Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ God Modding ❯ The Unforeseen Complications of Sealing Tailed Beasts ( Chapter 1 )
[ T - Teen: Not suitable for readers under 13 ]
God Modding
By Shironami Kane
Summery: A series of encounters between Hidan and an otherworldly displaced christian begins to set the stage for a revelation of powers not built up by earthly forces but divine ones. Can two very different individuals with very different faiths change the world?
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters from the series Naruto and am only using them for my own amusement, not monetary gain or anything.
Note: This story contains a character who holds onto strong christian beliefs. This character is not a "go to church on Sunday because its mainstream in America" person. If you find people who hold strongly to their beliefs no matter what outsiders might think offensive you shouldn't be reading a story starring Hidan as a main character anyway, much less complain to me about "not being open minded" and "being politically incorrect". You have been forewarned. Please review/flame about things other than the character's religious beliefs. Thanks!
Chapter One - The Unforeseen Complications of Sealing Tailed Beasts
"Hey Master Sasori," Deidara spoke as he and his partner approached the hidden cave with Gaara being carried behind him by one of his sculptures.
"What is it, Deidara?"
"Who built that big statue that we're sealing the tailed beasts inside anyway, hm?" The question had been building up in his mind ever since he had seen it and Deidara couldn't help but wonder about it. That and question internally how they were even sure it would work properly if the one-tailed demon was the first demon to actually be sealed up.
"That's classified information," Sasori replied causing Deidara to swear angrily.
"You probably don't even know. How do we know the thing even works in the first place, hm? For all we know something will go wrong and the one-tailed beast will just break out of the statue and ransack everyone unfortunate enough to be around, hm."
Sasori shook his head irritably and sarcastically commented, "Or maybe the floodgates of hell will be opened and an entire legion of demons will be unleashed? I myself have inspected the statue and there is nothing that will go wrong with the sealing, it's the same as reverse sealing summons, only in a statue instead of a scroll. So stop being a moron and pick up the pace brat. We're late enough as it is."
Soon enough they were standing in the midst of the other Akatsuki members ready and waiting to seal away the tailed beast. And everything went smoothly during the stealing and sealing of Shukaku the tailed beast within Gaara with the exception of the teams of Konoha ninja's two days into the ritual.
At least in the physical realm things were going smoothly, what the Akatsuki did not know though was their sealing ritual had opened up a very noticeable rift in dimensions and while in the original Naruto universe this rift simply opened up into a nearly identical world in this spin of the tale the rift opened into a larger universe. The universe it opened into was the real one where all the universes created by the imaginations of humans came from.
In the real world a young woman sat in her mother's living room watching her younger brother maliciously fight against fiends in his Ninja Gaiden video game. With a frown she spoke up, "You know mom doesn't like you playing games like that."
Her brother shrugged indifferently allowing the tv screen to reflect off of his glasses, "Hey its either this or you playing against me in Halo but we all know how much you suck at that game."
The woman stood up from the couch and stretched her arms in a yawn before speaking out loud, "Well video games are bad for cognitive development anyway, give me a book any day over tv or video games. I'm going to the kitchen, is there anything you want me to bring back for you?"
Her brother nodded and said, "A pepsi and the bag of frietos in the cupboard. Thanks."
"No prob." The woman walked trough the doorway of the kitchen and walked over to the fridge. She opened it up and peered through her glasses at the interior trying to decide what she wanted to munch on. With a slight grunt she took out a gallon of milk and walked over to the cupboard to pull out a box of frosted flakes. 'The midday snack for champions.' The woman mused as she poured herself a bowl of cereal to eat.
"Ashley!"
The loud voice of her mother interrupted her from pouring milk into her bowl and she looked over her shoulder and shouted back "Yeah mom! What is it?"
"Could you run out to the corner store for me and get some bug spray? I'm all out of it and I need to get a bunch of spiders in these closets!"
"Sure! I'll be back in five minutes!" Ashley replied and left her cereal on the table. She grabbed her car keys of the counter and walked out the front door to her car.
Ashley drove down the road musing to herself about her brother and family when out of the corner of her eye she spotted a teenage redhead walk listlessly in front of her car. She hear a thump and slammed on her brakes. "Ohnonononono!"
Panicking Ashley stepped out of her car and ran to the front, looking for any sign of the kid she was sure she had hit. There he was about three feet away just lying there. "Oh crud!" Ashley shouted and ran towards him as she dialed 9-1-1 on her cell phone, "Socorro emergency center, how can I help you?"
Ashlen knelt down next to the boy and looked him over while she hastily replied, "Yeah, I hit a kid who walked out into the street, send an ambulance or something, he's not moving! I'm at the intersection of Hefner and Main-"
There was a sudden blaring sound and Ashley looked up in horror as the front end of a truck entered her view and there was an excruciating blunt pain before there was suddenly just white. It was so beautiful and peaceful there in the light as if all the worries of her life on earth where slowly slipping away, she realized she could be dieing and with a smile she gratefully accepted it, "I'm going home now, aren't I?"
"No Ashley," Tears nearly sprang into her eyes as she heard his voice. It was soothing and gentle but Ashley shook at the power behind the words. This was God, the creator of everything in the universe and here she was a lowly human, only worth something because of her strongly held faith in his son. He was perfect she knew and she however 'goody' her classmates at the New Mexico Institute of Mining and Technology thought she was she was truly vile.
"You will live Ashley but not as you have previously." Ashley felt very confused. She was sure after death she would simply spend the rest of her time with God in heaven. Was this not true death but one of those out of body experiences she had heard about?
"I am sending you as my messenger to a realm that the adversary had unleashed. Know that the people there are now as real as you are and that they all have true souls now. I know as my prophet in this new world you will do great things. Live a good life, preach constantly and if necessary use words to do it."
"I will do anything you want me to do Lord God," Ashley replied with a smile and then she blinked. She was standing in a forest and it was a beautiful sunny afternoon. Ashley looked around at the natural beauty she was surrounded in before she glanced down at herself. She looked the same as before but somehow she felt different. Tanned skin? Check. Shoulder long black hair? Check. Dark green eyes? Well she couldn't 'check' that but suddenly it hit her.
She was seeing in vibrant full detail without her glasses. Apparently that was the difference and without actually imagining that a face to face encounter with God could change anything else about her set off into the world, feeling passionate with a holy fire fueling her steps. She was on a mission to be a witness to the godless people of this world and no force no matter if it be benevolent or evil was going to stand in her way.
In the final hour of the sealing ceremony somewhere miles away Hidan suddenly sneezed.
End Chapter One
Well please review. Remember please no flames for my portrayal of God or Ashley in regards to her faith please/thanks.
By Shironami Kane
Summery: A series of encounters between Hidan and an otherworldly displaced christian begins to set the stage for a revelation of powers not built up by earthly forces but divine ones. Can two very different individuals with very different faiths change the world?
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters from the series Naruto and am only using them for my own amusement, not monetary gain or anything.
Note: This story contains a character who holds onto strong christian beliefs. This character is not a "go to church on Sunday because its mainstream in America" person. If you find people who hold strongly to their beliefs no matter what outsiders might think offensive you shouldn't be reading a story starring Hidan as a main character anyway, much less complain to me about "not being open minded" and "being politically incorrect". You have been forewarned. Please review/flame about things other than the character's religious beliefs. Thanks!
Chapter One - The Unforeseen Complications of Sealing Tailed Beasts
"Hey Master Sasori," Deidara spoke as he and his partner approached the hidden cave with Gaara being carried behind him by one of his sculptures.
"What is it, Deidara?"
"Who built that big statue that we're sealing the tailed beasts inside anyway, hm?" The question had been building up in his mind ever since he had seen it and Deidara couldn't help but wonder about it. That and question internally how they were even sure it would work properly if the one-tailed demon was the first demon to actually be sealed up.
"That's classified information," Sasori replied causing Deidara to swear angrily.
"You probably don't even know. How do we know the thing even works in the first place, hm? For all we know something will go wrong and the one-tailed beast will just break out of the statue and ransack everyone unfortunate enough to be around, hm."
Sasori shook his head irritably and sarcastically commented, "Or maybe the floodgates of hell will be opened and an entire legion of demons will be unleashed? I myself have inspected the statue and there is nothing that will go wrong with the sealing, it's the same as reverse sealing summons, only in a statue instead of a scroll. So stop being a moron and pick up the pace brat. We're late enough as it is."
Soon enough they were standing in the midst of the other Akatsuki members ready and waiting to seal away the tailed beast. And everything went smoothly during the stealing and sealing of Shukaku the tailed beast within Gaara with the exception of the teams of Konoha ninja's two days into the ritual.
At least in the physical realm things were going smoothly, what the Akatsuki did not know though was their sealing ritual had opened up a very noticeable rift in dimensions and while in the original Naruto universe this rift simply opened up into a nearly identical world in this spin of the tale the rift opened into a larger universe. The universe it opened into was the real one where all the universes created by the imaginations of humans came from.
In the real world a young woman sat in her mother's living room watching her younger brother maliciously fight against fiends in his Ninja Gaiden video game. With a frown she spoke up, "You know mom doesn't like you playing games like that."
Her brother shrugged indifferently allowing the tv screen to reflect off of his glasses, "Hey its either this or you playing against me in Halo but we all know how much you suck at that game."
The woman stood up from the couch and stretched her arms in a yawn before speaking out loud, "Well video games are bad for cognitive development anyway, give me a book any day over tv or video games. I'm going to the kitchen, is there anything you want me to bring back for you?"
Her brother nodded and said, "A pepsi and the bag of frietos in the cupboard. Thanks."
"No prob." The woman walked trough the doorway of the kitchen and walked over to the fridge. She opened it up and peered through her glasses at the interior trying to decide what she wanted to munch on. With a slight grunt she took out a gallon of milk and walked over to the cupboard to pull out a box of frosted flakes. 'The midday snack for champions.' The woman mused as she poured herself a bowl of cereal to eat.
"Ashley!"
The loud voice of her mother interrupted her from pouring milk into her bowl and she looked over her shoulder and shouted back "Yeah mom! What is it?"
"Could you run out to the corner store for me and get some bug spray? I'm all out of it and I need to get a bunch of spiders in these closets!"
"Sure! I'll be back in five minutes!" Ashley replied and left her cereal on the table. She grabbed her car keys of the counter and walked out the front door to her car.
Ashley drove down the road musing to herself about her brother and family when out of the corner of her eye she spotted a teenage redhead walk listlessly in front of her car. She hear a thump and slammed on her brakes. "Ohnonononono!"
Panicking Ashley stepped out of her car and ran to the front, looking for any sign of the kid she was sure she had hit. There he was about three feet away just lying there. "Oh crud!" Ashley shouted and ran towards him as she dialed 9-1-1 on her cell phone, "Socorro emergency center, how can I help you?"
Ashlen knelt down next to the boy and looked him over while she hastily replied, "Yeah, I hit a kid who walked out into the street, send an ambulance or something, he's not moving! I'm at the intersection of Hefner and Main-"
There was a sudden blaring sound and Ashley looked up in horror as the front end of a truck entered her view and there was an excruciating blunt pain before there was suddenly just white. It was so beautiful and peaceful there in the light as if all the worries of her life on earth where slowly slipping away, she realized she could be dieing and with a smile she gratefully accepted it, "I'm going home now, aren't I?"
"No Ashley," Tears nearly sprang into her eyes as she heard his voice. It was soothing and gentle but Ashley shook at the power behind the words. This was God, the creator of everything in the universe and here she was a lowly human, only worth something because of her strongly held faith in his son. He was perfect she knew and she however 'goody' her classmates at the New Mexico Institute of Mining and Technology thought she was she was truly vile.
"You will live Ashley but not as you have previously." Ashley felt very confused. She was sure after death she would simply spend the rest of her time with God in heaven. Was this not true death but one of those out of body experiences she had heard about?
"I am sending you as my messenger to a realm that the adversary had unleashed. Know that the people there are now as real as you are and that they all have true souls now. I know as my prophet in this new world you will do great things. Live a good life, preach constantly and if necessary use words to do it."
"I will do anything you want me to do Lord God," Ashley replied with a smile and then she blinked. She was standing in a forest and it was a beautiful sunny afternoon. Ashley looked around at the natural beauty she was surrounded in before she glanced down at herself. She looked the same as before but somehow she felt different. Tanned skin? Check. Shoulder long black hair? Check. Dark green eyes? Well she couldn't 'check' that but suddenly it hit her.
She was seeing in vibrant full detail without her glasses. Apparently that was the difference and without actually imagining that a face to face encounter with God could change anything else about her set off into the world, feeling passionate with a holy fire fueling her steps. She was on a mission to be a witness to the godless people of this world and no force no matter if it be benevolent or evil was going to stand in her way.
In the final hour of the sealing ceremony somewhere miles away Hidan suddenly sneezed.
End Chapter One
Well please review. Remember please no flames for my portrayal of God or Ashley in regards to her faith please/thanks.