Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ high school romance ❯ the morning of the test ( Chapter 11 )
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By: 1hinata28 
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Comedy / Drama / Romance | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 12.12.2007 | Updated On: 12.12.2007 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.6K | Visits: 190 | Status: Work In Progress
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Comedy / Drama / Romance | Type: Other | Uploaded On: 12.12.2007 | Updated On: 12.12.2007 | Pages: 3 | Words: 2.6K | Visits: 190 | Status: Work In Progress
Wow chapter 11 already I am so proud of me. Lolz well this is chapter 11. also if you have any good songs you would like hinata or naruto to sing put it in a review or email. If you like to help with what Sasuke has to dress up as just message me or add it to a review. The plan will not be reviled until the dance so I hope you like anticipation.
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!!OKAY!! So in this chapter it is the day Hinata and Naruto must pass the test. The test for them to go to a dance and they are very determined. The time I have skipped they have been working on there walking and their waltz. Also Sakura and Garra’s plan has been changed to the night of the dance. Have Naruto and Hinata learned the waltz? Can they walk the mile? I am in agony trying to decide. And I am the one panicking over this and I am righting it.
----------------------------8AM 2 hours before test------------------------------------
(the clock was set wroung that will be said later hehe i figured i would say it before you got confused))
Hinata once again waking up before Naruto slowly stands up and walks to Naruto. Then she picks up a stick neer the night stand that is labeled Naruto poking stick. Hinata then pokes Naruto with the sticks and waits for him to wake up. Naruto opens his eyes wondering what had poked him he awoke to see Hinata standing over him.
“ ohayo Hinata-Chan how are you” Naruto said sitting up in the bed running his eyes.
“oh I am fine just nervous about today”
“why what is today”
“Naruto-Kun did you seriously forget”
Naruto then stares into space like an idiot then gets an enlighten look “oh ya today we got to do that walk today and tomorrow the waltz”
“Naruto-Kun you really aren’t nervous about today”
“nope I have confidence in us so we will do good Hinata-Chan”
Hinata smiled at him then says “Naruto-Kun soon you have to sing the song I planed you gatta sing it while we walk okay”
“okay okay I understand will do” Naruto said with a small grin on his face.
“YAY I love it when Naruto-Kun sings”
Naruto scratches his head and laughs at this statement.
“I am not that good” Naruto replied
“yes you are Naruto-Kun just you wait and see”
“What every Hinata-Chan do you want to practice the waltz since I am not to good at it”
“sure Naruto-Kun since we have to do it tomorrow might as well practice”
Naruto walks over to the CD player and turns it on as the music to the waltz begins. For the first few minutes everything goes perfectly. Towards the end Naruto messes up allot accidentally stepping on Hinata’s foot twice along with falling over at the end of it.
“sorry Hinata-Chan were not going to pass that part at this rate”
“don’t worry Naruto we will get it”
Hinata reaches her hand out for Naruto to help him up. Naruto takes her hand and she pulls him up.
“Hinata-Chan where going to be in public with that song so uhhh do you mind if I sing a Christmas song”
“nope Naruto-Kun you are singing that song I told you to no way your getting out of it”
“nope Naruto-kun you re singing it no excuses”
“fine”
“lets get dressed and get ready Naruto”
“okay Hinata you can use the bathroom to get dressed I will stay out here and dress”
“okay Naruto”
Hinata walks into the bathroom and gets dressed. At the same time Naruto is getting dressed in the main room. After they get dressed the each put on a leg brace to help support the leg so it is not re injured during therapy.
“ready Naruto”
“yup lets go the test starts in about an hour mid as well walk over there”
“Yeah”
Naruto and Hinata both leave and go down to the lobby. They say they are going for a bit for therapy. They walk to the park next to the hospital. This is the same park the plan was made by Garra, Sakura and the rest of the group. Hinata tells Naruto is is going to the fountain for awhile and Naruto is staying outside the park for awhile and wait for the doctor.
When Hinata reaches the center of the park she sits in the middle of the old rickety worn out bench near the fountain. This bench is atop a 10 foot high hill over looking the fountain and it is close to the edge.
((yes something is going to happen with the bench that is why it is so critical it be there))
Naruto soon shows up near Hinata jumps into a tree then says
“I just noticed we are like 3 hours early for the actually test the clock in the room was off allot”
“are you serious Naruto-Kun that sucks”
“oh well at least we get some time to our selves in the park.
“yeah you are right Naruto I hope time goes by quick.”
“Hinata want something to eat I will go into town and get something for ya”
“yeah sure I did not have breakfasts yet”
“okay what do you want to eat”
“uhhh how about a McDonalds Egg mcmuffin with cheese then stop and Dunkin Donuts and get me a hot coco and donut” Hinata says cheerfully since she has not had coffee or donuts in a long time.
“okay Hinata I understand it might take a little bit gatta stop by my house for a few minutes and grab my money”
“okay Naruto”
“I will be back. Love ya Hinata-Chan” he gave her a kiss then ran off waving by to her.
Hinata waved by back to him as he left. Hinata then laid on the rickety bench and fell asleep
Naruto was walking down the street. While he was walking was stopped by TenTen and Neji was soon behind TenTen. Neji and TenTen where out for a walk trying to find Hiashi’s lost dog.
“Hey Naruto what are you doing out of the hospital” TenTen said
“oh well me and Hinata have to walk a mile in the park today to see if we can go to the dance”
“oh I see and where are you going now” TenTen replied
“oh Hinata wants a egg mcmuffin from McDonalds and a coffee and donut at Dunkin donuts”
“Oh o see well have fun. What time is your test”
“12 noon we got mixed up with time so we are like 3-4 hours early for it unfortunately” Naruto said
“oh well I hope you guys can make it to the dance” TenTen said
Neji is standing there trying to keep his mouth shut and not say anything that will make TenTen mad.
“Well I will be going now gatta get that stuff for Hinata-Chan”
“oh wait Naruto did you see a really big, black, hairy dog run by”
“umm yeah I think so. I think he ran that way. Down the ally”
“thank you Naruto. See ya later. Come on Neji-Kun” TenTen said
“hmmm” Neji replied
They both quickly ran off down the alley in search of the black dog. Naruto just watched as they ran off wondering what that was about. When they where no longer in sight he began to walk to McDonalds once again. He walks into McDonalds and notices someone he knows standing at the counter. A red hair boy at his part time job. Wearing red and yellow with a hamburger hat. Naruto tries not to laugh as he walks up to the counter.
“can I have” long pause “two egg Mcmuffins” Naruto says pausing so he did not laugh.
The guy looked up recognizing the voice “ yeah your order will be ready soon”
“Naruto what are you doing here your supposed to be in the hospital” Garra said
“long story and I don’t feel like explaining”
“fine Naruto be that way this come to 4 dollars and 50 cents”
“okay” hands Garra the money.
Naruto takes the MCmuffins then he walks out the door and heads for the dunking donuts witch is located right next to it. He walks into the place again sees someone he knows. This time it is Sakura and she ios wearing a white outfit and a hat at the register. Naruto walks up to the desk still on the verg from laughing about Garra’s outfit.
“umm can I have 2 chocolate donuts and 2 hot chocolates”
“sure you can that comes to 6 dollars and 50 cents” she says with out looking up
He pays her and gets what he ordered and then he tried to leave. Naruto was relived he was not noticed by her. But it was to good to be true. Sakura soon ran up to him stopping him right before reaching the door. Naruto slowly turns around and looks at Sakura a bit frightened.
“umm- hello Sakura” Naruto is frightened of her because she is the only on who could passably find out Hinata and his secret.
“hi Naruto where ya going”
“to bring the food I buaght to the park so me and Hinata an have breakfast”
“oh I see well you better hurry”
“okay oh and I am only out due to the fact me and Hinata have to walk a mile at noon on the park track. To see if we can go to the winter ball”
“I see Naruto well out you go”
Naruto just looks at her like she is crazy then leaves. Sakura suddenly has a plan pop into her head. She gets off work at 11:30AM. She grabs her cell phone and calls every one including Neji. She tells them to meet up outside the park at noon that day. They all agree to come Sasuke could care less but he complained about going through the trouble. Sasuke finally decided to come. They plan to meet up a few feet away from the entrance.
Naruto yawns while walking back to the park and is complain about walking with all the stuff. He is now talking to himself so he does no complain to Hinata later. Naruto decides to sit on the bench inferno’s of the park for awhile to rest it is now currently 10:00AM. Then he says to himself “I wonder what Hinata is up to right now. Naruto soon stands up and leaves the stuff on the bench and grabs a large stick. He then starts to practice the waltz moves. He keeps doing it and he keeps messing up at the end. He dose it over and over for more then a half hour with no improvement.
“man I stink at this I can’t even do the waltz.”
Just as he had said that a man with pitch black hair arrives in front of him. This man has jet black hair it is cut short and has a shine to it, his eyes are hazel with specks of green, he is tall approximately 6 foot 5. He was skinny yet muscular. He was more intimidating then Garra but seemed almost as kind as Hinata. The man seemed about 5 years older then Naruto. This man seemed to be a complete mystery to Naruto. He had never seen this man before but this man seemed familiar in a big way. The man suddenly started to do the waltz with Naruto. Naruto taking the lead of course.
As they where doing the waltz Naruto was thinking to himself who is this man and why is he doing this? Why is he here? Who is he? What dose he want? Is he a friend or foe?
Why dose this seem so nostalgic? And why and I continuing to do the waltz with this man?
This time at the end; the part Naruto always messed up on causing him to fall on his face; this time was different Naruto did not fall! Naruto did not mess up! Naruto did not make a mistake! he did it perfectly not one mistake not once screw up perfectly!
After they finished Naruto looked up at the tall man and said.
“who are you why do you seem so familiar to me”
“you do not need to know that right now you will know soon enough”
With that the man left and went into the park: giving no information at all to Naruto about who he was or why he had been there. Naruto stood in shock for awhile wondering who the man was and why he was there.
Naruto soon sat back on the bench for awhile thinking about the man and who he was. Nothing came to Naruto so he stood there for another 10 minutes it is now 10:40 AM
((I know it is late for breakfast o well lolz)).
it has been 10 minutes since that man left Naruto stands up and enters the park walking slowly.
--------------------------------------back to Hinata--------------------------------------
Naruto still has not arrived.
Hinata is still very much asleep and is a very heavy sleeper. So when the old bench begins to break down and crumble she stays asleep. A very strong wind begins to blows and this wind is coming from the north heading south. This wind hit’s the bench from the back side. The bench begins to wobble and suddenly Hinata is seen falling from the bench, and then off the edge off the edge cliff. Her eyes still closed in a deep sleep unaware of the impending danger that lies ahead.
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OMG! I repeat OMG!. What’s goanna happen tell me tell me please. Wait I have to tell you this is not a good situation. Lolz just kidding lolz. Anyway I need some help giving this man a first name so please help me out.
Oh and sorry for taking so long with the update I normally update quicker I was in a pissed off mood this week so that is why. I will be returning to my normal updating schedule probably this week end so ya be excited. Well I hope this chapter satisfies you ever growing obsession with my story. Just kidding but I hope you like it.
----------------------------------------Prolog------------- ---------------------------------
!!OKAY!! So in this chapter it is the day Hinata and Naruto must pass the test. The test for them to go to a dance and they are very determined. The time I have skipped they have been working on there walking and their waltz. Also Sakura and Garra’s plan has been changed to the night of the dance. Have Naruto and Hinata learned the waltz? Can they walk the mile? I am in agony trying to decide. And I am the one panicking over this and I am righting it.
----------------------------8AM 2 hours before test------------------------------------
(the clock was set wroung that will be said later hehe i figured i would say it before you got confused))
Hinata once again waking up before Naruto slowly stands up and walks to Naruto. Then she picks up a stick neer the night stand that is labeled Naruto poking stick. Hinata then pokes Naruto with the sticks and waits for him to wake up. Naruto opens his eyes wondering what had poked him he awoke to see Hinata standing over him.
“ ohayo Hinata-Chan how are you” Naruto said sitting up in the bed running his eyes.
“oh I am fine just nervous about today”
“why what is today”
“Naruto-Kun did you seriously forget”
Naruto then stares into space like an idiot then gets an enlighten look “oh ya today we got to do that walk today and tomorrow the waltz”
“Naruto-Kun you really aren’t nervous about today”
“nope I have confidence in us so we will do good Hinata-Chan”
Hinata smiled at him then says “Naruto-Kun soon you have to sing the song I planed you gatta sing it while we walk okay”
“okay okay I understand will do” Naruto said with a small grin on his face.
“YAY I love it when Naruto-Kun sings”
Naruto scratches his head and laughs at this statement.
“I am not that good” Naruto replied
“yes you are Naruto-Kun just you wait and see”
“What every Hinata-Chan do you want to practice the waltz since I am not to good at it”
“sure Naruto-Kun since we have to do it tomorrow might as well practice”
Naruto walks over to the CD player and turns it on as the music to the waltz begins. For the first few minutes everything goes perfectly. Towards the end Naruto messes up allot accidentally stepping on Hinata’s foot twice along with falling over at the end of it.
“sorry Hinata-Chan were not going to pass that part at this rate”
“don’t worry Naruto we will get it”
Hinata reaches her hand out for Naruto to help him up. Naruto takes her hand and she pulls him up.
“Hinata-Chan where going to be in public with that song so uhhh do you mind if I sing a Christmas song”
“nope Naruto-Kun you are singing that song I told you to no way your getting out of it”
“nope Naruto-kun you re singing it no excuses”
“fine”
“lets get dressed and get ready Naruto”
“okay Hinata you can use the bathroom to get dressed I will stay out here and dress”
“okay Naruto”
Hinata walks into the bathroom and gets dressed. At the same time Naruto is getting dressed in the main room. After they get dressed the each put on a leg brace to help support the leg so it is not re injured during therapy.
“ready Naruto”
“yup lets go the test starts in about an hour mid as well walk over there”
“Yeah”
Naruto and Hinata both leave and go down to the lobby. They say they are going for a bit for therapy. They walk to the park next to the hospital. This is the same park the plan was made by Garra, Sakura and the rest of the group. Hinata tells Naruto is is going to the fountain for awhile and Naruto is staying outside the park for awhile and wait for the doctor.
When Hinata reaches the center of the park she sits in the middle of the old rickety worn out bench near the fountain. This bench is atop a 10 foot high hill over looking the fountain and it is close to the edge.
((yes something is going to happen with the bench that is why it is so critical it be there))
Naruto soon shows up near Hinata jumps into a tree then says
“I just noticed we are like 3 hours early for the actually test the clock in the room was off allot”
“are you serious Naruto-Kun that sucks”
“oh well at least we get some time to our selves in the park.
“yeah you are right Naruto I hope time goes by quick.”
“Hinata want something to eat I will go into town and get something for ya”
“yeah sure I did not have breakfasts yet”
“okay what do you want to eat”
“uhhh how about a McDonalds Egg mcmuffin with cheese then stop and Dunkin Donuts and get me a hot coco and donut” Hinata says cheerfully since she has not had coffee or donuts in a long time.
“okay Hinata I understand it might take a little bit gatta stop by my house for a few minutes and grab my money”
“okay Naruto”
“I will be back. Love ya Hinata-Chan” he gave her a kiss then ran off waving by to her.
Hinata waved by back to him as he left. Hinata then laid on the rickety bench and fell asleep
Naruto was walking down the street. While he was walking was stopped by TenTen and Neji was soon behind TenTen. Neji and TenTen where out for a walk trying to find Hiashi’s lost dog.
“Hey Naruto what are you doing out of the hospital” TenTen said
“oh well me and Hinata have to walk a mile in the park today to see if we can go to the dance”
“oh I see and where are you going now” TenTen replied
“oh Hinata wants a egg mcmuffin from McDonalds and a coffee and donut at Dunkin donuts”
“Oh o see well have fun. What time is your test”
“12 noon we got mixed up with time so we are like 3-4 hours early for it unfortunately” Naruto said
“oh well I hope you guys can make it to the dance” TenTen said
Neji is standing there trying to keep his mouth shut and not say anything that will make TenTen mad.
“Well I will be going now gatta get that stuff for Hinata-Chan”
“oh wait Naruto did you see a really big, black, hairy dog run by”
“umm yeah I think so. I think he ran that way. Down the ally”
“thank you Naruto. See ya later. Come on Neji-Kun” TenTen said
“hmmm” Neji replied
They both quickly ran off down the alley in search of the black dog. Naruto just watched as they ran off wondering what that was about. When they where no longer in sight he began to walk to McDonalds once again. He walks into McDonalds and notices someone he knows standing at the counter. A red hair boy at his part time job. Wearing red and yellow with a hamburger hat. Naruto tries not to laugh as he walks up to the counter.
“can I have” long pause “two egg Mcmuffins” Naruto says pausing so he did not laugh.
The guy looked up recognizing the voice “ yeah your order will be ready soon”
“Naruto what are you doing here your supposed to be in the hospital” Garra said
“long story and I don’t feel like explaining”
“fine Naruto be that way this come to 4 dollars and 50 cents”
“okay” hands Garra the money.
Naruto takes the MCmuffins then he walks out the door and heads for the dunking donuts witch is located right next to it. He walks into the place again sees someone he knows. This time it is Sakura and she ios wearing a white outfit and a hat at the register. Naruto walks up to the desk still on the verg from laughing about Garra’s outfit.
“umm can I have 2 chocolate donuts and 2 hot chocolates”
“sure you can that comes to 6 dollars and 50 cents” she says with out looking up
He pays her and gets what he ordered and then he tried to leave. Naruto was relived he was not noticed by her. But it was to good to be true. Sakura soon ran up to him stopping him right before reaching the door. Naruto slowly turns around and looks at Sakura a bit frightened.
“umm- hello Sakura” Naruto is frightened of her because she is the only on who could passably find out Hinata and his secret.
“hi Naruto where ya going”
“to bring the food I buaght to the park so me and Hinata an have breakfast”
“oh I see well you better hurry”
“okay oh and I am only out due to the fact me and Hinata have to walk a mile at noon on the park track. To see if we can go to the winter ball”
“I see Naruto well out you go”
Naruto just looks at her like she is crazy then leaves. Sakura suddenly has a plan pop into her head. She gets off work at 11:30AM. She grabs her cell phone and calls every one including Neji. She tells them to meet up outside the park at noon that day. They all agree to come Sasuke could care less but he complained about going through the trouble. Sasuke finally decided to come. They plan to meet up a few feet away from the entrance.
Naruto yawns while walking back to the park and is complain about walking with all the stuff. He is now talking to himself so he does no complain to Hinata later. Naruto decides to sit on the bench inferno’s of the park for awhile to rest it is now currently 10:00AM. Then he says to himself “I wonder what Hinata is up to right now. Naruto soon stands up and leaves the stuff on the bench and grabs a large stick. He then starts to practice the waltz moves. He keeps doing it and he keeps messing up at the end. He dose it over and over for more then a half hour with no improvement.
“man I stink at this I can’t even do the waltz.”
Just as he had said that a man with pitch black hair arrives in front of him. This man has jet black hair it is cut short and has a shine to it, his eyes are hazel with specks of green, he is tall approximately 6 foot 5. He was skinny yet muscular. He was more intimidating then Garra but seemed almost as kind as Hinata. The man seemed about 5 years older then Naruto. This man seemed to be a complete mystery to Naruto. He had never seen this man before but this man seemed familiar in a big way. The man suddenly started to do the waltz with Naruto. Naruto taking the lead of course.
As they where doing the waltz Naruto was thinking to himself who is this man and why is he doing this? Why is he here? Who is he? What dose he want? Is he a friend or foe?
Why dose this seem so nostalgic? And why and I continuing to do the waltz with this man?
This time at the end; the part Naruto always messed up on causing him to fall on his face; this time was different Naruto did not fall! Naruto did not mess up! Naruto did not make a mistake! he did it perfectly not one mistake not once screw up perfectly!
After they finished Naruto looked up at the tall man and said.
“who are you why do you seem so familiar to me”
“you do not need to know that right now you will know soon enough”
With that the man left and went into the park: giving no information at all to Naruto about who he was or why he had been there. Naruto stood in shock for awhile wondering who the man was and why he was there.
Naruto soon sat back on the bench for awhile thinking about the man and who he was. Nothing came to Naruto so he stood there for another 10 minutes it is now 10:40 AM
((I know it is late for breakfast o well lolz)).
it has been 10 minutes since that man left Naruto stands up and enters the park walking slowly.
--------------------------------------back to Hinata--------------------------------------
Naruto still has not arrived.
Hinata is still very much asleep and is a very heavy sleeper. So when the old bench begins to break down and crumble she stays asleep. A very strong wind begins to blows and this wind is coming from the north heading south. This wind hit’s the bench from the back side. The bench begins to wobble and suddenly Hinata is seen falling from the bench, and then off the edge off the edge cliff. Her eyes still closed in a deep sleep unaware of the impending danger that lies ahead.
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OMG! I repeat OMG!. What’s goanna happen tell me tell me please. Wait I have to tell you this is not a good situation. Lolz just kidding lolz. Anyway I need some help giving this man a first name so please help me out.
Oh and sorry for taking so long with the update I normally update quicker I was in a pissed off mood this week so that is why. I will be returning to my normal updating schedule probably this week end so ya be excited. Well I hope this chapter satisfies you ever growing obsession with my story. Just kidding but I hope you like it.