Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Ramen Delights ❯ Spicy Chicken ( Chapter 8 )
[ X - Adult: No readers under 18. Contains Graphic Adult Themes/Extreme violence. ]
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Just giggles and giggles....
Not often I answer reviews...kind of feel like doing it right now.
Kizoku Seishin... bows...I thank you... *grins. And I do agree with you. People I have noticed tend to write lemons that are the same thing constantly over and over. I think what people forget when they write those kind of scenes is that love and expressing it can be spontaneous, wild, erotic, and fun.
I remember that, in fact I love getting that look from the man in my life when he desires me right then and there. As I know other women do as well. And I believe men feel the same as well.
In the end perhaps it is because I am older who knows, but experience in that kind of spontaneity is what makes a lemon writer go from smut as we often see to subtle and yet mind blowing eroticism.
Infiniteternity... I believe it is as well. There is nothing wrong with people who like Sasuke/Sakura just I can't help but have trouble believing in it for the reasons I stated before. Loyalty is great and all but having it still to the level she does for him even after three years? Time to move on.... By now if he hasn't returned those feelings. He isn't returning them.
Kenta-Sonek-Raikiri... How is the Kyuubi pulling the influences? Well beats me he's a demon. Ask him. *Grins. I mean seriously do we know all that he can do yet? And we do know he can cause some chakra to leak outside of the seal. In the episodes of Shippuudeen where they see Sasuke for the first time post time-skip he manifests a smoky copy of himself outside the cage while remaining within the seal.
I have a feeling that basically he can do things as long as it doesn't mean any harm to Naruto or anyone else and considering he is simply entertaining himself by playing matchmaker. He is allowed to donate some well...some uninhibited desires to manifest...
Anyway as I mosey on along if you haven't figured out this is a lemon lime series, you are blind as a bat.
This one is a Naruto/Hinata one
Theme song for this one is Breathless by the Corrs
Spicy Chicken
Hinata smiled as she was pulled along by a handsome blonde boy off someplace. Having seen her friend and Sasuke in a spar that according to Naruto would start something else, it had stirred the blonde with a passion for something else. Having stopped momentarily for some Spicy Chicken ramen for a few minutes that the Ramen Chef wanted him to try, she had giggled when he gobbled it up faster then she could blink.
Ichiraku wondering if he could even taste it, the man as he saw his best customer's eyes were only on his companion he couldn't help but let out a little chuckle. It seems the blonde has a new focus on something besides Ramen.
Especially as moments later, the blonde had said later grabbed her hand and took off once more leaving the stand in a blur of wind.
“Think they will let us cater the wedding?” He asked with humor as he looked at his daughter who was also giggling with amusement.
“DAD! The only just started going out!” Her own eyes watching as the two figures fade out into the crowd of villagers. “And besides knowing Naruto we probably would anyway if he asks in due time.” She smiles. “I don't think he can survive without it.”
Chuckling in amusement, the man nods his head in agreement as she takes the next order and he returns to cooking the soup that said individual loves so much.
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The blonde having smiled as he stopped only long enough to see where he was, he let off a few sneezes in confusion for no reason at all. Then stopping he scratched the back of his head for a moment and moved on.
Taking off again, his eyes moved to gaze only on the young woman beside him with a smile. Naruto had whispered many interesting things in her ear that had made her pink and just nod her head as they spied on their friends for those few moments.
Running as they are, pre-occupied with thoughts of one another, the Kyuubi can't help but be smiling smugly within the confines of the seal. The brat had initially of course been angry at him when he first started this initial experiment of his.
But then considering the Hyuuga heiress who although in his opinion was still a bit innocent, began approaching his vessel herself with a few ideas of her own. Well Naruto wasn't going to knock it. As after all if it wasn't for himself, the blonde probably would not have noticed her at all.
The kid still hadn't figured out though that the Kyuubi was messing with things concerning his friends either. What are the odds, that the Uchiha would notice the other loudmouth blonde?
Or the Ice Prince would allow the Spitfire to control a thing or two?
Even the brazenness of the Sand girl, had gotten the laziness of that Shadow Ninja to actually move was a first.
Which personally the Kyuubi thought was hysterical.
Still trying to figure out the pinkette, because she seems to have more mood swings then he does on a good day; the Fox is deep in thought. Although now once he hears his vessel's thoughts he lets out a low rumble of pleasure.
Got to give the gaki credit...
When he sets his mind to something he goes and makes sure he does it right.
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Naruto smiled as he stopped on top of Hokage Mountain. Not many coming up here usually, he found himself smiling as he turned to the dark haired girl and claimed her lips in a soft claiming kiss.
Different from the others as it was teasing and teaching at the same time. He can't help but love her response. Her little sounds of pleasure as he nips and licks those lips of hers as if they were the choicest morsels to eat.
“We are going to play a game.” He whispered softly as he tugs at an ear huskily. “One that will help you overcome that shyness of yours....” He impishly smiles at her. “And one that will give us both great pleasure.”
“What is it?” She replied with a dazed look in her pale eyes. His voice making her belly churn with excitement, his gentle touch on her body making the nerves sing with hunger for more.
“I am going to stand here and not move unless you tell me to and in the process let you do anything you want to me.” He whispered. “But...you can only use your hands. Think of it as learning a new kind of gentle fist touch.” He chuckled softly as he murmured against her lips.
“O...Only my hands?”
“Yes Hina-hime. Only your hands....”
Being stuck with perverts for senseis for so long, one was bound to pick up a thing or two along the way and this game was one of sensuality. When he had initially lost his virginity, which with Jiriaya as a godfather was going to happen sooner rather then later, it had been with a courtesan whom had taken the time to ease his nervousness.
This game was one she had introduced him to and despite all that he has done to her, as of late he felt it was time for Hinata to have a turn at doing something to him.
Her pale eyes widening as he remains where he stands, he begins to shift nervously as she looks at him dumbfounded for a moment. But then, slowly and tentatively, she touches him. Starting with his cheeks, her fingers are soft and tender against his skin.
Having seen and felt the rest of that silky skin, he resists the urge to lean into that soft caress. His blue eyes expressing his pleasure at her gentle touch, Hinata smiles in pleasure.
Going down his neck to feel it twitch and move as his heart beats, her cheeks become flustered as she looks at him. Frowning that he still wears his jacket, she looks at him and asks him hesitantly. Still not quite believing this game is being played; she can't help but want to touch him.
Gathering her wits about her, she sets herself to ask. “May I?”
“Hime...remember what I said. Anything and I won't move unless you say to.”
Gulping a bit, she steps around him, one hand remaining on his shoulder, the other slides over to his other shoulder and moments later his jacket is down on the ground. The orange and black material was folded neatly, and now it was on the ground along with hers resting beside them.
Wearing a black muscle shirt, his tanned arms were defined as she had known they would be. Starting with one hand, she could not help but hold it up and interlock it with hers and she marvels at the contrast in their skin tones.
But she also savors the fact that they almost overwhelm her own. As if they were made to protect rather then kill. Releasing it, Hinata runs her fingers up his arm. His muscles rippling with her touch, she resists the urge to kiss that skin. Biting her lips, she knows she is doing well as his breath catches when she reaches a sensitive part of his elbow.
A soft little smile crossing her lips as more courage seems to come out of nowhere, she reaches for his shirt quickly while she can. Lifting it up, she can't help but speak. “Bend over for me, just enough to help me Naruto-kun...”
“As you wish Hina-hime.”
His body bending just a touch, his shirt slides off his body and his stomach once more is revealed as it was days ago.
Rock hard, she touches his belly first with her fingers. His body trembling with the tentativeness of it as she moves, she feels every inch of his abs. Knowing his body was something she has only fantasized about and now...
She was getting her fantasy and more. Her fingers rising to his nipples, she flicks one with her fingers impulsively. His breath almost stops as she does it, her fear rising that she had done something wrong.
Hinata finds the fear is unjustified as his eyes were a deep dark stormy blue now. Filled with hunger as his voice takes on a low gravelly tone of hunger, “Do that again...please.”
Hearing him ask her with a desperate desire, she flicked that budding pebble again and she can see him fighting his urge to move and to do something of his own. But yet with the game, he does not.
It is something she is coming to like very much.
Her heart pounding as she circles and traces the line of his back, she can feel him shiver with pleasure. By now as she circles, she can see the growing bulge in his pants that calls to her like a beacon.
Her fingers tracing the line of his pants, he can tell that shyness is rearing itself once more as her body fights her desires to continue on more. He watches as hime shakes her head and smiles softly as once again her hands move to pull them down.
Standing and lifting his feet when urged with insistent delicate hands. Hinata finds herself staring at him with nothing but a pair of black boxers on trimmed with orange foxes. His shoes having long since been kicked to the side, to feel her hands on his calf rising slowly to his inner thigh, he almost buckles from the pleasure. Feeling those same hands go underneath his boxers, it takes ever ounce of his strength not to....
Tracing his upper thighs, brushing ever so close to his erection, the young woman gulps as she finds herself desiring to see more.
To finally touch that which she has felt only covered against her skin.
Reaching out, she pulls those boxers down. And as he steps out of them her heart drops at the sight before her very eyes. Remaining kneeled, as she was 9 inches stood out in front of her with jutting accuracy. Hard and seeping, with a white substance, she touches it with a finger and brings it to her lips as she had only dreamed.
Tasting it, her tongue licking the heated saltiness off her finger, Naruto groans in hunger as his body shakes with desire.
“L...Lie down Naruto-kun please.”
Nodding his head as he gives her a hungry look of need, he is down on the ground in seconds. One hand reaching for his face, a thumb brushing against his lips as she does so...
Turning her head, her long hair brushes against his bare chest, featherlike and soft at the same time as the skin it touched burns with energy that makes his manhood redder...
Pulsing with a need to release what it contains within...
“Touuch it Hime...Please...” His voice begging her, she smiles softly and nods.
“Yes...”
Delicate and small her fingers can not fully reach around the shift. Thick as well, she can not help but wonder if that would even fit, but yet at the sound of his moan. The instinctual rise of his hips to meet her hand as she slides it slowly up and down...
Her own body flutters with extreme pleasure at his reactions. She doesn't care that his hips move against the rules of the game anymore. She just cares that he is responding to her touches alone.
His body moving, she feels his hand rising to her back. Holding her caressing her...
Her fingers moving faster now, squeezing as best she can. Trailing a single finger at times up and down, and then flicking the tip as she had done before. She feels his hand lower and squeezes her buttocks with hungry need as he starts to lose coherency of his thoughts.
Moving her other hand now from his features, she uses both now to work his manhood.
One circling his shaft, the other squeezing...
Cupping...
Tugging on his balls.
His moans, his cries for harder, for faster....
She can't help but stir herself. His hand resting on her bottom squeezing even more, as she struggles not to just bend down and beg him to use it.
This was her turn...
Her time to please him as he stated...
Her time to drive him insane with a hungry passion...
His body trembling harder, as her hands move, she lifts up her hips and instinctively feels as his hands squeeze more of her bottom through her pants. Tugging...at them as if wanting them down to feel her.
She fights the urge to give in, her own body wanting that very much. She focuses solely now on driving him over the edge of his pleasure. Giving in to that desire to hear him scream her name....
His hips moving even faster now as his body shines in sweat from the heat her actions have caused, he finally explodes.
“HINAATAAAA!!!!”
His voice loud and clear with heavy release of passion, the normally shy girl, smiles softly as he trembles with orgasmic pleasure. Finally as he slows down, she lies down beside him. Clothed against his fully naked form as he breathes heavily, his arm cradles around her to bring her closer to his body...
To feel her soft form clothed or not as breathing in her scent calms him.
“I did good?” She smiles softly and with a little bit of impishness in her voice. His deep chuckle emanating from his chest that sports spots of his passion that she had ignited with her hands.
“You did great Hina-hime.” The blonde said with a satisfied look into her mischievous pale eyes. “But I am pretty sure you know that....”
“Yes...but it is nice to hear it from your lips Naruto-kun.” She replied softly as her hand trails up his chest to cup his cheek and he leans into her touch. “I wanted to please you....”
“And you did Hina-hime. You did...” He worded huskily. Before anything else though was said or done, a kunai thudded well behind them, startling the young lovers to a degree. Within it a note, they both turn bright pink as the sender had kindly given them enough time to finish....
Gaki....
The Hokage has a mission for you. I think I would go before...ahem anyone else sees you sans apparel if you know what I mean... I don't mind to be honest as you do have an extremely nice ass. But I am pretty sure she minds as she I believe claims it as hers...
Anko
Turning bright red, as they know the special jounin has to be watching them even now. Hinata hurriedly helps Naruto put on his clothes and before they take off. The blonde dips the pale eyed girl, and kisses her deeply and with a passionate hunger to rival any that even the woman watching can claim to.
Now taking off, the older woman steps out and smiles in amusement...
“Hinata...he's a keeper. Wonder if he's got....” A grin crossing her lips, Anko also sets out to find herself a certain man.
“Now where oh where would he be.” The woman smiles with anticipation. All the while she remains unaware of the thin red chakra being absorbed into her skin and that within the seal still floating with the pleasure his vessel has experienced, a fox chuckles in amusement.
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Breathes a little heavy then rapidly picks up her phone to call a certain man in her book. Here is the next chapter guys...now excuse me...but I believe there is a man whom I now have to go rape.
Not that he will mind, but you get the idea.
Leave lots of reviews...And I have come up with a Kakashi idea...just working on the woman. Because the Kurenai idea does appeal to me, but so did a Shizune idea someone mentioned, I don't know....frowns... Either way...I am gonna go and definitely get me sum. Hope you all do to. Later!