Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Love and Death ❯ Stirring ( Chapter 1 )
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By: Bookkbaby84 
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Romance / Angst | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 04.06.2005 | Updated On: 06.23.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.5K | Visits: 1.2K | Status: Completed
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Action / Romance / Angst | Type: Continuation | Uploaded On: 04.06.2005 | Updated On: 06.23.2005 | Pages: 1 | Words: 1.5K | Visits: 1.2K | Status: Completed
Anyways, this is my first attempt at a shounen-ai fanfic. I read a lot of SasuNaru fanfics, though, and I thought it would be interesting to post my own. I've only seen up to episode 76 and read a little more than that in the manga, so this won't follow the storyline. For example, the 3rd Hokage is still the same grumpy old Hokage, but Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura are Chunnins, Gaara has met them, they have met Lee, etc.
Of course, that's not important- on with the fic!
(Please excuse spelling errors- no beta!)
Disclaimer: I don't own. You don't sue.
The rain was pouring down in a horrible storm. The citizens of Konoha were trying to get under shelter, many gratefully taking the space offered them in the awnings of stores, or inside stores and shops.
All except for one.
That one was a seemingly cheerful, almost-teenage boy with blonde hair and blue eyes. He was grinning hugely at the moment, running towards his home- a small apartment- and pretending that the whispers behind his back were going unheard.
"Demon child." one woman whispered vehemently to her friend. "We're lucky there is no more room under here- he might ask to share the space!"
The woman's friend shuddered. "I wouldn't let my child near him if my life depended on it. That boy is evil."
"Hardly a boy. He's a demon, and one day he'll kill everyone. We should kill him now or kick him out to protect ourselves."
The boy was, of course, Uzumaki Naruto.
Naruto closed the door to him home behind himself, letting his mask drop. It wasn't a physical mask, but a mental mask. His smile dropped to an almost expressionless expression, a bit of lingering sadness marking his handsome features. He shoved the thoughts of what the women had been saying aside, settling on a different annoyance.
'Damn it- Kakashi-sensei didn't have to keep us out there until it started raining!' Naruto thought. He removed his wet clothes, changing into something dry after showering. He wrung out the wet stuff and hung it on lines inside the small area that was his living space. He checked his equitment- making sure he had all of his kunai, shuriken, etc.
He frowned. One kunai was missing.
'It must have fallen out while I was running. I can't let it rust out in this rain.' He grabbed a coat- coated with wax so it was waterproof- and left, locking the door behind him.
Naruto was cold and a little wet where he had splashed in puddles. He hadn't seen his missing kunai while in the village, so he was searching the fields now. He looked up at the sky and -still walking- grumbled about how bad the weather was.
Something sharp hit his foot. He hissed, but looked down. There was his kunai. He picked it up cheerfully, wiping it off on the shirt he was wearing underneath the waterproof coat.
Something made a hissing sound as it sped past his ear.
'What?!' Naruto thought, straightening up and looking around, prepared to defend himself with the single kunai he had.
"Who's there?" he demanded. Three ninja jumped down from the few trees scattered about the field. They wore the Konoha symbol, so Naruto dropped the kunai slightly. He studied them. The leader- or the guy in front, however you wanted to say it- was a big guy, and Naruto didn't mean tall. The one on the right had longish hair, the color of dead wheat, and a scar from his right ear and up through his left eye, somehow missing his right eye. The last was a small guy- a bit taller than Naruto, with a shaved head and lithe frame.
"What do you want?" he asked.
"Demon boy. Demon child. We were sent to make you leave." the leader said. Naruto covered the mass of pain and hurt that were his emotions with anger.
"How did you know that? And who wants me out of the village?!" he demanded. All three chuckled, but again, only the leader spoke.
"Everyone wants you out of the village. Nobody can trust the Leaf nins with a demon child on his way to becoming a true shinobi. We have to make you leave, then hunt down the stupid missing-nin and kill him." Naruto swallowed, but raised his kunai. Something didn't feel right about this...
'Well, besides the fact that thse guys are going to kill me!' Naruto thought.
"I'm staying. I will become Hokage one day, and there's nothing you can do. I'll make you all recognize me!"
Suddenly, the one to the right of the leader disappeared. Naruto looked for the man, and just caught sight of a bit of hair as the man grabbed his arms, pinning them behind his back. Naruto dropped the kunai from surprise, and the ninja caught it deftly with his middle and index finger.
"Boss, here's your kunai back." The man tossed it casually to his boss, who caught it neatly.
'Wait... it wasn't my kunai? They probably stole mine, just to lure me out here!' Naruto swallowed, but didn't lose his defiant look. He was getting nervous and scared, but he didn't show it.
"I'm going to become Hokage some day! Release me, and I'll go easy on you!" he said, trying to wriggle away from his captor.
"We'll let you go- after we've had our fun." Suddenly, then men were all smiles. Naruto began to feel the icy grip of terror close over his heart. The man behind him pulled down Naruto's hood. Naruto realized it wasn't raining.
'Well, at least I won't get wet.' he thought. The small, rational, area of his mind realized that he was going into hysterics from panic.
All thought processes stopped at the man behind him licked his neck slowly and then breathed on it. Animal instincts took over as panic began to invade the rational area of his mind as well. He began struggling in earnest- until the leader slapped him with the kunai still in hand. It nearly took out one of Naruto's eyes, but he was lucky. Nothing vital damaged, but he was bleeding a lot.
"Hold still. It's harder to have fun this way." The leader began using the kunai to slice off Naruto's clothes, not caring that he was cutting into flesh as well.
'Shit...! This can't be happening!' Naruto thought, wincing as slashes appeared on his skin. This wasn't even the bad part. Naruto knew what was coming... and was terrified. Well, petrified was more like it.
Suddenly, he was flying through the air. He hit the ground hard, feeling his back bruise and gasping for air- the wind had been knocked out of him.
A weight settled on top of his chest. His eyes- involuntarily- glanced down.
The leader was sitting on top of him- without pants. Naruto eyese opened wide. He knew what the leader had planned, and he knew that he was powerless. He was struggling, but the man didn't seem to notice.
"Open your mouth." he commanded. Naruto shook his head, now even more desperate to get away. For his efforts, he recieved a hard punch to his face. Naruto hissed, but kept his teeth clenched.
"Open your mouth, brat." Naruto shook his head. He recieved another punch. The leader brought his hand to Naruto's nose and held it closed. Naruto struggled to hold his breath, but after a few minutes, he had to open his mouth and gasp for air.
The leader noticed his open mouth immediately, and took the oppertunity to cram a very unsavory something in there.
"Ahhh..... that's nice..." he said. Naruto tried to bite down, but the man's hands were on his face and holding his mouth open. He couldn't move his jaw.
"Gerrof!" he tried to say. 'Get off!' was what he meant, but he couldn't talk properly. "Gerrof!"
"Soon... soon..." the leader said, starting to move.
For the first time in years, a tear slipped down Naruto's cheek.
'This... this isn't happening...' he thought. 'No....' He knew- intellectually- what was going on, but his emotions couldn't handle it.
Deep inside his mind, Kyuubi began to stir.
I'm just kinda making this up as I go along ( and I'm only 14) so it won't be a work of art. I have no clue how long this will be, but I have 19 pages of notes on it so it will be long.
Please (if you have time) let me know how I did!
Of course, that's not important- on with the fic!
(Please excuse spelling errors- no beta!)
Disclaimer: I don't own. You don't sue.
The rain was pouring down in a horrible storm. The citizens of Konoha were trying to get under shelter, many gratefully taking the space offered them in the awnings of stores, or inside stores and shops.
All except for one.
That one was a seemingly cheerful, almost-teenage boy with blonde hair and blue eyes. He was grinning hugely at the moment, running towards his home- a small apartment- and pretending that the whispers behind his back were going unheard.
"Demon child." one woman whispered vehemently to her friend. "We're lucky there is no more room under here- he might ask to share the space!"
The woman's friend shuddered. "I wouldn't let my child near him if my life depended on it. That boy is evil."
"Hardly a boy. He's a demon, and one day he'll kill everyone. We should kill him now or kick him out to protect ourselves."
The boy was, of course, Uzumaki Naruto.
Naruto closed the door to him home behind himself, letting his mask drop. It wasn't a physical mask, but a mental mask. His smile dropped to an almost expressionless expression, a bit of lingering sadness marking his handsome features. He shoved the thoughts of what the women had been saying aside, settling on a different annoyance.
'Damn it- Kakashi-sensei didn't have to keep us out there until it started raining!' Naruto thought. He removed his wet clothes, changing into something dry after showering. He wrung out the wet stuff and hung it on lines inside the small area that was his living space. He checked his equitment- making sure he had all of his kunai, shuriken, etc.
He frowned. One kunai was missing.
'It must have fallen out while I was running. I can't let it rust out in this rain.' He grabbed a coat- coated with wax so it was waterproof- and left, locking the door behind him.
Naruto was cold and a little wet where he had splashed in puddles. He hadn't seen his missing kunai while in the village, so he was searching the fields now. He looked up at the sky and -still walking- grumbled about how bad the weather was.
Something sharp hit his foot. He hissed, but looked down. There was his kunai. He picked it up cheerfully, wiping it off on the shirt he was wearing underneath the waterproof coat.
Something made a hissing sound as it sped past his ear.
'What?!' Naruto thought, straightening up and looking around, prepared to defend himself with the single kunai he had.
"Who's there?" he demanded. Three ninja jumped down from the few trees scattered about the field. They wore the Konoha symbol, so Naruto dropped the kunai slightly. He studied them. The leader- or the guy in front, however you wanted to say it- was a big guy, and Naruto didn't mean tall. The one on the right had longish hair, the color of dead wheat, and a scar from his right ear and up through his left eye, somehow missing his right eye. The last was a small guy- a bit taller than Naruto, with a shaved head and lithe frame.
"What do you want?" he asked.
"Demon boy. Demon child. We were sent to make you leave." the leader said. Naruto covered the mass of pain and hurt that were his emotions with anger.
"How did you know that? And who wants me out of the village?!" he demanded. All three chuckled, but again, only the leader spoke.
"Everyone wants you out of the village. Nobody can trust the Leaf nins with a demon child on his way to becoming a true shinobi. We have to make you leave, then hunt down the stupid missing-nin and kill him." Naruto swallowed, but raised his kunai. Something didn't feel right about this...
'Well, besides the fact that thse guys are going to kill me!' Naruto thought.
"I'm staying. I will become Hokage one day, and there's nothing you can do. I'll make you all recognize me!"
Suddenly, the one to the right of the leader disappeared. Naruto looked for the man, and just caught sight of a bit of hair as the man grabbed his arms, pinning them behind his back. Naruto dropped the kunai from surprise, and the ninja caught it deftly with his middle and index finger.
"Boss, here's your kunai back." The man tossed it casually to his boss, who caught it neatly.
'Wait... it wasn't my kunai? They probably stole mine, just to lure me out here!' Naruto swallowed, but didn't lose his defiant look. He was getting nervous and scared, but he didn't show it.
"I'm going to become Hokage some day! Release me, and I'll go easy on you!" he said, trying to wriggle away from his captor.
"We'll let you go- after we've had our fun." Suddenly, then men were all smiles. Naruto began to feel the icy grip of terror close over his heart. The man behind him pulled down Naruto's hood. Naruto realized it wasn't raining.
'Well, at least I won't get wet.' he thought. The small, rational, area of his mind realized that he was going into hysterics from panic.
All thought processes stopped at the man behind him licked his neck slowly and then breathed on it. Animal instincts took over as panic began to invade the rational area of his mind as well. He began struggling in earnest- until the leader slapped him with the kunai still in hand. It nearly took out one of Naruto's eyes, but he was lucky. Nothing vital damaged, but he was bleeding a lot.
"Hold still. It's harder to have fun this way." The leader began using the kunai to slice off Naruto's clothes, not caring that he was cutting into flesh as well.
'Shit...! This can't be happening!' Naruto thought, wincing as slashes appeared on his skin. This wasn't even the bad part. Naruto knew what was coming... and was terrified. Well, petrified was more like it.
Suddenly, he was flying through the air. He hit the ground hard, feeling his back bruise and gasping for air- the wind had been knocked out of him.
A weight settled on top of his chest. His eyes- involuntarily- glanced down.
The leader was sitting on top of him- without pants. Naruto eyese opened wide. He knew what the leader had planned, and he knew that he was powerless. He was struggling, but the man didn't seem to notice.
"Open your mouth." he commanded. Naruto shook his head, now even more desperate to get away. For his efforts, he recieved a hard punch to his face. Naruto hissed, but kept his teeth clenched.
"Open your mouth, brat." Naruto shook his head. He recieved another punch. The leader brought his hand to Naruto's nose and held it closed. Naruto struggled to hold his breath, but after a few minutes, he had to open his mouth and gasp for air.
The leader noticed his open mouth immediately, and took the oppertunity to cram a very unsavory something in there.
"Ahhh..... that's nice..." he said. Naruto tried to bite down, but the man's hands were on his face and holding his mouth open. He couldn't move his jaw.
"Gerrof!" he tried to say. 'Get off!' was what he meant, but he couldn't talk properly. "Gerrof!"
"Soon... soon..." the leader said, starting to move.
For the first time in years, a tear slipped down Naruto's cheek.
'This... this isn't happening...' he thought. 'No....' He knew- intellectually- what was going on, but his emotions couldn't handle it.
Deep inside his mind, Kyuubi began to stir.
I'm just kinda making this up as I go along ( and I'm only 14) so it won't be a work of art. I have no clue how long this will be, but I have 19 pages of notes on it so it will be long.
Please (if you have time) let me know how I did!