Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Shift in the Rift ❯ Bringing down the House ( Chapter 1 )
[ Y - Young Adult: Not suitable for readers under 16 ]
I do not own Naruto. If I did, however, I would kill Sasuke ten times over, the emo bastard. To the person who does own Naruto, congrats, could you RUB IT IN a little more? Haha. Ha.
Chapter 1
`Rain, rain, go to hell', Tony thought as he stared out the window blankly. The cold November day was not at all to his liking thus far. There had been a promise of snow early on. Instead there was freezing rain. Which sucks. Tony loved snowboarding. He quickly contemplated trying to board on ice….. `Probably not the best idea. Might break my board', he thought, thoroughly pissed off. After being denied the snow, he had gotten a call from his (ex)girlfriend. Notice the ex there now. Self explanatory, no?
“Hey mom, there anything really warm I could wear, I wanna go out”, he called upstairs to his mom. No sense in moping around the house. Maybe he could at least get a run in. And a cold. But still.
“Are you nuts?” his mother called back down. He didn't bother responding, he knew she would let him. That's how it was. How it ALWAYS was. His parents let him do anything. Everything came too easy to him. A lot of the time he felt like he didn't belong, like he was born in the wrong time, or the wrong world even. Finally she replied, “In the closet then. Don't you dare go getting sick though. You can't miss any more school”. Tony had skipped the last few days of school, just not up to slugging it out through that crap again.
Tony ran hard, and fast. He had a lot of pent up energy built up, and he needed to work it all off. He noticed his surrounding were changing a bit as he ran deeper and deeper through the forest. `Must be me', he thought, and continued running. But it wasn't, and he knew it. The air was getting warmer, and the rain was letting up. Still he wouldn't stop. Couldn't stop. Something was driving him, and hard. He ran so much he started to feel really sick, but his legs wouldn't let him end the torment. Finally, after what seemed like miles, he was able to stop.
`God, my legs are killing me. Oh well, I think I'm pretty much ok now.' Almost immediately after thinking that, he regretted it. His knee's buckled; he hit the ground, and puked. He lay in a puddle of his own puke (gross, huh?) as he became vaguely aware of somebody yelling, and running towards him. He caught a flash of blue and orange before he passed out.
So what you guys think? My first attempt at any self-insertion through third person. But its also my first Naruto fic either. Let me know what you guys think. Read an review, please. Flames welcome as well.