Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Here Puppy, Puppy, Puppy ❯ Self Pity ( Chapter 3 )

[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]

Sorry to anyone who liked this story I am not going to continue it. I have so little inspiration for it anymore. Moving on I am starting a new story not quite sure about the main pairing but it will be Itachi pairing and it will be yaoi. I do not need a beta, my grammar is pretty decent (I will laugh my ass off at the irony if I find a grammatical mistake in that sentence.)But I do need some to help with ideas act kinda like a muse. For if I get stuck on something (CoughCough, this story) If you are interested contact me at apatheticwhitemoon@yahoo.com. Please, if you know my other email don't use it, I rarely check it anymore.
Here is a preview of my new story, it is in Itachi POV.

Blood on my lips pouring down my mouth.. chocking me
Can barely breath through smell of rust... darkness
Heart stops beating. yet still drawing in breath through blood soaked passageways
Screams torn from throat.. heat, pulse of a heart beat.. fire dances across skin
Eyes permanent scarlet.. claws lash out. bones shift... crack
Raw.. torn away. exposed… helpless
Flying flashes of light.. a golden sun. bright blue oceans
Husky words never quite heard but one… Home
Dappled green trees large mountains…
Bright white... screaming. head hurts body numb.. clean cold smell
Beeping.. shoes on tile. ice rushing through veins… more darkness.......

Ok for anyone confused, something happens to Itachi (not telling what, yet), he is taken to Kohana, and put in the hospital. Sasuke finds out (screaming.) Nurse walks in an knock Itachi's ass out with drugs. I hate the feeling of medicine through IV. Yes that paragraph is a grammatical disater it is meant to be. Okay so if you are intrested my email is apatheticwhitemoon@yahoo.com. Please contact me I NEED help.