Naruto Fan Fiction ❯ Silver Flash ❯ Chapter 1 ( Chapter 1 )
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Chapter 1
~Recap~
“….an man….arg…I can't remember his face…” the guard said really disoriented.
“Alright…Take them in for further investigation, I want all gates with an ANBU team” said the wolf masked ANBU. “The intruder that got into the village must be found and brought to the Hokages office.” He said sounding rather pissed off.
~End of Recap~
The man that had entered Konoha was now walking quietly through the village as if nothing had gone wrong at the gate. He had teleported near the centre of the village knowing full well that they would be searching for the intruder starting at the gate inwards. He smirked slightly as he knew that no one would recognize him due to his appearance having changed so much in the last few years. His hair was being held up by a black band as it had grown quiet a large sum, he didn't really see a point in cutting it anymore. He watched as he watched the villagers as he passed by them, no one seemed to recognize him, no one seemed to be giving him hatred looks like as when he was a child but now all the females, young and old watched him and blushed. He was now a grown up, he no longer had the baby fat on his face anymore, though you couldn't see his body, you could tell that he worked out for it. Only moments had passed and he could still sense the ANBU trying to find their intruder. He wasn't an intruder, he was still part of the village…therefore he was a villager…mind you he had been `missing -presumed dead' for over 4 years now. He just smiled and then looked up at the monuments seeing Tsunade's face.
`It really didn't take her long…' he thought to himself as he continued to walk around the village. For now he would keep low, before revealing himself, and allowing the ANBU to have a fun game of tag.
“Kage Bunshin no Jutsu” he said as another him appeared but quickly transformed into the 14 year old Naruto. He had gotten much better at his shadow replicas; it would take quite a lot to make his disappear. It no longer took one hit. “You know what to do…” he said as his younger self nodded before disappearing in front of him. He walked for most of the day only to later find himself at his favourite Raman shack when he was a child. “One Spicy hot Raman….and make it quick” He said having a grin on his face in a way hoping that the owner would recognize him, but only a few minutes later, his Raman came with a `here you go…hope you enjoy it' greeting. Sighing slightly he heard villagers just outside the shack talking about how Sasuke had returned after much persistence.
“Oh ya…and did you hear…He came back willingly…” One older villager said
“I heard that the elders are just going to give him a break….put him on Probation ….or something like it” another said. One of the younger villagers who happened to be female smiled “ I'm really glad….he's so cu-…I mean He's so powerful…we don't want him getting away..” she said correcting herself
“what ever happened to that kid…You know the one….what was his name….” the old villager said.
“I heard that the elders are just going to give him a break….put him on Probation ….or something like it” another said. One of the younger villagers who happened to be female smiled “ I'm really glad….he's so cu-…I mean He's so powerful…we don't want him getting away..” she said correcting herself
“what ever happened to that kid…You know the one….what was his name….” the old villager said.
They heard a shatter behind them as they looked back they could see a blonde boy sitting down eating, but he had crushed his glass in his hand. “Oh my gosh…are you alright??” the young girl asked
“Huh….oh …ya I'm fine, don't worry…It didn't break my skin” he said showing them his hand cheerfully. Small things like this didn't hurt him anymore, well it really did he had just got a handle on how to use his healing powers more. When he had been a child he hadn't known about his fast healing abilities until sometime later but once he had a handle on it, he knew when to heal and when to make it look like he was going to die. Though he never let it gets to that point.
“Oh…I remember…His name…it was Naruto…You know that kid with the Nine-Tails…” one of the two older ladies said “oh yes….good ridden…..nothing good could have come from him still being around.” The other older lady said.
“and if he was still around” the mysterious man asked as they just looked at him in shock “Oh dear boy…don't joke about such things…” just as the old lady said as if it was planned young Naruto ran with a bucket of paint and laughing while being chased …somewhat by ANBU. The young man was making sure he held back his laughter as the look on the old bags faces was utter shock.
“but….but…..” they had nothing to say as just that moment a squad of ANBU the same one that had appeared at the gate appeared in front of the shack “did you see where that intruder went??” they asked as they looked at Naruto putting no mind to him. Well of course they didn't, to them he looked like an old man “oh…I think he went that way…” he said pointed the direction the Naruto copy went. How come they didn't realize he was the intruder? Well when he had put a Genjitsu on the guards posted at the gate, it worked in such a way that whoever was to find them would go under the jutsu as well. It had been a very well thought out plan, which was why he wasn't worried too much about being found right away, only until they realized that they were under. The squad leader nodded and instructed his squad to go after the boy. “Do not worry ladies; he is an Intruder that has taken on the appearance of the Nine-tailed container.” He told them as the `old man' nodded “I see…” he said “so there could be no way that that boy is really him…??” he asked looking at the ANBU curiously, even though he couldn't see his face you could tell that the question shocked the ninja. “No….His body was never found; Jiraiya was instructed not to search for him because the boy was a lost cause. He did anyway” The squad captain said looking at the old man in front of him “…he returned a year and a half later saying that he never found any traces of the boy” he continued. `So Ero-Sannin did go searching for me after all....' he thought to himself `but why did he stop after a year….' He asked himself wondering that fact. There must have been a reason as to why the old fart would stop searching. He was going to have to find out why. Not that it really mattered to him, he was just curious. The ANBU was about to leave when Sakura and Sasuke walked by. “Sakura-san, Sasuke-san.......” there was a long pause before the ANBU started speaking again “We have an Intruder inside of Konoha, we need every available ninja to assist….the intruder is using Henge no Jutsu” he said before getting rudely interrupted. It seemed Sasuke hadn't changed very much “Hn….and ANBU is asking for help from us...” he said monotone before the ANBU was about to lose his cool, he was probably one of the few that thought of Sasuke as a traitor to the village. The young/old man stepped in and smiled “No need to be rude, he's only asking for your help to find your long lost friend” he said before starting to walk off “besides, I told the ANBU, I saw the boy running that way with a bucket of paint…” the person said smirking evilly “wonder what he could have done…” he continued before looking up at the monument and staring in shock “….it seems I see what he's done…” he said out loud pointing to the rocks. “ that…that…” the ANBU said rather pissed off “anyway….you should start searching…by now he's probably done Kage Bunshin and made more of himself” He said looking back at the group as the wind blew making the hair that was covering his eyes reveal the man's blood red eyes as he just smiled at them. “Besides, what would a traitor want to find the person he ran his Chidori through his chest for” he said still calmly before young Naruto appeared beside the man “oh…there you are…Had your fun” he asked as his younger double just nodded before the Henge was dispelled before them revealing a clone smiling just as wildly as the as the real one. “I guess it's time to remove that Genjutsu I placed on you earlier…” the young man said as the ANBU seemed confused for a moment and then saw that the old man was the Intruder that the guards had talked about….well sort of. They only seemed to remember that he had really golden hair that when you looked at him he resembled a flash of light. “By the way, you might want to think about upping the guards at the post during the time of day….You never know who will just walk in” he said “no…you can't be” the ANBU said
“Like I said before, what would happen if Naruto never died?” He asked again this time pulling the cloak off this body revealing his black assassin attire. Though he might not have been an assassin he found that it was really easy to move in. You could now see his face better, allowing everyone in the area to see his 6 whiskers and more like an evil smirk on his face. “….Naruto!!” Sakura shouted in shock. “But…but ….I thought you died!!” she said “ya…sure you did, all you seemed to care about was bringing Sasuke-teme back…seems like you've succeeded ….” He told them.
Sasuke was shocked to say the least; he had thought that he had killed his former friend.
“You're lucky you're still alive Sasuke” Naruto said looking at him “If I had aimed little lower…like you did, and not at your shoulder, you would be” he said still smirking at them as if he found all of this amusing.
“Naruto! You shouldn't say such things!!...were all friends…” she said as Naruto seemed to cut her off “I'm sorry if I seem rude, but can it….Friends…what friends.” He asked looking at them. By now 2 ANBU squads were around watching making sure that he didn't try anything funny. “You know you should really call more people…”he said smiling. “ I'm not Naruto anymore” he said smirking. “I'm not that kid you tried to kill.” He said to Sasuke who was getting angrier by the second. You could hear Chidori in the background and the bright light that came from it. Only moments later Sasuke had charged for Naruto, it was true Sasuke was not a lot stronger, but Naruto had learned newer and better things that would help him in his everyday life. You could say that he had learned to be a Jack of all trades; Naruto just smirked as he watched Sasuke run at him with Chidori full charge. “Naruto…Get off of the way!!” Sakura shouted in fear not wanting to lose her friend again…for real this time.
“Don't you have anything new…add a little spice to your life….geez” Naruto said looking at Sasuke who was now very close for comfort. Sharingan was active, you could see full well, he still very much relied on it. “Let me show you something new…” Naruto said as he did a Kage Bunshin smirking as the Bunshin ran straight towards Sasuke full force, Sasukes' Sharingan could barely see him.
`…what….he's gotten much faster…' he thought before his eyes widened when there was a big blast. Had his Chidori made contact with the clone? He wondered not knowing “this isn't new….It's your favourite move…” he said as the dust had engulfed them.
As the smoke started to clear you could see the clone still there, cloths only slightly ripped but not by much as the wound that it received was healing. Sasuke looked at him with his Sharingan not really seeing the difference between them as he had once been able to. “You came at me yourself” he said as the dust cleared fully revealing another person standing behind Sasuke with Rasengan in one hand.
You could see the cloak just floated on the wind as it hit the ground; the Naruto standing in front of Sasuke, the one that had taken the hit disappeared in a puff of smoke. “He wasn't real...” Naruto whispered in Sasuke's ear smirking “RASENGAN!!!” he shouted as Sasuke hadn't even sensed him behind him. Sakura watched in shock she couldn't believe that Naruto was about to hit Sasuke with that attack. Naruto just smirked as he moved his hand towards Sasuke but instead slammed it against the ground making a giant dust cloud and wrecking most the ground. By the time the dust had cleared Naruto had vanished again but he was close enough to watch them closely.
“Sasuke….Sasuke?!? “She shouted trying to find him as you could hear some groaned in pain as he got up. The ANBU squad couldn't really make up what had just happened. They were usually elite in tracking and hunting down individuals but in this case, they couldn't seem to get a good track on Naruto's Chakra signature at all.
“He missed on purpose…” Sasuke said as he got up slowly “…but …something was different, I couldn't tell the fake one apart from the real one….even with my Sharingan…” he said
Sakura looked at him as she tried to help him up but he just seemed to refuse. “Did you see him when he was behind you…His Rasengan…it was different, It wasn't blue anymore…It was completely red. And his hair colour…” she said
“it was Silver…”
“it was Silver…”
The ANBU captain looked at them as he walked over to them and then looked at the hole in the ground which seemed to be a good 7 feet down. “I also believe that he held his power back….”
Naruto was now staring up at the Hokage Tower his hair was now Silver, Sakura had been right his hair had changed from golden as the sun to silver. Usually he would just Henge his hair to stay yellow so that he wouldn't attract to much attention but now what did he need to, He needed to let the Villagers know that Uzumaki Naruto was back….probably not for life…but for awhile.
He smirked slightly as he looked back at the Rock Monument looking at what his clone had done and then smiled. “That's a good way to introduce that I'm back…” he said laughing slightly at what it said.
`The Kyuubi is BACK!!.... - U.N.'
End of Chapter 1
Thanks to my AWESOME BETA READER!!.. For editing it. YOUR AWESOME!!!!
So…How did you like this chapter??
Any suggestions on pairings and/or new ideas on some Jutsu Naruto should have. Just keep in mind that Naruto will still be a prankster just because it will probably add some humor. He hasn't fully learned all the new Techniques and he would still be learning them all the way through this story. I just thought it would be cool if Naruto's Kage Bunshin didn't disappear right off the bat…though that it could probably add some random scenes in there.
Anyway…I finished writing Chapter 1 on my break which is actually pretty good. Meaning I'll be starting to Type up Chapter 2 on my way home from school. I have to love leaving two hours away from school and have to take the bus to it. Gives me time to write. Anyway…Please Review, I want to know what you guys think so far!!!