Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Losing Fight ❯ Test ( Chapter 5 )

I DO NOT OWN NARUTO

Chapter(I don't remember) the first test

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I don't want the `games' to begin, but I found myself hardly able to control my emotions as I waited and waited for something to happen.

 

I'd waited so long I stared to wonder was this one of that woman's sick games. To see who could wait the longest before they begged her to kill them, or who would die from hunger first.

 

The room was no longer cold, but a normal room temperature which concerned me greatly.

 

What had that sick women come up with next?

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The sound of the door clinking caught my attention, but my eyes never left the brown or dirty white ceiling, I haven't figured it out yet, some days I think it's brown some days I think its dirty white. “Hey buddy,” I herd bastard say.

 

I ignored him. An agonizing pain assaulted my already throbbing side bastard had gave me a sharp kick. I rolled away from him holding my smarting side, “now that I have your attention.” He laughed, “eat your food, be ready in ten minutes for your first test.” He laughed all the way out the door.

 

I crawled over to the bowel of gruel filling absolutely pathetic about how I was reduced to this.

 

I ate the `soup' quickly ignoring the sickening taste and the cold temperature of it. When I was finished I moved over to my favorite corner and leaned up against the wall, the filling of hunger and thirst had been distinguished a little and I was happy with that.

 

A drop of water hit the top of my head making me look up; it started to rain in the room cold rain. I just stared in shock at the ceiling as it continued to pour rain. I noticed my pile of waste had begun to be pulled apart by the water.

 

After a few minutes the rain had stopped leaving me in ankle high ice cold water. “What's going to happen now?” just as I asked myself the room temperature dropped.

 

10 minuets later

I licked my chapped lips as I picked one cold foot out of the water to put the other in. both had become numb and painful.

 

25 minutes later

My whole body hurts, I had long sense sat down into this cold water my feet had become to painful to stand on. My vision had become blurred and my eyes had become heavy, I felt myself losing control over my body.

 

5 minutes later

I felt the room temperature begin to rise and the water had began to be absorbed into the floor. Soon all the water was gone.

 

I stayed against the wall my body had still continued to shake. Slowly with shaky hands I pulled off my shoes and stared at my purple feet.

 

The sound of the door clinking caught my attention again only this time my eyes did stray to the door. I was not surprised to see bastard smiling at the door way.

 

He threw a brown container at me it hit me in my chest; I was too tired to glare at him so I just turned my head away staring at the wall behind him.

 

“If you don't want to lose your feet I suggest you put that on them” he laughed, he always laughed.

 

He turned and walked out the door he came back a second later throwing a brown blanket at me. “Oh yeah, `she' said make it more interesting next time you bored her and that's not good.” He pointed to a video camera, I hadn't noticed before slowly making its way back into the wall.

 

When he was gone I slowly put the cream onto my numb feet into they didn't fill so numb anymore.

 

Then I put it away just in case I needed it again, I curled up with the blanket, resting my head on the cold stone floor. I felt defeated.

 

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