Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Naruto Search for the Wishing Star ❯ Tragedy in Makulla ( Chapter 1 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
By: dcfanforlife 
This is just an introduction of the plot. None of the Naruto characters are present just characters i made up. But I promise you they will be present in the next chapter.
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Adventure | Type: Self Insertion | Uploaded On: 05.27.2008 | Updated On: 06.22.2008 | Pages: 2 | Words: 1.3K | Visits: 174 | Status: Work In Progress
This is just an introduction of the plot. None of the Naruto characters are present just characters i made up. But I promise you they will be present in the next chapter.
Anime/Manga: Naruto Fan Fiction | Genre(s): Adventure | Type: Self Insertion | Uploaded On: 05.27.2008 | Updated On: 06.22.2008 | Pages: 2 | Words: 1.3K | Visits: 174 | Status: Work In Progress
Title-Naruto Search for the Wishing Star
Author-dcfanforlife
Rated M-For Graphic Violence and Swearing
Pairing-Maybe NaruHinata and RockSakura
Disclaimer-I Do Not Own the rights of Naruto Characters. But I do own the creative characters made up by me.
A/N-Also this if my first fanfic outside Smallville.
Summary-A tyrant by the name of Apu invades Makulla village searching for the wishing star. Unable to require it he destroys the village. The only survivor of the village is Papaline who asks for help from Konoha. Excepting mission are Naruto, Sakura, and Rock Lee with Kakashi. Little did they know this mission is going to turn into all out war for that star.
Chapter 1-Tragedy in Makulla Village
It is a dark and stormy night in makulla village. Wind is blowing hard enough tree branches knock on the windows. A man in ragedy clothes, with a hood on is walking towars a castle. Two guards are standing until the notice the man.
Guard 1(Fern):State your purpose.
Man:I have message for the Admiral.
Guard 2:What is that?
Man:I'm sorry but its only for the Admirals ears.
Guard 1:We'll decide if its for the Admiral's ears.
Man(Frantic):Please!! Makulla may be in danger!
The two guards looked at him. The man has fear in his eyes.
Guard 1:Follow us.
The Castle gatest open and They enter.
(Admiral's Office)
The guards led him to the Admiral's office. The office is small. The walls are solid red. Its a small dest where Admiral is sitting.
Admiral:Who is this?
Guard 1:Some man with some news to tell you. Very important news about Makulla.
Admiral:I'm very busy man.
Man:Excuse me for speaking out of line. If you hear what have to say your greatfullness.
Admiral:It is fine. What is it you have to say?
The man hesitates but come close to the desk. He removes his hood to reveal a bald man with a beard.
Man:I am Papaline. I am the villages prophet. I have came to tell you I have predicted something horrible will happen to Makulla.
The Admiral stands with a stern look.
The Admiral:What dange is that? Explain!
Papaline:Someone with great power seeks the star.
The Admiral's face is a look of concern.
The Admiral(Thinking):I knew the day would come. I am prepared for this.
The Admiral:Do you know when of this attack?
Papaline:Yes.
The Admiral:When?
He pauses and looks up to the Admiral's face. Staring into his eyes with a stern look.
Papaline:Tonight.
The Amiral is showing a shocked expression.
(Outside of Makulla)
Outside of Makulla, soldier with horses come to the village.
(Gates of Castle)
The soldiers arrive at the gates. The guard looks up.
Guard:State your-
Before he can finish, one of the soldiers cuts the guard's head off. The head falls slowly to the ground as blood leaks from it. The body falls to its knees then falls sideways. The soldier then backs up to the leader of them.
Soldier:Whats next?
Apu Kamara:Inside the Castle.
The soldiers enters the castle following their leader.
(Below the Castle)
The Admiral, the twos guards from earlier, and Papaline is heading to the star.
Papaline:So this is where the star is.
Admiral:Yes.
Papaline:What are you going to do?
Admiral:Sent it away. The star power is too great to fall into the wrong hands.
Papaline simply nods.
(Admiral's Office)
Apu and two of his soldiers is looking around the office. The office is now trashed. Papers on the floor, the desk if flipped over.
Soldier:Theirs nothing here sir.
Apu:Should of known he wouldn't of kept here. Continue searching the remaining part of the castle.
Soldier:Yes sir.
He salutes him and he salutes back.
(Below the Castle)
Admiral and Papaline have reached the star. Its in a seethrough glass case, shining bright.
Papaline(Amazed):Beautiful Admiral:Yes it is. Everytime I see it I am amazed.
Apu(O.S.):So Am I.
Amiral and Papaline turn around to see Apu and his two soldiers. One of his soldiers is smiling wickedly at them and he was standing close to Apu. He is top soldier. The two guards from earlier are dead. Both stabbed in the heart.
Admiral:Apu. Why am I not surprised.
Apu:Long time no see Admiral. Wish we can remince.. but I have business to take care of. So hand over the wishing star.
Admiral(smirks):I think not. I would never hand over the star to the likes of you!
Apu:Stubborn as usual.
Admiral get into his fighting stance which is ninjutsu.(Don't know if thats an actual stance or not)
Apu:I have no time for a fight. How about I just kill you and take it.
Apu disappears and reappears right in front of the Admiral. He is full of shock. Apu sticks his sword into his stomach and goes through his back. Blood splashes over the floor.
Papaline(Concerned):Admiral!!
Papaline tries to run over there but is hit the back of his head by a soldier's sword. Apu swung his sword to get him off. The Admiral hits the wall and falls the the ground. With blood quickly oozing out of him. His eyes blurry he sees Apu walk towars the star. Admiral closes his eyes.
Admiral:Wishing Star grant me one final wish. I wish for you to hide yourself from the likes of him. You know where to go.
Apu gets closer to the and suddenly it vanishes. He is shocked.
Apu(shocked):What!
He looks over to the Admiral angerily.
Apu:You!!
Apu grabs him by his collar and lifts him up.
Apu:Where is it?
Admiral(smiling):You'll(coughs blood up) never find it.
Apu(angry):You just killed this village.
He throws him to the wall. He turns to his top soldier.
Apu:Burn this village down! Leave nothing Left! You hear me! Nothing!
Soldier:Yes sir.
(Outside)
Soldiers started burning the homes of the Makulla people with torches. House begun to collaspe. One man is seen on fire after running out of his house. The soldiers laugh as the man falls burnt to a corpse. Apu is on his horse smilling wickedly.
Soldier:Looks like he could of used some water.
The soldiers laugh. Apu just continues to smile. He turns to his soldiers.
Apu:Soldiers! Out!
Him and the soldiers rode out off the village. The village continues burning.
(Fade to Black the Opening Credits)
TBC
A/N-I know none of the Naruto characters was in this chapeter but their going to be in the next one. I just introduce you guys to the plot.
Next Chapter A Rank Mission!!
Author-dcfanforlife
Rated M-For Graphic Violence and Swearing
Pairing-Maybe NaruHinata and RockSakura
Disclaimer-I Do Not Own the rights of Naruto Characters. But I do own the creative characters made up by me.
A/N-Also this if my first fanfic outside Smallville.
Summary-A tyrant by the name of Apu invades Makulla village searching for the wishing star. Unable to require it he destroys the village. The only survivor of the village is Papaline who asks for help from Konoha. Excepting mission are Naruto, Sakura, and Rock Lee with Kakashi. Little did they know this mission is going to turn into all out war for that star.
Chapter 1-Tragedy in Makulla Village
It is a dark and stormy night in makulla village. Wind is blowing hard enough tree branches knock on the windows. A man in ragedy clothes, with a hood on is walking towars a castle. Two guards are standing until the notice the man.
Guard 1(Fern):State your purpose.
Man:I have message for the Admiral.
Guard 2:What is that?
Man:I'm sorry but its only for the Admirals ears.
Guard 1:We'll decide if its for the Admiral's ears.
Man(Frantic):Please!! Makulla may be in danger!
The two guards looked at him. The man has fear in his eyes.
Guard 1:Follow us.
The Castle gatest open and They enter.
(Admiral's Office)
The guards led him to the Admiral's office. The office is small. The walls are solid red. Its a small dest where Admiral is sitting.
Admiral:Who is this?
Guard 1:Some man with some news to tell you. Very important news about Makulla.
Admiral:I'm very busy man.
Man:Excuse me for speaking out of line. If you hear what have to say your greatfullness.
Admiral:It is fine. What is it you have to say?
The man hesitates but come close to the desk. He removes his hood to reveal a bald man with a beard.
Man:I am Papaline. I am the villages prophet. I have came to tell you I have predicted something horrible will happen to Makulla.
The Admiral stands with a stern look.
The Admiral:What dange is that? Explain!
Papaline:Someone with great power seeks the star.
The Admiral's face is a look of concern.
The Admiral(Thinking):I knew the day would come. I am prepared for this.
The Admiral:Do you know when of this attack?
Papaline:Yes.
The Admiral:When?
He pauses and looks up to the Admiral's face. Staring into his eyes with a stern look.
Papaline:Tonight.
The Amiral is showing a shocked expression.
(Outside of Makulla)
Outside of Makulla, soldier with horses come to the village.
(Gates of Castle)
The soldiers arrive at the gates. The guard looks up.
Guard:State your-
Before he can finish, one of the soldiers cuts the guard's head off. The head falls slowly to the ground as blood leaks from it. The body falls to its knees then falls sideways. The soldier then backs up to the leader of them.
Soldier:Whats next?
Apu Kamara:Inside the Castle.
The soldiers enters the castle following their leader.
(Below the Castle)
The Admiral, the twos guards from earlier, and Papaline is heading to the star.
Papaline:So this is where the star is.
Admiral:Yes.
Papaline:What are you going to do?
Admiral:Sent it away. The star power is too great to fall into the wrong hands.
Papaline simply nods.
(Admiral's Office)
Apu and two of his soldiers is looking around the office. The office is now trashed. Papers on the floor, the desk if flipped over.
Soldier:Theirs nothing here sir.
Apu:Should of known he wouldn't of kept here. Continue searching the remaining part of the castle.
Soldier:Yes sir.
He salutes him and he salutes back.
(Below the Castle)
Admiral and Papaline have reached the star. Its in a seethrough glass case, shining bright.
Papaline(Amazed):Beautiful Admiral:Yes it is. Everytime I see it I am amazed.
Apu(O.S.):So Am I.
Amiral and Papaline turn around to see Apu and his two soldiers. One of his soldiers is smiling wickedly at them and he was standing close to Apu. He is top soldier. The two guards from earlier are dead. Both stabbed in the heart.
Admiral:Apu. Why am I not surprised.
Apu:Long time no see Admiral. Wish we can remince.. but I have business to take care of. So hand over the wishing star.
Admiral(smirks):I think not. I would never hand over the star to the likes of you!
Apu:Stubborn as usual.
Admiral get into his fighting stance which is ninjutsu.(Don't know if thats an actual stance or not)
Apu:I have no time for a fight. How about I just kill you and take it.
Apu disappears and reappears right in front of the Admiral. He is full of shock. Apu sticks his sword into his stomach and goes through his back. Blood splashes over the floor.
Papaline(Concerned):Admiral!!
Papaline tries to run over there but is hit the back of his head by a soldier's sword. Apu swung his sword to get him off. The Admiral hits the wall and falls the the ground. With blood quickly oozing out of him. His eyes blurry he sees Apu walk towars the star. Admiral closes his eyes.
Admiral:Wishing Star grant me one final wish. I wish for you to hide yourself from the likes of him. You know where to go.
Apu gets closer to the and suddenly it vanishes. He is shocked.
Apu(shocked):What!
He looks over to the Admiral angerily.
Apu:You!!
Apu grabs him by his collar and lifts him up.
Apu:Where is it?
Admiral(smiling):You'll(coughs blood up) never find it.
Apu(angry):You just killed this village.
He throws him to the wall. He turns to his top soldier.
Apu:Burn this village down! Leave nothing Left! You hear me! Nothing!
Soldier:Yes sir.
(Outside)
Soldiers started burning the homes of the Makulla people with torches. House begun to collaspe. One man is seen on fire after running out of his house. The soldiers laugh as the man falls burnt to a corpse. Apu is on his horse smilling wickedly.
Soldier:Looks like he could of used some water.
The soldiers laugh. Apu just continues to smile. He turns to his soldiers.
Apu:Soldiers! Out!
Him and the soldiers rode out off the village. The village continues burning.
(Fade to Black the Opening Credits)
TBC
A/N-I know none of the Naruto characters was in this chapeter but their going to be in the next one. I just introduce you guys to the plot.
Next Chapter A Rank Mission!!