'I wonder who she is...strange she looks familar...' Sakura thought to herself as she sat sasuke down. She then continued to walk up to the two and carefully rolled over the girl who was laying flat against and toward naruto,as if sheilding him. The moment she rolled the girl over she let out a loud gasp of shock and quickly jumped back,palming her hands over her mouth before saying in a stunned voice but unable to finish her sentence, at a loss for words"..S-she looks just like..."
CLIFFHANGER NO JUTSU!
I hope you all enjoyed, as this is my first chapter, and if you read alot of fanfiction here, you may have noticed I did use a line or two from another artist's fic, but thats only because i saw it to fit at the moment, dont worry, I will be branching off in my own direction (mostly) and if you already noticed, yes, I am keeping a few things the same in the story. On a side note, I am going to actually KEEP characters that normally died in the series, while replacing them with a few different deaths. Also, that means yes, im going to be changing the time in which the land of waves mission happens.I intend to put that sometime before the finals of the chunnin exams. The way that part ended with Zabuza and Haku just didnt sit right with me...PLEASE REVIEW! GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS TOO! ^w^