Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ I failed you daddy blue eyes ❯ Chapter 5
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By: Kaitiiro 
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst / / Romance / Hentai / Action | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 07.25.2006 | Pages: 1 | Words: 2.0K | Visits: 214 | Status: Completed
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Angst / / Romance / Hentai / Action | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 07.25.2006 | Pages: 1 | Words: 2.0K | Visits: 214 | Status: Completed
AN: I'm changing point of views in this chapter... hope you dont get confused... I'm going to change from first person to third person... I'll start with first... you'll see an change later... Oh, and Frikin Carefree Trunks... I took your advice to heart... oh, that and please tell my TSFAP that I'm going to hurt her...Ah, yes... on with the chappie
Chapter 5
I walk silently beside the four teens. Really, I was beside Neji, who was beside Hinata, who was walking alittle ways back from the other two girls, who were talking avidly about how 'alike' Sasuke-niisan and I were... they were annoying and I think I have said the word more today than I have in all of my life. I was still worried about My daddy blue eyes... but he DID promise that he would be back in EXACTLY a month. So I push these thoughts to the back of my mind and concentrate on how annoying the ones called Sakura, and Ino were. How did daddy and niisan stand them every day? "Umm... though I am 'flattered' that you find me similar to Sasuke-niisan, I would preferr not to hear it every five seconds... please?" I added as an afterthought. They stared at me... "What?" I ask in what I am sure is an emotionless voice. "You know Sasuke-kun?" asked Sakura. I narrow my eyes. What did I say that was so wrong... why was me knowing niisan surprisin... Ah, they don't know... I shrug. "Yeah, he was my sparing partner..." I know my voice seems non commital but I have to see their reactions. The one named Hinata was looking faint, Sakura seemed shocked, Ino was gaping like a fish, and Neji was just star... no excuse me, glaring down at me. They are weird... This is what I have decided. Though I think maybe it has something to do with my age... yeah, thats it... "Don't look at me like that..." I say in annoyance... see... annoying again.
Sakura laughs nervously. "ah, funny..." the two other girls laugh sofly also and I feel slightly bereft. what in the world was so funny? and why was Hinata laughing... I was going to be nicer to her too... I think maybe I'm pouting because Sakura smiles softly at me before saying, "Kids, and their imaginations..." I growl at her and disappear in a cloud of black. I hear Sakura gasp before I notice that I am not alone. I had moved to another corner of the street but it seems Neji knew where I was going. Hmm... I wonder. "You are... not normal," He says and I raise my eyebrow. "No, I'm a purple pickle bent on taking over the nearest donut shop... then... I'm on to taking over the world" I say this with an emotionless voice and my face set in a serious expression. Neji stares, and it seems a villager had been passing by while I was talking because
said villager paled and ran off muttering something about warning Krispy, and Kreme. This village is weird... I wonder what Sasuke-niisan is doing right now...
I need... to leave. I need... to wait... it is so hot... I'm feeling sad... my daddy better be safe. He promised. I realize that I am zoning out... "Let us go back to the others," I say softly. I think maybe I'm losing it. Someone is talking, well, whispering... 'look at the demon...', 'yes... I know, now we have to put up with two of them...' I growl but dont do anything besides the desire I have to rip them limb from limb. I do nothing, because I promised I wouldn't cause trouble. That didn't make me lower my killing intent... which I am sure that Neji felt as he was standing beside me. He made no attempt to show a reaction so I ignored him. Once we reach Sakura, she grabbed my hand and I allowed her to walk me like some juvenile child to what ever destination she had in mind. Said destination just happened to be Ino's flower shop. I stare up at it... as we walk in I sigh. Neji decided that he and Hinata would be heading home and no one protested.
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I sigh... Sakura had been picking me up from school for the past three weeks and I was... minutely annoyed... though I can't say I dislike her company I definitely don't like when she continues to coo annoyingly around me, like I'm some helpless child. I don't mind being a child really, but my daddy blue eyes knows how to treat me. I frown slightly, before smiling. Only one more wee- "Kazuo Uzimaki, will you kindly pay attention to the lesson?" I look up... what in the world? Ah, right... Iruka-sensei has been ill for the past two weeks... he had a substitute... It seems that the substitute hates me more than Iruka... This is great... just flippin great... why harass the six year old huh? why? "Yes," I say quietly. My voice barely a whisper. "Good," the man says. I roll my eyes when his back is turned. Finally, I think as he drones on. I turn my attention to the rest of the class, some were sleeping, some were talking amongst each other, and some were actually paying attention. I frown, how odd... now that I see it each of these people have a group to stay with... I... I am all alone... in this little corner. I can't wait until my daddy blue eyes gets back... I feel so lonely without him. After school I notice Sakura is not there... no one is there and I feel... even more lonely. "Hey, You!" Someone called and I don't bother turning around there is no way that someon- I move to the side as someone trys to push me. Said person falls onto the ground on their face. "Who are you?" I ask the figure. The person in front of me stands up brushing the dirt off of his clothes and attempts to look important... In my opinion he's failing miserably. "I'm Konohamaru..." He grins toothily at me and I snort. "Kono...wha?" I say just to see his reaction. He face faulted. "I'm Konohamaru... Kono.. ham... aruuu" I nod gravely. Though I am not sure why... "Nice to meet you, Konoha...maa...rooo" He just grins. "Hey, how old are you?" this was unexpected... hmm... "six" I say disinterestedly. He rolls his eyes. I hear him mutter 'geeze, baby-sitting...' I grab his wrist in a painful grip... "I am no where near being a 'baby'," I say this with a deadly voice. He chuckles nervously. "Fine..." He looks as if he's at a loss for words... "Want to spar? and where is Sakura?" He looks at me as if... wow... I running out of analogies... hmm...
"So, Sakura sent you...you... to pick me up..." I ask as we walk to one of the training grounds... He nods. "Yea, she had a mission." His voice was bored. As they got closer to the training grounds I saw Sasuke... I grin. "Oh, no... not another fangirl..." He had muttered this.. "Aren't you a little too young to be crushing on Mr. Icicle?" I stare at him. "Are you nutts?" I hiss... "He's like... my brother..." I walk ahead towards Sasuke with a mutter of 'pervert' under my breath. I see out of the corner of my eye that Konohamaru is blushing and I grin. He rushes to catch up with me. "Sasuke-niisan... wanna spar?" Konohamaru turned to me and seemed to pale. "I can't let you spar with him... are you crazy, he'd kill you!" I looked to see Sasuke grinning. I grin back. I don't notice that a few people in that area had come to watch. If I had noticed I still wouldn't have cared. I rushed towards Sasuke my face in a careful mask. I pull out a kunai and I swing my arm in an arc. He bends back and I jump as he attempts to trip me. I back-flipped and threw a shadow shuriken at him, He dodges but that is not my intention... I throw five shuriken, and six kunai... he jumps and I smirk. He's caught in my web. He is pulled back against a tree my weapons holding him there. "I win," I say smiling triumphantly. Sasuke looks murderous and it only makes me feel better. Konohamaru follows me as I walk away from the training ground. "He'll get down soon enough, he hate having help..."
"She... " I look up when Konohamaru and Sakura walk into the room. I sat up, and looked as they sat in a chair opposite the couch in Sakuras' living room. "You.." Sakura said looking at me as if she had seen a decidedly odd phenomenon... I grin. "I..." I say. Really, I have to watch myself... I've been showing more emotions than usual. "You beat Sasuke-kun.." I nod.. then motion for her to continue. "in a spar?" I nod again and wonder if there were other ways to 'beat' Sasuke-niisan if she were to react this way. "Konohamaru says the battle lasted all of.. four minutes..." I stare. "You kept time... " I say in a bored voice. He blushes.
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Sakura was silent as she stared at Kazuo. The girl was confusing. One minute she's impassive, the next she's grinning. She was eating Ramen, silently, and with considerable table manners. One would wonder how she came to be with Naruto of all people. Sakura had nothing against Naruto... No, but... what was she missing that the little girl saw... With a sigh she walked out of the room, Konohamaru had left some time ago, saying something about Moegi and... what was that other kids name... no matter, he said he had a meeting scheduled with Konohamaru Corps. Basically, he and his two friends were going to attempt to cause trouble. Kazuo stood and walked to the window. "Daddy..." she murmured. A feeling of foreboding had settled in her stomach. He's fine... He's ok... He promised... She had to keep positive, He was going to be ok, fine and dandy. Yes.. she said the words 'fine,' and 'dandy' in the same sentence.
xxxxDreamxxxx
It's dark, I'm cold and I can't see... why can't I see? No matter, I'm dreaming... but if I'm dreaming then why do I feel so cold... Sooo...cold... I'm shivering. There is a flash of light... "Daddy!" I cry as I rush forwards. I see him, he's standing there his blue eyes flashing... He's smiling at me... He seems sad though... I gasp as I see his wound... He's hurt.. what do I do? He's hurt... Nooo!! "Fight the hand fate deals you," he said softly... No!! "don't leave me!!!" I scream... "Daughter, Fight fate, you make your own destiny... like me..." I cry sadly... "daddy," I whisper... "I love you,"
xxxxEnd Dreamxxxx
Kazuo wakes up tears falling down her cheeks in rivulets.. "No," she whimpers.. He's ok,... he promised... he never breaks his promises...
With that she fell back into a dreamless sleep.
AN: Seee, it wa-as slightly longer... I'm going to put up chapter 6 sometime in the near future, I need some feed back at the moment because though I know what I want to happen Im at a stand still... please give me your views... opinions... etcetera... love ya buh bye.
AN: Please review... If you have any suggestions, constructive criticism etc... I welcome it.
Chapter 5
I walk silently beside the four teens. Really, I was beside Neji, who was beside Hinata, who was walking alittle ways back from the other two girls, who were talking avidly about how 'alike' Sasuke-niisan and I were... they were annoying and I think I have said the word more today than I have in all of my life. I was still worried about My daddy blue eyes... but he DID promise that he would be back in EXACTLY a month. So I push these thoughts to the back of my mind and concentrate on how annoying the ones called Sakura, and Ino were. How did daddy and niisan stand them every day? "Umm... though I am 'flattered' that you find me similar to Sasuke-niisan, I would preferr not to hear it every five seconds... please?" I added as an afterthought. They stared at me... "What?" I ask in what I am sure is an emotionless voice. "You know Sasuke-kun?" asked Sakura. I narrow my eyes. What did I say that was so wrong... why was me knowing niisan surprisin... Ah, they don't know... I shrug. "Yeah, he was my sparing partner..." I know my voice seems non commital but I have to see their reactions. The one named Hinata was looking faint, Sakura seemed shocked, Ino was gaping like a fish, and Neji was just star... no excuse me, glaring down at me. They are weird... This is what I have decided. Though I think maybe it has something to do with my age... yeah, thats it... "Don't look at me like that..." I say in annoyance... see... annoying again.
Sakura laughs nervously. "ah, funny..." the two other girls laugh sofly also and I feel slightly bereft. what in the world was so funny? and why was Hinata laughing... I was going to be nicer to her too... I think maybe I'm pouting because Sakura smiles softly at me before saying, "Kids, and their imaginations..." I growl at her and disappear in a cloud of black. I hear Sakura gasp before I notice that I am not alone. I had moved to another corner of the street but it seems Neji knew where I was going. Hmm... I wonder. "You are... not normal," He says and I raise my eyebrow. "No, I'm a purple pickle bent on taking over the nearest donut shop... then... I'm on to taking over the world" I say this with an emotionless voice and my face set in a serious expression. Neji stares, and it seems a villager had been passing by while I was talking because
said villager paled and ran off muttering something about warning Krispy, and Kreme. This village is weird... I wonder what Sasuke-niisan is doing right now...
I need... to leave. I need... to wait... it is so hot... I'm feeling sad... my daddy better be safe. He promised. I realize that I am zoning out... "Let us go back to the others," I say softly. I think maybe I'm losing it. Someone is talking, well, whispering... 'look at the demon...', 'yes... I know, now we have to put up with two of them...' I growl but dont do anything besides the desire I have to rip them limb from limb. I do nothing, because I promised I wouldn't cause trouble. That didn't make me lower my killing intent... which I am sure that Neji felt as he was standing beside me. He made no attempt to show a reaction so I ignored him. Once we reach Sakura, she grabbed my hand and I allowed her to walk me like some juvenile child to what ever destination she had in mind. Said destination just happened to be Ino's flower shop. I stare up at it... as we walk in I sigh. Neji decided that he and Hinata would be heading home and no one protested.
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I sigh... Sakura had been picking me up from school for the past three weeks and I was... minutely annoyed... though I can't say I dislike her company I definitely don't like when she continues to coo annoyingly around me, like I'm some helpless child. I don't mind being a child really, but my daddy blue eyes knows how to treat me. I frown slightly, before smiling. Only one more wee- "Kazuo Uzimaki, will you kindly pay attention to the lesson?" I look up... what in the world? Ah, right... Iruka-sensei has been ill for the past two weeks... he had a substitute... It seems that the substitute hates me more than Iruka... This is great... just flippin great... why harass the six year old huh? why? "Yes," I say quietly. My voice barely a whisper. "Good," the man says. I roll my eyes when his back is turned. Finally, I think as he drones on. I turn my attention to the rest of the class, some were sleeping, some were talking amongst each other, and some were actually paying attention. I frown, how odd... now that I see it each of these people have a group to stay with... I... I am all alone... in this little corner. I can't wait until my daddy blue eyes gets back... I feel so lonely without him. After school I notice Sakura is not there... no one is there and I feel... even more lonely. "Hey, You!" Someone called and I don't bother turning around there is no way that someon- I move to the side as someone trys to push me. Said person falls onto the ground on their face. "Who are you?" I ask the figure. The person in front of me stands up brushing the dirt off of his clothes and attempts to look important... In my opinion he's failing miserably. "I'm Konohamaru..." He grins toothily at me and I snort. "Kono...wha?" I say just to see his reaction. He face faulted. "I'm Konohamaru... Kono.. ham... aruuu" I nod gravely. Though I am not sure why... "Nice to meet you, Konoha...maa...rooo" He just grins. "Hey, how old are you?" this was unexpected... hmm... "six" I say disinterestedly. He rolls his eyes. I hear him mutter 'geeze, baby-sitting...' I grab his wrist in a painful grip... "I am no where near being a 'baby'," I say this with a deadly voice. He chuckles nervously. "Fine..." He looks as if he's at a loss for words... "Want to spar? and where is Sakura?" He looks at me as if... wow... I running out of analogies... hmm...
"So, Sakura sent you...you... to pick me up..." I ask as we walk to one of the training grounds... He nods. "Yea, she had a mission." His voice was bored. As they got closer to the training grounds I saw Sasuke... I grin. "Oh, no... not another fangirl..." He had muttered this.. "Aren't you a little too young to be crushing on Mr. Icicle?" I stare at him. "Are you nutts?" I hiss... "He's like... my brother..." I walk ahead towards Sasuke with a mutter of 'pervert' under my breath. I see out of the corner of my eye that Konohamaru is blushing and I grin. He rushes to catch up with me. "Sasuke-niisan... wanna spar?" Konohamaru turned to me and seemed to pale. "I can't let you spar with him... are you crazy, he'd kill you!" I looked to see Sasuke grinning. I grin back. I don't notice that a few people in that area had come to watch. If I had noticed I still wouldn't have cared. I rushed towards Sasuke my face in a careful mask. I pull out a kunai and I swing my arm in an arc. He bends back and I jump as he attempts to trip me. I back-flipped and threw a shadow shuriken at him, He dodges but that is not my intention... I throw five shuriken, and six kunai... he jumps and I smirk. He's caught in my web. He is pulled back against a tree my weapons holding him there. "I win," I say smiling triumphantly. Sasuke looks murderous and it only makes me feel better. Konohamaru follows me as I walk away from the training ground. "He'll get down soon enough, he hate having help..."
"She... " I look up when Konohamaru and Sakura walk into the room. I sat up, and looked as they sat in a chair opposite the couch in Sakuras' living room. "You.." Sakura said looking at me as if she had seen a decidedly odd phenomenon... I grin. "I..." I say. Really, I have to watch myself... I've been showing more emotions than usual. "You beat Sasuke-kun.." I nod.. then motion for her to continue. "in a spar?" I nod again and wonder if there were other ways to 'beat' Sasuke-niisan if she were to react this way. "Konohamaru says the battle lasted all of.. four minutes..." I stare. "You kept time... " I say in a bored voice. He blushes.
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Sakura was silent as she stared at Kazuo. The girl was confusing. One minute she's impassive, the next she's grinning. She was eating Ramen, silently, and with considerable table manners. One would wonder how she came to be with Naruto of all people. Sakura had nothing against Naruto... No, but... what was she missing that the little girl saw... With a sigh she walked out of the room, Konohamaru had left some time ago, saying something about Moegi and... what was that other kids name... no matter, he said he had a meeting scheduled with Konohamaru Corps. Basically, he and his two friends were going to attempt to cause trouble. Kazuo stood and walked to the window. "Daddy..." she murmured. A feeling of foreboding had settled in her stomach. He's fine... He's ok... He promised... She had to keep positive, He was going to be ok, fine and dandy. Yes.. she said the words 'fine,' and 'dandy' in the same sentence.
xxxxDreamxxxx
It's dark, I'm cold and I can't see... why can't I see? No matter, I'm dreaming... but if I'm dreaming then why do I feel so cold... Sooo...cold... I'm shivering. There is a flash of light... "Daddy!" I cry as I rush forwards. I see him, he's standing there his blue eyes flashing... He's smiling at me... He seems sad though... I gasp as I see his wound... He's hurt.. what do I do? He's hurt... Nooo!! "Fight the hand fate deals you," he said softly... No!! "don't leave me!!!" I scream... "Daughter, Fight fate, you make your own destiny... like me..." I cry sadly... "daddy," I whisper... "I love you,"
xxxxEnd Dreamxxxx
Kazuo wakes up tears falling down her cheeks in rivulets.. "No," she whimpers.. He's ok,... he promised... he never breaks his promises...
With that she fell back into a dreamless sleep.
AN: Seee, it wa-as slightly longer... I'm going to put up chapter 6 sometime in the near future, I need some feed back at the moment because though I know what I want to happen Im at a stand still... please give me your views... opinions... etcetera... love ya buh bye.
AN: Please review... If you have any suggestions, constructive criticism etc... I welcome it.